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Comments: This kind of advertisement should avoid "suggestion" and "exaggeration". Just these four sentences in one go, directly "point out the topic", highlight your "characteristics", be confident, not "exaggerated" and easy to remember! Also positive! For example, the "body double professional elite" you mentioned is obviously an exaggeration, and no one believes it.
Your two words are not good. How can two sentences make people believe that there is no "confidence"?
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