The Navigation of "Heart" Writing
Everyone's heart is a rich world, with joys and sorrows ... physical changes, ups and downs of life, the complexity of the world, from personal unresolved frustrations to endless thoughts, how many things and ideas are hidden in people's hearts.
Please take "Trouble" as the topic, draw up your own topic, choose your own style, and write an article of no less than 600 words.
[Concept Guidance] Childhood is a pure and real world. . . . With the support of our parents, we play and frolic carefree in the vast blue sky. But with the growth of age, a series of troubles make us think deeply and mature. Growing teenagers have both happiness and trouble. Students should understand: if you share happiness with others, one happiness becomes two; If you have troubles, if you share them with others, one trouble becomes half. Students should also understand that this requires both "love and sharing" and "communication and sharing". Only by having a positive and optimistic attitude can we solve all these troubles and grow up healthily and happily. So, bravely pick up a pen, open your heart, and express your growing joy, pain and troubles heartily, and you will be satisfied with your harvest. Then, "Teenage Trouble" will also become a nutrient and memorial in your growing years.
Teaching objective: 1. Pay attention to the subtle materials around you and learn to express the little feelings in life.
2. Learn to use psychological description properly.
3. Try to use environmental description to express emotions and show the center.
4. Learn from the good writing techniques in the text and develop the habit of accumulation.
Please look at the following composition (ok):
The weight of my heart
Worried? As the name implies? It's what people think. There are generally two kinds of worries? One is a happy heart? One is unpleasant thoughts. Adults have something on their minds? The children also have something on their minds. Like me? I have happy thoughts? There are also unhappy troubles.
When I was a kid. I often stand on the balcony with a heavy heart? Looking at the blue sky in a daze. What am I doing here? I won't know until I ask. I'm worried about whether the sky will fall. After hearing this sentence? You might have a good laugh. But it doesn't look funny to me. Think about it? What if I fell naively? What will happen? That must be a breakdown? Causing world chaos. The whole world will be dark? Even when you go to the bathroom, you hit your head on the ceiling? Are you comfortable? If you say to me, "children? Don't worry? The sky will not fall. " So you get this answer? "It's so far away from us? Not supported by a pillar? It must have dropped in a few days! " Hey hey? Was I a little worried?
At that time? I'm worried about another problem. That is whether I will be old or not. They all say elixir or something on TV. Because I heard all this crap? So you think if you take this medicine? You can live forever. You may be tempted to say? "What's the elixir in the world? People get old, okay? You don't have to be so scared, do you? " Because I'm young? Not sensible? So you can't listen to a word you say (of course not now).
Are you sure? A "good boy" like me in the eyes of teachers? There are also embarrassing things stuck in my heart. When I was in kindergarten. I used to play truant. That day? My family took me to school by motorcycle? When you arrive at the school gate? Because I was too naughty when I was happy the day before? As a result, I was "helped" by the teacher? Still worried? So look at motorcycles? And run back like a fly. That speed is amazing. Mom saw you? Get off and chase? The security guard at the door also came to join in the fun. I ran for a while? Suddenly the shoulder was firmly grasped by a big hand. Can I look back? Shit? It's dad! I'm really in a dilemma. "Gently" pull with dad? I got on the motorcycle again. When you go home? What greeted me was a storm? Mom and dad are putting on airs? "Bomb" me in turn? Gave me a good lesson.
These concerns? I don't tell anyone about ordinary people. Just? Will you keep my secret? Don't tell anyone!
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