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2. At the beginning of junior high school, how do parents plan future compositions for their children? I also recommend a method to improve the writing level, which is reprinted from Tips for Famous Teachers in Excellent Lecture Rooms: Writing has always been one of the learning problems of students, and it is even more a college problem for primary school students who need to lay a good foundation for writing. It is usually difficult for children to write a few lines, or they often make mistakes such as "empty content", "irrelevant words" or "unclear". Both students and parents know that composition has a great influence on exam results. Many children feel tired and headache because they have not mastered composition skills, and parents are also worried about how to help them. How to master composition skills? The author interviewed Shi Xiurong, the founder of Curious Composition, the senior director of excellent education and an excellent teacher in China, and listened to her explain the secret of composition. Where to study composition? "Learning composition at school mainly depends on teachers and students' own groping," Teacher Shi told reporters affirmatively. First of all, composition is difficult to teach. "There is no systematic teaching material and teaching method in the composition class, and it is written as unit training in Chinese textbooks, so many teachers can't carry out systematic training, and sometimes let children finish their compositions at home, which makes parents very headache." Secondly, the composition is difficult to change. "There are many students in the school, and the teaching time of Chinese teachers is limited. In desperation, the composition can only be evaluated by' good, medium and poor' and cannot be revised in detail. " Third, it is difficult to achieve results in composition learning. "Composition marking is subjective, and it is possible to deduct a few points or ten points. Many students lose points in the Chinese exam. Composition is still a difficult point in primary schools. It is especially important for children to learn composition, understand the order and direction of writing, and understand how to impress readers. " Teacher Shi said: "Primary school is an important stage for children to develop their basic writing ability. The success or failure of the composition has a certain influence on the results of the senior high school entrance examination and college entrance examination in the future, and even on your own work. Curious composition characterized by' strangeness' and' interest' can help students overcome the difficulties of composition and make them feel free and handy when writing. " Interesting "interesting composition" "interesting composition can help children to make things difficult and master writing methods easily." Teacher Shi concluded that the textbook of funny composition is designed for the students of grade 2 to grade 6 in primary school, and the content is childlike, so that students can learn like visiting an amusement park and get twice the result with half the effort. For example, each volume of Curious Composition has columns such as "Food City", "Treasure Cave" and "Magic Mountain", so that children can read beautiful words, beautiful sentences and beautiful articles, fall in love with writing and learn to write by watching anime stories and playing anime characters in textbooks. Curious Composition reproduces the scenes in life in class. Teachers teach students the basic methods of writing people, things, things and scenery in easy-to-understand language through observation, association, decomposition and close-up. Students can write articles in an orderly way after studying for half a year. The reporter learned that this method of composition learning is unique to excellent teaching. Emphasizing the combination of solid training and free creation aims at expanding students' thinking and enriching their language expression ability. Can I study interesting compositions at home? Teacher Shi suggested that it is best to study composition under the guidance of a special teacher. First of all, writing needs atmosphere. Children get together and have more ideas and creativity. Secondly, the teacher of "Curious Composition" uses vivid classroom forms to stimulate students' writing inspiration, improve students' writing ability and carefully correct students' first drafts. In excellent education, we advocate "good article reform". Every child's exercises will be carefully revised by the teacher many times, and the revised contents will be discussed with the children. At the end of the semester, the teacher tailored two excellent composition collections for each student: one called My Creative Garden and the other called Excellent Works Collection, both of which were created by students in class. In this way, children's creative enthusiasm is fully stimulated. Teacher Shi stressed that only by learning composition well can you learn to be a man. "People who love reading, life, society, innovation and sincerity are the real pillars."
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3. How to write a wonderful ending of the quiz composition at the end of Xiaoshengchu's composition
Natural ending
At sunset, we were all a little tired, so we took the bus together and embarked on the road home with the joy of playing in Bijia Mountain ... At this time, although my mother and I were very tired, we all smiled comfortably when we saw the yard so clean.
Summative ending
I don't know when, the melodious singing of the school has become nothing, and the sky has returned to calm and silence, but there is more excitement and water. When I fell down, my knees were shaking. When I was stagnant, my dream came-this is the rhyme of autumn rain.
This eggshell experiment is really interesting! Not only did we exercise our hands-on ability, but also let us understand the truth of "centralization and decentralization of power". What a great harvest! So I like this experiment!
Chrysanthemums do not compete with flowers, but bloom alone by the fence. They would rather die in the branches than succumb to the cold north wind. Just like the relaxed woman in Leng Yan, she is full of fresh breath and admirable. Chrysanthemum, I like your bright colors and charming posture, and I admire your quality from the bottom of my heart!
Heuristic ending (also known as "rationality")
It has been a long time, but I can't forget it. Although this incident is very small, it inspires me a lot, because it makes me understand the truth that no matter what people have done wrong, as long as they realize their mistakes and dare to admit and correct them, they will definitely make a new start and make progress.
The end of a question (also called a rhetorical question)
We finally made up, which made us understand that honesty, tolerance and understanding are the basis of friendship.
Do you think so?
The tall Norman teacher with long hair returned to Australia, but his warm personality. Humorous manners, democratic style and vivid lessons remain in our memory for a long time. Teacher Norman, when will you come again?
Wonderful ending
That night, the boy had a sweet dream, dreaming that the little girl had found her mother and was snuggling up in her arms and coquetry! The bird flew back to its nest and sang happily with its mother!
Import end
Only by cherishing every minute, can we not waste time and do what we should do, which is the greatest inspiration to me after this incident. My friend, "Don't be idle, it's a shame to be a teenager."
A sentimental ending
Although the spider is small, I still remember its indomitable spirit.
Although it has been a long time, I still remember it because it taught me a very important truth:
Human behavior is a mirror of morality.
Although it has been more than a year, I still think about it from time to time. It taught me that without careful investigation and study, I have to doubt others casually; We must not jump to conclusions and mistreat good people.
4. At the beginning of junior high school, how should parents write to their children? Hello! In a blink of an eye, you will graduate from primary school, and you will bid farewell to the third primary school and become a middle school student.
Talking to you, I feel like I'm communicating with a friend or an adult. Suddenly feel very lost. It seems that you were born only yesterday. Why did you suddenly grow into a big child? I didn't savor your growth process in my busy life. Today, I opened your accumulated composition, carefully read one composition and one story, and brought me back to every day when you grew up. Let me re-examine your growth trajectory and feel the ups and downs of your growth. I can't help feeling mixed. Life is so wonderful. A young life, after winter and summer, is getting stronger and stronger, but mentally.
I was not a good mother in your education. When I was trying to be a good mother, I suddenly found that you had grown up, and I suddenly fell into deep confusion. I held your hand when you were ignorant, and now you have begun to have your own thoughts. Will you complain about the way I once held your hand? Looking back on your education, we have always adopted the so-called quality education. In addition to school education, we still insist on playing the violin and table tennis in our spare time to learn Austrian mathematics, oral English, a historical story before meals, an ancient poem before going to bed, an Analects of Confucius and a university ... but there are not many certificates with high gold content. I can't help but think of a quarrel between you and me when I didn't want to get the certificate in senior one. Articles ". In retrospect, I should admit that you don't have much evidence. It is a fact that I am a mother.
But my mother thinks study is a marathon. One must have a goal, and the other is persistence. As long as you keep studying bit by bit every day, I believe there will be a bright future. Do you remember? The history of China is extensive and profound. It was so boring at first, but you only read the history of China once during the meal, and you are still reading it again and again. Ancient Chinese is so boring, but after three years of reading 10 minutes before going to bed, I also finished reading and reciting the Analects of Confucius, Daxue and The Doctrine of the Mean, which are familiar to everyone. Now reading ancient Chinese is also catchy. When chatting with me, was it Confucius? I remember how much you respected Tang and Song poems and writers who spoke with poems. When you saw Lushan Waterfall, didn't you blurt out the poem "Spring water falls to the horizon because of its rise"? Although I don't have that much time, I don't insist on practicing the piano every day, and I easily get the five-level certificate of the Central Conservatory of Music. Although you didn't take part in all kinds of olympiad competitions, you didn't give up studying olympiad.
In learning, you really don't have as many certificates to be proud of as other children of the same age, but mom knows that you have been working hard and persisting in learning. If you are more serious, my mother believes that you will achieve gratifying results. Mom thanks you, son, because you are an honest boy. No matter what happens at school, good or bad, criticized by the teacher, or unsatisfactory grades, I will come back and tell my mother. Sometimes you know you will be scolded, but you should tell your mother seriously. Sometimes the teacher misjudges the paper and gives you more marks, so you will definitely ask the teacher to lower the marks.
Do you know how happy mom is that you are honest and trustworthy? Because we can communicate normally, your honesty makes mom believe that you will be an upright person. Thank you, mom. You are a persistent child. No matter how others hit you, you can stick to what you are looking for. This is not easy for a child. The children on the bus go to buy snacks after school, but you don't buy them because you feel unhealthy. Your "otherness" has attracted a lot of criticism, even ridicule and even isolated you. You can face it calmly. You have such a mentality. I don't think you will become a parrot even if you go out into society.
My child, mother thanks you. During your 12 years of growth, you also gave her a chance to grow up again. Seeing your stumbling growth, her mind became more peaceful and her thoughts gradually matured. Without you, my mother will never understand the true meaning of growth, life and even life. Son, you are going to bid farewell to your primary school career, teachers and classmates and start a new journey today. As a mother, I still have some heartfelt words to tell you: Son, you should learn to take responsibility for yourself. From primary school to middle school is an important turning point in your life. If you used to say that mom and dad walked hand in hand, then the future depends on you. Even if you stumble, your parents should be brave enough to let you walk independently because you want to.
No matter whether flowers or thorns greet you in the future, you should remember that it is your own choice. What you usually do, or work hard or play around, will definitely determine your character and destiny. At most, mom and dad will cheer for you or feel sorry for you. Besides, there is nothing we can do. Son, you should cultivate the courage to overcome difficulties.
Not just you, everyone's life is a problem with another problem, solving one problem and meeting the next one unexpectedly. Solving every problem in life happily is your only choice.
Instead of complaining and worrying, it is better to face up to the problem and solve it happily. The meaning of life is to overcome one challenge after another and enjoy happiness from it.
What mom wants to tell you is that the biggest problem in your life is yourself. If you keep beating yourself, you will have the courage and confidence to overcome all difficulties. Son, you should learn to treat failure correctly.
The greatest glory of a person's life lies not in never failing, but in bravely getting up every time he falls. Everyone grows up in the process of constantly denying themselves.
Even mom and dad, we have to admit that sometimes some principles we set for ourselves are often inadvertently destroyed by ourselves. In the face of this situation.
Writing an excellent narrative composition with the topic of "My Junior High School", since March, the war of "Junior High School" has gradually ignited around me, which may be regarded as the challenge of our primary school students in the last semester. The teacher began to instill in us the knowledge of preparing for the graduation exam and conduct more and more systematic knowledge review. Famous schools in Chengdu, such as the experimental school affiliated to Sichuan Normal University, began to publicize enrollment in our class. Slowly, from time to time, students in the class will come to Chengdu to apply for prestigious schools, and even the review materials they brought back from Chengdu have become "exclusive treasures" for fear of being seen by other students and increasing competitors. One by one, the students began secret pre-war training-Liu Haoyang was scratching his head for a problem he couldn't solve. Yan Chaoyue is discussing the test questions with others, and Xu Zhaojia has been watching his secret exercises after class. ...
Yes, in the face of the first competition and challenge in my life, my parents have never left me, and the atmosphere at home is getting stronger and stronger. Every day when I come home from school, I can basically get a phone call from my father in Chengdu, and I always start tracking the situation when I do exercises and become like a woman. The words "respond to challenges correctly and actively" have never left my mouth. My mother comes home from work every day and never goes out to meet her friends. She pays attention to my homework and always helps me finish the last question. Gradually, my exercises piled up on my desk, including the exam questions of famous schools in Chengdu in previous years, Chinese competitions and Olympic Games ... from one set to two or three sets every day, and sometimes I even have to do four sets. The time I usually practice writing and keep a diary was also suspended by my parents' "special approval", so I spent all my time preparing for training. Once, my whole life was surrounded by exercise. I even began to get tired when I came across a question that I couldn't think of an answer. Occasionally anxious enough to really want to give up. How I want to shout out and run a few laps!
A realistic simulation test will never be forgotten by me. Dad sent back a set of exam questions for Wanda School in Chengdu No.7 Middle School this year, including Chinese and math. The exam time was * * * 80 minutes. After I prepared for the exam, my mother began to test my time. When I got the test paper, I immediately started to do it non-stop. Before long, I was overwhelmed by a series of "problems". My mother is watching the invigilator, watching the time pass by. I'm so anxious that the answer will jump to the test paper at once. Before I knew it, it was time to answer questions. My mother told me to stop writing and roll it up. I can't predict whether the questions I have done are right or wrong, and there are still many questions I haven't done at all. What should I do if I meet such an exam in Chengdu? The next day, my father sent back the answer to the question. My exam results came out soon, and the results were terrible. I know I failed, and I really want to cry ... My parents began to educate and comfort me, and I am no longer proud of my past. I felt the gap compared with my classmates in Chengdu, and began to swear secretly: I will pay ten points to catch up if they work hard!
The next exercise is more tense. When I met the exercises I didn't understand, I began to discuss them with my mother. I often discuss a topic for hours, sometimes I blush. ...
6. How to write the preface of the primary school graduation composition collection? Childhood is colorful, just like beautiful shells on the beach; Childhood is carefree, just like a wave doll playing all day; Childhood is pure and sweet, just like clear spring water in a mountain stream. Time flies. The six-year primary school is coming to an end. I have written many compositions, and I have compiled them into this composition collection. Writing is to write your own experience, feelings and imagination, so as to make the content specific and feel true. My composition collection is such a composition collection that reflects my primary school life, thoughts and feelings. It really recorded my richness. There are unique feelings about people and things, thoughts and feelings about life, and whimsy full of curiosity about the future. Another remarkable feature of this collection of essays is that many essays have traces and comments from teachers, which is extremely precious because it records all the real things. In the six-year primary school life, everyone has many happy, interesting, sad and novel experiences. Looking back, let's savor childhood anecdotes together. Looking back, let us recall the colorful primary school life and feel the ups and downs of growing up; Looking back, let's learn from that unforgettable lesson and move towards success step by step.
7. When children start junior high school, the school asks parents to write an article to introduce their children to the class teacher. My opinion is different from that upstairs.
I think the school asked parents to write this to improve their understanding of children. After all, at the beginning of junior high school, there are all new faces. It is convenient to learn more and help children learn and live in the future. Therefore, I think we should mainly write the following points.
1. Personality. Introduce your child's personality characteristics to the teacher in detail.
2. hobbies. It is best to introduce children's hobbies to the teacher.
3. The situation of liberal arts and science. This can correct children's bad habits from junior high school.
4. The ability to unite classmates and lead the collective. In this way, the teacher can refer to whether to do it for his class cadres.
What you want the teacher to help correct most is your child's shortcomings. We must expose all our children's shortcomings to the teacher, so that the teacher can know ourselves and know ourselves. We can't report good news without worrying, as upstairs said. No matter how many awards represent the past, it is not good for children's growth. Junior high school is already a new beginning. Real gold is not afraid of fire, and what a child really has cannot be covered.
In this respect, I suggest that it is better to keep a low profile and give the teacher a modest impression. If you think it is really necessary to let the teacher know about the award, you can mention it appropriately.
6. Your expectations for your child and his own goals (if any). In this way, the teacher can know that the child is targeted and the training is more targeted.
That's about it! You can also put yourself in the teacher's shoes and ask why you want this introduction and what is the purpose, so that you can write it in a targeted way.