I watched the snail crawling slowly on the balcony, and my eyes were attracted by it. Not because I hate it, but because I am interested in the long "line" behind it.
I don't know where the snail is going, but its mucus tells me that it has been here. This is the trace it left, and I have a little admiration for it.
I am progressing slowly on the road of learning. I know the difficulties ahead can be seen everywhere, and there will be more and more annoying stumbling blocks. Friends around me no longer have time to help me. I have only one belief, I can overcome all difficulties and try my best to reach the finish line.
I want to leave my footprints on the road of exploration. The snail has climbed over the balcony and walked to the roof.
Slowly, it seems slower. Climb up carefully and bravely.
The trace behind him still exists, reminding people of the hardships of his progress. I really want to help it, but I just want to reach out and can't help but stop. An idea popped into my mind: what's the point of a successful ending if you don't go through a difficult process? I am immersed in the vast ocean of problems and want to have a rest, but I refuse to put down my pen.
When resting, I think of my life at two o'clock and one line, and I think of a mountain of homework. I feel very annoyed, blaming myself for being too stupid to "copy" other people's homework to relax myself. But as soon as this idea was born, it was obliterated by reason. Yes! I want the score, not the answer on that piece of paper.
As the sun sets, the soft golden light spreads all over the earth, and the white walls turn golden. The little snail is still trying to climb up.
I can hardly find that little bit. But I know it will reach the roof.
The long trail behind witnessed its efforts and made me understand that the road came out step by step. In a blink of an eye, the day of the senior high school entrance examination should have arrived.
The previous hardships turned into motivation, and the unchanging belief in my heart made me master a wealth of knowledge. My destination seems to be bright, too.
Snails, like me, work tirelessly. I am like a snail struggling for a little dream.
Snail told me that as long as you leave your mark on the road to your dream, the future will shine.
Please give a material composition and some material composition questions in the original text. There must be many relationships between materials, some of which are the same and some are different. For this kind of materials, we should use dialectical thinking, deeply analyze the essence from the phenomenon, grasp the internal relationship between the materials and find out the main idea of the materials. When conceiving, you can focus on the internal relations of several materials, or you can take the theme of one material as the center of the article and mention other materials appropriately. For example, the following essay questions consist of two materials:
Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required.
Material 1: Expressway often designs a speed limit curve with great fluctuation after a straight and flat road. Its purpose is to keep the driver clear-headed at all times and avoid visual errors caused by directional inertia caused by long-term high-speed driving.
Material 2: A psychologist has done an experiment: when wearing a small embroidery needle, the more absorbed the wearer is, the more shaking his hand will be, and the harder it will be to get in. In the medical field, this phenomenon is called "purposeful trembling", which means that the stronger the purpose, the less likely it is to succeed.
A comprehensive understanding of the above two materials is required, but you can choose one side and one angle to conceive the composition. Determine your own ideas.
As soon as the material emphasizes keeping a clear head at all times, the spirit is in a state of tension and there can be no slack; Material 2 emphasizes not to be too purposeful and nervous, and relax yourself appropriately. On the surface, these two materials are contradictory, but the analysis of their internal relations is unified. This unity is the main idea of the material, from which we can draw the following views: relaxation is a good policy for success; Both nervous and moderately relaxed; It is necessary to concentrate and distract.
Please give a material composition and some material composition questions in the original text. There must be many relationships between materials, some of which are the same and some are different.
For this kind of materials, we should use dialectical thinking, deeply analyze the essence from the phenomenon, grasp the internal relationship between the materials and find out the main idea of the materials. When conceiving, you can focus on the internal relations of several materials, or you can take the theme of one material as the center of the article and mention other materials appropriately.
For example, the following passage consists of two materials: read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. Material 1: Expressway often designs a speed limit curve with great fluctuation after a straight and flat road. Its purpose is to keep the driver clear-headed at all times and avoid visual errors caused by directional inertia caused by long-term high-speed driving.
Material 2: A psychologist has done an experiment: when wearing a small embroidery needle, the more absorbed the wearer is, the more shaking his hand will be, and the harder it will be to get in. In the medical field, this phenomenon is called "purposeful trembling", which means that the stronger the purpose, the less likely it is to succeed.
A comprehensive understanding of the above two materials is required, but you can choose one side and one angle to conceive the composition. Determine your own ideas.
As soon as the material emphasizes keeping a clear head at all times, the spirit is in a state of tension and there can be no slack; Material 2 emphasizes not to be too purposeful and nervous, and relax yourself appropriately. On the surface, these two materials are contradictory, but the analysis of their internal relations is unified.
This unity is the main idea of the material, from which we can draw the following views: relaxation is a good policy for success; Both nervous and moderately relaxed; It is necessary to concentrate and distract.
4. The topic of the given material must be written around the theme of the given material. Generous?
Because the author adopted the idea of seeing the big from the small, a small sweet stalk truly reflected the rural economic situation, the improvement of farmers' living standards and the changes in their mental outlook. 2. Old topics and new works, our usual exercises, exams and propositions are inseparable from our lives.
Write a narrative in memory of teachers, classmates and parents; Writing argumentative essays is all about topics that we should know and understand; Writing expository articles is familiar to us. Therefore, it is difficult to get rid of an "old" word in the composition proposition.
Some students, who don't know old topics or new works, are doing old topics and new works there. Teachers who write are all white-haired, or at least gray-haired, as if teachers with black hair can't teach books well.
Writing about the teacher's work is responsible, that is, the teacher is still correcting homework in the middle of the night, as if it is irresponsible to be a teacher who doesn't stay up late. When correcting homework, there are many red words on the homework. Teachers who train students to correct their own homework, although they have the spirit of reform, seem to think that their own practices should not be advocated.
There are also some students who love to write about sick teachers. During the lecture, they either covered their livers or stomachs, and there were strings of sweat on their foreheads, as if the sweat was not up to standard. If it doesn't rain, the teacher will make up lessons for students who don't come to school in the rain.
These are teachers' images that often appear in compositions. They are called old topics and old works, and there is nothing new. How can others want to read such an article? Those students who are good at old topics and new works write old topics, but their ideas are novel and people don't feel outdated after reading them. Me.
5. Write a composition according to the following materials, and the topic is self-made. First, choose the right angle to set the topic.
First of all, we should read the material carefully and summarize the writable angle from it. From the words of "that man" in the material, we can sum up the following angles: 1, let the wings of the soul fly, 2, do not rely on the gifts of others, 3, do not complain about God's injustice, and 4, God is fair.
From the same wings, different animals have different uses, which can be summarized as follows: 5. The road is made by people. Our destiny is in our own hands. You can also talk about the idea that "eagles, ostriches and penguins" adapt to the environment and survive and develop in harsh environments.
Then choose the most relevant and familiar content to write from multiple angles, so that it will be handy to write. Ji Min's essay "Flying with the Wings of the Mind" draws up an eye-catching and vivid topic.
Second, the structural arrangement should be reasonable. The structure of material composition should be composed of at least three parts.
That is to say, look at the materials to summarize the arguments, combine the actual analysis of the arguments, and summarize the full text to emphasize the views. The reading part should be concise and clear, and it is forbidden to copy the original text.
Connecting with the actual part is the focus of the full text, so it should be written in detail. Summarize the full text at the end, taking into account the materials and topics, and be concise.
Third, use rhetoric to express beauty. A good article should not only have a correct point of view and a reasonable structure, but also have beautiful language.
Using metaphors in an article will make it more attractive. The use of personification in the article will make the language club lively, interesting and full of vitality.
The use of parallelism in the article will make the article more verve. A rhetorical article, carefully chosen words, will add a lot of bright colors to the article.
Fourth, words should be infectious. As the saying goes, writing is like a person.
A person's kindness, cruelty, humility, arrogance, elegance and rudeness will all be shown in his articles. Do you want your article to infect people with kindness, humility and elegance? Then don't write questions with vicious, arrogant and rude meanings in your article.
After reading a composition with neat copying and fluent sentences, people will think that the author is a serious and responsible person. The marking teacher will always give you extra points.
For an article full of typos and scribbles, it is natural to treat it coldly and even be scolded. Whether the writing style is infectious and whether the copying is neat is also a very important part of the exam composition.
The composition of senior high school entrance examination can be divided into two categories: one is propositional composition, including full propositional composition and semi-propositional composition; The second is to write a composition based on materials, including topic composition, reading composition and picture composition (topics, articles and pictures are all materials). The characteristic of writing materials is that candidates read the materials first, and then write their own compositions according to the materials.
Writing materials is the highlight of the composition of the senior high school entrance examination over the years, so it is the focus of composition review; When candidates do this kind of composition in previous years, it is easy to deviate from the topic, so it is also the difficulty of composition review. The key and difficult points have been broken, and other types of compositions will be solved easily.
6. According to the materials, determine the train of thought, draw up the topic, give an 800-word argumentative essay, integrate into the group and enjoy loneliness.
Writer Liang Shiqiu said: "Only immortals and beasts like loneliness, and people want friends." A western philosopher advised young people that the first lesson they should learn is to endure loneliness. These seemingly contradictory sentences actually tell the true state of our lives.
When you hear the happy news, will you immediately find someone to share it with? Do you want someone to cheer you up when you are depressed? Do you want someone to help you when you are in trouble? When you are interested in something, do you want someone to explore it with you? Friends are the first choice. Friends are very important in our life. Share our happiness and sadness with them. Doctors can cure our physical diseases with drugs, but without friends, who can really stay happy or recover from mental trauma? Friends make you happy. Friends listen to your troubles and give you advice. A true friend can share joys and sorrows with you.
Undoubtedly, everyone needs friends and friendship, and no one can sail in the ocean of life alone. We need the help of others and give them help. The importance of friends is self-evident and obvious. Everyone needs friends, and everyone can't live without friends. We should be honest with our friends.
According to the research of psychologists, without friends, people's emotions have nowhere to release, and long-term depressed emotions make people break away from normal life. Criminals are isolated and helpless, most of them have no friends, and their world outlook is distorted.
So, thank those who helped us, because they helped us through the difficulties; Grateful to those who care about us, because they give us warmth; Thank those who encourage us, because they give us strength. With gratitude, you can be warm.
But at the same time, each of us is an independent person, and we can't blindly rely on others, including our best friends.
Some people don't understand that enjoying loneliness is a valuable quality. They can't be quiet and refuse to be lonely. They always show their existence by cliques and entertainment, lacking quiet observation and thinking. They don't believe in the power of loneliness, and their hearts can't be calm, so they can't find their true self behind the endless prosperity.
A mature person grows up in loneliness, because only when he is quiet can he have a chance to face and examine his mind. I don't believe that a mature person is always keen on communication and entertainment, let alone devoted to all kinds of dazzling activities and events. Loneliness does not mean that you are geographically isolated from the world, but more importantly, you should leave your own quiet time and space in your mind.
For example, a writer, far from the temptation of secular utility, restores his soul to the soul that a writer should have, constantly observes the surrounding environment, and then speaks in words. Silence is an indispensable quality for a real writer. Once he becomes a so-called hot figure, it is undoubtedly a disaster. He will abandon the quiet nature of literature and gradually get lost in the excitement and noise. Writing should be the loneliest occupation in the world, just like a person in distress struggling in the desert. No one can help him, and no one can write what he wants to write. The person in distress should concentrate on finding water and direction, and he must fight alone. Only in this way can he walk out of the hinterland and complete his works of thinking and life. I am also reflecting on how many lively and extraordinary activities have inspired my soul. I dare not say that I have not benefited from it, but it is quite limited, so I keep reminding myself: enjoy loneliness and stay away from the noise. Some things need to be done by one person to gain something. I can spend a day getting to know a city. Come to a bus stop, get on the bus at will, enjoy the scenery on the roadside, then get off at a station at will, walk around, see the station, get on the bus and get off ... You can go to the library all day on weekends, or sell euphemistically on the busy street to buy what you want. In fact, this is also a part of life, seemingly boring, but can not be ignored. I also met a retired man, an optimist, who got up every morning to run and exercise. After breakfast, he picked up the kettle to water the flowers and grass, and then sat at his desk and read the newspaper of the day. Go to the old people's club to play chess with others at noon, or practice calligraphy at home, study some hobbies, and watch TV or take a walk after dinner at night. Lonely for others, but full of meaning for him. Self-entertainment is an optimistic attitude towards life.
A mature person understands the meaning of loneliness, and loneliness is associated with silence. Silence is another kind of relief for us in the noisy real life. In today's information explosion, if you don't have a deep understanding of "silence", even hiding in the deep mountains and forests is not really lonely. Quiet is a state, which will give us enough space and time, keep us at a distance from life, and enable us to deeply interpret our inner true thoughts.
There is no contradiction between being integrated into the group and enjoying loneliness. They are two important aspects of our lives.
We enjoy the warmth and excitement brought by friendship, and also enjoy the depth and value of thinking in loneliness. What can I do to realize my self-worth? How can we make life more meaningful? How can we make ourselves happy and people around us happy? One day, when you find that you no longer blindly like to mix with a group of people, stop crying to solve problems, start to do what you need to do according to your own wishes, learn to respect everyone around you, become generous in gains and losses, and start to have your own independent thoughts, then loneliness will become full of meaning and have traces of growth.
7. According to the following two paragraphs, you should write two compositions. Why should we decide the topic separately? Well, I guess you and I are in the same school and grade, and I did this homework. . .
Well, I'm still thinking about the first material. I haven't written it yet (it hasn't started yet anyway). It's easy to set a theme for the wine tasting.
Intention analysis: the tendency of this material is vague, which is where the title of this composition is open. So it can be conceived from many angles: 1. You can be sure that "precious wine" does not need to be appreciated, but you can also "play the pipa", thinking that "the fragrance of wine is also afraid of the depth of the alley" and "precious wine" also needs to be appreciated. 2. Make sure that "ordinary wine" must be appreciated. Connecting with real life: Parents should educate their children (or teachers should educate their students), and treat ordinary children or students with more appreciation like sommeliers.
Choose an angle suitable for your own writing and start writing. Come on.