People are also very interesting, which makes this composition feel very interesting. My Chinese teacher recommended this composition, which is actually a teenager in Beijing.
Tong won the prize in the competition. Of course, I'm glad. One day, the Chinese teacher brought me a thick notebook and said to me, "Your composition should be printed."
Do you know who revised this book for you? "My eyes are wide open, which is somewhat puzzling." It's Mr. Ye Shengtao! "The teacher put a big book.
Pass it to me and say, "Look how carefully Teacher Ye has revised it. You can learn a lot from it! " "
I opened my notebook and saw that there were 20 winning essays in this essay contest. I turned to my composition and suddenly froze: first of all,
The first thing I saw was the red modified symbols and the small characters added after the modification, which were so dense that several pages were covered with red circles, hooks or straight lines.
Curve. The composition is like someone had a major operation, bleeding and dressing.
When I got home, I carefully read the revision of my composition by Teacher Ye Lao several times. The title "a portrait" was changed to "a portrait", and I immediately
Feel the accuracy of words. There are many changes in such places, and there are many places where long sentences are broken into short sentences. There is a place where I remember ten points.
Clear: "Why did you take the cover off the geometry textbook?" Mr. Ye Lao changed it to: "Why did you remove Bao Shu's paper from the geometry textbook?"
And then what? Delete the verb "Bao" in the original sentence to make the sentence clean and standardized. It is more accurate to change the "book cover" to "Bao Shu paper" because
The cover of a book can be considered as the cover of a book. I really benefited a lot. After all, watching the fire from the other side of the bank is different from being there. This not only showed me
All kinds of faults in my composition have also made me realize the arduousness of literary career: it is difficult to become a great climate without great efforts and meticulousness. I
Although I have never seen Mr. Ye's face, I have been corrected by him seriously, peacefully and enthusiastically, like a spring breeze.
Mr. Ye Lao wrote a short comment at the back of my composition: This composition is all about concrete facts, which are revealed from concrete facts.
Dear teacher Wang. Xiao Fuxing couldn't have written so kindly if he hadn't been deeply moved by these things about painting.
However, this short comment has established my confidence in writing. I was only 15 years old at that time. When I was a teenager, I could get a famous one in China.
Under the guidance and encouragement of great writers in foreign literary circles, the inner excitement can be imagined, and the high confidence and fantasy are shaking like birds.
That's a mind that only children of that age can have.
This summer vacation, the Chinese teacher came to me and said, "Teacher Ye Shengtao wants to invite you to his home!" " "
I'm surprised. A great writer like Mr. Ye Shengtao wants to meet a junior high school student, which I naturally regard as a major event in life.
Things.
That day, the weather was fine. In the afternoon, I came to a quiet alley in Dongsi North Street. Ye Xiao Mo, the granddaughter of Mr. Ye Lao
Meet me at the door. The courtyard is a typical quadrangle, bright and elegant. Just entering the yard, a green Parthenocissus wall jumped into view, making
The heat in summer suddenly dropped a lot, and the sun turned green and jumped, flashing blurred light on it like a gentle elf.
Point.
Ye Xiao Mo led me to the living room, while Mr. Elymus was waiting at the door. He saw me, shook my hand like an adult, and suddenly let me
I think the distance has shortened a lot. After sitting down, he asked me my age in Suzhou dialect, and said with a smile, "You are the same age as Xiao Mo."
Ah! "With the casual and cordial, the mysterious aura on the writer's head disappeared, and my sense of restraint disappeared. The greater the writer, the more approachable he is.
It turns out that he is as kind as an ordinary grandfather.
I want to be interesting. That afternoon, Mr. Ye Lao didn't talk about my award-winning composition or writing. He didn't teach me any literary creation.
Secret, Elements of a Life Guide, and so on. On the contrary, he asked me several times about my academic performance in various subjects. I said I won the excellent medal for several years in a row,
The academic performance of liberal arts and science is not bad. He said, "Great! People who love literature should not only read liberal arts books, but also read more books on some subjects.
Books. "He asked me to recite Chinese historical dynasties, but I didn't recite them, and some dynasties still recited them. He added: "We in China are one.
We should make our own history clear, and it is even worse for literary writers not to make their own history clear. "I know this is a criticism of me, but also for me.
Expectation.
We talked harmoniously, as if I were not a child, but an adult and an old friend of his. The seriousness and simplicity contained in his kindness
Inclusive expectations have melted my little heart, making me wonder when dusk will come and quietly dyeing the sunset window lattice. I am a
My eyes also saw the Parthenocissus on the wall in the yard. In the evening, it was green and gloomy, like a thick lake, reflected on the glass window of the living room and kept shaking.
Drag, look at the living tiger tiger. At that time, I just read an essay "Parthenocissus" written by Mr. Elymus and asked, "That article" Climbing the Mountain "
Is that what the tiger wrote about them? "He smiled and nodded." Yes, that was written a few years ago! "Say that finish, he narrowed his eyes and watched it again.
Parthenocissus creeper outside the window. I don't know what the old man remembered at that moment.
I should be glad that I met a writer for the first time in my life and turned out to be such a great writer. A person and a work are all typical attacks.
Go home. His equal, sincere and generous dialogue with a child made my 15 summer full of vigor and vitality, as if it were that summer.
Very long. I seem to know or vaguely understand that this is done by the writer, and this is written by the writer. At the same time, before I
Parthenocissus tricuspidata is always so green before our eyes.