-Zhang Xiaofeng's Nostalgia in Spring.
Appreciation: Zhang Xiaofeng's personification makes my heart beat. I think of the spring in my home and the picture of birds soaring in the sky. The author compares birds to bad mathematicians, measuring the sky. This magical imagination impressed everyone, writing about the liveliness and agility of birds and the beauty of spring, and showing the author's love for spring.
When the wind blows, maple leaves fall all over the city, and the endless maple leaves fall, and the next season will be yellow rain. In autumn, people step on it and wear it in their hair, which seems to fall on their shoulders intentionally or unintentionally. Is it bright gold and gold? The arrival of autumn fills the space between heaven and earth. After the Mid-Autumn Festival, before Halloween, the autumn color is as thick as a layer.
-Yu Guangzhong's "Left Hand Palmprint"
Appreciation: This sentence uses figurative rhetoric, comparing fallen leaves to gold, which is vivid.
Snow-white makes people illusory, cold makes people awake, endless momentum makes people hard to breathe, and cold makes people's eyes sour. However, to appreciate the state of "clouds, when I look back, just behind me, fog, when I entered them, it was gone", you still have to come to China. The humidity in Taiwan Province Province is very high, which is the most ambiguous.
-Yu Guangzhong's "Listening to Cold Rain"
Appreciation: This sentence uses overlapping to express the phonological beauty of words and the Leng Yan and sadness of snow.
A breeze in Xu Lai, the delicate peony suddenly fell, and the gorgeous petals were scattered everywhere. The petals are still bright when they fall to the ground, like the feathers of a big bird being offered to the altar and leaving with a heroic elegy. When the peony does not wither, it either shines on the branches or belongs to the soil. It spans withering and aging, dies from youth and disappears from beauty.
-Zhang Kangkang's "Peony Rejected"
Appreciation: This sentence uses a figurative rhetorical device, comparing fallen flowers to feathers, which shows the outstanding charm of peony.
It's raining quietly, only the thin sound of rain. The orange-red house, like an old monk in a bright cassock, was baptized by the rain with his head down and his eyes closed. The wet red brick exudes irritating pig blood, which is in sharp contrast with the green laurel leaves under the wall.
-Zhang Ailing's Autumn Rain
Appreciation: this sentence compares the house to an old monk by metaphor and rhetoric, and writes about the calm and desolate house in the rain.
Time is like a sharp knife-if it is not used properly, it will carve deep lines on a beautiful face, so that vibrant youth will be worn away month after month and year after year; However, if used properly, it can carve an ordinary stone into a magnificent statue. Although Santa Maria Girls' School has a history of 50 years, it is still an ordinary white stone that can only be slightly carved.
-Zhang ailing's "Wish"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and symbolism to write his own view of time. Time is a knife, and life depends on how well you grasp it.
I couldn't help walking over and holding a maple leaf. Wow, it's beautiful! Like a slap, bright red, bright red; Like a fan, flat; Like a blooming flower, it will never fade! Before I left, I picked up a green maple, which I will cherish forever. It is a symbol of youth, beauty and passion!
-"Autumn Leaves"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and parallelism to write the color, shape and posture of autumn leaves, showing the beauty of autumn leaves and autumn colors.
A few friends, drawing bamboo shadows by moonlight, one you draw and the other I draw. The parameters are different, bright and dark, which actually means Chinese painting. Perhaps, art and beauty are contained in children's childish activities. Have you ever had a similar experience?
-Feng Zikai's Bamboo Shadow
Appreciation: A few strokes, writing scenes of several friends painting, humorous, concise and unique, full of the unique charm of Feng Zikai's works.
The sky is clear, the mountains stretch, and clusters of white flowers are like flowing rivers. It seems that all life in the world should come by appointment. At this moment, in the sunshine as transparent as honey, they cheered at the same time and rotated at the same time, turning into countless floating points.
Appreciate: Use figurative rhetoric to compare flowers to rivers. The language is exquisite and appealing, and the words are full of love for tung flowers, which makes readers seem to see the beautiful scenery of tung flowers all over the mountains.
10 New Year's Eve. An old man stood at the window. He raised his eyes sadly and looked at the sky. Stars float on the quiet lake like emerald lilies. The old man looked down at the ground again, and several lives more hopeless than himself were heading for their graves. On the way to that place, the old man has spent sixty summers and winters.
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor to describe the stars very vividly, compares the stars to lilies, highlights its cleanliness and purity, and compares the night sky to the lake, writing its calmness and beauty. However, under such beautiful scenery, I am dying, reflecting my regret.
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