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Portrait Collection (Youth)

1. The door opened and a young postman came in. I saw that his clothes were soaked, his trouser legs were rolled up high, and he was covered with mud from his knees to his toes, as if he had just got up from the mud. Holding a bag of mail wrapped in tarpaulin in his hand, he forgot to wipe the rain on his face and said to the people inside, "Childhood is coming!" " "

My sister is slim and strong, one head taller than me. Her neck is longer. When I am angry, I will call her "Changjin Deer". She is very energetic. When she looks at you, her eyes twinkle as if she could speak.

The young man looks less than twenty years old, with a pair of smart eyes under two curved eyebrows. You can tell at a glance that he is a capable man. Under a beautiful nose, there is a big mouth and two thick lips. People often say, "People with thick lips are all thumbs." But he has a glib tongue and is a talkative person.

4, my brother's eyes are highly myopic, and he can't live without glasses everywhere, just like a "blind man". Just take off his glasses and he will look like a sheep in front of me. One afternoon, my brother wanted to wash his hair. He asked me to bring him some soap to drink. I proudly thought: Hum! I'll run errands for you first, and then my treat. After a while, my brother craned his neck and beat soap bubbles all over his face. As soon as I saw the time was up, I quietly took my brother's basin away. After rubbing his hair, my brother went to wash his hair and took a handful of water and an empty one. He hurried to look for it, but as soon as he opened his eyes, the soap bubbles made him burst into tears. He groped his way like a blind man, groping around, and finally picked up a towel and wiped his eyes, but his eyes were still blurred, so he went to find his glasses.

I didn't have a chance to look at her carefully until she came near: I saw her ear-length short hair, big eyes and a smile on her mouth. Wear a red dress on the bed, and don't miss the school of Suzhou No.10 Middle School. She said to me gently, "Little sister, take my car!" " "Say that finish, she pushed the bike in the past.

6. The second brother sells seafood. It rains in the monsoon all year round, and it is very hard to get up early and get greedy. He is not tall and not very good-looking. Sometimes he looks like a good man, but he sells goods quickly and the vendors around him admire him.

7. In the carriage, a tall girl looked out of the window. She is strong and healthy. Slightly curly black hair in the back of the head, tied into two locks, hanging lightly. Crimson sweater collar, quietly revealing a dark blue coat. You can feel that this girl is full of youthful vitality and vigorous vitality.

8. My uncle is a docker in his twenties. He has a rectangular face, a black face and a red face. He is quite tall and strong, which makes people know that he is a strong young man at a glance.

9. On the left of the old mother, there is a beautiful and dignified girl, reclining in a chair. She has beautiful blonde hair and a big braid on her back. A black dress sets off her white and soft face. She looked at something with her head down, and her eyes showed sadness and concern. The bandage in my hand has been rolled up, but I forgot to throw it into the basket.

10, this is a girl in her early twenties, with a round face, red eyebrows and straight and warm eyes in her slender eyes; Always laugh before you speak, and language is also smiling, just like singing. When walking, she puts her weight on her toes, always like jumping and flying. You can see at first sight that she is a pure and happy girl. Strangely, her simple dress is not commensurate with her personality, and it is also very different from those diaosi girls who love beauty: blue cotton-padded jacket, black tweed coat, grass-green trousers, white scarf around her neck and black wool with braids.

1 1. My younger brother has just turned 20 years old and is five big and three thick. The hair is black and hard, one by one, and there are a pair of big eyes under two heavy eyebrows, staring at people like little tigers. Especially those big feet, put on size 42 sneakers and start pedaling.

12. When my cousin first arrived, she wore a plaid shirt with several patches and a pair of white sandals stained with dirt. She dare not speak loudly when she walks. We all call her rustic. But now, we dare not say cousin. Look at her wearing a beautiful coat, a pair of tight jeans, a pair of shiny high heels, a shiny gold necklace around her neck and long black hair over her shoulders. She looks dashing. Talking and laughing at home is like living in honey.

13, she is not so much an aunt as an elder sister. She is only twenty years old at most, wearing a faded plaid coat and short braids to her shoulders. She always smiles, clearly announces the name of the station, quickly deposits money and sells tickets, and patiently answers various questions raised by foreign passengers. Her warm and friendly language filled the carriage with the breath of spring and warmed the hearts of every passenger.

14, Sunday, I went to the queue to buy rice. In front of me is a young man. He is not fat, but he is strong enough. Round face, two thin eyebrows, a pair of big eyes and a slightly smaller nose are fairly symmetrical. Just a little thick lips, like Africans.

15, my younger brother is only in his twenties, with black hair, medium build and well-proportioned. He is not very beautiful, but he has good features. You can see from his eyes that he is a smart and energetic young man. He gives people a quiet and kind feeling, and his face is childish.

16, my brother drives a tractor in our village agricultural machinery team. He is very tall! My body is very big, and I have scars on my black and red face. Every time I look up and see these scars, a touching story described by a tractor driver will come to my mind. ...

17, sister 189. Because of running and anxiety, sweat oozed from the round face, like a ripe apple stained with dew. Her eyes are as bright as black gems, shining with intelligence, cleverness, liveliness and perseverance; Exposing long eyelashes, like the dense forest next to Bihu Lake, gives people a deep and mysterious feeling. Long black hair, that is, soft and slender, floats behind the head with the river wind.

18, at this moment, a tall young man hurriedly ran towards the steel mouth. He wore a cap on his head, a pair of blue glasses hanging on his tongue, flushed and sweaty, canvas socks and platform shoes on his feet, and canvas gloves on his hands.

19, a girl of seventeen or eighteen, sitting next to a stone. Black and red cheeks are covered with dust. She doesn't shout like some vendors, but only answers a few words when someone asks. She always looks a little shy with her head down when she speaks.

20. Look at him. He is only in his twenties. His face is pale and swollen. He doesn't seem to have slept well. He is always frowning and doesn't talk much. Laughter lines are almost unique on his face. He wore a faded blue robe, as if he would wear it forever. Thin chin shell, bright shoulders, looks lifeless.

2 1, my brother is generous, enthusiastic, cheerful, careless and reckless like a calf, playing basketball is the center; Playing volleyball is the main attack; Swimming is a "dragon in stormy waves". At the age of ten, he crossed the Yangtze River and became the youngest swimmer in the team that crossed the Yangtze River that year. His photo was also published in Changjiang Daily. Less than 15 years old, and the height is also 1 m 76. Everyone says this is the material for athletes.

22. Near the east window, sat a young PLA soldier. Sweat-soaked white military uniform tightly wrapped his strong and symmetrical body. His handsome face, white and reddish, shines like paint. Two black and thin eyebrows, rising strongly, will reach the top before bending and forming. A pair of eyes, dark and big, like ripe grapes, scanned the carriage full of sweat and snoring shrewdly and alertly. His right hand naturally reached under the skirt, and his sweaty palm gently held the small pistol at his waist.

This woman driver in her twenties is full of vigor and vitality. Her short hair, towel around her neck and flowered clothes stained by sunshine and sweat show that she often works in the open air. She doesn't have the free and easy arrogant manner of a professional female driver wearing sunglasses. Judging from her posture, she seems to be driving "Dongfanghong" or "Tieniu 55".

Xiaoli sipped her mouth, bowed her waist and approached it step by step. Approaching, approaching, I saw her quietly reaching out her right hand to the butterfly, and her open fingers closed and caught the butterfly's wings. Xiaoli jumped and jumped with joy.

He bent down, the basketball kept flapping back and forth, left and right under his hand, and his eyes turned around, looking for a chance to "break through". Suddenly, he quickened his pace, then turned left and right, rushed through two layers of defense lines and came to the basket. After a tiger jump, he turned to shoot, and the basketball drew a beautiful arc in the air and landed in the basket impartially.

Catching butterflies and playing basketball are our common activities, and some students have even participated in them in person. But the writing is not specific. Due to careful observation, the author described the movements and demeanor of catching butterflies and playing basketball vividly.

Second, we should grasp the action description that can best highlight the characteristics of the characters.

Please look at the following example:

He is over 50 years old. Wearing a pair of glasses with high myopia. He carefully took off his glasses and wiped them with the hem of his clothes. "Uh-huh ..." He was about to speak when he suddenly remembered something. He fumbled in the plate, then quickly reached into his pocket and took out a box of matches. Only then did he say "uh-huh" again, stood up straight and said in a particularly loud voice, "Now start watching the teacher do the experiment!"

There is an unpleasant smell of smoke in the classroom. Teacher Mao stood at the door panting. His head was steaming, and there were several glistening beads of sweat on the tip of his nose. His eyebrows were raised angrily, but his mouth smiled. Seeing us, he blinked in surprise, and the muscles on his face suddenly froze and did not move, just like the "freeze" in the movie. We were all nailed there like wood.

The old man's hands are dexterous. In just a few minutes, a clay figurine was born in his hands. Watch him pick up another lump of mud, knead it into a circle first, and then rub it gently with his hands to make it soft and slippery. Then, rub on it and gradually separate the head, body and legs. He held the clay figurine in his left hand and fiddled with it in his right. Soon, the clay figurine put on his hat.

Xiao Maotou is very small, and his head is only as big as my big doll; His face is round and red, like a big apple. She slept soundly, her eyes closed tightly, like two lines; Two eyebrows are like two crescent moons; Small mouth often moves, as if sucking milk. She was wrapped in a small quilt, tied tightly by a rope and did not move.

Sweet, she is chubby, about three years old. A small face, red and round inside. A big head, a pinch of black hair hanging down, covered the broad forehead. There are watery eyes under those two pale short eyebrows. Ah, what lively eyes, as if talking, but also reveal a trace of naughty expression! There is a slightly upturned nose and two red lips under those beautiful eyes. There is also a small bib beside him, and a blooming peony flower is rusted on the bib. Dundun's little hand holds a watermelon with a green skin and a red pulp.

This surprised me. Looking up, I saw a teenage girl sitting high on a big branch with a harmonica in her hand and about to play! She is wearing a lux cashmere sweater and a pea-green skirt. Two little feet in shoes are hanging in the air, which is very uncomfortable. Her pigtail head leaned on her right shoulder, her watery eyes blinked at me, and her nose turned up slightly, showing naughty appearance. As soon as you see her, you will like her from the bottom of your heart.

He has a oval face. When he is angry, his face is very long, much like a horse. When he faces you alone, he always puts on an understanding and loving look, and at the same time keeps shaking his head, looking like a big floating lamp from a distance. His eyes, you know? It's big, dark gray and deep. That horse's face looks very uncomfortable. He likes to make eyes at everyone when he speaks. Be careful not to let it hit you, it will make you dumbfounded. His arms and legs are as thin as bamboo poles, and his clothes hang on his body like sheets. He is erratic and has a mysterious temperament, which determines that when we play all horror dramas, he wears a wig to play the female ghost.

Feng Cheng is a classmate in our class. He is not tall and his eyes are big and bright. In particular, he has two big ears and two thick lips, just like a big clock. To this end, the students gave him a nickname-"Big Clock". Coincidentally, since the second grade, Feng Cheng has kept the classroom open and locked in the class every day, just like ringing a bell. This nickname is called "Open".

Students in our class. He is not tall and his eyes are big and bright. In particular, he has two big ears and two thick lips, just like a big clock. To this end, the students gave him a nickname-"Big Clock". Coincidentally, since the second grade, Feng Cheng has kept the classroom open and locked in the class every day, just like ringing a bell. This nickname is called "Open".

If you don't see him and only listen to his voice, you will know that it must be The monitor on duty Fu Yuqing who is "finding fault" again. Fu Yuqing is not tall, but she can stare big eyes. Big boys taller than her should be afraid of her. Coupled with a glib class, it is speechless and speechless.

Action:

Her opponent is Li Gang now. She raised the table tennis board without weakness, shrugged her shoulders habitually, twisted her neck, squatted professionally, raised her head slightly, showed daunting eyes, and smiled and said softly, "Serve!" The yellow ball shot at her quickly, and she bent down without hesitation, waved her arm and hit it back with a bang. Who knows, the opponent is not to be outdone, and it is a direct shot. She frowned warily, stepped back with her left foot and gave the ball a hard push with her right hand, never leaving the ball for a moment. The opponent directly "killed the ball", which made her hard to prevent and lost a goal!

Boy, not bad! "She clenched the chessboard, gently threw the ball into the air and shipped it at lightning speed, leaving two crunches. The opponent is a capable person and difficult to deal with. Time has passed for a long time, and there is no winner. She is a little worried that the yellow ball is like a small flame, which makes people panic. Although she flashed left and right, her opponent did not move.

My brother's eyes are highly myopic and he can't live without glasses everywhere, just like a "blind man". Just take off his glasses and he will be as obedient as a sheep in front of me. One afternoon, my brother wanted to wash his hair. He asked me to bring him some soap to drink. I proudly thought: Hum! I'll run errands for you first, and then my treat. After a while, my brother craned his neck and beat soap bubbles all over his face. As soon as I saw the time was up, I quietly took my brother's basin away. After rubbing his hair, my brother went to wash his hair and took a handful of water and an empty one. He hurried to look for it, but as soon as he opened his eyes, the soap bubbles made him burst into tears. I proudly said to him, "Haha, you have been cheated, brother, you are so stupid, like a pig." He groped his way like a blind man, groping around, and finally picked up a towel and wiped his eyes, but his eyes were still blurred, so he went to find his glasses.

Language:

I still remember one afternoon, I was going to study by myself soon. Before Fu Yuqing returned to the classroom, the students began to make noise. The classroom is as lively as a free market. At this moment, Fu Yuqing pushed the door in and said with a straight face, "What's the noise? Go back to your seat! " The students all obediently returned to their seats. Suddenly someone said, "What's the big deal? This is just a The monitor on duty! " . Although the voice was not loud, Fu Yuqing heard it, and everyone thought she would be angry. However, to my surprise, Fu Yuqing was not angry. She smiled and cleared her throat and said, "It doesn't matter. Maybe I take everyone too seriously at ordinary times. I don't blame that classmate, but I also want to thank her for her advice. However, if a class has no strict discipline, what will this class look like? " After that, I returned to my seat. Suddenly, there was silence in the classroom.

I still remember one time I forgot to bring my biology book. That's it. I must be punished! Last class, the teacher only stipulated that I must bring books. Although I didn't show it, my heart was tumbling down and my brain was spinning rapidly. I was trying to find a way. She saw my abnormality, asked why, and said, "It's not easy!" He dragged me to borrow books from other classes. But they lent it to us without saying anything. I can see that they don't want to lend it to us at all. I'm more anxious. The bell is about to ring, and my book has not landed yet. What should I do? My heart thumped, but it was not hopeless, but when I finished the last class, my hope bubble was completely burst and my tears were almost coming down. She bit her lip and thought for a moment, then said, "Go back first and use mine first." Say that finish, ran away. As the bell rang, she hurried into the classroom again, her face flushed and her hair stuck to her forehead. She met my questioning eyes, raised the broken book in her hand and walked to her seat with a smile. I asked her after class, and she just said, "I have a wide range of relationships!" " "I am also skeptical.

Psychological activities:

At this time, a burst of warm applause interrupted his thoughts. He suddenly looked up and saw Xiao Daming coming down from the podium. He immediately became nervous again. His eyes moved around as if looking for something. He was so nervous that he dared not even touch anyone's eyes. Then he lowered his head again, as if afraid of being seen by others. His ten fingers kept rubbing around and were soon wet with sweat and slippery.

"What should I do? Should I go up? " Tang Ming looked around like a thief, more nervous than before, and his legs trembled under the table. "Go, be sure to go up, this is the last campaign, in order to the students can regard me with special respect or new views in the future, I must run for the labor committee. ..... But ... "Tang Ming swallowed a mouthful of saliva deeply, with his head down, stuck on the table, breathing more rapidly. "I'll go up as soon as Li Hua comes down ..." He thought.

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Excitement and excitement poured out of his mind like a flood that burst its banks, and he could no longer hide his gentleness.

Run, run, run! His heart is excited, and his happiness can no longer be expressed in our shallow language. It seems that every hair on his body has the joy of beating.

The most important thing in describing characters' movements is to pay attention to observation. In daily life, we should pay special attention to the behaviors and actions of people around us, pay special attention to the characteristics of different people's actions, and grasp the characteristics to observe them carefully and repeatedly.

For example, the following paragraph:

Second, we should grasp the action description that can best highlight the characteristics of the characters.

Please look at the following example:

The old man's hands are dexterous. In just a few minutes, a clay figurine was born in his hands. Watch him pick up another lump of mud, knead it into a circle first, and then rub it gently with his hands to make it soft and slippery. Then, rub on it and gradually separate the head, body and legs. He held a clay figurine in his left hand and fiddled with his right hand on his head. Soon, the clay figurine put on his hat.

The above three paragraphs all capture the movements that can best highlight the characteristics of the characters.

Example 1 is about an old teacher with high myopia. Through the description of actions such as "wiping glasses with the hem of clothes", "scrambling in the plate" and "rushing into the pocket", the characteristics of an old teacher with high myopia, clumsy movements and a little "confused" are written. Example 2 mainly describes the characteristics of facial expressions and actions of grumpy people when they are angry. Such as: "standing at the door panting", "steaming head", "raising eyebrows angrily", "grinning down" and "muscles motionless". When angry, the facial expression is vivid and lifelike. The third example is to grasp the action characteristics of clay figurines and write an image of an ingenious old artist.

Third, we should use verbs accurately and appropriately.

Read the following examples to see what the dotted words in each paragraph do.

It's too late to say now, but it's too soon. The athlete who fell to the ground stood up suddenly with his hands propped up and tiptoed. The left foot points to the starting line, and the knee bends and squats firmly. Hands are like two wooden pillars stuck in the ground, and the whole body leans forward slightly, like an eagle spreading its wings.

In these short sentences, 65,438+00 verbs are used to accurately and realistically describe the starting posture of athletes.

She squeezed into the gate and put the burden on the ground; He stepped forward, grabbed the grass on the ground, held it down with his knees, leaned forward, tied his waist with his hands, lifted it up and threw it into a corner of the courtyard wall.

These dotted verbs in the paragraph are appropriate. Wrote the image of a capable, agile, energetic and skilled rural girl.

She saw grandma stand up and lift the lid with both hands. I struggled to open it several times before I opened a crack a little. A thick smoke rushed out of the stove mouth and almost smoked grandma's face. Grandma casually brushed her wrinkled face with her sleeve, shook her head again and said to herself, "It's no use getting old!" " "

This passage describes the actions of an old woman doing housework. With verbs such as "uncovering, rushing, pulling, brushing and shaking", the characteristics of the old people's work movements are accurately and aptly written. The above examples show that in order to write the dynamic image of the characters vividly, we must use accurate and appropriate verbs to describe the actions of the characters. Describe good words and sentences learned by dancing.

(1) Words describing learning attitude

Diligent, diligent, earnest, dedicated, practical, diligent, open-minded, studious.

Study hard, be down-to-earth, be shameless, seek perfection and blame, get to the bottom of it, forget all about eating and sleeping, starve and be persistent and meticulous.

(2) Words that concentrate on learning

Concentrate, concentrate, hold your breath, stare, concentrate

Cover up with relish, meditate and concentrate.

(3) Good sentences describing learning

Xiao Fei sat in his seat, writing and writing. There seems to be a steady stream of spring water flowing out of his pen. In less than one class, I actually wrote a composition.

Xiaohong just sat facing the window, and the afternoon sun shone on her round face, making her cheeks more rosy; She holds her chin with a pen, her eyes are wide open, her bright eyes are swimming slowly, and her plump chin is slightly upturned-this is the expression that the math teacher is familiar with and loves whenever she thinks of a more ingenious way to solve a math problem.

Whenever I do my homework, the nib rustles, as if a bird is singing to me, and as if to encourage me: "If you are not afraid of difficulties, climb the peak bravely."

She stood up and answered so accurately, so naturally, so smoothly, as if she had been prepared.

She recited in cadence, with beautiful tone, beautiful expression and moving seat.

He is a naughty boy. He reads too fast and crackles like a fried peanut.

Juanjuan read the text in Mandarin, and her voice was crisp and nice. Even the sunshine is fascinated. She sneaked into the classroom through the window and left it on her book, which she didn't want to leave for a long time.

I read this book greedily, like a hungry lamb rushing into the green grass.

She got into the sea of books, like a fish in the sea, and forgot the passage of time.

He managed to pull himself together and opened the book. From the beginning, he felt that lines of words were moving on it, like flying; Later, I thought it was just a blur, like a nest of ants crawling around on paper.

He buried himself in his homework again, and the room was quiet, except for the rustling of pens on the paper.

Students sit in the classroom, listening attentively to the teacher's lecture, just like dozens of flowers blooming quietly under the watering of hard gardeners.

Lang Lang's reading voice flew out from all the classrooms, like a touching children's chorus, with notes all over the sky.

Good words and sentences describing labor

(1) labor action

Finishing, drying, sewing, cleaning, wiping, rubbing, frying, washing and washing.

Show off your skills, wash and choose, clean and tidy.

Clever, clumsy, confused, clumsy

(2) Words to describe work emotions and feelings

Hard work, hard work, easy work, hard work, liberation, happiness and pride.

I was overjoyed, elated, satisfied and exhausted.

Good words and sentences describing characters

(1) A word that describes the appearance of a character.

Looking dignified and strong, with fine eyes, red ears and white, soft and red face.