In short, try to cultivate emotionally.
I don't want to write, but I write well, and there are also problems with students' emotions and literary literacy. At school and at home, I only run with students for one day all day. Only students who are immersed in work piles may not be able to write even if they write. Writing is to have a rich imagination, but also to know how to use language, such as how to express your ideas more vividly. In fact, you can take him to travel abroad and broaden his horizons. Teaching him the knowledge of improving life, society and sensibility in the process of natural tourism usually means letting him read some articles, newspapers, magazines, or articles to choose from, or let him accumulate more vocabulary.
I think it is not difficult to write a paper as long as the materials are well written.
1: I usually want to read some books and do some abstract accumulation;
2. Practice more at ordinary times, keep a diary, record observations, and don't ask for more words, just ask for careful observation.
Student: Show him around more, then walk around and tell him that materials that can be used to write landscapes can be used to describe, and so on. Because the child is playful and rebellious, if you always let him stay at home, but it is not good, take him away, increase your knowledge and write materials.
High school student: He is on a business trip or looking around. There are a number of digital magazines, such as Reader's Youth Digest. These articles are reasonable and stimulate him to think, so they can be written as separate contents of argumentative papers.
Generally speaking, it's not just reading, reading and thinking.
At the same time, for students, whether in primary school or high school, it is very helpful to keep a diary if possible.
Living alone-Unit 2 Writing Training of Grade 7 Chinese Edition
Lei Yuanzhou, Zhangzhuang Middle School, Gongan County, Hubei Province (43432 1)
, [Text Title]
The family sailed in the harbor. At night, Polaris is an oasis in the desert. Your family members are infertile, and your growth enhances your energy. Do you have the urge to write when we feel beautiful and delicate feelings? So, pick up a pen, paint the image in the heart of the person you love and sing our hymn. ......
Requirements: write a relative, a topic you are familiar with, and the style is not limited to poetry, not less than 500 words.
Writing instruction]
How charming the feelings of relatives are. You see, mother reached out her hand, a three-year-old child with joy and tension on her face. You see, grandma hugged her little grandson and said, I chose the whole myth. ......
Write about the person you love. As long as you can write about familiar people, relatives, natural feelings at home, and God. People who want to write a "living" pen may ask three "what" and start writing.
Does it look like it? Different people have different appearances and their clothes have different tastes. The figures we write are typical characteristics of writing portraits according to ideological and moral needs. Of course, the letter was handwritten, and the girl tied a ponytail for her, wearing bright clothes and watery eyes, which made everything fit. Can you tell who is who?
Anything to say? Language is the soul of a mirror. What a person says is closely related to his age, knowledge, accomplishment, temperament, demeanor, identity and status. We should pay attention to what people say when we write the characters' language, and we should not have feelings of age, age, voice and unreality.
Doing is the backbone of the text. A person left a deep impression on you because he did something, such as what he cared about and helped you, some of his specialties and hobbies, he left a deep impression on you, or made you unhappy, and so on.
Question, and think about the above three "have the confidence to do something, and then pick up the pen, the image of your loved ones must be rich and intimate."
[Distribution]: Sister, what I really want is you.
Hong Xiao, Grade 7, Zhangzhuang Middle School, Gongan County, Hubei Province.
In fact, I miss you very much and have been thinking about you. My clumsy tongue doesn't know how to express it.
I remember when I was young, I was selfish and generous. What about you?
Mom bought delicious food. Because of you, my sister, I can only eat half. Every New Year in China, my elders give me lucky money, but because of you, I make too few promises. I envy my neighbor's only son, and I am eager to be taken care of and cared for by my parents.
I'm young, and I'm always hitting on you. Everything you do, I also insolently insult you and satirize you. ......
However, my ignorance, my ignorance, my willfulness, my unreasonable behavior, and your sister's demeanor forgive me again. You said I was his sister. Yes, you are my sister. I have grown up, not an ignorant childhood, and I still have a bad temper that I can't change.
When you were in high school, you only came back once a month, and you were spoiled. I began to miss you and your good. But I forced myself not to miss it. I hate to admit it. I am afraid to hear the prompt: "I want your sister, who told you not to make such a childish phone call?"
My sister seems to be back in two months. No, 2 months and 5 days! Autumn is coming, orange treetops, why don't you call? Is autumn the season waiting for it?
I finally look forward to Friday, a home, and what I am looking for is a home. But everything remains the same. My heart sank.
"Smell, your sister called and said you bought a lot of delicious food. She said that she misses you very much. "
"Will she give it to you when she comes back?"
"She said, just like today."
Yes, my sister came back today.
At 6 o'clock, as night falls, my sister hasn't come back yet. My eyes were fixed on the alarm clock and I watched the second hand go slowly.
Won't she come back? No, no, she will come back.
It has been dark for seven days. I still haven't given up. Maybe she was delayed on the way. Suddenly there was the sound of a motorcycle. I thought my sister came back and ran out, but I couldn't see the shadow. No, she will come back. I turned down the TV and sat by the window, and people watched on the road until the end of the road. ......
Actually, I really miss you. I think about you all the time, thinking about your letter. I really want to shout "sister", then lose my temper again, and then be charming.
Sister, I know, I know ... [Abstract]: Full of strong sisterhood. I'm sorry for Yang Xian's childhood memories, knowing that I can tolerate all my bad feelings and my sister, the last two, and Yang's extreme emotions. In addition, "Home", "Night Arrival" and "Darkness" are three times a day, all in the afternoon, which is the testimony of sisters' deep affection. So my sister hasn't appeared yet, but her tolerance and kindness have quietly immersed in the reader's heart.
[Distribution]: Mom, please forgive me (two types of words)
The seventh grade of Zhangzhuang Middle School in Hubei Province dreams of Gongan County.
Mother doesn't belong to the kind of woman who has a good wife and a good mother. On the contrary, she is very strict, and she is more strict with her study. And all the mothers in the world have a tolerant heart.
This is a small forest shivering in the bleak autumn wind, with tender leaves in a dry autumn. I did a terrible math exam, and I was alone with bitter tears in the window next to my home. I shudder at the thought of my mother's harsh words.
Going home, a big meal, a big smile, everything is the same as before. The only change is that in the past, his face was beaming, but today I am overcast. "What's the matter, why the long face?" Mother asked with concern. I just came to Cao Cao's camp and said nothing. "Did you fail the exam?" His mother seems to have guessed 12. I am still silent.
"How many points?"
"No," I tried to pretend as if nothing had happened.
"failed?" Mother is facing a sudden change.
"Ah, it didn't pass. How about it? " Strange tearful lips, "I scold every exam, but you can let me study, but you also let me do it ..." I slammed the door, leaving only my mother with a depressed face lying on the table.
At the moment of 1 1, I was at a loss. I'm still fighting bloody battles on the operating table. Suddenly, the door was pushed open and my mother came in with a cup of green tea in her hand.
"A cup of tea, refreshing!" She said, and then came out and closed the door gently, leaving me only a steaming cup of tea. Tea is very clear, very pure, with a faint fragrance, and my heart is melancholy and my mind is clear. Mom, please forgive your daughter's ignorance! Abstract: This paper is successful: ① Digital emotion set off by environment. Young leaves tremble in autumn, just like the fear of failing the exam after "I" (2) Contrast promotes the development of the plot. Write in contrasting words, mother's "bright smile" and "my" cloud. Faced with the sudden change of tea delivery, "I" slammed the door and begged my mother's forgiveness. These comparisons can not only promote the development of the plot, but also promote outstanding people. Of course, this is a worthwhile change, and there are many improvements. For example, the psychological description of "I" is more subtle and the shape is richer, which makes the composition space enough.
[material]
Story material:
Until the master performer, his disciples told him that his shoelaces were loose. The master nodded his thanks and squatted down to tie it carefully. Wait until the apprentice turns away, squat down and loosen his shoelaces.
Passers-by asked inexplicably, "Master, why did you untie your shoelaces?" The master replied, "Because I hit a tired passenger, the details of shoelaces can better show his haggard and fatigue after a long journey."
"Why don't you just tell your disciples?"
"He can carefully find that my shoelaces are loose and enthusiastically tell me that he must protect his passionate enthusiasm and encourage him in time. As for him untied my shoelaces again, he didn't make it very clear. This is because there will be more opportunities to teach him to perform. The future can be said. "
2 Classic Xie Ying:
She 18 years old. There is a mole the size of atriplex on the right corner of the mouth. In my memory, she is a gentle and beautiful person.
-Teacher Cai Wei Wei: "My Teacher"
There came a dark and thin gentleman with a moustache, glasses and a pile of books, big and small. On the platform of this book, we introduce ourselves to the students in a slow and very depressed tone: "My name is Nobukuro ....."
-Mr. Fujino Lu Xun: "Mr. Fujino"
(3) Salute for the second time and invite the President to Dali. He is a tall and thin old man with gray hair, a beard and glasses. I respect him very much, because I heard that his city is extremely square, simple and cultured.
-Shoujingyi Mr. Lu Xun: "White Grass Garden to San Tan Yin Yue"
[Wenxin Interactive Health: When we write, we always feel that the characters are not clear enough. What tricks can you teach the teacher?
Teacher: I have a commonly used and effective method, which is called inhibition contrast. When students watch movies and novels, they don't find such a rule: how smart and brave a hero should be, his opponents will be cruel and cunning, and some cunning criminals will change when public security soldiers want to sing praises to solve them; If you want to perform a career with perseverance, it must be a difficult and excellent entrepreneurial environment. ......
Health: Don't say you didn't pay attention. Think about it. What the hell happened. A popular saying is "I'm not afraid, I don't know what is what, I'm afraid of comparing goods."
Ke: That's understandable. There are two forms of suppression and contrast, one is horizontal contrast, that is, compared with B, A belittles one and praises the other to achieve the purpose of contrast and thus highlight the image. In the same table, write "ABC chose three small segments, and two different reactions were identified in the same table, accumulating a vivid picture of a learning student, a studious task and a naughty model image. Another vertical contrast is the contrast due to the change of time. Fang Zhongyong is a good example, and we will learn from it. Under the age of 5, you can refer to things to write poetry legislation, and the art of "harmony" is quite large. At the age of 20, "silence" has changed even more, and the feelings between people have deepened.
Health: I see. It looks very simple.
Teacher: It's relatively simple, but there are two points to pay attention to: First, we should pay attention to the moderate evaluation of words and leave room. For example, if we want to promote a writing teacher, we should first restrain it. The strict requirements of parents' discipline in learning make you suitable for being angry, but it is not too "annoying" or there are almost no young people below. Similarly, the seemingly false love necessary for the unanimous praise of young people, such as a person's physical beauty (and inner b), makes you envy that seemingly warm person who is flattered by illegal traders (in fact, it is a wolf and a sheep).
Students know not to go to extremes.
Teacher: Yes, the second is to pay attention to the correct emotional turning point, authentic. After the suppression, after Yang Yang's suppression, we must pay attention to the true, natural and reasonable emotional changes, and we cannot impose them by simple comparative changes. For example, let your dignified teacher write hate on the study discipline. This change should be deeply touched by meticulous life care. Simple suddenly dignified and relaxed, the written object is inevitably unpredictable and even flawed.
(Shanxi Learning Weekly Chinese, July 3, 20061grade 7 P-4 edition, serial number: CN54-00 14, website:)
/& gt； How to write an article
It is not an easy task to write a good article, which requires long-term efforts. In many aspects, we should strengthen reading and do well in every class. In my deep understanding of the writing content and expressive ability, I also learn knowledge, nutrition and writing skills by reading many things in ancient and modern works, and look at things around me more carefully. Who will take care of life and pay attention to the accumulation of wealth? Writing materials are written in practice. "Practice makes perfect."
When allocating time, special attention should be paid to the following steps:
(a) the clear meaning of the review:
Moderation means reading the topic carefully before you start. Punctuation in the title contains some topics. You should read every word carefully. For example, on the question of "Goodbye, my dear alma mater", the exclamation point needs to write true feelings and be full of feelings of loving my alma mater. Correctly grasping the article, the center and a series of materials mainly requires a moderate focus. When there are some restrictions on the content of each composition topic, our task is to realize this restriction, which is generally within this range.
Time span 1. Any topic, from the perspective of his writing time range, the examination time is within a moderate range. There are generally three kinds of such laws:
The specified time limit is drawn as "summer" and "summer" is written as short-term limited summer.
Understand the time span of the content written, such as "before and after lunch", and write the content of the article within a certain time span, before lunch and after lunch.
Limited written content in a specific context, such as interesting childhood stories, must happen to children. Another example is Unforgettable Moment, which happened in a short time.
2 Location range. In other words, the theme space (orientation) of the composition is often used, and they are often written clearly, making clear the location background of the content. As a "farmer's market" problem, write something at the farmer's market; Another example: on the way to school, you need to write it on the way to school. Three questions such as "beach", "beach" and "coastal iceberg" all refer to the seaside, but only mention specific space or some size differences.
3, within the target range. The screenwriters of People I Know, One Person and I Respect My Good are all "supporting roles" in the foil position, even if they write "I" or others. "My classmate, my classmate and my partner" are three questions that students can refer to, but the scope of writing objects has changed from small to large. "I am essentially the same table" object (of course, it can also be written as the same table) and "my partner" refer not only to the students in our school class but also to the children in the neighboring school, and so on.
Content within the scope of>4. This refers to the restriction of events. Unforgettable things must be written as "truly unforgettable things" "One thing about Hutchison Whampoa, you can only write what you have experienced, heard and seen, not personal experience." The teacher knows that the teacher only writes two or three things.
Range 5. The number of people and things written is limited, so we must determine the scope of the number and the theme of the number. What happened in summer, an unforgettable thing, this thing, a. Another example is "school life is one thing" and "school life is two or three things". The former can only write one thing, and the latter must have two or three things to lose.
Secondly, it is necessary to clarify the focus of the topic, which is a key component of many topic keywords. The key word is usually called "there is something wrong with the eyes, and we found it, that is, to find a writing focus." An unforgettable event is also provided as the theme genre (such as the main narrative of notepad), quantity (1) and content (unforgettable event). These three requirements are undoubtedly the eyes with the theme of "unforgettable".
For some subtle problems, we should pay more attention to what words are and understand their meanings clearly. Such as "my" stupid "dad", the word "stupid" is ironic, seemingly stupid, but it is not stupid. Another example is "mother's bad temper", and "bad" is also irony. In fact, it is in her mother's good living habits and good style.
Some rules find that there is something wrong with the eyes of the topic sentence. Most eye questions answer "Who are you?" Part of a word. "I love my teacher", "Love", "My father smiled" and "Laugh". If the topic is one sentence, most people in front have eye problems. Such as "celebration", "joy" and "playful and lovely goldfish". "My favorite activity is" Favorite "and so on. Of course, the topic is changeable and has not been found according to these two methods. My classmate, "This question actually doesn't need a core element. According to the materials, we need to determine the focus and center of the article. "
Third, determine the writing genre in the trial. The narrative of "The Man I Respect" includes a notepad, which describes four schools of characters, landscapes and tendencies, such as "An Unforgettable Event" and "Hutchison Whampoa Experienced an Event". Notepad "genre" XX "can be used for writing." Our campus is mainly used for writing landscape style, but people and things cannot be separated. "Lovely Goldfish" should be used as genre material. "Diaries, book reviews and other programs are mostly in the headlines.
If you encounter semi-argumentative writing, you can follow the following steps: first, analyze the appropriate semi-argumentative writing topic, and understand what the prescribed topic is and what aspects need to be filled in. After choosing and comparing, you can finally read through the whole essay topic to see if it is smooth and coherent, or you can think about it later. Finish half of an article, and reproduce in your mind who or what impressed you most in your life. For example, "I love XX" has eye problems. As for who loves what information (people or things), you need to be familiar with it to determine whether you love your father, your teacher, your alma mater, reading and collecting stamps.
(B) for a good center
A meaningful health center. What does the article praise (or praise), criticize (or expose), or what should people read after being educated or inspired. If you can do this, then this article is of positive significance.
2. The center should be centralized. Articles must be written, not scattered around a center, and not with two (or more) centers.
3. The center is innovative. It is necessary to study the materials well, multi-level, multi-angle, multi-direction, from the surface to the inside, and dig out new ideological content that others have not discovered.
To determine the central idea, some can determine the theme from the title, such as "frugal grandma" and "I love autumn in my hometown". The central idea of such a theme article must meet the requirements. The central idea of some composition topics? However, direct regulation determines the central idea? "Meaningful activities, which educate our theme and define a broad central idea and greater freedom than the former, must also be limited by the prescribed scope. Some composition topics do not involve the central idea, but only provide material to what extent, such as the theme of "My Dad" for ten minutes between classes, but the central idea to be avoided? The uncertainty of the problem. Choose the right material
(3) The idea of writing an article with clear meaning on the problems in the trial will be a good center, and suitable materials should be selected according to the needs of the central authorities. Those caught materials that have nothing to do with the center are closely related to the center of discarded materials, and any materials that deeply express the center are the focus of our choice.
When selecting written materials, we should also pay attention to the following points:
1 The material is real. Our article tries to write what we see with our eyes and hear with our ears, so we write an article that really feels good. Of course, the statement is true, and the reasonable imagination and association in the article are not excluded.
This product is very typical. Sometimes it can be a given material, and we should compare and analyze it, which can best reflect the central idea? The materials selected from these materials are writable, and such materials are usually very typical materials.
3. The materials should be specific. When I write, I must write in writing (grasping the characters' language, movements, demeanor and psychological activities) (writing clearly the reasons, processes and results of things). Physics, the king's writing style is concrete and vivid. Therefore, the content of the materials we choose must be concrete, rich and detailed, so the purpose of writing an article is to be concrete and vivid. The topic of the composition is "I see a new trend, and according to the real, specific and typical business needs, I choose three materials to write down. Don't write the whole article, just write down the materials.
Draw up an outline
After determining the center and selecting materials, we should carefully organize the materials and arrange them reasonably. What to write first, what to write later, what to write and abbreviations, and how to start, end and transition all need careful overall design, which is the layout of the article. In order to prevent messy writing, we need to write an outline of the prepared content, and then write out the written part according to the outline.
A writing outline generally includes the following parts: composition topic, central idea and key paragraph level.
When writing an outline, you should generally pay attention to the following three points:
(1) The article should always focus on the center. Do you have a reasonable idea? Clues can be clues about time, things, objects, people or people. (3) It is considerate to miss this. When writing, you should consider what the abbreviation is, how to start, how to end and so on.
(e) The first draft has been written.
After the above four steps are completed, in the first draft of the article, write the article with the general outline that has been formed in your mind. Pen, write the first draft on paper should pay attention to the following four points:
1, follow the outline step by step, paying attention to the beginning and details at the end of the transition period.
2. How to finish writing in one breath as much as possible? If you have difficulty in using words, you can open up space to continue writing.
3, sentences should be simple and easy to understand, popular truth. Please pay attention to the use of punctuation.
4. Pay attention to the title of an article and specify the proper location of the center.
(6) Transcription
Composition is an indispensable part of writing. The process of composition is to improve writing ability in the process of training. More beautiful than the image.
What is their composition? Mr. Lu Xun said: "Read it at least twice after writing it, and learn the basic vocabulary, sentences and paragraphs as much as possible. Don't pity it." Be sure to read the article in the first draft I wrote carefully, think about it, the first place in the back part is the first place, and then carefully scrutinize the text to find out the problem. The specific steps are as follows:
See if the content of the article is out of tune and the center is clear. The content closely revolves around the center. It doesn't matter, there is no center to do, the sentence deletion material with center is unclear, it is not specifically rewritten, and specific omissions are filled.
Secondly, take a look at the article, which is well organized. The arrangement at the division level is appropriate and reasonable. Control the outline, whether it is detailed, whether it is done properly, and the key points. If it is not suitable, it must be adjusted or changed. If it is duplicate, it should be deleted.
Third, look at the fluency of the article, regardless of the exact wording. Words and sentences are decent and unreasonable, and I don't want to be corrected.
Fourth, see if the typos and punctuation in the article are appropriate. In order to eliminate typos and wrong punctuation as much as possible, the final version should be revised appropriately, filled in in English block letters and written neatly in the exercise book.