I will correct my shortcomings.

As the saying goes, gold is not enough, and no one is perfect. This sentence shows that no one in the world is perfect, and there will be shortcomings to some extent. Now talk about my main shortcomings!

Disadvantages 1: laziness

Once, I was watching TV. Suddenly, my mother shouted, "Dan Min, go and take out the garbage. The garbage is full. " I listened and said impatiently, "No, you pour it!" ""when I tell you to go, you go, don't shirk! " Mom said flatly. I thought to myself: Ah, how troublesome it is to run from the third floor to the basement again! At this moment, my mother's roar came again: "What? Still not going? " "Oh," I said lazily. Reluctantly, he picked up the rubbish and walked out slowly. At this time, I suddenly had a brainwave and quietly came to the balcony to throw the garbage down. "Ha ha, my shooting is really accurate, I just threw it into the trash can. "I whispered to myself.

Disadvantage 2: sloppy

Once, our class had a math exam. After I answered all the questions, I checked them several times. I thought to myself: I'm sure I can do well in the exam this time. But when the teacher announced the list of students with good grades, there was no sign of my name. In a short time, the teacher's progressive classmates actually had my name. At this time, the teacher spoke: "Wu Danmin has made great progress in class these days. You have to keep working hard this time, but this 73 is very bad for me. Be serious next time! " I thought to myself, "It seems that I have no fate with 100.

Disadvantage 3: Personality

How can I put it? I have a really weird personality. People often say that Leo people have a good personality. But I'm not. At home, I always bully people younger than me. At school, I help them when I see them being bullied. Every time my father helps me correct it, I can't stand it for a few days. ...

Disadvantage 4: study

Study … Actually, I don't want to study, but I don't like studying. Every time I finish my homework, I feel that the task is completed. But every time it comes to the exam, I feel that I can do well this time, but as soon as the test paper is issued, I know that I have failed in the exam and I am not serious in class every time …

Actually, I have many shortcomings. Look, this is the shortcoming of shortcomings, but I am confident to stay away from carelessness. Take a serious attitude in reading, calculation, preview, review, homework and examination. For example, when you come home from school, do your homework first and then play; Copy the teacher's mistakes three times; The time when the calculation of the write job is completed; Be patient when encountering difficulties, and don't be impatient; Exercise books and textbooks should be kept clean and tidy, and the handwriting should be neat. As long as you are strict with yourself and check regularly, you will develop good study habits and gradually overcome the shortcomings of "carelessness". I also want to get rid of laziness and overcome laziness, although it is as difficult as overcoming any bad habit. But nothing is impossible as long as you have the determination to break up with laziness. At the same time, I also want to study hard and get rid of my grumpy personality, that is, persevere in real life, then the brilliant glory will belong to me.

2. Comments on the shortcomings of the composition The classroom in Daquan Primary School is very quiet, and the children are very focused. They look like little teachers, which makes me very proud, but I don't know what the result will be. Watching everyone draw and write in circles as if nothing had happened, I am very glad to let my warm hands touch these cute little brains more frequently.

Finally, the composition book was put away. Looking at the children's masterpieces in the composition book, my mood began to fly like a kite. It turns out that wonderful can be found so easily. In a word, unexpected discovery has so many advantages:

First, learn to appreciate.

From the children's attentive expressions and actions, we can see that they study harder than ever before. It may be because of the little teacher's tall hat, the novelty of his first attempt, or the works of his companions around him that attracted them. Everyone is studying hard and savoring carefully. Maybe they have never studied so hard and won't appreciate the language so much. Look at the children's comments, and you will know what they have learned: "Your imagination is really rich, and it's good to use metaphors and personification!" "The actions here are well described and the verbs are used accurately."

Second, enhance friendship.

"Your composition has made great progress. I think you will be better. Come on! " "Your handwriting is great, and your composition is also very good. I should learn from you. I wish you a higher level! " Looking at these comments, I believe that children's hearts are as warm as spring! Usually, I always remind my classmates to help each other, unite and be friendly, and learn to pass on love. Now I understand that education is either preaching or as simple as that.

3. Primary School Composition: My Advantages [Primary School Composition: My Advantages] Primary School Composition: My Advantages Text: Everyone has advantages and disadvantages, and I am no exception. My advantages include reading extracurricular books; Enthusiastic to help others; Pay attention to hygiene and love cleanliness; Listen to teachers and parents; Have curiosity; Love writing; Can dance Latin dance; Finish your homework on time and seriously; Self-motivated in study, etc. Primary school students' composition: my advantage. \x09 \x09 I like reading after class, which is my greatest advantage. It is an advantage, which makes me get a lot of happiness. As long as I have time, I read my favorite books with relish and even go to the toilet. Once, I was in the third grade writing "Composition for Primary School Students: My Advantage". I was shocked. Oh, my mother stood in front of me with a tiger face. I finished my work quickly and went out. \x09 \x09 Love reading has increased my knowledge and brought me troubles. This is why I am now a 300-degree "girl with glasses". \x09 \x09 Besides reading, I also like Latin dance, you know. Although I didn't dance the best, my classmates gave me warm applause, which made me feel very happy. Everyone has his own advantages. I want to learn to develop and appreciate the advantages of others, see the advantages of others, constantly correct my own shortcomings and be an excellent person. \ x09 \ x09 \ x09 \ x09。

4. Write the advantages and disadvantages of your composition.

Advantages, make people happy; Disadvantages, annoying. My advantages: I study hard, I am not picky about food, I love reading, I have strong self-care ability and am ready to help others. Disadvantages: carelessness, laziness, forgetfulness. Let me talk about my shortcomings first.

First of all, carelessness

Once, you did a math problem, and 640 was divided by 3. There is nothing wrong with horizontal writing, and vertical writing becomes 643 divided by 3. When can I get rid of my careless habit?

Second, laziness.

The biggest headache every day is that I get up at 6: 40, and my father wakes me up on time. Although I heard it, I stayed there until my father called me again, and I dawdled and began to get dressed.

Third, forget things.

I got on the school bus and rummaged through my schoolbag, yeah! I forgot my English homework. Call my father with my aunt's mobile phone in the car and ask him to send things to school. This has happened two or three times.

After reading my shortcomings, everyone must hate me, but I still have advantages!

First, love reading.

There are so many books at home that I can't live without them whenever I have time. Once at breakfast, I was reading while eating, and my mother would say that reading and eating were not good for digestion.

Second, be ready to help others

Some students forgot to bring their school supplies. What about me? There will always be extra stationery in the schoolbag, and I will lend a helping hand to make him no longer like an ant on hot bricks.

Third, self-care ability is strong.

I have lived in school since the first grade, and learned how to fold quilts, make beds, wash dishes and chopsticks. If you don't wash chopsticks at school, will the teacher help you wash them? I can also wash clothes!

In my future study and life, I will carry forward my advantages, correct my shortcomings and be a good boy with excellent academic performance.

My strengths and weaknesses.

Everyone in the world has advantages and disadvantages, and I am no exception.

Let me talk about my shortcomings first-

First: I love playing. I'm so happy outside that I don't know how to go home. I will only delay if my mother calls out to me. Second: poor handwriting. Reading pinyin and writing words before the exam is my biggest headache. For example,' coral' I will add a' grass head' to it. Wandering ""I will write Wandering "

Seeing my shortcomings, you must think I am a careless person, right? But before you think so, let's take a look at my advantages-

First: I got good grades in math. No matter what the teacher asks, I can think of it at the first time. I got more than 90% in every math exam. Second: I believe I did well in the exam. But sometimes the feeling of not being confident will come out and make trouble, resulting in a little poor grades.

These are my strengths and weaknesses. I will definitely try to correct my shortcomings and strengthen my strengths in the future. Although you can't be a perfect person, it's always right to have fewer shortcomings and more advantages!

5. How to write comments on students' compositions, learn to appreciate, learn to respect and learn to praise? First of all, we should improve our writing level, improve our composition appreciation level, read more other people's articles, understand other people's writing intentions and learn to appreciate. In general, those fashionable articles with gorgeous language, fresh themes and distinctive themes are very popular. Such an article can get high marks in the exam, and the composition is usually considered as a model essay. They will be highly praised by readers. However, there is one kind of article that is easily overlooked. Those languages are simple and logical, but there are no so-called good words and sentences. The selection of materials usually comes from life, which is true and feasible, and does not necessarily have a particularly high political consciousness and does not necessarily shout political slogans; The language is concise, without half a sentence of nonsense, usually short; Simple feelings, no delicate affectation, no deliberate grandstanding, just like a gentleman's friend ... When writing in the examination room and at ordinary times, all such articles are often easily regarded as second-class or even third-class because the reviewers read the articles for a short time. In fact, they are the most beautiful articles, and they are the articles that can withstand repeated reading, pondering and deliberation. There is a saying in literary criticism that is expressed in the simplest language. It is the highest realm of literature. Teacher Mix thinks this kind of article is the most beautiful. Teacher Mix likes reading such articles very much, and makes friends with students who write such articles. To be honest, every time Mr. Mix teaches a class, he has to find three or five talents in this field. Even when Mr. Mix selected these students to enter the excellent composition class, some teachers didn't understand. Secondly, we should learn to respect the author and his works. Writing is a hard job. As the saying goes, a minor illness leads to a serious illness, so we must respect the author's works. Especially for primary school students who just learn to write, respecting their work is the most effective way to ensure their interest in writing. In addition, writing is a lifelong career, and it cannot be accomplished in one day. Teacher Mix once made an interesting analogy. Compare studying math and writing to buying things with money. Learning mathematics is very realistic. As long as you master a kind of exercises, you can solve them immediately. Its solution is unified, just like you can buy something with a dollar. What about learning composition? It's different. It can't be the same It pays attention to true feelings and unique personality. You have to accumulate 1000 yuan, or even 10000 yuan, to buy what you want for one yuan. Therefore, our teachers and parents, including the group leader who corrects our composition, must not do bad things with good intentions, have the idea of being fat, eat too much or ask too much! We must respect the works of young authors. As long as he has carefully completed every composition and achieved perfection, we must fully affirm him and polish our eyes to find the bright spots in his works. Third, we should learn to praise the merits of the article and praise the author's progress with sincere feelings and appropriate language. Of course, in the process of praise, we must grasp the discretion and don't take other people's shortcomings as advantages. We should also learn to put forward feasible suggestions euphemistically, which will not hurt people's self-esteem, but also make the author understand his own shortcomings and facilitate the author's continuous improvement and progress. For this reason, Teacher Mix created a set of composition star rating method to guide his disciples to evaluate each other's compositions. The assessment rules are as follows: As long as the task is carefully completed within the specified time, you can get an A, and then add stars according to neat handwriting, fluent language, correct punctuation, prominent center, true selection of materials, and the use of various writing methods and rhetorical devices. Although this method doesn't look good, Mr Mix's students really like it! They are all silently progressing and growing in the happiness of counting stars! After mastering the above three principles, Mr. Mix summed up his experience in writing composition review and classified it into two categories and eight subcategories. General comments: language evaluation, evaluation skills, evaluation structure, evaluation center, material selection; Personalized comments: * * praise, warm encouragement, articles and people comment, and write notes after reading. Teacher Mix lists the comments she often writes as follows, hoping to help the children who are evaluating or preparing to evaluate their classmates' compositions. 1. Regular comments: 1, language evaluation: fluent, fresh and natural; Full of personality and humorous language; The language is fresh and full of vitality; Implicit language, endless aftertaste; Careful language and strong logic; The language is concise and lively, with a strong sense of rhythm, giving people a beautiful enjoyment; Poetic language, beautiful; Simple language and sincere feelings are the highest realm of writing and so on. 2. Evaluation skills: the language description is exquisite, and the character characteristics of the characters are written; The action description is vivid and reproduces the character style; Psychological description is realistic, close to the reader's heartstrings; Delicate description of details, depicting the spirit of the characters; The appearance description is incisive, and the characters are vividly on the paper; Profound sentences are thought-provoking and enlightening; The description of the scenery is just right, which plays a good role in contrast and gives people the feeling of being there. 3. Comment structure: echo from beginning to end, highlight the center of the article, and express the strong thoughts and feelings of the little author; The opening point is straightforward; The beginning of the article is beautiful, just like the phoenix head; The ending is powerful and points out the center of the article; The end of the article is as powerful as a leopard's tail, which wraps the full text well; The suspense was designed at the beginning of the article, which caught the reader's heart and attracted the reader; The overall structural level of the total score is very clear, and the organization is very clear, which makes people see at a glance; The juxtaposition structure adds beauty to the article; Beaded structure connects short stories in series to form a beautiful article; The structure of contrast is very good, expressing the strong thoughts and feelings of the little author; One bright and one dark, two lines merged, showing the author's profound writing skills. 4. Evaluation center and material selection: I can observe life carefully, seize the beautiful waves from life and praise the beautiful life. The author is really original; The center is outstanding and the theme is novel, which is worthy of being a good article; The small selection of materials is great; You learned to pick up a sesame seed and write a beautiful song. You learned to write. Choosing materials around the center is the core of composition. You are so clever.

6. Write the shortcomings of writing into an article. How well the composition is written is the embodiment of students' cognitive level and language expression ability.

At present, many primary school Chinese teachers' comments on students' articles are lack of guidance, pertinence and inspiration, and often handle things by doodling with their own minds. There is no comprehensive evaluation from the words, words, sentences and articles of the article. Some of them are empty and abstract, which confuses students. They can't see what needs to be corrected or supplemented, and they can't see where they have succeeded. They just care too much about their grades.

So, what methods should teachers use to evaluate pupils' compositions? Teachers should generally pay attention to the following aspects when evaluating students' compositions. First, the pertinence should first consider the writing requirements of each composition.

These requirements are not only the writing requirements of students in their grades in Curriculum Standards, but also the specific training requirements summarized by teachers according to the training items of each unit and the actual situation of students. Praise the completion of writing tasks as required, point out the existing problems if they deviate from or do not follow the requirements, and let students develop the good habit of carefully examining questions and writing as required.

Secondly, we should consider the characteristics of the article. Due to the differences of students' cognitive level, writing ability, personality and interest, the style and characteristics of the articles written should avoid the bad tendency of similarity.

Second, inspirational 1. It is encouraging. We should not only fully affirm the overall advantages of the article, but also praise and encourage some small advantages and some advantages of the article.

Especially for underachievers, we should encourage them to use a word or a sentence well, so as to cultivate students' self-confidence in writing good articles. 2. Pointing.

If a student's article has shortcomings or mistakes, the teacher should point them out first, and then point them out. Fixed-point evaluation requires students to modify or supplement according to the evaluation instructions. You can write the added sentences on a small piece of paper, clip them on the page, or write the numbers at the end of the article.

The supplement and revision with fewer words can be done directly between compositions. After revision, it is best to guide students to compare the articles before and after revision, so as to understand the teacher's evaluation and realize the advantages and disadvantages before and after revision.

This evaluation form will have a significant effect on students with poor writing ability, especially those who have nothing to say in their compositions. 3. Discussion style.

Put forward suggestions or requirements for the imperfections in the article in a consulting tone, and guide students to examine and revise it with a higher standard and a broader perspective. Discussion-based composition evaluation is more suitable for students with good composition and strong interest in writing.

Third, contact 1. Contact the previous composition comments. Teachers should praise those students who carry forward their advantages and correct their shortcomings according to the requirements of comment on writing, give full play to the guiding role of comment on writing, and let students develop the habit of reading comment on writing carefully and correcting composition problems according to the requirements of comment on writing.

2. Talk about writing in connection with reading teaching. Students can use new expressions, writing knowledge, even new sentences and new words in their compositions, which should be affirmed and encouraged in their comments, so as to guide students to consciously apply what they have learned in Chinese class to their writing and cultivate their ability to apply what they have learned.

3. Contact the actual evaluation of life. The content of students' compositions is inseparable from what they see, hear, do and think, and it is bound to reflect their study life and express their thoughts and feelings.

When writing comments, connect these contents expressed in the article with the students' own real performance, and give encouragement and praise. This is not only an evaluation of the article, but also an evaluation of students' behavior habits.

Composition evaluation is an analysis, guidance and improvement explanation of the advantages and disadvantages of an article, and it is an important link to guide students' writing training. Teachers' comments and achievements generally play three roles: first, they play a guiding role.

From the comment on writing, students make clear the direction of writing articles in the future, where to work hard and what shortcomings to overcome, know the advantages and disadvantages of their own articles and evaluate their writing level; The second is the guiding role. Students can modify and supplement the article according to the problems pointed out in the evaluation opinions, so as to make the article more perfect and let students know the writing method of the article; Third, the role of education, the teacher's comment on writing analyzes and comments on the things described in the article and the ideas expressed, helping students gain a correct understanding and improve their ability to distinguish right from wrong.

Proper evaluation plays a subtle role in improving the writing level of primary school students. In short, composition evaluation should be done flexibly and moderately according to the specific circumstances of the article and the above three aspects, so that students can know at a glance where their composition is good, where there are still some problems, and how to correct them, so that students can make better use of their strengths and avoid weaknesses, practice with goals, and play a guiding and guiding role. Only in this way can their composition level be improved every time.