There is such a person who is neither tall nor short, neither fat nor thin, his face is neither black nor white, his eyes are neither too big nor too small, his nose is neither too high nor too low, his mouth is neither too wide nor too narrow, and his ears are neither round nor too long-guess who he or she is?

There is another person with short hair and black face, long mouth and big ears, round and chubby body, wearing a blue-collar rake with nine teeth-who do you think he or she is?

For the former, I'm afraid you can't get a satisfactory answer after thinking hard, both of them are, neither of them is; For the latter, I believe you will blurt out: pig eight quit!

These two people, why can't the former guess, and the latter will win when they guess? The key point is that the former simply introduces the appearance of the characters, but does not write the characteristics, let alone the character, while the latter does not.

Many students think that the easiest way to write the characteristics of characters is to start with the portrait description of characters. There are thousands of people, and few of them look alike. This idea is not clever, but also a shortcut to describe characters and show their characteristics. Everyone can think of the method, but it is not easy to really do it. The formula of "no-no-"cannot describe the character; Popular Facebook such as "Red Face" and "Black Eyes" can't write the characters' personalities. Because people are three-dimensional and vivid, not rigid models, he has thoughts, specific qualities and behavior habits different from others. "Form" and "spirit" should be harmonious and unified, and the spirit of the characters can be reflected in the image description, and the voice and smile of the characters can be made more specific in the interpretation of the spirit of the characters. In the mutual appearance of "form" and "spirit", the personality of the characters is also highlighted. Bajie's ugly appearance bears his innocence, which is engraved with greed and laziness, as well as affection and righteousness. I'm afraid that's why he is vivid.

From this point of view, to truly grasp the overall style of the characters, it is not enough to write only the appearance, but also to express the characters from many aspects and angles.

Take Pig Bajie as an example. Although Sun's bravery and wit stole the attention of many readers, it did not prevent us from loving pigs. Of course, he is not beautiful. Compared with the Monkey King's cleverness, he is more and more clumsy. He is good at martial arts, but he never dares to be brave under the power of the golden hoop (except for a fight in Gaolaozhuang); It seems that his mind is not very good. In the face of the honesty and faithfulness of the sand monk, his laziness and selfishness cannot be concealed. But it is such a man with many shortcomings that brings us a lot of fireworks, a personality trait that belongs to mortals. These characteristics of him can't be explained clearly in a few words, so the author used several examples to describe them for us. So, we saw such a pig, Bajie: In Gaolaozhuang, he became a strong man, and he ate as much as cattle. How many plowmen can one person reach? Can you say that he is not a hardworking and good farmer? He was ordered by the teacher to look for food. He ate a big watermelon happily and then had a good sleep lazily. How can such a pig escape the comments of "gluttony" and "laziness"? The Monkey King was driven back to his hometown, and Bajie could not bear it. Master is in trouble when the big brother is away. Doesn't he really want to fight the devil? Isn't such a pig affectionate and righteous? Of course, we can't forget that he is full of ugliness in front of the beautiful woman transformed by the Three Bodhisattvas. Isn't this another vivid lust? Through countless examples, in many ways, I wrote a secular man with most of the advantages and disadvantages of human beings.

There are examples, but if we are not good at capturing the details of life and using them rationally, then our articles may not be able to carry strong emotions, express ourselves well, let alone touch others. Take a magnifying glass and freeze the instantaneous performance of the characters in a specific situation, and the characters will be vivid and three-dimensional. Let's talk about the familiar pig eight quit. When naughty the Monkey King revealed the privacy of his private vault, he mumbled meaningless complaints and reluctantly took some money out of his big ear. We couldn't ignore such a detail and couldn't help laughing.

All right, it's time to wrap it up. It is not difficult to write a good character, the key is to write the character; It is not difficult to write the personality of the characters. To sum up, it can be summarized as "three tricks": 1. Form and spirit simultaneously; 2。 Multi-pronged approach; 3。 Slightly emotional.

Now, let's look at a model essay, which will certainly inspire you.

Big watery eyes, high nose, glib mouth, dark skin and always a thick ponytail. Does everyone know who she is? Yes, she is-elegant.

Elegance and I are both representatives of mathematics, but Elegance takes her homework seriously. Once, Chen Ziying didn't finish her homework in class, but it was already time for school. He Laoshi asked Fenghua and I to continue to collect homework in the classroom, and we were going to have a training in the evening. I said to Fenghua, "Fenghua, I'm leaving first, so you can collect it." "ok." Later, I learned that I gracefully collected books until 6 o'clock that day and took the initiative to teach others to do problems. My face suddenly turned red.

Another time, we collected our exercise books together until school was over. I counted, there are 55 books, and one is short. Who is it? We both asked the leaders of the columns, and they all said they had handed it in. Tired of it, elegant and comforting. "Xin-yu huang, let's look for it. We will find it. Don't lose heart. " I said impatiently, "What are you looking for? You can't find it. What if the child was handed over to the teacher alone and didn't tell us: or even if the person didn't hand it in, when we asked him one by one, he said he did? We can't find it. Let He Laoshi handle it. He Laoshi will definitely find it. " He said gracefully and angrily, "How did this happen? It's not like you haven't seen it He Laoshi wants to change four books today. He Laoshi is so hard. If you still care about these small things, what do you want our two branch representatives to do? " "Ok, I'll look for it with you, ok." I said I'd help you find it, but in fact, I just flipped through it and sat there reading comics. I glanced at Elegance and looked at her looking for it with her head down one by one. I don't think there's any progress I smiled and thought, "I said I couldn't find it." You still don't believe it. Believe it now! " Suddenly, elegant eyes lit up, and I went to Tian Lei's side and said to him, "Hand over the book, I have seen it all." When Tian Lei was nervous, he shivered and said, "I ... what did I hide?" Elegance suddenly came to a "looking for the moon in the sea" with lightning speed. She took out a book from Tian Lei's schoolbag and opened it. Sure enough, she didn't finish eating. She told me to finish it quickly, and then she gave it to He Laoshi. When Elegance finished all this, I found that I was sweating all over and my face turned red for a while.

Elegance and seriousness are beyond my reach, and I especially admire her.

This is my classmate-Elegance, my good friend!