To tell the truth, your Chinese materials are too few to help you make up. Your hobbies are really poor. If you have the chance, try something else. It is ok to cheat the examiner. You add the question and I'll take a look at it for you. Besides, you should think of a better ending, not like ordinary China students. )
I'll give you a hint: (don't write, just refer to it)
1. My advantages
2. My shortcomings
3. The person I admire most
4. People or things that I will never forget