1No. Huma
Wang Hu, Mother of Animals. For me, my mother is the king of beasts, a majestic, fierce and tenacious "tigress". Once, I was about to leave home for school when I suddenly heard my mother shouting, "Come back, your boy!" " "Scared me, I went back to the house only to find that I was carrying a bag and went out. I saw my mother coming out of the box with a broom in her hand, with a loud voice. It was really dazzling, cold and chilly. A king was looming in her brow, and the roaring sky came at me, scaring me out of my wits! As soon as my dad saw it, he picked up my schoolbag and dragged me away. Until I went to school, I still had a lingering fear and couldn't help but gasp. What a close call!
No.2 ant Baba
Dad is like a "worker ant" who transports resources home every day to ensure our life, but this "big ant" always quietly transports my snacks to his room to enjoy alone in the dead of night. One day, dad came back late and we all fell asleep. He sneaked into my room. After seeing me fall asleep, he came to my snack counter and carefully selected it. Just as he was about to walk out of my room with snacks, I was awakened and asked, "I said my snacks were always scarce, so I let you eat them, hmm!" "All right, all right, I'll buy it for you when I come back," my father said guiltily, but I was still determined. At this time, my father took out a parental attitude and said seriously, "Go to bed so late!" " Then take my snacks and walk away.
No.3 cock grandma
In my family, I never worry about being late for school, because I have a rooster grandma who is as punctual as an alarm clock. My grandmother gets up early every day and comes to the door of each of our rooms to wake us up. Her loud voice, like a rooster crowing, clearly shouted, "It's six o'clock, it's time to go to work and go to school." As long as you don't get up, this voice will ring around you endlessly, leaving you nowhere to hide. The most interesting thing is that the rooster stood on her hips in the room and the tiger came out with its tail between its legs. Big ants climb faster than anyone else, and I dare not say anything. I hurried out to wash my face and brush my teeth and get ready for school.
My family are all very interesting! Go and observe your family, maybe you will feel the same way! It is getting late. I should go to bed, too. That's right! By the way, let's see if my "big ant" stole my snacks. Goodbye!
Teacher's comment: The small author of the whole composition is in the form of a subtitle, with a clear and novel structure. He can use what he has learned flexibly and give praise first. The description of the characters is very detailed and concrete, showing the "animals" with their own characteristics and vivid images. The language is fluent, the words are rich and accurate, and the animals are combined at the end. The teacher is curious: Did your "big ant" steal your snacks?