2. Only by frequent contact with the society and close contact with the masses can we continuously enhance our national defense awareness and always keep national security and people's worries and joys in mind. (unclear hierarchy)
3. In order to prevent the SARS epidemic from rebounding, city leaders require all units to further strengthen management and formulate strict preventive measures. (unclear hierarchy)
The motherland not only reminds us how to create miracles in the ordinary, but also shows us how to sow hope in disappointment. (The sentence order is incorrect)
1. Original sentence: Our great motherland is no longer a divided country that is arbitrarily insulted, ravaged and plundered by imperialist powers. (Error: In addition to the improper modifier "country", "never again" should also be changed to "never again")
Revision: Our great motherland is no longer a divided country that can be insulted, ravaged and plundered by imperialist powers.
2. Only by frequent contact with society and close contact with the masses can we continuously enhance our awareness of national defense and always take national security and people's worries and joys into account. (error: mixed. Mix conditional clauses with two different causal relationships. It is also true that it is "unclear".
Revision: Only by frequent contact with the society and close contact with the masses will the people's worries and joys be taken into account; Only by constantly paying attention to national security can we continuously enhance our national defense awareness.
In order to prevent the SARS epidemic from rebounding, the city leaders asked all units to further strengthen management and formulate strict preventive measures. (Error: not "unclear hierarchy", but two negatives, and the result turned into affirmation, that is, the first half of the sentence became "in order to make the SARS epidemic rebound")
Revision: In order to prevent the SARS epidemic from rebounding, city leaders require all units to further strengthen management and formulate strict preventive measures.
The motherland not only reminds us how to create miracles in the ordinary, but also shows us how to sow hope in disappointment. (Error: 1, "Motherland" is not a specific person, so it cannot be "reminded" or "pointed"; 2. The original sentence is a compound sentence with progressive relationship, but it is actually "retrogression" rather than "progression". Because you have to have hope and confidence to further create miracles)
Revision: The growing strength of the motherland not only makes us see hope in disappointment, but also inspires us to create miracles in ordinary work.
Personification:
1, the wind sang a song and awakened the sleeping earth.
Naughty raindrops like dancing on umbrellas.
The waves splashing from the bow are singing a happy song.
It's autumn, and the golden red fruit on the tree is smiling. She nodded and smiled at us.
5. Begonia fruit shakes its round face and nods at you.
Smile.
6. That Bo Xue seems to be suddenly ashamed and slightly pink.
7. Pomegranates are hidden in the branches like cute smiling faces of little girls.
8. There are also one or two lights leaking from the cracks in the tree. What is listless is the sleepy eyes.
9. The huge waves opened their arms and pulled me up suddenly.
10, the radio keeps talking every day, which makes the neighbors very annoyed! ! ! ! ! !
1 1. Oil flies sing here and crickets play the piano here.
12, the spring is still shallow, but the plum blossoms on several hills are struggling to spit out red buds.
13, breezy, gently caressing my face.
14. The lotus flowers in the lotus pond are all blooming shyly.
15, fallen leaves dance with the wind.
16, I bathed in the embrace of nature, let the gentle evening breeze caress my temple and blow away all my depression and troubles.
17, in the spring of March, the silver pear tree, which had been sleeping for a winter, was awakened by the misty rain.
18, it took off its shabby coat and started a new life; It greedily sucks the fresh and sweet dew of spring and slowly grows lovely tender branches and green leaves.
19, midsummer night, the breeze is blowing slowly and the bright moon is catching up.
When the sun sets, I climb over the hill early and hang on the horizon. The moonlight seems cool, driving away the residual heat left by a cool day.
20. Spiders drag flies around. When the flies are exhausted, spiders enjoy a delicious meal happily.
2 1, when the sad water flows into the steady mountain, the sadness of the poor children also evokes the sadness of the mountain, so their hearts are broken together; Water buries its head in the ground, but the mountain hides the fragments of its heart. So there is.
There are all kinds of stalagmites in the chaotic and complicated caves, and there is a sudden spring at the mouth of the cave.
22. Home is like a root, and it is always the home of leaves; Home is like a piece of red cloth, always tied to the heart of a wanderer. Home is like a coat, it won't make the temperature rise, but it will give people a kind of warmth that even the stove can't replace.
23. Life is like a long journey. There are smooth roads and detours in the journey. You can face the team with a calm mind every day, challenge yourself, keep moving forward, and continue to go to your destination. At the terminal, you will find that there are joys and sorrows, laughter and tears, and even a little more, which constitute the whole journey of your life.
24. Dreams are flying in the air like snowflakes. If you want to catch them, they have melted.
25. The sea is so changeable, calm but fierce, gentle but fierce, like a smooth mirror, like a wild beast, like a mother's comfort, like a father's whip.
26. Under the setting sun, these clouds suddenly turned into silver gray, orange, red, blood red and crimson, just like a beautiful fairy waving colorful brocade in the air.
27. The river is crystal clear, like transparent blue silk, lying quietly in the embrace of the earth.
28. On the hillside, roadside, village entrance, hazel leaves are all red, as red as a fire, which sets people's hearts on fire.
29. Autumn is coming to us at a steady pace. Go away quietly.
30. Autumn shattered the rumors of summer with grace.
3 1. Autumn is beautiful, dancing her skirt gracefully.
32. The flowers bent over with laughter in the wind.
33. The little star in the night sky blinks and seems to be smiling at you.
34. Sunflowers are constantly doing sports for Grandpa Sun.
35. Spring is like a doll that just landed. It's new from head to toe and still growing.
36. Spring is like a shy little girl, hiding and hiding. Spring is like a newborn baby, petite and lovely;
37. Spring is like a lively child, longing for it;
38. Spring is like a robust youth, full of vitality;
39. Spring is unforgettable like a healthy old man.
40. Cicada is singing in the leaves.
4 1. The wind is naughty. After a while, it flew all over the sky with that leisurely cloud, and it kept changing her mask. After a while, it rolled up the fallen leaves on the ground and made them dance in the rotation.
42. Water is wild. Suoxi is like a wild child jumping out of a deep mountain, running around the mountain for a while, pouting his ass for a while, gambling and making trouble alone.
43. The little tree waved its branches and nodded and smiled at us.
44. Rows of willows are reflected in the water, enjoying their appearance.
When the moon appeared, the stars filled the sky.
46. Truth will not yield.
47. Every night, the candle will cry the wick away.
48. On a quiet night, only the stars in the sky are whispering.
49. Du Fuchuan is singing and laughing in the willows, and the red flag is flying.
50. The butterfly embroidered the curtain for the first time and danced with sleeves.
Metaphor:
1. This tree rises from the ground like a green cloud.
Under the setting sun, these clouds suddenly turned into silver gray, orange, red, blood red and crimson, just like a beautiful fairy waving colorful brocade in the air.
The river is crystal clear, like transparent blue silk, lying quietly in the embrace of the earth.
The hillside, roadside, village entrance and hazel leaves are all red, as red as fire, and people's hearts are burning.
Standing by the west lake where willows gently blow, I can see that the north, south and west sides of the lake are layered and undulating mountains, one green, one thick and one light, which really looks like a beautiful landscape painting.
6. A calm lake is like a huge silver mirror.
7. Bai Causeway in the east and Su Causeway in the southwest of Gushan are like two green ribbons, floating gently on the clear water.
8. The clear lake shakes the reflection of green island and white clouds, just like a fairyland.
9. The lights on the shore are reflected in the lake, just like countless silver snakes swimming.
10. The sky there is always so blue and bright, like a sapphire washed by clear water.
1 1. The shining lights of the harbor fell on the earth like colorful fireworks.
12. A string of bright lights on the road is like a long river of flashing lights.
13. Golden sunflowers, green poplars, purple morning glory, and countless flowers and tender grass all look more energetic like beautiful girls wearing beautiful jewels.
14. The flowers are getting denser and denser, and soon they are covered with branches. Take a closer look, it seems to be a lively trumpet, which is blowing with all its strength.
15. Stone is a book. You see, this stone layer by layer, isn't it like a thick book?
16. Small dewdrops shining like diamonds.
Small dewdrops as transparent as crystal.
Small dewdrops as round as pearls.
17. The West Lake is a pearl embedded in this paradise.
18. In Tibetan, Lhasa means holy land, so this blue sky is the curtain of holy land.
19. At night, the whole of Hong Kong becomes an ocean of lights.
20. Hong Kong is really a bright "Pearl of the East".
2 1. Books are lighthouses standing in the sea of time in Wang Yang.
22. Books are the ladder of human progress.
23. Take care of books, they are the source of knowledge.
24. A good book is a good society, which can cultivate people's sentiment and temperament and make them noble.
Reading a good book is equivalent to talking to many noble people.
26. Choose books as carefully as making friends. Because your habits are as influenced by books as your friends.
27. Books are the key to wisdom.
28. The politician said, "Books are the life of the times."
29. Economists say, "Books are the information to get rich."
30. The writer said, "Books are the nourishment of human beings."
3 1. Students say, "Books are teachers who don't talk."
32. The lost man said, "The book is the morning star in my heart."
33. The explorer said, "Books are ships that lead to the other shore."
34. The struggler said, "Books are the guide of life."
People who are eager to learn say, "Books are a good meal when they are hungry."
36. Books are medicine, and good books can cure fools.
37. Books-This is the spiritual legacy left by one generation to another. This is the choice of dying old people for young people who are just beginning to live. This is the order of the guard who will rest to the guard who will take over his post.
38. Bow your head a thousand fingers and bow your head as a willing ox.
It's really cold these days, and the cold wind blows on my face like a knife.
40. Qiu stood motionless in the fire like a huge stone.
4 1. That man is as thin as a bone.
42. This man is as strong as an ox.
43. You drool when you sleep in the library, just like stalactites in your later years.
44. Qian Zhongshu said in Fortress Besieged that snoring is like a kite with a long line.
45. The West Lake is like a jasper and a mirror.
46. Cotton is like a snow shelf.
47. It's not good to look at only one person's work: you won't get many benefits. You must pick many flowers like a bee, so that you can brew honey. If you bite in one place, your income will be limited and boring.
48. The clouds in the sky are like mountains, rivers, lions and galloping horses. .....
49. As night falls, the surrounding mountains are like tall mountain gods, mysterious castles, depressed giants and endless carpets.
50. The neon lights up in the distance, like a bright rainbow, like a fairy's dancing nepotism, like a colorful bridge, like a dazzling cloud.
5 1. My heart ached and my eyes were confused by tears.
52. The sun glows and gives off heat. This is a big fireball.
53. The crowd rolled around and the dam became an open-air stage.
54. Zhuge Liang ordered the bow to face west and the stern to face east. (figuratively)
55. The devil officer sitting on the edge of the kang is red-eyed, like a wild dog who just ate a dead man. "
He broke a piece of glass and ran away like a monster.
When spring comes, the earth becomes a green carpet.
58. A silver-gray hovercraft, like a thoroughbred horse, sped by on the sparkling sea.
59. Her article is very good. Structure is as close as the relationship between neural nodes and neural networks in human body.
60. Little brother's face is chubby and red. It really looks like a lovely big apple. I really want a bite.
6 1. From a distance, the pine trees on Mount Tai are connected into a thick line, which looks like a knife-shaped eyebrow across a person's cheekbones.
62. When meals are served in the canteen, the whole school is huddled like ants on hot bricks.
The enemy plane fled, and our plane followed closely, like a jackal chasing a white rabbit, tandem.
64. Like goose feathers, like reed flowers, like cotton wool, heavy snow is falling.
65. The flaming maple leaves fall like sparks.
66. The athletes run to the finish line like arrows.
67. The Polaris oak lamp hangs in the sky like a street lamp.
68. Dream is like a small fish, swimming around in the water, trying to catch him, but he has run away.
Dream is like a snowflake, flying in the air, trying to catch it, it has melted.
70. Like a kite, it can't fly far, and pain is like a swing, which swings out and comes back.
Exaggerated sentences
1. If Tuan Tuan falls, several weightlifters can't help him, so they have to hang him by crane.
When the ball falls, it will roll from one end of the room to the other like a ball.
Round beds and chairs are made of three-inch thick steel plates. ...
Children fly in cotton candy balloons.
5. Speak like a cloud.
6. exquisite
7. I called my mother yesterday and asked her how she was at home recently. Mom said there was nothing at home. Mom said a family came to ask for fertilizer money. My mother commented on their fertilizer like this: two years ago, you plowed the land a few days before fertilization, and then I picked one up and put it in a gun, killing a group of rabbits.
8. The sand sea has deepened unfathomable ice, gloomy clouds and bleak Wan Li condensate.
9. When the blade saw that he couldn't lift it, he roared, like a thunderbolt for half a day, shaking the hills.
10. Flying down to thousands of feet, it is suspected that the Milky Way has set for nine days.
1 1. Third, Wan Li Jiangdong flows into the sea, and five thousand mountains climb skyscrapers.
12. I opened the cuff, pointed the pot at the faucet and filled it with water. Then I opened Tathagata's palm and gave it a trick to "reverse the dry Kun", then "the sky was dark" and finally "stir the heart". After some tossing, I was so tired that I was "panting like an ox".
13. Wuling Mountain makes waves, and Wumeng takes mud pills.
15. It was so quiet in the classroom that you could hear a pin drop to the ground.
16. She has no appetite at all, and people have no food when they are full.
17. Reaching for the bow, the arrow has roared and hit the target.
18. My heart is like a knife.