Please write a letter to relatives and friends who can't meet in the distance, introduce your study and life, express your thoughts to relatives and friends, and speak your mind.
Write what?
1. You can write a letter to your relatives who are not at home. For example, write a letter to your father on a business trip and tell him about your study.
You can write letters to friends far away. For example, tell him about his recent study and life, such as "Sister Ni Jing, as soon as the summer vacation at school ended a few days ago, I went back to my hometown-Xilin Gol Prairie from the county seat."
You can write a letter to your future self. If you use your imagination, write to your future self, talk about your current study life, your current direction of efforts, what difficulties you have, and talk about your ideals.
You can write to a real person. If you can write a letter to the uncles and aunts who designed and manufactured "Chang 'e 1", express your respect for them. And determined to be like them when they grow up.
You can write a letter to an imaginary object. For example, a letter to Sister Moon. Greet Sister Yue and point out the reason for writing: I hope to be a guest at Sister Yue's house.
Write brilliantly
Point 1 Talk about your thoughts about things by letter, express the truth and use plain language.
For example, "A Letter to Parents": Dear Mom and Dad, hello. I want to talk to you about your opposition to my idolization. ...
Point 2: communicate with life by letters, with sincere feelings and fluent language.
Such as: "A Letter to a Distant Friend": ×××, dear friend: How are you? You know, I miss you very much. I am writing to you because I have a very happy thing to tell you. ...
Point 3: Regular writing: Describe an aspect and let friends know something about themselves.
For example, in "A Letter to a Friend", the author writes his thoughts about his friends first, and then introduces his recent study life. Recall the happy past together; Finally, express your wishes and hope to get together.
Point 4: Innovative writing: Choose novel writing content to give people a refreshing feeling.
For example, the article "A Letter to a Distant Friend" begins with the story of Japanese farmers deliberately leaving some fruits on trees for birds, expressing the hope that everyone will give a little love, and finally encouraging friends to give their love sincerely, with a unique perspective and extraordinary ideas.
Point 5 Language should be appropriate, and different expressions should be considered for different objects.
It is winter now, and our hometown has become a silver world. What is the climate like in Canada? Is it cold, too According to my mother, you will return to China next month, so please come to my house, ok?
I miss you so much! Sir, I don't know if you can receive my letter, but I just want to read my thoughts out loud to you. ...
Mom, can you understand me after listening to my daughter? Can you be my bosom friend? Looking forward to your reply.
a letter
Cousin:
Hello!
I haven't heard from you for a long time How have you been recently? The schools in Hong Kong must be very good! I really want to have the opportunity to study in Hong Kong like my cousin in the future. (★ Beginning method: At the beginning of the letter, you can ask questions to greet your relatives. )
At the beginning of the new semester, our school held a reading festival called "Love me Fuzhou, Learn to Be a Talent". During the activity, the school held several competitions, including writing, tabloids and reading note cards ... Cousin, haven't you always encouraged me to work hard, work hard and try again? Therefore, I will not give up any chance to participate in the competition. The title of the essay is "Give advice to Fuzhou to make my hometown better". When I got home, I went to consult a similar composition, pondered it carefully, and revised it several times after writing it. I took the trouble to consult my teacher humbly. It took several nights, and an interesting and illustrated reading tabloid finally came out. What a busy day! (★ Introduction: In the letter from home, the key point is to introduce yourself. Here, the author introduces my cousin's recent performance at school. )
Finally, it was time to announce the results, and my unremitting efforts paid off. Won a total victory, won three awards and won the title of "Little Writer". (Use the idiom: "Perseverance" means perseverance. The idiom is used appropriately and accurately, which vividly shows the efforts of young authors. )
Ok, dear cousin, let's call it a day. There are many interesting things in our school. I'll tell you next time I write. I look forward to your reply. (★ Lyrics at the end of the article: At the end of this letter, the little author expressed "my" expectation for my cousin's reply. )
I wish you academic progress and good health!
Cousin: Lin
March 9
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The little author chose to write a letter to his cousin, which explained his own situation and sincerely greeted his cousin's situation.
◎ Intention: The little author first expressed his greetings and admiration to his cousin in the letter, and then introduced the recent new things in the school to his cousin. The narrative is complete and detailed.
◎ Language: The language is simple, the tone is friendly and lively, and the use of words such as "emphasis" and "perseverance" adds to the image of the language.
A letter to my parents.
Dear Mom and Dad:
Hello!
Mom and Dad, thank you for raising me. I will never forget your kindness! (★ Beginning method: the beginning directly points to the topic and directly explains the feelings contained in the letter. ) Mom and Dad, I have a heartfelt word to say to you, but I dare not say it, so I wrote it on this paper.
Every Sunday, the students are very happy. They go to the movies with their parents, go to the park with their brothers and sisters and so on. In a word, their Sunday is relaxed and happy, but my study task is too heavy.
In the morning, before I got up, my mother woke me up from the warm bed and asked me to read English. It is also said that reading English in the morning is the best time. I opened my eyes and looked at my watch. It's only half past seven. I don't want to get up so early to read English, but my mother can't help listening. I have to open my eyes and read English. (★ Psychological description: I wrote that I don't want to get up early. After dinner, I plunged into intense study again. My parents bought me some exercises, such as "Three exercises in one lesson" and so on.
By four o'clock in the afternoon, my homework was finished. After watching TV for ten minutes, I said to my mother, "Let me watch it for another ten minutes!" " "Mom said," No, I think you must be worthless when you grow up. "Then I had to reluctantly go back to the study to read.
Mom and Dad, I understand your desire for success, but I can't study all day! I should also have my happiness and freedom! I am still a child. I am eager to go to nature. I am eager to play with my friends. Mom and Dad, I am in the third grade. I am rational. I will put my study first. But I can't study all day! Mom and Dad, let this bird fly quickly and let it fly freely! (★ Affectionate appeal: I expressed my surging feelings with a series of exclamations. )
Good luck with your work!
Your daughter: ×××××
5 February
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: This letter expresses my true feelings. The author borrowed a letter to tell his parents what he was talking about: students go out to play on Sunday, but I want to stay at home and study. I hope my parents will trust me and give me free space. I will put my study first.
◎ Intention: the structure is clear and complete, and the narrative is organized. The little author wrote in chronological order on Sunday. He reads English at 7: 30 in the morning, does exercises after supper and finishes his homework at 4: 00 in the afternoon. He also asked "I" to go back to the study and read a book, presenting the whole day's experience to my parents, hoping that they would understand.
◎ Language: The language of the article is sincere, telling the truth of the little author, just like talking to mom and dad, natural and vivid.
Letter to the teacher
Teacher Yu:
Hello!
It is often said that students are peaches and plums planted by teachers, and they are bathed in the sunshine and rain of teachers when they sprout and grow. (★ Rhetoric: a rhetorical device of metaphor, which vividly tells the relationship between teachers and students. I am now a junior three student, and I have learned a lot during my two years with you.
When I was eight years old, when I was in grade one, you led me into the classroom with a smile and into the door of knowledge. I think you look like a magician. You let us know words and magically turn strange "faces" into small words that can be read. (★ Rhetoric: Compare the teacher to a magician and write the process of literacy vividly and interestingly. )
When spring breeze and spring rain revive everything on the earth, it is you who take us out of school to find spring. We smell the fragrance of wild flowers, listen to the music played by mountain springs and the sweet songs of birds, and feel the warmth of spring breeze and sunshine. We are like green seedlings that have just been drilled from the ground. Rhetoric: figurative rhetoric, comparing "we" to a grain of rice, with beautiful language and vivid image. In this way, you inspired us to write. Back to school, you asked us to leave a line of immature handwriting on the composition and write a beautiful composition.
Teacher, I will always remember your kindness to me. I wish you the best of health!
Salute!
Your student: Liu Fei.
X month x day
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The article is a letter to the teacher. The little author was moved by the teacher's care, love, enlightenment and teaching, and wrote this touching letter.
◎ Intention: From a child's perspective, write the greatness and respectability of Mr. Yu in childish language, and express gratitude to Mr. Yu between the lines. Clear organization. At first, it was a general greeting, then I recalled how the teacher introduced myself to the door of knowledge, and finally I sincerely thanked the teacher, which was very organized.
◎ Language: Use figurative rhetoric to compare students to peaches and plums and teachers to sunshine and rain. It vividly shows the close relationship between students and teachers. This metaphor is natural and attractive.
A letter to a foreign friend Mike
Mike:
Hello!
Last summer vacation, we met in Beijing Summer Camp and became friends. This summer vacation, I'd like to invite you to visit my hometown Zhenjiang, Jiangsu. (★ Opening method: The opening part indicates the purpose of writing a letter and is straightforward. )
My hometown is located at the intersection of the Yangtze River and the Beijing-Hangzhou Grand Canal. There are many places of interest and picturesque scenery here, including Jinshan, Jiao Shan, Beigushan and Nanshan, and Zhong Lingquan, known as the "No.1 Spring in the World". Among them, Jinshan is a famous Buddhist shrine.
Jinshan is located in the northwest of Zhenjiang, about three kilometers away from the city center. This is the origin of the legend that "the water overflows the golden hill" in China's famous fairy tale "The Legend of the White Snake". Emperor Kangxi and Emperor Qianlong visited here more than once during their southern tour, leaving many "imperial" cultural relics. (★ Full of interest: introduce the history and fairy tales of Jinshan to add interest to the article. ) At the foot of Jinshan Temple, there is a thousand-year-old temple-Jiangtian Temple, and there is a tall pagoda named "Cishou Tower" at the top of the mountain. There are many tourists here all year round.
When it comes to food, it is the "three eccentrics" in Zhenjiang. There is a children's song that says: meat is not a dish, vinegar is not bad, and the lid of the noodle pot is cooked. How's it going? Is it drooling now?
(★ Quoting children's songs: By quoting children's songs to illustrate the "three eccentrics" in my hometown, it reflects the little author's well-informed. )
After listening to my introduction, will you be tempted? Come on, please come to my hometown. My hometown and I welcome you with open arms. (★ Ending way: Invite friends to show my hospitality. )
Wish you a happy life!
Your good friend: Li.
65438+29 00 10 month
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: accurate material selection. Zhenjiang has many scenic spots. The author chose the Buddhist holy land Jinshan for a detailed introduction, which caught the interest of foreigners and was more convincing.
◎ Intention: complete structure and clear organization. At first, the author sent an invitation to his friend, inviting him to his hometown. Next, I briefly introduced the geographical location, beautiful scenery and special snacks of my hometown. Finally, warmly invite again. Who is not moved by such enthusiasm?
◎ Language: The author's language is simple and true, and he proudly introduces his hometown of Zhenjiang, Jiangsu to foreign friends. His words are full of pride in his hometown.
Brother, please forgive me. ...
Little brother next door:
Hello!
Do you remember my little sister? (★ Beginning method: use rhetorical questions to lead to the following. )
You should remember, because I hit you mercilessly. It's really ridiculous to think about it. Why can't big brother beat little sister? In retrospect, I'm really sorry.
"Ha ha, hurry up ..." Listen, it was three years ago, and we walked across the lawn without any worries and smiles.
"Little rascal, do you want to eat popsicles? The new popsicle is fruity and delicious! "
"Yes, yes, it's agreed that I'll treat you and pay the bill." (★ Language description: Several dialogues evoke memories of the past. )
We just go hand in hand to buy popsicles. I bought it, whether I eat it or not. I sat on the side of the road and grabbed it with my dirty little hands. Two people are eating and grabbing things, but you are so careless, so careless. A drop of popsicle juice stained my beautiful pleated skirt! At that time, I ignored everything, pushed you down in a rage, and my fist flew with me. Then, I ran away in pain.
Later, when I went to school every day, you always gave me a back. Alas ..... I really don't like it in my heart!
But I, you know, just save face. I was too proud to apologize now, because I moved away.
God, if you give me another chance, I will bend down and sincerely apologize to you. (★ Psychological activity: I sincerely apologize to my little brother. )
Now, although the intimacy of the past has disappeared, my sincerity has not changed; Even if the time is longer and the distance is longer, I will say to you, "I'm sorry!" " "
Brother, will you forgive me? Anyway, I think we will be friends forever.
Salute!
Your good friend: Wu Mian.
165438+1October 27
Full mark reference point
Material selection: The content of this letter is true, and I wrote my true feelings. I was full of guilt about fighting with the little brother next door three years ago, so I said "I'm sorry" at the beginning of the letter, then recalled what happened three years ago, apologized for the last time, and expressed my wish to be friends with the little brother next door forever.
◎ Intention: The article describes a wrong thing I did through letters. Narrating events at the beginning and end of a typical letter is a very novel and unique way of writing.
◎ Language: The letter describes the reminiscence times with dialogues and actions, and accurately and vividly records the scene three years ago.
A letter to the summer vacation
Lovely summer vacation:
Hello!
These two months with you every year are the most relaxing time for me. If you want to talk about your benefits, you can't finish it for three days and three nights. Of course, the best thing is that it doesn't matter when the summer homework is finished. Nobody cares about playing computer when doing homework. That's a real treat! However, this is your fault. You are so kind to me that I have formed these bad habits. (★ Beginning method: a light and humorous beginning, which arouses readers' interest. )
But in two months, I will be separated from you, and I will bid farewell to that happy and chic day, which is August 3 1. Why is the summer vacation so short? Why doesn't God let me stay with you for a while? For both of us, this day is too painful! (★ Psychological activity: The little author used two questions and an exclamatory sentence to express his inseparable relationship with the summer vacation. ) Goodbye this time, and we will meet again next year! But I will go to middle school next year, and I don't know what fate awaits me. However, there are thousands of children in Qian Qian with you. You should live in harmony! Don't forget to remind children not to do homework while surfing the Internet, and not to watch too much TV, which is bad for their eyes. ...
Oh, don't always cry! Your tears make me unable to concentrate on my homework! Don't do this again from tomorrow, and spend these two months happily with me! This is also to prepare for the intense study after the start of school. After all, it's time to rest after a hard semester! (★ Ending method: At the end, treating the summer vacation as a child still reflects the whimsy of the little author. )
Salute!
Your friend: Kim.
20 12 July 1
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: the topic is novel and the material selection is unique. The first impression this letter gives is: fresh! How can you write to "Summer Holiday"? What did you write? Readers are eager to know the answers to these questions.
◎ Intention: The full text is a conversational tone. The little author wrote his own mind for the "summer vacation", not only missing the relaxed happiness of the summer vacation, but also lamenting the inseparable ending of the summer vacation. Finally, he expressed his comfort for the summer vacation, which was really interesting.
◎ Language: anthropomorphic writing technique. Taking "summer vacation" as a friend of mine, addressing "you" with the second person, writing about the happiness brought by "summer vacation" and criticizing "summer vacation" are so good for me that I have developed many bad habits.
Letter to Grandpa in Taiwan Province Province.
Dear Grandpa: Hello! The letter you asked your uncle to forward to us from Thailand arrived today. Because the letter said that you miss your hometown Tianshui and your alma mater Dongguan Senior High School very much, so my father said that this reply must let me write about the recent situation of your alma mater. (★ Beginning method: Explain that this is a reply, focusing on Dongguan High School mentioned by Grandpa in the letter. )
Grandpa, your alma mater is now "Tianshui Jianshe Road No.1 Primary School". If you come back now, you won't know your alma mater. The old school gate was torn down long ago, and the new school gate stood on nine steps. As soon as I entered the school gate, it was a small flower bed. Near the flower bed is a screen wall about four feet higher than the flower bed, which is engraved with an inscription from Grandpa Deng Xiaoping for our children. Turn the screen, roar! The whole picture of the school will be presented to you. The most striking thing is, of course, the brand-new three-story teaching building that has sprung up in the north of the big playground. Novel modeling, bright windows and soft colors, we are sitting in this classroom to study, not to mention how happy we are! (★ Description of scenery: Grasp the most striking teaching building for detailed description, with vivid language. )
Grandpa, please look in front of the building again. Next to it is the rostrum. There is a flagpole on the rostrum, and a five-star red flag is flying on the flagpole. In front of the podium are two evergreen cypress trees, and on both sides are two big flower beds with flowers in full bloom. On both sides of the wide playground, there are luxuriant, tall and straight paulownia trees and acacia trees with pink spherical flowers. There is a basketball court at the south end of the playground and a comprehensive sports equipment rack at the northeast corner.
Grandpa, that old classroom is being demolished in order to expand the playground again. The old auditorium-Wenchang Dijun Hall, as one of the national key protected cultural relics, was moved to yuquan temple five years ago.
According to my father, there were only a few dozen students in the school when Grandpa was studying. When dad was studying, there were only one hundred students in the school. Now there are 1200 students in our school!
Grandpa, I have often dreamed that your old man came back with a smile recently. When you really come back, I will accompany you to see our lovely alma mater first! (★ Ending way: Express your feelings and sincerely hope that Grandpa will return to his hometown as soon as possible. )
I wish you good health and a long life!
Your grandson: Yang Dong.
May 18
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: the content is complete. This is a reply, and the reply is mainly based on the other party's letter. The author described in detail the Dongguan Primary School mentioned in Grandpa's letter.
◎ Idea: Describe in a certain order. When the author introduced Dongguan Primary School, he wrote it according to the order of the scenery he saw after entering the school gate. First, he wrote about small flower beds and screen walls, then he wrote about the teaching building, the podium in front of the building, the trees in front of the podium and the wide playground ... At the same time, compared with the old school, he showed his grandfather the new look of the school.
◎ Language: The author has a strong language ability. In a short letter, he introduced his grandfather's alma mater now. The language is beautiful and elegant, and the use of rich adjectives makes the school beautiful.