Talk and encourage
Criticism and guidance course
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Talk and encourage
You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.
The language of the article is very fluent, and it also writes the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?
You did a good job. Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!
Your article is like a slowly flowing stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
It is wise for a teenager who has not been deeply involved in the world to enter a complex society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is very casual, as if leading readers to stroll on the Yuan Ye of the mind. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. You know, incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!
The writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. It is written that "I" walked by the sea, and the sea not only gave me the enjoyment of beauty, but also caused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea gave me a swimming space, and "I" injected life into the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality strength. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking.
School life seems dull except after class, but this paper is good at finding the extraordinary from the ordinary, and it is written with relish: in the tense morning, the noon of the battle, and the tired night, every paragraph selects scenes with great life interest. The fresh and lively language vividly shows the students' positive mental outlook.
This article is both ideological and artistic, and it makes people think deeply after reading it. Ingenious conception, using comparative techniques to deepen the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
This article gives a comprehensive introduction to my father: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!
The quotations of several common sayings in the full text are just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
Your article is very creative-complete the idea in the form of mathematical proof. The full text is very literary!
As a casual feeling, your article is agile and full of intention. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
You are a very independent and knowledgeable student, and I agree with you very much, but if the writing arrangement is more compact, it will be even more icing on the cake.
This article has chosen a brand-new angle, and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
Beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, which teachers should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
Writing is like a person, and your article is as simple and open-minded as your person. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
Words can speak, and I think the article is a portrayal of your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
Literature can make people happy. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
It is really "writing like a god." It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
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content
The content before and after 1. is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.
2. The narrative is simple and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
3. Inappropriate details and unclear priorities.
4. The content is mostly outlined by lines, and there is no detailed description based on points.
5. Can't keep up with the times, and the content is too old.
theme
1. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.
2. The theme is vague, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is unknown.
3. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, but it seems empty and powerless.
The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.
plot
1. The plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs.
2. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack of new ideas.
3. The plot is straight, there is no suspense, and it seems to be a running account.
The process is very detailed, but the ending is short. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.
5. The idea is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which can't reflect the truth of life.
6. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.
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1. The selection of materials is too popular and unrepresentative, and the old themes and ideas are unremarkable.
2. Although the events with certain narrative value are selected, the hidden truth of the events has not been deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and excavation.
3. The material selection is dull, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and there is no new idea, so it is difficult to deeply reflect the times and authenticity of life.
4. Failure to reflect the truth through trivial matters, and lack of proficiency in the expression of "seeing the big from the small".
5. Lack of multi-angle description of the characters, only a narrow theme is selected, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.
mood
1. The language is simple, the feelings are dull, and the affection is not deep enough.
2. Emotion is too strong, and it doesn't look too emotional. On the other hand, it is complacent.
3. Emotion lacks depth, fails to convey feelings through scenes, and fails to generate feelings from events. Although feelings are hidden in words, they fail to dig deep. 4. Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the thoughts, attitudes and likes and dislikes of the characters.
reason
1. The logical reasoning ability is weak, and the evidence is not conclusive enough.
2. Failing to tell the truth, telling the truth, shaping the true personality and expressing the unique individual.
sentence
1. The language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.
2. The language is not fluent enough, and the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling.
3. The statement is verbose, and the text does not convey the meaning, only the details are not omitted, and the text is redundant.
4. The language is too brief and seems to be an outline narrative, but it fails to get an outline.
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Elegant and elegant words, vivid scenery. The layout is novel and the text is concise.
Detailed explanation, clear and gratifying. Write a landscape and get down to business.
In good order, the structure is rigorous. The writing is free and easy, and the interest is meaningful.
Light and far away, relaxed, meaningful and subtle. Plain and straightforward, and romantic.
Concise and fluent, with profound implications. Far-reaching, far-reaching, but different.
See through every detail and describe vividly. The content is tortuous and intriguing.
Interesting, very enjoyable to read. The story is compact and gripping.
Smooth and smooth, so real. Rich in content and fluent in writing.
Your leisurely travel and delicate description. Tell the truth and speak freely.
The words are calm and elegant. Narrative lyricism is quite appropriate.
Beautiful writing and vivid scenery. Smooth layout and realistic description.
Many words are redundant and the words are not vivid. The content is poor and there are too many typos.
It's too early for reconciliation. The writing is vigorous and unconventional.
The article is full of emotion and touching. Detailed description and good organization.
Every word, flowing. Delicate and realistic.
The materials are extraordinary and the pen is flying. The meaning between the lines is calm and elegant.
Fresh, smooth and natural. Rich in materials and vivid in words.
Very humorous, relaxed style. Natural, smooth and orderly.
Wen Chang is big and bears haunt it. The words are blunt and the meaning is unclear.
Speak slowly, the language is not clear. This sentence is rough and doesn't express the meaning.
Use proper words and discuss accurately. Warm and generous, gripping.
Get rid of vulgarity and straighten out the meaning. Seriously verify and be meticulous.
The pen is strong and the opinion is extraordinary. Proper wording and fair arguments.
Simple and appropriate, structured. Every sentence is powerful and every word is incisive.
When you are in love, you will see purity. Pen makes it easy, straighten it out.
Bold and magnificent, unconventional. All aspects are covered and the judgment is correct.
Explain clearly and use appropriate words. Reasoning is fluent and discussion is appropriate.
Full style and clear paragraphs. Quick thinking and great vision.
The context is clear and orderly. It's meaningless to waste words.
The writing is clear and concise. The content is messy and the words are unclear.
The sentence is rough and the meaning is unclear. The analysis is unclear and the language is too detailed.
Loose structure and poor sentences. Many words are repeated and the words are not fluent.
Improper choice of words, unclear meaning. Improper use of words and inconsistent tone.
The analysis is unclear and the language is too detailed. Knowledge is not high, arts and sciences are slightly scattered.
Bright and fresh, quite charming. Smooth and appropriate, wonderful description.
Narrative lyricism is quite appropriate. Incisively and vividly, quite to the point.
The structure is complete, fresh and meaningful. The pen is smart and poetic.
Anger flows in calligraphy. The meaning is wide and the realm is halal.
The wording is elegant and comprehensive. Express it as you want, and your words will be fine.
Bright, cheerful and magnificent. Easy and interesting, quite interesting.
The words are magnificent and the delivery is gratifying. The writing is sophisticated and thoughtful.
Lyric and sincere, in one go. The words are appropriate and the artistic conception is good.
Emotional and interesting events. The true feelings are revealed and touching.
Hastiness and bias are of little significance. The look of happiness shines on the paper.
Improper choice of words, metaphor is irrelevant. Understanding mistakes doesn't matter.