The bell rang in Rinrin, and the students came into the classroom one by one. This is a math class. My deskmate is a top Chinese student and I am a top math student. We have different hobbies, so we often quarrel. Tired of listening to lectures at the same table, I began to compare pictures with my math teacher. Suddenly, the students' eyes were all focused on the deskmate, and the deskmate was even more excited to see this situation. The math teacher went on talking unconsciously, and some students began to giggle below. I tried to persuade him, but he just wouldn't listen. Among them, math teachers also have certain responsibilities. If it weren't for the prejudice of the math teacher, would my deskmate be like this? The math teacher just gives the top students a small stove, but always ignores the middle students and discriminates against the poor students. I still clearly remember that once, the teacher asked the students who didn't take the exam to stand up, and the top student Song stood up. The teacher told him to sit down without saying anything. The students were all angry at the move, but the teacher was full of dirty words.
This little trick is not just a simple little trick, it contains the students' views on the teacher. Although the deskmate should not be so disrespectful to the teacher, such a thing would not happen if the teacher was not eccentric.
It's wrong to play tricks at the same table, but teachers should not be biased towards good students. If teachers show more care and help to poor students, not only will their studies improve, but even their psychology will thank you.
2. Action Description Combination [Role Action Description Combination]
What is an action description? Describing a character's characteristic movements to show his character, quality, identity, status, situation and state is called action description, and the composition of character action description. 2. The role of action description. Successful action description can explain the identity and status of the characters, reflect their psychological activities, show their personality characteristics, and sometimes promote the development of the plot. No matter what kind of action is described, its purpose is to shape the characters and express the theme of the work. 3. Principles to be adhered to in action description: Action description should master two principles: 1. Character should be revealed from one's own actions; 2. The actions of the characters should be chosen enough to show their character. Therefore, the purpose of describing the actions of characters should be very clear; 3. Pay attention to the vividness and typicality of characters' actions. The so-called vividness means that the author should write not only what the character is doing, but also how he does it. The so-called typicality means that the author wants to write why the characters do this and not do that. The formula of action description: action+action object+action environment+action feeling, there are three items, your article has bright spots, and action feeling is essential. 4. Problems needing attention in action description: 1. The most important thing is to pay attention to observation when describing the movements of characters. Pay special attention in daily life, observe the behaviors and actions of various human figures around you, pay special attention to the characteristics of different people's actions, and grasp the characteristics and observe them carefully and repeatedly. 2. Express the personality characteristics of the characters. Through the action description of the characters, the character characteristics and mental outlook of the characters are expressed. He is in his fifties and wears a pair of glasses with high myopia. He carefully took off his glasses and wiped them with the hem of his clothes. Aha ... He was about to speak when he suddenly remembered something. He fumbled in the plate, then quickly reached into his pocket and took out a box of matches. Then he groaned again, stood up straight and said in a particularly loud voice, Now let's watch the teacher do the experiment! -an old teacher who is highly myopic, clumsy and a little confused. 3. Composition material "Character Action Description Composition". The action description should be carefully decomposed. Traditional martial arts movements or TV cameras often break an action into several parts, then break a big action into several small moves, and then show or describe each part and each small move according to a certain level, so that the whole action is lifelike. We should also carefully observe the description of the characters' movements and write down every step of the characters' activities to make the characters more vivid. Example: Ronaldo rushed to the front of the restricted area with the ball, flew up and kicked the ball into the net. Analysis: C Ronaldo's wonderful shooting action is broken down into five small moves: ① receiving the pass; 2 jump with your feet; 3 bypass the opponent's defense; ④ Avoid the goalkeeper; Kick the ball into the net. C Ronaldo stood in the center of the field, abdomen. He received a high ball from his partner and used it to hit his calf lightly. The ball magically jumped over the head of the opposing defender. He jumped up quickly, with a flexible and realistic fake action, took the ball around the sniper of the other three defenders, rushed into the penalty area, cleverly avoided the goalkeeper who had jumped in front of him, started sideways, and the ball slammed into the net. It is too late to use verbs accurately and appropriately, but it is too early. The athlete who fell to the ground stood up suddenly with his hands propped up and tiptoed. The left foot points to the starting line, and the knee bends and squats firmly. Hands are like two wooden pillars stuck in the ground, and the whole body leans forward slightly, like an eagle spreading its wings. In these short sentences, 10 verbs are used, such as throwing, supporting, stepping, climbing, bending, squatting, thrusting, slanting, flying, etc., which accurately and realistically describe the starting posture of athletes. 5, write actions, buckle details, and smile with both form and spirit. The woman smiled abnormally when she saw him: What's wrong with you? Shui Sheng whispered, I'm going to the big army tomorrow. The woman's fingers trembled, thinking that Mei Wei had cut her hand. She put a finger in her mouth and sucked it. In this clip, the actions of shaking and sucking reveal the complex and subtle emotional activities of the characters in an instant, which is better than a thousand words. With the help of association and imagination, using appropriate rhetoric will make the language vivid. V. Title design 1. (1) Half-frame composition training topic: "Cooking" Tip: Write mother's actions in the whole cooking process from lighting to serving. (2) frameless composition training topic: 1. A beautiful blow II. Skipping rope
The quickest and most reliable way to overcome fear and build self-confidence is to do what you are afraid of until you have a successful experience.
3. My deskmate's composition is 200 words for your reference:
I guess many people have made small moves in class, and my deskmate is one of them.
The bell rang in Rinrin, and the students came into the classroom one by one. This is a math class. My deskmate is a top Chinese student and I am a top math student. We have different hobbies, so we often quarrel. Tired of listening to lectures at the same table, I began to compare pictures with my math teacher. Suddenly, the students' eyes were all focused on the deskmate, and the deskmate was even more excited to see this situation. The math teacher went on talking unconsciously, and some students began to giggle below. I tried to persuade him, but he just wouldn't listen. Among them, math teachers also have certain responsibilities. If it weren't for the prejudice of the math teacher, would my deskmate be like this? The math teacher just gives the top students a small stove, but always ignores the middle students and discriminates against the poor students. I still clearly remember that once, the teacher asked the students who didn't take the exam to stand up, and the top student Song stood up. The teacher told him to sit down without saying anything. The students were all angry at the move, but the teacher was full of dirty words.
This little trick is not just a simple little trick, it contains the students' views on the teacher. Although the deskmate should not be so disrespectful to the teacher, such a thing would not happen if the teacher was not eccentric.
It's wrong to play tricks at the same table, but teachers should not be biased towards good students. If teachers show more care and help to poor students, not only will their studies improve, but even their psychology will thank you.
4. How to treat the phenomenon of small gestures in class (200 words) Recently, my colleagues and I have been troubled and confused by one thing, that is, junior students have too many small gestures in class, and the results are still very few after painstaking education over and over again. We don't know what to do, and we want to find a coup to make these children have a good class seriously, so we communicate with each other and consult online, and finally sum up the following ideas. Secondly, many children show small gestures, indicating that children are not interested in what we are talking about, so we should make adjustments and do some activities in due course. Our teacher should arrange the class time reasonably, don't just read and write, and insert the students' discussion and communication link after 20 minutes of class, so that the brain will relax and the little tricks will be reduced. The teacher's class is also very important, and the classroom design is wonderful. Students naturally have no time to think about other things. Finally, in order to reduce the chance for children to make small moves, there should be as few things on the desk as possible, except necessary books and pencils. Erasers and rulers are also required to buy the most common styles, because fancy erasers and rulers will distract children. Some children like to poke holes in the rubber with pencils. Teachers can check the preservation of children's stationery from time to time and praise the care for school supplies. Criticize those students who don't care about school supplies. Of course, there is no teacher who never plays tricks in class. We try our best to reduce this kind of behavior of children. Few children tend to be ADHD, so it's not just the efforts of teachers. We need to communicate with our parents.
5. The consequences of small gestures are 400 words la la la la …… "Oh, my God, the deskmate is showing off his broken voice again.
Really, I don't watch the songs I sing, but I can still sing when I am antique. Silence, ahhh.
My deskmate, surname X, name xx. It is stingy, overbearing, boring and abnormal.
He always likes to bully the weak. In the past, he always sat outside and I sat inside. Every time in class, he makes me beg, telling all his praises, only showing a look of "you are smart enough", and then obediently tilting the stool to let me in. I have argued with him over 998 1 times, but I am a big man. For him, no one usually praises him-well, just waste some saliva to praise him.
My deskmate is a kind student, praised by some people as "good eyes", but because she has lived under my dark rule for a long time, she has become a typical gentleman-"having the final say and not doing anything". His motto is: "I can't beat you." I am so angry with you. "
So, every time I hit him, he always dodges and scolds me for my crimes. As a result, I was always dumbfounded by his anger, blushing and thick neck, but I couldn't squeeze out a rebuttal.
Hum, although I can't beat you, I can beat you. As the saying goes, "If you don't go to hell, whoever goes to hell"! My deskmate's handwriting is quite distinctive, which can be described as unprecedented, belonging to a rather chaotic kind. A song describes it as: "Turn left three times, turn right three times, twist your neck, * * * twist." One day, I was bored, so I grabbed his exercise book and took out a small piece of paper to imitate his handwriting.
God, I wasted 10 pieces of paper and wrote more than n words, but nothing was like this! Fortunately, he had the foresight to grab the exercise book quickly, because I had the impulse to tear up his exercise book ... once, someone told me that my deskmate's hairstyle was like watermelon taro. Hearing this, I immediately returned to my seat and stared at him for a whole minute.
When he touched his little white face narcissistically, he asked shyly, "Do you think I am handsome?" Suddenly, I clapped my hands and cried, "Oh, this is so similar!" " "He was startled and glared at me angrily:" Like, like what! " I said innocently, "I like watermelon skin ..." "What?" He jumped up at once, surprised, helpless and sad, and said, "How can I be like a watermelon skin? Ah, life is really a failure ... "What's your hurry when I bang the table? You're not finished yet! I mean, your hair looks like, not you look like ... stupid! ""My hairstyle ... looks like watermelon skin? " He muttered for a moment, then touched his hair. Finally, he looked "defeated by you" and said tragically, "Be a man, don't be so observant. Don't say anything, miss, or I'll be finished ... ""Good! Stop it! " "Really? A word from a gentleman is a promise! "Hum, I'm not a gentleman, I'm a mean person, and that's settled. Alas, you are always against me! You know this is wrong! There are many stories about my deskmate ... here, give him a message: God said, "Let there be light. "
So there was light in the world. God said, "Doing wrong will be punished."
So ... I'll sit at your table. It's not my fault! It's your fault.
6. Open your eyes, a trick, a composition, a trick.
Today, our Dongguan has successfully become a national civilized city. We in Dongguan can get this lofty honor because of the efforts and support of the general public. As a member of Dongguan, of course, we should contribute our share.
Our school is now carrying out the activity of "garbage does not fall to the ground, campus is more beautiful", thinking of the scenes on campus …
When the bell rang, all my classmates rushed downstairs from the teaching building to the playground. I also drifted downstairs with this stream of people, like a ghost. The crowd downstairs has dispersed, and I slowly walked to the playground. When we got to the school road, the headmaster also came out to watch our practice. I looked at the headmaster and walked slowly on the playground. Suddenly, I lowered my head, immediately crouched down, reached out and took something on the ground, with a hint of dissatisfaction on my face. Oh, it's a plastic bag. I see, the headmaster is leading by example, setting an example for the students with his own actions, and trying to make our students in Naff Middle School more civilized. I just found out that the headmaster is so tall now! How admirable!
I have also realized that civilization is just a simple action-"garbage does not fall to the ground."
The power of example is very powerful. Since then, I have also taken great care of the environment. After all, I want to do "garbage does not fall to the ground". I was also fortunate to be the school's environmental cleaner.
One day, the bell rang. The students rushed to the playground again. I'll get my notebook from the Youth League Committee room first, and then walk slowly to the school road to check the hygiene. Suddenly, a shiny thing-the wrapping paper of instant noodles appeared in front of me. I didn't think too much, so I bent down to pick up the garbage. Just when I picked up this rubbish, a dazzling white light stung my eyes. I was puzzled, but my actions were fixed in the lens, the lens of the Communist Youth League secretary. It turned out that I revised my plan to make a poster to encourage students to "keep garbage from falling to the ground", and my photo was displayed on the school display column.
I hope more students can become civilized and become literate and civilized people.
7. Look at pictures and write in the first grade, and don't make small moves in class. How to write a composition? First, communicate with teachers more. On the one hand, it is to understand the children's achievements in various subjects and their usual performance. On the other hand, it is to get on well with teachers. Ask the teacher to pay more attention to correcting the child's mistakes and give reminders, such as asking questions frequently and caring for the child, so that the child will be alert if he knows that the teacher is concerned about him. Of course, teachers in each subject should contact each other, with the focus on the class teacher.
Second, communicate with children more and let them know the importance of observing classroom discipline. You can tell your children this way: everyone does their own thing, no one listens to the teacher, or those who want to attend the class don't listen, or the teacher can't go on. This is terrible. I want to reason with the children, but they still understand. At the same time, children will not change completely because of this, so it must be helpful to remind them at all times.
Third, understand the purpose and motivation of children's little tricks. For example, if children don't like classes, they should find ways to improve their interest in learning; Children have understood the learning content, so it is more beneficial for them to pay attention to the advantages and disadvantages of the teacher's lectures and find out the mistakes of the teacher's lectures. If the child suddenly thinks of something to say, let the child write it on paper and discuss it with his classmates after class (the child is afraid of forgetting what he suddenly thinks, so as not to remember it), or raise his hand to ask questions; If the teacher doesn't like children, it's up to you to change the teacher's point of view with the children.
Don't be too hard on the children, but the teacher's words must be taken seriously, don't hurt the children's self-esteem, and don't make heavy penalties beyond the scope of the teacher, which will affect the children's study. Therefore, parents, teachers and students will have results in a three-pronged approach.
8. The small act of writing in senior high school brought great emotion. When school was over on Friday afternoon, it suddenly got dark, and then it began to thunder. It's like God has a date with class. Just as * * * rang, it rained cats and dogs.
I walked out of the classroom and watched my classmates being picked up by their parents. I also walked around in a hurry. My parents just went on a business trip today, so I can't go home by myself for the time being. Don't listen to your mother in the morning and insist on not taking an umbrella. Looks like karma really came. I stood in the corridor, praying that the rain would stop soon. Xiao Ming finished his duty. When he came out and saw me still in the corridor, he asked, "Dai Rong, why are you still here?" Did you forget to bring your umbrella? "I'm embarrassed to nod. Xiao Ming said, "Why don't we go together? I'll take you home first. Anyway, I went home myself. " "But our home is not on the road. On the contrary, you have to walk a lot more. " "Nothing, just a few steps. "Then drag me away. Xiaoming leaned his umbrella against me all the way, for fear that I might get wet. I reached out and pushed my umbrella to him and said, "Don't keep coming to me, your arm is wet." "Nothing, I didn't see that I was much better than you." Xiao Ming said with a smile. Today, the rain and wind are particularly heavy. Xiao Ming has been dragging me carefully. Suddenly I feel that he and I are not classmates, he is my brother. Living on clothes all the time, making ends meet, makes me forget how I live and find myself useless. Xiao Ming kept seeing me home before turning around and leaving. He refused to let me in and sit down.
Watching Xiao Ming's figure disappear in the wind and rain, thank you, Xiao Ming ...
9. Explain the review of writing 500 words, and make small moves in class. Universal review, no need to change anything. I made a mistake this time. I thought a lot, reflected on many things, regretted myself, was very angry with myself, and violated the iron law of the school. I am also deeply aware of the seriousness of my mistakes and feel ashamed of them. At the beginning of school, I repeatedly emphasized the school rules and discipline to remind students not to violate the school rules, but I didn't pay attention to what the school and teachers said, what the teachers said, and what the school promulgated. None of this should be. It is also disrespectful to the teacher. What the teacher said should be kept in mind, and the school rules and school minutes promulgated by the school are urgent in mind.
Afterwards, I thought calmly for a long time. The mistake I made this time not only brought me trouble, but also delayed my study. Moreover, my behavior has also caused a bad influence on the school, destroyed the management system of the school, and also caused a bad influence among my classmates. Because of my own mistakes, other students may follow suit, affecting class discipline and grade discipline, which is also a kind of destruction to school discipline, a kind of harm to teachers and parents who have great expectations for themselves, and an irresponsibility to other students' parents. Every school wants its students to achieve excellent academic performance, develop in an all-round way and establish a good image, which also gives our school a good image. Every student also wants the school to give him a good learning environment to study and live. Including myself, I also hope to have a good learning environment, but a good learning environment depends on everyone's common maintenance. But I made a mistake this time and ruined the good environment of the school. Very inappropriate. If every student makes such mistakes, there will be no good learning environment. It is also right to punish students who violate school rules. I stayed at home for half a month and thought to myself. I also realized that I had made a serious mistake. I know I should pay the price for my mistake, and I am willing to bear the responsibility that I can't afford, especially as an educated person in a key university, I should bear the unshirkable main responsibility for this mistake. I sincerely accept criticism and am willing to accept the treatment given by the school. Sorry, teacher! What I have committed is a serious matter of principle. I know, and the teacher is angry with me for breaking the school rules. I also know that it is the most basic responsibility and obligation of students to do their own thing without violating the school rules and disciplines. But I didn't even do the most basic things. Now, I made a big mistake and I deeply regret it. I will take this disciplinary incident as a mirror, always check myself, criticize and educate myself, and consciously accept supervision. Be alert when you are ashamed, forge ahead when you are ashamed, mend your ways when you are late, turn shame into motivation and study hard. I also want to improve my ideological understanding and strengthen my responsibility measures through this incident.
I still want to study hard. Learning is the most important thing for me, and it is very important for my future survival and employment. I'm only young now, and I still have the ability to fight. I want to fight again and try again. I hope the teacher can give me a chance to be a good student. I will make a good change and study hard. I will live such a full life, and I will also delay my classes at home. The school curriculum is already very tight, and it is very difficult to learn. In the future study life, I will study hard and try to catch up with all the classes.
I remember when I first entered the school, the head teacher and the deputy head teacher had great expectations for me, and my study was ok, but there was something wrong with discipline. Under the school's iron laws and strict school rules, I made such a serious mistake that the school should severely punish me. I don't know how many times I said loudly, headmaster, teacher, I was wrong, I was wrong. Mom, dad, I was wrong. I was wrong. In this half a month, I still get up on time every day, thinking that I have lived in school for nearly two years. I have deep feelings for the school. In the future, we should have a new look at school, not for the school, not for the grade, not for the class teacher in the dark. No matter in study or other aspects, I will be strict with myself by school rules, and I will seize this opportunity. Taking it as a turning point in my life, the teacher wants us to become the pillars of society, so I will work harder in my future school life, not only to learn what the teacher taught us well, but also to learn how to be a man.
Making such a mistake is also a great blow to my parents' expectations. Parents work hard to make money, so that we can live a better life than others, so that we can devote ourselves to learning. However, the mistakes I made went against my parents' wishes and also denied their efforts. I'm ashamed of it.
I believe that the teacher can see my attitude and know that I have a deep repentance attitude towards this matter. I believe in my confession. My behavior is not a challenge to the teacher's discipline, but my own momentary negligence. I hope the teacher can forgive my mistake, and I assure you that it won't happen again. I will further sum up and reflect on all this, and urge the teacher to believe that I can learn from my mistakes and work harder in the future. At the same time, I sincerely hope that the teacher can continue to care and support me, but handle my problems as appropriate. Checker: Time: