"Jingle, jingle ..." The ringing sound of * * * sounded, and the horn of battle sounded, and the classroom became quieter, only the sound of writing on paper was heard. The teacher smiled and encouraged everyone: "I believe everyone can do well in the exam. Don't be nervous." My confidence has strengthened. In a short time, I finished the first big problem. The first one is stuck. One minute, almost two minutes later, sweat oozed from my forehead. I racked my brains to think hard, but the door of memory was closed. I carefully recalled the teacher's story. Well, I didn't listen well. I really deserved it. Well, I'd better do the next question. Just as I was about to start writing, a glimmer of light suddenly appeared at the door of memory. Ha, I figured it out, if it weren't for the examination room. I woke up when I saw that everyone was doing the problem at the fastest speed. Now is not the time to be happy. I severely blame myself, "the person who laughs best always laughs last", so don't take it lightly! My pen slipped on the smooth paper again. ...
2. The psychological description fragment is about 300 words. Psychological description is to describe the psychological state and ideological activities of characters in a certain environment. Writing well the characters' inner spirit, thoughts and feelings can make readers go deep into the characters' hearts and gain insight into their inner secrets and emotional conflicts, thus successfully shaping their personality characteristics and highlighting the central idea of the article.
The mistakes that students often make in psychological description are either understatement and confusion, or platitudes, which are suspected of "falsification"; Only with accurate grasp and delicate description can we have direct and shocking power.
For example, please describe your psychological activities in about 300 words, and ask for vivid images.
[synthetic case]
The Chinese class began, and the teacher handed out the approved test papers. I was very nervous before I got the test paper. I was afraid that I would fail. After I got the test paper, I was very sad that I failed.
[Brief analysis]
This is a fragment of a student's composition, describing his psychological activities before and after the teacher distributed the examination paper. Although he shouted hysterically "extremely nervous" and "very sad", we were still indifferent. We didn't feel how nervous and sad he was, because what we read between his lines was an abstract overview, not a concrete and sensible psychological description.
So how to make a concrete and sensible psychological description? Please see below.
[Sample composition]
It's cloudy with cold wind blowing from time to time. The wind blows on me, and I can't help shivering. When the Chinese class begins, the teacher will hand out the approved test papers. The classroom was silent, only the sound of "rustling" was heard, "Hua!" My heart thumped, and a classmate accidentally knocked the book to the ground. My deskmate's test paper has been handed out, with a score of 72. Looking at the sad face of my deskmate, I can't help playing drums. I'm so nervous, I'm afraid I'll fail the exam.
The test paper finally fell on my desk. It lay on its back, silent. I kept saying to myself, "God, bless me! I will never listen to a tape recorder, watch TV or play video games again. Alas! It's all my own fault. I always want to play video games. The day before the exam, I secretly watched TV for an hour while my parents were away. Teacher, have mercy. I will listen carefully in class in the future, and don't let me fail! " I lifted the test paper with trembling hands, and a bright red "4" came into view. When my hand shook, the test paper was closed again. I gritted my teeth, put my hand under the test paper and turned it over hard. Bang, I saw my score ──48, poor "48", and I collapsed on the table with a sigh. I seem to see the angry face of the teacher, as if I heard the sad sigh of my parents and the ridicule of others. How sorry and sad I am!
[Brief analysis]
This is a wonderful and vivid psychological description. How can I put it? The reason is that there are various methods of psychological description, and the author skillfully uses several common ones: First, inner monologue. This is the most commonly used and important one. This technique writes out the thoughts of the characters, allows the characters to directly pour out their own feelings, express their emotions, highs and contradictions, hopes and disappointments, and enables readers to reach the inner world of the characters through their appearances. For example, I directly recorded the psychological process of "I" regret and prayer, and the image was true. Students usually add hints such as "thinking" and "contemplation" before "inner monologue", such as "chanting in the heart" in ②. Second, the description of illusion. When people are extremely nervous and excited, sometimes there will be illusory pictures or sounds in front of their eyes or ears, and their contents may be what they are most afraid of or what they are most eager for. By describing these, they can accurately express the inner world of the characters, for example. Before describing hallucinations, we often use some hints, such as: as if we saw, as if we heard, and so on. Third, the scenery sets off. For example, cloudy days and cold winds are used to set off my nervousness. In addition, there is a common technology that does not appear in this paper: dream description. For example, in Wei Wei's My Teacher, I searched for a teacher in my dream, which showed my deep attachment and yearning for the teacher.
This passage gives us three inspirations-
1. Psychological description can use a variety of techniques comprehensively, and can also be combined with the movements, language and expressions of characters. This can more vividly highlight the subtle emotional fluctuations and complex psychological changes of the characters, make the psychological activities of the characters full of three-dimensional sense and layering, and make the writing more swaying.
2. Psychological description should conform to the character. People with different personalities have different psychological activities. Some people are enthusiastic, some are indifferent, some are bold, and some are indecisive. This requires students to observe, to experience, to describe and portray in detail, and not to be stereotyped.
3. Psychological description should meet the needs of article expression and performance center. Students can't describe their own psychology for the sake of psychological description, and they can't leave one psychological activity and another on a whim. They should "emerge as the times require" and be written naturally. Generally speaking, they should use it when the characters are excited, sad or have intense inner conflicts.
Everyone still remembers the psychological feelings before writing a composition in each Chinese exam. Ask 300 words about the exam. "The tense exam has finally passed!" The moment I received the English paper, I only had that sentence in my heart.
Actually, I'm not afraid to tell you the truth. I have never taken a mid-term exam as a final exam so seriously. Maybe it's all because of the teacher's words-your grades should be in the file. What? Documents? This has long been a very sensitive word in the hearts of our junior one students. Composition Network home.sanwen8.cn
After finishing the examination paper, the overwhelming pressure during the exam has long since vanished, but the excitement about the answer after the exam and the great regret that I made a mistake after the exam are like a torrent. I walked out of the classroom with my schoolbag on my back, only to hear the wind keep bringing "Ah, the exam question is really difficult, I didn't do my XXXX question, so I'm dead this time ~" I saw my friend, I waved to him, and then I ran to him. I don't know if I was infected by the surrounding atmosphere or something. The first thing I said to him was-what did you think of your exam? This even surprised me. I should say such a cliche, but it is so cliche and fashionable. But his answer made me unconsciously agree, and I couldn't help crying out, "That makes sense! Makes sense! " What he said is: "What is the answer after the exam? Whether you are right or wrong is an unchangeable fact. Why not smile and live happily every minute? " Hmm? This sentence seems to have been heard before. Oh ~ it was a sentence I said to him in primary school. Well, it's a pity to let him go back to me this time.
After so many exams, I often force myself not to get "exam panic", but I don't know what to think when the papers are handed out, and I always panic when I receive them. composition
Hee hee! I think there are many classmates like me! In fact, the mentality of the exam is really difficult to control!
The math teacher came in. She walked onto the platform with a straight face, and the paper was thrown on the online platform. I thought to myself: this time is over. The teacher is too fierce. He must have failed the exam. The teacher criticized those self-righteous good students one by one. Originally, I was the first in Grade 96 and got 8 1. Needless to say, I'm over seventy again. Alas, after 80 points, I got 60 points. My deskmates who studied almost as much as I did got 67 points, and a dozen of them were in their sixties. Then I failed. My hands are clenched and my sweat is flowing. Oh, my God. The Chinese teacher finally came, with a straight face. I swallowed a mouthful of saliva, and the Chinese teacher didn't curse. I came to the newspaper office and ate a kilo. It's impossible. 78 again. 5, the Chinese teacher spoke: hurry to see if the score is wrong. I made a calculation when I saw the last question. For every 0.5 point I missed, I made four mistakes. Why did I deduct eight points? It's so unfair! The composition is divided into one * * * 30 points, we all deduct ten points, and others deduct three or four points. Why do you want to deduct eight points? I went to the podium, but because there were too many people, the teacher said, I just need to know. What can you do if you have to change it? I was speechless by the teacher's words. If you can't send out the English paper, just say the score and get 85 points. Home.sanwen8.cn, I must work hard and study hard.
4. After the exam, help write a psychological description of the results and reflect on the 300-word exam. I know the teacher expected a lot of me, but I still didn't do well in the exam.
I'm very sorry about that. But since you made a mistake, you have to correct it. So, I also thought a lot about what I must learn after the exam.
First of all, I want to get rid of the bad habit of not looking at the questions carefully in the exam. Sometimes I often look at the front of the topic and write the following questions conveniently, but there are many mistakes.
This may also have something to do with answering skills. In a word, through the later practice, I must carefully examine the questions in the exam, look at the questions by myself, and see the questions clearly and optimistically.
Check it several times when time permits, and never allow yourself to make unnecessary mistakes like this again. Secondly, I must pass the exams of Chinese, Mathematics and English. I finally understand that there are mountains outside the mountains and people outside.
On weekdays, everyone gets together to do the same topic, and there is no obvious difference. But as soon as I took the exam, I found that there were so many questions that I had never seen before.
Only blame yourself for not exercising enough. I can't allow myself to continue like this, so I must redouble my efforts, learn from this exam, increase my strength, prepare for the next exam and lay a good foundation.
Practice is the key to exam skills. In life, I should practice and review more, and make a comprehensive review plan before the exam, so I don't have to be impatient and have no direction.
Learn to accumulate good words and sentences in daily life and study, and accumulate difficult topics in mathematics. English is a grammar project. Doing cloze and other exercises is also a good way to improve English.
For teachers in all subjects, I hope teachers don't lose confidence in me. Although I didn't do well in this exam, I believe in my own strength. I will definitely work hard in the next exam.
5. The psychological description during the exam is 400 words. I really envy those students who sit still. They were calm and confident, with a smile on their lips, waiting for the papers to be handed out. My heart is almost beating out. Why can't the old city be quiet? Suddenly, I seem to see a pair of eyes staring at me. Ah, it is my dear teacher's gentle eyes, my mother's kind eyes, and countless classmates' encouraging eyes. Why, uncle Lei Feng's sharp eyes also stared at me meaningfully: Believe in yourself if you pass the exam. At this moment, I calmed down and picked up the pen that condensed everyone's high hopes and fought hard! "Jingle, jingle ..." The ringing sound of * * * sounded, and the horn of battle sounded, and the classroom became quieter, only the sound of writing on paper was heard. The teacher smiled and encouraged everyone: "I believe everyone can do well in the exam. Don't be nervous." My confidence has strengthened. In a short time, I finished the first big problem. The first one is stuck. One minute, almost two minutes later, sweat oozed from my forehead. I racked my brains to think hard, but the door of memory was closed. I carefully recalled the teacher's story. Well, I didn't listen well. I really deserved it. Well, I'd better do the next question. Just as I was about to start writing, a glimmer of light suddenly appeared at the door of memory. Ha, I figured it out, if it weren't for the examination room. I woke up when I saw that everyone was doing the problem at the fastest speed. Now is not the time to be happy. I sternly blamed myself, "The person who laughs best is always 32313133532363134313313635334. My pen slipped on the smooth paper again.
6. Psychological description when being punished 300-word composition, anxiety, the results of the last exam have been announced, my God! I didn't expect this. Are all your efforts in vain these days? I review it nervously every day, but what am I facing? How to face your parents when you get home? Class 12! Although this is not bad, it is far below my parents' requirements.
I'm holding a test paper in my hand, looking at my grades, and my eyes are blurred. My mother is strict with me. She often tells me that "learning is endless" and often encourages me.
She hopes that I can fulfill her unfinished dream of college and win glory for her and the motherland. Today, however, I face her with such achievements. She will be extremely disappointed and completely lose confidence in me. What should I do? Who will tell me what to do? Maybe I shouldn't be limited to contradictions and depression. Maybe I can calm down and think slowly in another way: What's the problem? So, I picked up the test paper and began to study the reasons for the mistakes. Only then did I find that some questions were very simple, but I was careless. How could this be wrong? There are still some problems that are not flexible in using knowledge, but are done with rigid dogma, which is simply wrong.
It turns out that so many small mistakes have accumulated in the test paper, so it must be corrected in the future. Thinking about it, I felt emboldened ... suddenly I thought of my parents. How should I face them? I am in trouble again.
In the past, every exam, parents with good grades were happy, and those with poor grades were "impressed" and even used violence against their daughters. What shall we do? Who will help me? I know no one can help me. I'm my own fault. I should bear it myself.
I came home with a nervous mood. My father is picking corn in the yard. I looked at his tired figure and felt even more sad. I went to my father with my report card and told him everything about the exam in a trembling voice. Strangely, instead of scolding me, my father said earnestly, "Dad understands your feelings. You must be scared now. I won't scold you, because you have realized your mistake. Just pay attention next time. What about when the horse stumbled? " I suddenly burst into tears, and I secretly told myself: Next time, I will use my own achievements to explain everything.
After the exam, Pan Tian in Class Two, Grade One is getting dark. The breeze is blowing head-on, cool, like relentless cold rain hitting me.
I walked listlessly on my way home from school. I dare not face it, nor dare I face my report card. "I didn't know I didn't do the problem until I finished the exam."
It's getting dark, covering the earth like a ruthless net. I am in pain, and I regret it.
I didn't review well last night. So, how should I face my parents? They spent most of their lives facing the loess and putting all their hopes on me.
What do I give them in return? Is it that bad report card? When I got home, I truthfully reported to my parents. I can't imagine how they feel at this time. I hoped they would scold me and hit me, but they didn't.
Dad patted me on the shoulder: "Failure is the mother of success. This failure means success next time. " My tears came out at once.
Should I continue to fail? Or stand up bravely? Of course I will choose the latter, I have to choose. I don't think about whether I can make achievements in the future, but I firmly believe that there is no fruit that matures without experiencing wind and rain! I will remember my father's words.
In the face of failure, I only have to work hard, and I only have to leave the world with an effort. After the exam (Sun Xingfeng), I got full marks in mathematics this time. I was so proud that I thought, what should Dad reward this time? Is it a good meal "KFC" or brand-name jeans? ……。
Because my father promised me this exam, and if I do well in it, my father will give me a big prize. I was dreaming when the head teacher came to the classroom.
I think the teacher will raise his voice and read the names of our high-scoring classmates again. My heart was filled with joy, so I sat down and smiled on my face.
"Students, today I take the opportunity to admit my mistake after the exam. In the past, I always used the score of the exam as the only criterion to measure the students' study. "I think there is something wrong with the teacher's opening remarks today.
The teacher went on to say; "I praised the students who did well in the exam and didn't mean to hurt the students who didn't do well in the exam. In fact, the score of an exam doesn't mean anything. Can you say that if you do well in the exam, you will always be a high school student? The exam is almost finished. Can you say that they will never do it? Today, when vigorously promoting quality education, I understand that the past ideas and practices are incorrect. " The teacher paused and said, "Some students also talk to their parents about conditions. If they do well in the exam, they will be rewarded.
I can see clearly what the purpose of study is and for whom. Of course, the purpose of learning is not for parents, and the other is not for teachers.
What is the correct answer? Our beloved Premier Zhou put it well: "Study for the rise of China." Finally, the teacher raised his voice and said, "We must not let sacred knowledge smell like copper!" " "The teacher's words won prolonged applause.
I appreciate the spirit of the teacher who dares to admit mistakes, and I also thank the teacher for letting me understand a lot of truth. When I got home, my father asked me how my exam went, and I told the truth.
Dad said, "son, talk about the conditions." I repeated the teacher's words, and my father turned red when he heard it. I think he may be blaming himself-because this "misunderstanding of rewards" is also my father's responsibility.
In the silence, our father and son smiled knowingly. Yes, studying for reward will make us short-sighted. I should "study for the rise of China" like Premier Zhou.
After the exam, Han Qiguo "Hey, why don't you go home?" A loud voice passed by my ear. "Wait a minute," I blurted out.
Soon there will be no one in the classroom. I face the empty classroom, saying nothing, waiting, waiting, as if waiting for the storm; It seems to be waiting for the rainbow to appear again ... I don't know how long it took, and the sky slowly darkened.
I took a deep breath and stood up involuntarily, with nothing in my mind.
7. psychological description of the first 300 words of the results. I sat up and turned on the TV. There is a man riding a horse on the TV screen. He kept whipping the horse. I seem to see that the man riding a horse is my father. He kept pushing, but with a cane in his hand, it wasn't a horse, it was me. I seem to hear my father say, "Do you dare to play football again? If I don't give you some color, you think I'm joking, but my words go in one ear and out the other. It is better to concentrate on your studies! "
After that, my classmates rode past me and laughed at me all the time. Gradually, they all passed me.
Suddenly, the sound of "ah" woke me up. It turned out that I was just daydreaming. I went to check the ins and outs of crying. It turns out that a cockroach in the toilet scared my sister.
I lay in bed again, but this time, I finally fell asleep without accident. The next day, I took a ride to school as usual. The passengers on the bus are groggy and the air is very dull. I don't know if it's really dull or because of a heavy heart. The flowers and grass in the campus withered. I sat in my seat waiting for the teacher to arrive. The dark clouds outside are crying, the clock on the wall is slowing down, and my mood is very depressed. The teacher came in, stood in front of my desk, put down the paper and left with a straight face.
The test paper has its back to me and is placed on the table. At this moment, time seems to have stopped. Last night's "daydream" kept appearing in my mind, just like a video kept replaying. "Hua!" I woke up, and I said to myself, "Daydreaming again!"
The clock on the wall picked up speed again. I looked at the test paper and thought about yesterday's nightmare. I can't help but hope that the clock has dropped something and will go back to look for it. I turn the test paper upside down, just like turning the car upside down.
8. After the exam, the buzzing 300-word classroom became quiet. It was so quiet that you could hear the needle drop on the floor. This is our examination room, this is our classroom, this is the battlefield where we will fight, and this is the place to test our study this month.
I really envy those students who stay put. They are calm, confident and smiling, waiting for the papers to be handed out. My heart is almost beating. Why can't the old city be quiet? Suddenly, I seem to see a pair of eyes staring at me. Ah, it is my dear teacher's gentle eyes, my mother's kind eyes, and countless classmates' encouraging eyes. Why, uncle Lei Feng's sharp eyes also stared at me meaningfully: Believe in yourself if you pass the exam. At this moment, I calmed down and picked up the pen that condensed everyone's high hopes and fought hard!
"Jingle, jingle ..." The ringing sound of * * * sounded, and the horn of battle sounded, and the classroom became quieter, only the sound of writing on paper was heard. The teacher smiled and encouraged everyone: "I believe everyone can do well in the exam. Don't be nervous." My confidence has strengthened. In a short time, I finished the first big problem. The first one is stuck. One minute, almost two minutes later, sweat oozed from my forehead. I racked my brains to think hard, but the door of memory was closed. I carefully recalled the teacher's story. Well, I didn't listen well. I really deserved it. Well, I'd better do the next question. Just as I was about to start writing, a glimmer of light suddenly appeared at the door of memory. Ha, I figured it out, if it weren't for the examination room. I woke up when I saw that everyone was doing the problem at the fastest speed. Now is not the time to be happy. I severely blame myself, "the person who laughs best always laughs last", so don't take it lightly! My pen slipped on the smooth paper again. ...
Question, finally finished, I didn't laugh, please ask the teacher to check my academic performance! I hope my answer sheet will satisfy the teacher.
The composition of 9.300 words describes in my mind that at dusk, I walked aimlessly on my way home, and my mood has been very heavy.
In the recent monthly exam, I was among the best in English and didn't play well. Just reached the average score in the class, and the monthly exam ranking dropped a lot because of it. I don't know how many exercises I have done and how many nights I have been burning the midnight oil for this monthly exam near the end of the term. I want to continue to maintain such good results, but this is not what I earned with sweat. I'm not lucky.
Some basic topics were written wrong for me, and I forgot all the knowledge points that the teacher repeatedly emphasized ... Tears finally flowed down unwillingly. At this time, the sun has set, and the way home seems so long. I stopped when I got home.
I hesitated, picked up the twigs on the ground and kept spinning on the ground. It's like I'm stuck there and I can't get out. It's still in vain to work hard before the exam and make such great efforts.
Suddenly, a burst of girls' laughter reached my ears and disturbed my thoughts. It turned out that two little girls were playing hopscotch.
One of the little girls jumped from the bottom to the roof step by step, and then from the roof to the bottom step by step. She has been laughing happily. She must have had a good time. In this way, one girl lost and the other girl continued to play. I didn't hear them complain about losing. I suddenly let go and smiled, because I had an epiphany-how similar this "hopscotch" process is to life experience! There is a beginning and an end, and there are ups and downs. Why should I be depressed because of a temporary failure? One's life is full of challenges. The result is of course important, but the process is more important to me. After all, it left unforgettable memories. Failure doesn't mean the end. I've tried very hard. The most important thing is that I can't solve any problems now. Finding out the cause of failure as soon as possible is the key.
So, I dried my tears, tried to smile, and tried to welcome a new beginning with open arms.
10. 300 words after writing psychology passed the mid-term exam yesterday, and the Chinese question is a bit unexpectedly difficult! This semester was also divided into two equal parts by this exam, and the previous one passed in a busy day! Looking back on these two months, I have met many people, remembered many people's names and done many great things. Also learned a lot, very substantial! 7Ex Hemiao Disability Support Station
This time is painful and happy. I remember a saying "I am my own god". Supported by this belief, I finally completed this transformation. The next day is brand new to me. I am hiding an old me and constantly discovering a new me. I really enjoy this feeling. Experience a realm called "forgetting me". In my busy life, I seem to forget the so-called pain I once complained about. I have made unremitting efforts in the statement that "no pains, no gains". The ideal seems to have faded out of my sight, and I also understand that the ideal is not taken out to dry every day, but the destination of long-distance running, and only the winner can touch the cloth. As long as I finish today seriously every day, I may really be closer to my ideal. I also know that I am advancing, and my ideal is always in front of me. 7Ex Hemiao Disability Support Station
I look healthy, with no complaints, comparisons, jealousy or even envy in my mind! I don't care about things that seem serious or even important. I just want to improve myself and enjoy a kind of inner peace and tranquility in this process, which is very good! 7Ex Hemiao Disability Support Station
Chen Dong, Grade 71Class 6 of Shengyuan School in Xiayi County
The easiest thing in the world is persistence, and the most difficult thing is persistence. Remember, persistence is victory. The following is what I arrange