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Eighth grade Chinese composition
In ordinary daily life, everyone is familiar with the composition. According to different genres, composition can be divided into narrative, expository, practical and argumentative. What kind of composition can be called an excellent composition? The following are six eighth-grade Chinese compositions that I have carefully arranged. Welcome to read the collection.

1 A once-in-a-decade dream comes to mind. That dream … made me experience the painful dream of losing my family … for me … it was a nightmare. Ten years later … I had the same dream again and was awakened by that terrible nightmare. It was not until a few months later that I realized that this was a hint that I …

Age is like a ladder ... this is the beginning of that nightmare. In front of my eyes, it is a long golden ladder. Every ladder has a number. Starting from 1, the ladder goes down. Soon, my family and I started the "ladder adventure". When we reached 1, my parents, my sister and I became 65438+. At that time, my father was suddenly very tired. He told us not to wait and keep walking ... When the aisle was in the 7 1 building, I felt something was wrong and went back to my father. Unexpectedly, my father was so tired that he fell asleep, but he ignored me. As a result ... he has become a sleeping beauty, so I don't call him anymore. I want him to sleep quietly, so do I. My mother suddenly fell down. I want to carry my mother to the hospital, but there is nothing here. My sister and I kept calling for help, but no one answered. I have to stay with my sister all the time. At the 98 steps, my sister said, "Sister, your hair is so white!" " I smiled and answered him, "You too. Time flies. " My sister said, "Yes!" My sister suddenly strangled herself with a rope. I've been crying. I am very angry with myself. Suddenly paralyzed just now. If I don't, I will stop him until I get to step 99. I knelt down and cried, "why? Why? Why does everyone have to die? Don't leave me, don't! " A strange elf appeared in front of me. She said, "Go ahead! Go! " "Why do you want to let everyone die? Dad couldn't wake up from his sleep, his mother died of illness and his sister committed suicide. Why are you making fun of me like this? " "This is fate. Think for yourself! " I went to 100 in frustration, but I didn't expect to come to the real world. This is a school. I walked down the school stairs, and my mother suddenly took my hand, as if to take me to see the teacher. At that time, I was sure that she was a real mother. I'm really happy! Then dad and sister must be there, too I couldn't see them anywhere, so I asked my mother, "Where are mom, dad and sister?" Mother said angrily, "You don't have a father at all! No sister, inexplicable child. " My eyes are red. Is this just a dream? I don't believe it at all. That was just a dream? It's really scary. What was that just now? I suddenly heard a voice. That's my father's voice. He woke me up. Seeing that my family is still here, I am finally relieved.

I never know how to cherish it, and I think my parents should be kind to me, but ... after I had this dream ... I think it made me realize that losing my loved ones is more painful than losing what I love and being beaten by my parents! He hinted that I should cherish every moment in front of me so as not to regret it after losing it. This is a terrible and meaningful dream.

A month passed in a hurry, and through the monthly exam, I found many shortcomings in my study. I hope that through the reflection on the monthly exam, I will keep moving forward on the road of learning.

I am not very satisfied with my Chinese score in this monthly exam, because some of my marks are caused by carelessness. In fact, there are a lot of basic knowledge that I still haven't learned well. Listening to the teacher in class, I remember it clearly, but it's hard to say after a while. I clearly forgot something, but I didn't know it at all. I thought everything would be all right. Homework is sometimes written seriously, sometimes neglected, and it is only when it is sent back that I find so many mistakes. Needless to say, the exam results fluctuate greatly. If you work hard, your grades will be higher. If you are negligent, your grades will be unsightly. In a word, we still haven't paid much attention to Chinese fundamentally.

I got better grades in English. Cloze with only two mistakes is the best score in history, and failure to answer correctly in single choice is the ideal state. Although there is only one wrong question, after all, one is good and needs more effort. It is not difficult to restore sentences, and naturally you don't lose points. There should be no problem with complete sentences, but the meaning of a word is ignored, which leads to inaccurate use of words and loses one point. Deducting two points from the composition is also the best achievement in history, but there are still shortcomings in the beginning and end. The beginning should be more concise and clear, and the end should be filled with more feelings.

Eighty-five points in mathematics is not so ideal. Especially the last question was not done at all, which is abnormal. Therefore, we should do more questions in the future and break the limitations of thinking. I didn't do the last question correctly because my thinking was too limited and I didn't think in another direction. Therefore, we should take the classic problems found by teachers seriously to exercise ourselves.

The monthly exam didn't succeed, comrades still have to work hard!

Teaching activity: Using the Olympic Games to educate students' thinking and writing, this activity consists of two stages. See below for detailed design.

Teaching philosophy:

After a pleasant summer vacation, great changes have taken place in students' thoughts, study, life and body. The transition from holiday life to school life requires a psychological process, which is often called "receiving spiritual education". At the same time, combined with the content of this semester's "composition revision training", let students first make it clear that the article must be revised to achieve good results.

Teaching time: two hours.

Teaching process:

First, there are two ideas, and the specific plan is as follows.

1, the teacher tells a story

At the end of the men's10m air rifle final in Athens Olympic Games, China's Zhu Qinan made a classic move with his right index finger-after shooting the last shot, Zhu Qinan quietly turned around, looking for his coach, raised his right index finger in disbelief and pointed at himself. The coach's index finger stands up, and so does he. The two fingers are opposite, and the index finger is raised to the coach behind him, which means: "Am I the first?" After getting a positive nod, Zhu Qinan grinned.

Please write some thoughts according to the wonderful moment left by the Olympic champion who is only 19 years old to the world.

Similar actions:

After Meng and Yang Wenjun completed the sprint, Meng also erected his right index finger;

Luo Xuejuan gently touched her lips with her right index finger after the women's 100m breaststroke, and then held it high.

2, the teaching process can also become, the teacher asked: Did you see the Olympics? How do you feel?

Summarize my thoughts on the Olympic Games in one sentence, the Chinese teaching plan for the second day of junior high school, "Comments on the first unit of the eighth grade Chinese of Jiangsu Education Edition (submitted by netizens)". Such as: wonderful, touching, surprise, excitement, regret, king, hero, transcendence, breakthrough ... (These words are first said by students, written by teachers on the blackboard, and finally students write articles according to their own feelings. )

Second, the students finish writing the composition (write in class, and go home if you can't finish it. )

The teacher checked the students' holiday homework.

Third, the correction of the composition:

1, self-approved (mark wavy lines in the article with strokes of different colors, and then make corrections at the end of the article, and the numbers marked with'1,2, 3 ...' are in order. )

2, mutual approval (exchange corrections, indicate who changed it, changed which paragraph and which line, and also at the end of the article, write it after the self-approval made by this classmate, and mark it with numbers. )

3. Teacher's reading: Evaluate the above two revisions.

4. The teacher selects qualified articles and prints them to form "random questions of Olympic mathematics". Contribute to the school magazine.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) comments:

There are two main contents, one is a casual talk about the Olympic Games (see Olympic literature); The second is the situation in which students revise their compositions.

Postscript of teaching:

This time, students are only required to write a segment with a word number of about 150, and their feelings about the Olympic Games will be completed in the masterpiece of Unit 1.

Design and analysis of the first unit of the eighth grade Chinese book of Jiangsu Education Publishing House

First, students read the text on pages 34-35.

Second, write clearly the cause, process and result of a thing.

The writing purpose of this unit is to make students learn to write clearly the cause, process and result of a thing, describe it in an orderly way according to the development process of things, and master the basic methods of describing the process of things in chronological order and spatial order. The combination of writing activities and texts is to find out the cause, process and result of a thing, which can be mainly combined with the third and fourth classes for students to experience. Four essay questions, the first and second questions, can guide students to arrange the order of what they want to express in combination with their own or class life. Students can choose one of these two questions.

The second question has two requirements: novelty is not bizarre, and narrative writing should start from life and start from small places. Don't treat novelty as strangeness, find food in life and write true feelings. Secondly, we should arrange the order of narration.

The question 1 is to write a story. The story pays attention to the plot, to attract people, but also to express the true feelings. This composition should guide students to pay more attention to language expression.

Third, master the format of writing "plan" and make plans according to your actual situation.

Question 4: "After-class writing" requires students to feel after watching wonderful TV programs, stimulate interest, embody personality, guide students to grasp the starting point, clarify the main idea, express their true feelings and organize exchanges. "Revising composition" requires students to focus on the important role of punctuation marks in correctly expressing emotions in their own practice.

Based on the arrangement and characteristics of the above textbooks, I designed a big composition for students in this unit-writing comments.

Third, design reasons: students must record one thing after finishing their impressions, and it must be something that students think is relatively new, and students have something to say. In this way, the feelings written by students must be the embodiment of their inner world. In this way, this composition combines the students' compositions of this unit with the requirements of exercises 1, 2, 4, and achieves the purpose of brevity. Combined with the writing impression level of grade seven students, before this writing, I made a corresponding explanation, so that students can know what they are doing first and most of them can write. At the same time, teachers according to students

There are always some encounters in life, which can explain the meaning of "happiness" in my heart.

"Don't talk to strangers on the train." "Don't eat what strangers give." "Don't walk around in the carriage." Accompanied by my parents' nagging, I went to the railway station. When I got on the train, the noisy box was packed and I had to bump around. "I finally found a seat." I sat down after putting down my luggage.

Here comes a family of three. A woman holds a little girl in one hand and a little boy in the other. The arrival of the three of them made the carriage full of vitality. Their brother and sister played in the carriage, attracting countless passengers to take care of them.

"Kid, what are you doing alone in such a far place?" When the woman saw me alone, she asked, "I'm going to my grandmother's house to play." Thinking of my parents' entrustment, I stopped talking to her and she stopped talking to me.

A person is just bored, so he puts on headphones and falls asleep against the window. Between dreams and waking up, I suddenly felt itchy on my face. My parents' words flashed in my subconscious and I woke up suddenly. A pair of bright eyes look straight at my eyes, it's that little girl! Unconsciously, I touched my pocket. Oh! Fortunately, there is no shortage of money.

The woman saw my discomfort and hurried away with the little girl. Everything was calm again, and I had nothing to do, so I took out potato chips from my bag to kill time. Their brother and sister had a good time in the carriage. I wanted to give them some, but thinking that I was just a stranger to them, I took back the hand I just wanted to extend.

"Sister, why don't you play with us?" The little girl stared at me with watery eyes. "Because, because ..." Was speechless by a little girl. "Sister, here you are." A rough-skinned litchi looks out of place in her white and tender hands. "This litchi is so sweet." Looking at her Ming Che's eyes, my psychological defense line was disintegrated. Play with them. This is happiness, isn't it? Being trusted and trusting each other is happiness?

But the happy time is always short, and in a blink of an eye, it's time to leave.

After washing the train, the little girl still held my hand until her brother came to call her. "Sister, will we meet again?" "I'm sure I will!" After that, she gave me a bag of lychee, and then took her brother's hand and skipped away. I looked at their backs and became smaller, lighter and disappeared. ...

Yes, litchi peel is like a protective film between people. But protecting yourself can also hurt people who want to be close to you. He tirelessly treats each other honestly under the "protective film".

Happiness is actually very simple. Being honest and trusting each other is the simplest happiness.

In the sky, birds need wings; On the land, flowers need sunshine; On land, I need books. When I was growing up, books were my inseparable partners and my mentor.

The famous dramatist Shakespeare once said: "Books are the nourishment of the whole world. Without books in life, there seems to be no sunshine; Wisdom without books is like a bird without wings. " These short sentences fully illustrate the importance of books to us.

I like reading very much, but I am a famous bookworm in my class. Hold a book in class, sleep with a book, and rest with a book. If you visit my room at any time, you will find that my room is a small library. The bookshelf is full of grimm's fairy tales, outlaws of the marsh, 100,000 whys, and the bedside is full of romance of the Three Kingdoms, small peas by the window and magic school buses. As long as I have time, I will immerse myself in the ocean of this book, because books make me gain knowledge and happiness. Mom always said that when I was immersed in this book, even one hundred and eighty cows couldn't pull me.

I remember, I once read a book "Two Wan Li under the Sea", which mainly talked about a French professor who started a strange and dangerous underwater adventure in order to prove his idea, because an unknown underwater creature was recognized as a monster in the ocean: he was attacked and came to a submarine named "Parrot" ... Finally, he was blown back to land by a powerful tornado ... For him, this adventure. I am proud of his bravery. Similarly, I feel sorry for not knowing the ending of the story. I am even more admired and proud of his strength and perseverance.

If I come across some good words, sentences and paragraphs in the process of reading, I will extract them from my accumulation book and read them aloud as soon as I have time. Because it helps to enhance the memory of these words, sentences and paragraphs, it is also very convenient to use in writing.

This good book grew up with me and made me feel the beauty of classicism. This good book has accompanied me through these twelve spring and autumn periods and taken me through the long river of history; This good book welcomes tomorrow's glory with me, teaches me how to live and experiences the ups and downs of life with me.

If a bird has no wings, it can't fly; Without the sun, flowers will not bloom; If I don't have books, I can't grow up better! Book, thank you, a friend who grew up with me.

I was curious, naughty and lovely in my childhood, and various personalities promoted my growth. Many interesting things have happened on this rugged road of growth. ...

In the early morning, a beam of sunshine came in through the gap in the curtain, just shining on a bag of peanuts on the table. I staggered around barefoot and followed the warm sunshine to the high table. I looked around, and my goal was locked in the mushroom chair under the table. I climbed up the stool carefully and barely reached a bag of peanuts that looked delicious on the table.

My little hand came to my father with a baby. My father smiled, as if he understood my mind, smiled and touched my head, and said kindly, "This is peeling peanuts for greedy cats!" "

After that, he immediately peeled it for me, my dad peeled it for me one by one, and I wolfed it down one by one. Suddenly, a strange idea came to my mind: since the mouth can eat that nose, can it? Driven by curiosity, I chose a peanut the size of a finger and carefully stuffed it into my small nostril.

Just put it in, I didn't respond at all, so I took another one and stuffed it in. After a while, I seemed to notice something was wrong and my nose was red. Suddenly I felt a sharp pain. "Wow", I suddenly cried, and my devoted father turned pale at the first sight of his red face. The feeling be nasty under, he let me out in one breath, but I .. Dad told me not to worry, so I just know:

I dreamed that my nose was disobedient, and two annoying peanuts were playing in my nostrils, but they couldn't scream. I am so anxious that I regret what I have done. ...

A beam of sunshine brought me back to reality from my dream. I breathe fresh air and feel very comfortable. Touch my nose, huh? Why is it missing? I found my father curiously again. It turned out that my dad pulled out the peanuts while I was sleeping! A disaster has subsided!

When you grow up, you will always be curious about this and that. It drives my enthusiasm and yearning for external things, and it accompanies me to grow up happily!