Dear Tom:

I'm sorry to hear that you failed in the final math exam, but what worries me most is that you are depressed when you face failure.

As senior three students, we have all participated in different types of exams, experienced successes and failures. There is no doubt that we should take a positive attitude towards our setbacks. We should spare no effort to analyze the causes of failure, which can help us avoid repeating similar mistakes. Only by finding out the reason of failure can we make progress in our study. As for your anxiety, I think doing some exercise is good for you, because it can give you some time to recover your physical and mental health, so that we can continue to study energetically and efficiently.

I hope all of the above can help you. Let's work together to turn our dreams into reality.

Yours,

Wang Hua

Test analysis: this is a letter, but it only gives a topic and has no specific content. It belongs to an open composition, and the title is: Let you write a letter to Tony to encourage him to regain his confidence and realize his dream. Candidates have more room to play freely. Candidates are required to have high comprehensive ability and strong ability to plan the layout and organize the main points of the article. When you finish an open composition, you should first choose a familiar phrase or sentence pattern. Within your ability, you should give changes when choosing sentence patterns, because then you can better control it. At the same time, we should also choose appropriate conjunctions to organize all the points into a complete whole, such as ideas, further, last and so on.

The highlights show that the language of the model essay is concise, and some good phrases and sentences are used: and … and as for turning our dreams into reality, what worries me most is that you are depressed when you face failure. There is no doubt that we should take a positive attitude towards our setbacks. This sentence uses a fixed sentence pattern, so we should spare no effort to analyze the reasons for the failure. This can help us avoid repeating similar mistakes. This sentence uses non-restrictive attributive clauses. Only by finding out the reason of failure can we make progress in our study. I think doing some exercise is good for you, because it can give you some time to recover your physical and mental health, so that we can continue to study energetically and efficiently. This sentence uses the adverbial clause of result, which is guided by so that.