Close? Keys? Words: math teacher, teacher, grade six, 550 words.

Words: 550 words composition

This article applies to: the sixth grade of primary school.

Composition source:

This composition is about 550 words in grade six of primary school. The topic is My Math Teacher, Miss Luo. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. My math teacher is Mr Luo. She is lively when giving lectures, with a smile on her face, which gives people a sense of intimacy, just like her mother is taking care of us. Before I bought my supporting equipment, Mr. Luo said to me in a kind voice; Di Xiaoyue, buy a bag tomorrow!

I said; Well, a good teacher. The teacher's smile leaked again, but the teacher's anger was unusual. Teacher Luo is about 1.89 meters, with a very suitable figure, small eyes, a pointed nose and a small cherry mouth. What is striking is her eyes, gentle and stern. It is a metaphor that I dare not raise my hand in class, and the teacher looks at me with those gentle eyes as if to say; Raise your hand at ease It doesn't matter if the answer is wrong. If it is wrong, the teacher will correct it for you. Be bold. The teacher believes in you, and you are the best. That's when I dare to raise my hand. When a classmate didn't do his homework, the teacher looked at him with a pair of stern eyes, and the classmate who didn't finish his homework immediately made up. This is my teacher. Do you like her? Teacher's comment: The little author introduced his math teacher in this composition. By describing the teacher's appearance and personality characteristics, the image of the teacher is clearly shaped. In particular, the shaping of teachers' personality characteristics, through careful observation of teachers at ordinary times, depicts teachers' gentle and severe personality characteristics, leaving a deep impression on readers. What needs to be pointed out in the composition is that punctuation is not very standardized, and some sentences are not broken. In addition, it is best to divide the first paragraph into the following paragraphs, so that the composition level is clearer. "The teacher's smile leaked out again" was changed from "leakage" to "dew". It is more appropriate to change "fit" into "symmetry" in "fit". The metaphor "dare not raise your hand in class" was changed to "give an example". (China famous teacher: Miss Wang) 22: 22: 00 on August 28, 2009