1. I can read the example "Dad's hobby" with the help of the tip of "Focus on exercise" and understand that this lesson is to write a characteristic of the characters (like collecting tickets) through specific examples.

2. Through discussion, with the help of the teacher, the method of writing people's hobbies is further clarified:

(1) Consider what hobbies this character has.

(2) Find specific examples to illustrate this hobby.

(3) be able to write your own titles, imitate examples, and write a character's hobbies through one or two specific examples.

Teaching emphases and difficulties:

Key point: show a characteristic of the character through specific examples.

Difficulties: master the method of material selection.

Preparation before class:

Please observe carefully before class, think carefully, choose the person you are most familiar with to interview and collect relevant information.

Teaching time: two class hours

first kind

A brief introduction to poetry recitation:

Students, you must like reciting poems very much, right? Teacher, this is a poem by two children. Who will recite them for you?

Performance: Xiaohua's dream and playing with plasticine.

Recite names

After reading it, ask: What did you hear from Little Flower Dream and Playing with Plasticine? Answer by roll call.

Summary: The students spoke very well. Even Xiaohua loves to dream and plasticine loves to play games. Besides, what about us? We all have hobbies, but each of us has different hobbies. Please look at the hobby of "Dad" in the example.

Second, guide learning examples, clear writing essentials:

1. Open the textbook and read dad's hobby by name.

2. Students listen and think:

(1) What is Dad's hobby?

(2) What are the things written in Example * *?

3. Discuss the above two questions after reading it.

4. Students read "Discussion on the Main Points of Homework" by themselves.

5. Name and tell us what it is.

6. Summary, blackboard writing:

A person-a feature-one or two things [action, language ...] [concrete and clear]

3. Seriously organize discussion and master the method of material selection;

1. Guide students to grasp the main features of the characters.

Who is your most familiar person?

(2) What are his or her characteristics?

Enthusiastic to help others, like to brag, filial to parents, addicted to alcohol, like playing cards, obsessed with reading ...)

(3) Summary: A person has many characteristics, and different people have different characteristics. We should write down the main characteristics of the characters.

(4) deskmate communication: Which function are you going to write?

2. Guide students to choose one or two things that can best express the characteristics of the characters.

(1) (projection demonstration) According to the requirements of the topic, select the following materials:

Topic: A good classmate who helps others.

Material: A. Li Jing helps her mother clean the floor and table every day.

B. Li Jing is not afraid of the scorching sun and buys watermelons for her neighbor's grandmother.

Teacher C asked Li Jing to send her exercise book to the office, and she happily agreed.

D Once, Li Jing had a fever and the doctor told her to have a good rest at home. She still insists on making up lessons for her classmates.

(2) Discuss and communicate.

(3) Summary: The best material can not only highlight the characteristics of the characters, but also be novel.

(4) deskmate communication: Which one or two things are you going to choose?

Guide students to write examples clearly and concretely.

(Distribute "Busy Dad" materials to students)

1. Please be a little teacher and revise your composition according to the tips given in the article.

2. Read the corrected composition by name.

5. Make clear the composition requirements and let students write.

Second lesson

Students continue to write, teachers tour to guide and point out problems in time.

Write a representative composition, read by name and comment collectively.

Three. Revise the composition.

Four. Copy the composition.

Attachment: Xiaohua's dream

Naughty breeze

Turn the dream of a small flower

Blast a crack

It wants to have a look.

In Xiaohua's dream

Are there any singers?

It wants to count.

In Xiaohua's dream

It is made up of several beautiful colors.

Who knows from that crack

Drop a few drops

The twisted sound of birds.

Plasticine game

Pinch a ball.

Pinch a square hut.

Pinch a flat drum.

Squeeze a long way

The world is really big.

Become round and square in your hands

Flat and long

The world is beautiful.

Not as beautiful as your sculpture.

You don't know where dad went.

You don't know where mom went.

You carved an eye. Dad's.

You carved an ear. Mom's.

Watching you laugh and listening to you cry.

You laughed and cried.

Are equally worth cherishing.

It is the most beautiful note in the world.

Finally, you start to shape yourself.

You carved a little golden sun.

It rises brightly in the small room.

So dad's sadness

Mother's pain

In your golden light

Leave quietly and silently

Busy dad

In my family, my father is the busiest because he likes to meddle.

Once, I ate at home. The doorbell rang. When I opened the door, it turned out to be Uncle Li next door. "Why? What can I do for you? " Dad asked with concern. Uncle Li said shyly, "Xiao Zhang, I have to trouble you." My light is broken, so I can't eat, so I have to invite you ... "Before he finished, my father waved and said," Oh, it's a piece of cake, let's go! " So, Dad and Uncle Li left. (The movements and demeanor of the characters are not specific enough, please add:

)

Half an hour later, I didn't see my father come back. Another hour passed, and I didn't see him. It took me two and a half hours to see my father come back. (The movements, demeanor and language of the characters are not specified, please add:

My father is very busy, ha, he regards helping others as his job.