This is my fourth-grade student's composition 1. He has short black hair, curved eyebrows and big eyes as bright as grapes. His mouth is always "sweet" under his small nose. Whenever guests come, he always takes the initiative to say hello. Do you know who he is? To tell you the truth, that's me, a handsome boy named Jing.
My greatest strength is my willingness to help others. Once in an art class, I saw my deskmate as anxious as a cat on hot bricks. She looked left and right, looking back and forth. I leaned over and asked her what was wrong. She said she didn't bring a marker. After listening, I reluctantly gave her the marker. She said happily, "Thank you."
I have another advantage to show off, that is, I am very athletic. In the second grade, I was born like a dark horse. In the rope skipping competition, I jumped 169 times a minute, and became the first in the boys' group of Grade Two. Look how good I am! I have both advantages and disadvantages, and the disadvantages are really embarrassing to say. I am a particularly careless child. In this math exam, I made several mistakes in the calculation questions on the math test paper, which caused me to lose a lot of points. When I got home, my mother scolded me.
If it weren't for my carelessness, I would have advanced several places, and I must get rid of this carelessness. This is me, a love to help others, a careless me.
This is my fourth grade student's composition 2. I am a bookworm in everyone's eyes, and real life is no exception: I can forget to eat and sleep in order to study. Besides paying attention to lectures in class, most of my Chinese achievements are obtained by reading extracurricular books.
Once my mother asked me to eat: "Cheng Cheng, come down to eat." But I saw the best part of the book. How can I put it down? So I will definitely ignore my mother, and even if I hear it, it will only go in one ear and out the other. In the end, it was estimated that my mother was impatient, plus she had long known the virtue of my bookworm son, and she was finally urged to go downstairs for dinner by her mother's "lion roar" But I still ate while reading, and accidentally bit it down, which made the whole family laugh, so I had to close the book and concentrate on eating.
Speaking of shortcomings, I have more shortcomings than advantages. My carelessness in doing my homework worries my parents; I don't know where I put my English summer homework this year. Alas, I have to make it up. Sometimes I think about it and can't sleep at night; Sometimes I will say something regardless of the occasion, which will make the people present laugh and cry and be at a loss. But please believe me, I will definitely turn my shortcomings into advantages in the future.
I am such a special little boy.
This is my fourth grade student composition 3. I have long black and shiny hair, fair skin, ruby eyes and a small cherry mouth.
I like dancing and want to be a national Latin dancer, because I have been learning Latin dance since I was a child, and I dance very well. I have also won gold, silver, bronze and trophies! Once a guest came to my house and I performed Latin dance. After a while, the guests cheered me on and made me dance one song after another, which exhausted me.
I have two greatest advantages: I am not afraid of hardship and fatigue. I am as busy as a bee every Saturday. Chinese, math and English are all in it. Talk about this and that in math for a while in the morning, but it's really fun to learn new knowledge. The teacher's homework is very serious. Every time the handwriting is neat, the correct rate is extremely high. Once the teacher asked us to do our homework in class. I took every picture seriously and looked at every question carefully.
No one is perfect! Every coin has its two sides. My weakness is that I like reading. Don't say this is a good thing. In the eyes of adults, this is a disadvantage. Whenever I have time, I pick up four or five books and read them with relish. It takes an hour or two to read them. Every time my grandmother strikes the table, I eat it, which gives my grandmother a headache.
This is me-Zhang Xinyi, do you want to be friends with me?
This is my fourth-grade student's composition 4: Hi! Hello, classmates, teachers and parents! My name is Zhou, and ten years have passed. I am taller, bigger, smarter and smarter. But my name hasn't changed, it's still Zhou, which means my parents want me to be smart and happy. Although I am only 10 years old, I am also excellent. Do not believe you will know after reading this article.
When it comes to painting, I am very interested. I draw quite well in class. Every time I take part in the competition, I am mostly there, but I don't necessarily win the prize. However, our family still has several "glorious" award-winning certificates. But I also failed. Once I didn't draw well, I dropped a drop of ink on my painting, which made my painting stained with a lot of ink.
What else! I am a glutton. As soon as I make something I like at home, I will grab what I like, regardless of others. People see me like a tomboy. Of course, they are not sure. I'm afraid of the dark. Once I went to Happy Valley to play and arrived at the entrance of the haunted house. I was afraid, so I didn't go in. Later, I was dragged in by my father. I went in safe and sound, and came out with a full face of pain-I was so scared that I didn't mix up!
Hey! I have advantages and disadvantages, but I will live happily forever. That's who I am. Would you like to make friends with me?
Teacher's comment: The opening sentence is more vivid! The "fear of the dark" part is well introduced, and "safe and sound" will be used, and the ending is very attractive!