Caring is the deep concern of one heart for another, and it is the bond connecting family, friendship and love. Concern is a family affection, a wisp of acacia, a kind of happiness. ?

Caring is a life form, a spiritual place and a psychological magnetic field that everyone should look for and cherish. The best way to identify the depth of feelings is to pay attention to the length of time. The beautiful legend of Peacock Flying Southeast, the eternal swan song of Meng Jiangnu Crying for the Great Wall, the joys and sorrows of butterfly lovers, and the wonderful sentence of "I miss you like the moon, and it decreases every night" all describe that your face is getting thinner and thinner because of your concern until you pay your life and leave us a true and sincere sad and beautiful story. 、

Concern is a cup of rich emotional nectar, and it is a farewell blessing. Parents' concern for their children is like a cloud, which floats around with the birds in the sky, across the Qian Shan and haunts the children's hearts. The concern between brothers and sisters is like a mountain stream, clear and transparent. As long as the mountain is not old, it keeps flowing, drinking songs and splashing water all the way. The concern between husband and wife is like graceful words, lingering and far away, and acacia often makes tears stick to the towel. There is also the kind of concern between friends that does not contain blood relationship and is not mixed with selfish distractions, which often gives people endless strength and courage.

Concern is a precious emotion between people. It has no false impurities and no utilitarian color. Caring is a generous and selfless dedication, a deep blessing and a silent prayer. Care is not an illusory mirage, but real details and actions. Buying a pill and squeezing a little toothpaste is a sign of concern; Asking "good morning" and saying "good night" are expressions of concern; A greeting card, a letter from home, a phone call, a message ... are all manifestations of love.

Attention makes people taste the ups and downs of life and adds a beautiful scenery to life. If there is no concern in the world, it is like plants lacking sunshine and rain; A person who doesn't care about anything is like a walking corpse. There is life in the air, and it is difficult to glow with the brilliance of life. Life needs warmth, sweetness, spring breeze and summer rain ... worry is the whisper of the soul and the dialogue between the hearts. Caring for others and being cared for by others is a kind of happiness. Let each of us know how to care, taste care, learn to care, and make life colorful, so that people's world will become more colorful and enter life. With care, there is emotional sustenance. "The thread in the loving mother's hand makes clothes for the wayward boy's body" is full of family care; "Young people leave home when they are old, and the local accent has not changed." It is the concern of overflowing homesickness; "I wish you a long life and a thousand miles of beauty" is the concern of wandering love; "It's a pity that one brother climbs, but one dogwood is missing"; "Hug home, for me, as a symbol of our love" is the sustenance of love; "I advise you to drink a glass of wine, and the West will leave Yangguan for no reason", which is the implication of concern.

I found a kitten, which was abandoned by a big cat and called diu diu. Now it has not opened its eyes, and its body is not as big as a mobile phone. Feed it cat milk powder every two hours, and always wipe your ass, because there is no mother cat to take care of it, for fear that it will suffocate. The temperature must be guaranteed. It's so cold now that we have to put it in a small box full of cotton and put it on the heater.

But I have to go to work during the day. I'm worried about such a small kitten. My mother can take care of it at home after retirement, but I can't let go. ?

Is this simple and common, but is it so worrying?

The moon without face

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The bright moon is flawless and beautiful.

From Shang and Zhou Dynasties to Qin and Han Dynasties.

In the three waves of history, the poet sailed by boat, with a concern for the golden sky, and stood out from the severe recovery in Kyoto.

Invite a bright moon? Opposite threesome

If there is no concern for this secular world, then the poet Taibai's invitation to a cup proves that he still has some nostalgia for the moon. This arrogant and somewhat romantic person has experienced ups and downs, enjoyed luxurious food and suffered from being trapped by fame and fortune. Looking at the clouds above Zhuge, thinking about singing, there will be an eternal farewell.

This faceless moon makes the poet try his best to fantasize.

Nine days later, the Jade Emperor and Chang 'e waved sleeves, and flat peaches were thick and juicy ... Even though he was depressed, he was still very angry and chanted, "I drank alone. No one is with me "and reading" brings me happiness until the end of spring ".

Mizuki Hajime now? Camel smiles

Looking at modern times, the definition of a poet may no longer be narrow. For the moon, the poet regards it as a concern. Haizi was lying on the tracks during the day, presumably because he didn't want the moon to see him sad. In the cold green night, Haizi is worried about her sister. At the beginning of the full moon, she caught a glimpse of the moon, which made her writing more meaningful, so she was carefree.

This round of moon without face is my sister's gentle face.

Smoke Cage Leng Yue? Qinhuai lamp shadow

"Smoke cage cold water moon cage sand. Stop near Qinhuai restaurant at night. Strong women in business do not know how to hate the country, but also sing backyard flowers across the river. " Du Mu always lingers sadly on the Qinhuai River.

"Flowers in the Garden of Yushu" came to a sombre end, and the tears of the king of subjugation flashed down. Facing this faceless moon, I'm worried about the soul of this moon and the survival of the whole world. I have seen many beautiful bustling images and chivalrous and kind swordsmen. Du Mu sings the moon and goes boating in the blue sky.

Throughout the ages, the sound of chanting and worrying about the moon has been circulating intermittently.

There is no doubt that the moon should bear the weight of history. The poet's care gives ChanJuan unparalleled color. Even without a face, she is still moving and beautiful.

It is care that makes the moon look moving and makes the poet's heart yearn for the light selflessly and fearlessly.

Concerned about the bright moon, the poet sees how sad people's livelihood is.

Paying attention to the moon without face, the poet pays attention to the whole world.

Looking up at the moon and looking down at homesickness, the burning moon carries too many unspeakable secrets.

With the guidance of the poet and the people's livelihood, people are not dreams for a long time, only those who read have that heart!

Comments: The moon is often synonymous with loneliness and concern. The author chose three subheadings, which made the concern and faint sadness so calm, and could not help but immerse the readers in the artistic conception of poetry. From the perspective of poetry, the author pays attention to handwriting, and uses poetry and parallelism in many places, which is more beautiful. At the end, it is obvious that the article is more complete by focusing on the topics of concern. (Hu Xinyuan, Class One and Class Four, Jinhua No.4 Middle School)

Grow up with love

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Love is the true meaning of life, care is the source and soul of love, and every care is the edification and sublimation of emotion. ?

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Trouble is like rain, which can help you wash away your irritability and make you cool; Caring is like the wind, which can help you sail and succeed; Caring for the sun can help you get rid of the cold and feel warm. My father's exquisite movements made me feel the most sincere love in the world.

It turns out that I have been growing up in care!

The smoke smells good.

Since I was in the third grade, I have been out early and returned late, and I have little time to chat with my family. Suddenly one day, I found my father smoking. Soon, he smelled smoke, especially at night, and the whole room smelled of smoke.

One day, I came home and heard what my father and uncle were discussing. I looked through the door. "Well, my daughter is going to take the senior high school entrance examination. See if she is so busy these two days, will her body be too much? " Dad lit his cigarette with a lighter. Uncle said affectionately, "Nothing, just these days." At this time, my father took a deep breath of smoke and gently spit it out. "The child bitter also won't say anything. If she has any difficulties in study and life, we can help her. " The words sound just fell and my vision was blurred by something. ...

It turns out that my father cares about me day and night, and smoking is just a catharsis he cares about. When I relived the smell of smoke, I found that it had a faint fragrance, which was my father's love and concern for me.

The light is warm.

Entering the third grade, more and more study makes me a little breathless, and I often have inexplicable irritability. I always close the door of my study and light the lamp alone until late at night.

When I am immersed in studying hard, my father always walks into the room quietly. I noticed it a little. I just looked up at him and buried myself in various mathematical formulas. Then I seem to feel a flash overhead. I looked up in surprise and saw my father carefully adjusting the illumination angle of the floor lamp until the light dispelled every inch of shadow on the exercise book, so that I could look at the exercise book for a long time without being so tired. Looking at the bright exercise books, I suddenly felt a warm current. I looked up and saw my father's kind smile. ...

Only then did I understand that my father's concern for me, like that faint light, does not need to be as dazzling as sunshine, but always brings me endless warmth in the dark.

Look with a smile

My father sent me to school again. When I left, I said goodbye to my father with a bright smile. Father said, "Go in first, I'm leaving." I don't want to trudge to school.

I suddenly had an idea: look back at my father. Just as I came to the corner, I stopped to look back. I saw my father still standing at the school gate, and his affectionate eyes were saying goodbye to me. There is a faint smile on my father's face that I have never seen before. In his eyes, I found the most beautiful thing in the world-love.

I will never forget my father's concern and love.

Colorful flowers, they accepted the baptism of the sun, the moisture of the drizzle, and paid a graceful face to decorate the world. I accept my father's dear watering and grow up under his care!

Comments: This article does not list earth-shattering events to express the topic of "caring", but uses three most common things in life, which are very real and have real feelings. This article is reminiscent of Zhu Ziqing's prose "The Back". Indeed, there are many similarities between the two. The description of "father" is very subtle, which makes the image of this loving father really appear in front of us.

The article is not long, but it makes people have many associations. For example, "he smells of smoke, especially at night" will remind people that "dad" is smoking and waiting for "I" to come back at night; Another example is "there is a faint smile on my father's face that I have never seen before", which reminds people of his concern for me in recent years and rarely smiles. The author didn't write all this, but he didn't say anything. ? (Commentator: Class 1 and Class 4, Jinhua No.4 Middle School? Hao Changle)

Dots are human tears.

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Where was the past when it rained? A pool of broken ping, three points of spring, two points of concern, one point of missing. It doesn't seem to be a flower, but one thing is tears!

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Care about you on the other side

More than a hundred years ago, thunderstorms and heavy rains poured down. The violent wind rushed to the boat carrying the child, and the child and the mother on the shore cried bitterly, but to no avail. In this way, the flesh and blood are separated. The wind is whistling, and it smiles at this scene, laughing at the thin mother who is unable to change the fate of separation of flesh and blood. Time goes by, but Wan Li, thousands of miles away, can't stop the mother from thinking about her son. Mother, a great mother, after decades of struggle, finally drove away the darkness and ushered in the light.

Finally, on a sunny morning, my mother sailed to find the child who was lost many years ago. However, the child hesitated. He lingered on the coast and refused to get on board. ...

Mother kept calling: Taiwan Province Province, Taiwan Province Province ... The fishing lights on the fishing boats are still on. Through the slight firelight, there are mother's hazy tears, and even more, there is mother's endless concern for the other side-Taiwan Province Province-her dear child!

Pay attention to the eternal hero

Late at night, the dream sank, the snow fell to the ground, pale the dream of the wanderer; The white snow fell on the pole, taking away the bright smiling faces of the electric workers; Full of passion and meaning, please accept our care and wish you all the best.

Snowstorms, in this war without smoke, in this war between man and nature, storms and severe cold again and again have never frightened the people of China. They-three ordinary and great heroes, Luo Wenhai, Luo Changming and Zhou Jinghua, worked for six days in a row and boarded? 59 meters? In the aerial work ... they finally fell in the snow.

Heroes of all ages, go all the way! The clear sky is our blessing and concern for you, and the drizzle is our tears to see you off!

Caring for lost compatriots

In that ruins, in those lovely schoolbags, we seem to see the warmth and peace of this hot land, and we can also feel the greatness and courage of the Sichuan people. In order to protect four students, Miss Tan who sheltered her children with her own body, a substitute teacher who saved her children from being crushed to death, and a great mother, she texted "I love you forever, my child". Those young teachers who hold students' hands tightly and never let go have given us too much shock. I can only observe silently, and I can only send a figure I care about to die with you.

Care, a kind of love from the heart, because of care, wanderers who travel far away from home come back with tears; Because of concern, the lost compatriots are no longer lonely; Because you care, there will be tears flowing quietly in people's eyes!

Comments: This article adopts the form of subheadings to organize the full text. The article is well-structured and clear. Inscription "Where was the past when it rained?" ? A pool of broken ping, three points of spring, two points of concern, one point of missing. It doesn't seem to be a flower, but one thing is tears! "Poetic, for the full text made a good start, let readers shine at the moment, fascinating, worth learning.

The content of the article revolves around three facts: "Taiwan Province Province, snowstorm and earthquake". It describes delicately and organically combines facts and feelings. The facts are true and touching, and the feelings are rich and warm. "Deep night, heavy dream, falling snow, pale wandering dream; The white snow fell on the pole, taking away the bright smiling faces of the electric workers; Passionate, full of deep meaning, with our concern, I wish you a pleasant journey ",let the feelings melt in the scenery, infect people's hearts, very vivid." "

The only deficiency is that the third subtitle has only one paragraph, and a short summary should be added to make the structure consistent. In addition, some words and expressions are inappropriate and need to be revised and polished. (Commentator: Class 1 and Class 4, Jinhua No.4 Middle School? Zhang)

worry

Some people care about their families, because home is a warm harbor; Some people care about friends, because friends are intimate partners; Some people care about the motherland, because the motherland is the eternal mother ...? ... but have you ever met anyone who cares about a cup? A broken porcelain cup with a broken handle.

Last summer vacation, I went to my mother's breakfast shop to help. Every morning when the sun is dim, I make soybean milk for customers, send it to every table happily, and then accept the praise from my uncles and aunts. However, there was an old man who never said much, let alone praised him. Every morning, he beats soybean milk with a broken cup. The cup is quite old, even if it is broken, the cup body is full of cracks in ceramic glaze. But these are nothing to the old people. He always holds the cup with rapt attention. Several times, I tried to help the old man hold the cup full of soybean milk, but the old man Sihao was ungrateful and snorted sullenly: "No, I will do it myself!" " "It's like I'm sure I'll break the cup.

I am quite dissatisfied with this. Just a broken cup. Why bother? Hey, is this a symbol of love? Looking at the trembling back of the old man, a bitterness welled up in my heart.

"Mao-"the sound of broken porcelain resounded through the whole shop. Ah! It was the baby cup that the old man cared most about that was broken! The reckless young man was at a loss, came to his senses, apologized and lost money. The old man shook his head and said, "No, there is another cup like this at home."

People froze, and I froze, because the old man was tolerant and generous. I was so excited that I filled a big bowl of soybean milk with a porcelain bowl in the shop and sent it to the old man's table. "Grandpa, that's very generous of you. This bowl of soybean milk is for you to drink! " I respectfully served the bowl. I don't know why, the old man hesitated for a long time, and finally took the soybean milk. "Girl, why don't I buy this bowl?" The old man's sudden words puzzled me. Suddenly, there was a mist in my eyes, and the smoke was misty, and tears poured out from nowhere. Because, I heard the old man say, "I have hepatitis B, so I can't use the bowl in the shop."

It turns out that the old man cares not about the cup, but about other people's lives!

Roman? Roland said, "Love of life is the first virtue." The old man's broken cup is filled with the sweetest, most precious and noblest concern-life!

Comments: This article is a good choice of materials. The author told us an ordinary and touching story with social life as the theme. The language is fluent and the thinking is quite hard. Doubt-dispel doubts, puzzled-suddenly enlightened, tears streaming down her face: "It turns out that the old man is not worried about the cup, he is deeply concerned about other people's lives!" Finally, "Roman? Roland said: "Love of life is the first virtue." The old man's broken cup is filled with the sweetest, most precious and noblest concern-life! "Publicity theme, let readers respect.

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