As we all know, Chinese has occupied a large part in the past years' exams, and composition is also an exam with the highest score in Chinese papers. How to examine the questions is the first step in writing a composition. The following is to introduce the method analysis of reviewing the composition for everyone:
Propositional composition:
When writing a proposition, we should carefully examine the "eyes" and "limits" in the topic. "Title eye" is the key word in the title. "Title limit" refers to the limited narrative scope of the index question.
My good friend.
Tip: On the stormy road of life, friends can shelter you from the wind and rain and share your troubles. A friend will always extend a hand of friendship. Friendship is an escalator when you climb a mountain. Please introduce your best friend with one or two things and write down his characteristics. Write a narrative of more than 450 words.
Interpretation of the exam: the core word in the title is "good friend", so this is a narrative mainly written by people. The article should be described by the first person "I". Write the "characteristics" of a good friend with one or two things.
Semi-proposition composition
Semi-propositional composition refers to a type of composition in which only a part of the composition topic appears and the other part is supplemented by the candidates themselves. To write a semi-propositional composition, we must first analyze the meaning expressed in the existing text part of the topic. Then read carefully the requirements and restrictions on the blank space in the prompt. Then expand the association according to the prompt and search for the most suitable material to write. When writing supplementary questions, we should make full use of the characteristics of free choice of semi-propositional composition, and within the scope of prompt requirements, choose what we think we want to write most and write it on the horizontal line with the greatest confidence.
For example: _ _ gives _ _
Tip: People often say that "giving" is happiness. We feel the care given by others, the tempering given by society and the enlightenment given by life. I also gave others trust, social love and enthusiasm for life ... Please choose appropriate materials around "giving" and write a documentary composition of more than 400 words.
Interpretation of examination questions: The key word of this question is "giving", which means "giving", including material and spiritual giving. Giving is a two-way street. It can be given to me by others or I can give it to others. In the "prompt", we should pay special attention to the sentence "people often say that giving is happy", which points out the feelings brought by giving and sets the emotional tone for the article, that is, "happiness".
Several small sentences in the "hint" also played an auxiliary role in selecting materials. "Care given by others, tempering given by society and enlightenment given by life" implies the first angle of material selection. Others, society and life give "I" and "I" is the receiver; Another angle is to write that I give "trust in others, love for society and enthusiasm for life", and "I" is the executor. The ellipsis that follows covers more content. No matter which material you choose, you should pay attention to the process of "giving" and the feeling of "happiness".
Write a composition for this range.
The idea of this composition proposition is to define a "bull's-eye" first, and then ask the candidates to write their own narrative. The proposer provides concise guidance hints for the candidates in the proposition. These tips give candidates an important guide in selecting materials and thinking of exercises, and give them room to play their individuality in understanding the theme.
When reading the tips, you should first grasp the key words. Secondly, the tips often contain the provisions of the proposer on the scope of material selection. When reading the tips, you must pay attention to analyzing the meanings of the terms in the tips. Learn to grasp the "material selection point" in the prompt and establish contact with your own material accumulation.
Take the composition test questions of the 20xx Heping District Level 6 Upgrade Examination as an example;
In the festive and lively Spring Festival, happy Children's Day, happy and warm birthdays, colorful weekends … we always get together with our family, friends, teachers and classmates. How unforgettable the scene is and how unforgettable the story is. Please choose suitable materials around the most impressive party and write a documentary composition of more than 450 words with a self-made topic.
Interpretation: This is a self-propositional composition that provides core words. The core word is "get together", which means happy reunion. The first sentence in the prompt clarifies the scope of material selection from two aspects. "In the festive and lively Spring Festival, happy Children's Day, happy and warm birthdays, colorful weekends ..." The listed' life scenes' are familiar to candidates, and at the same time, the ellipsis also omits other times and scenes, so that everyone can have something to write and say. "We always get together with family, friends, teachers and classmates." Obviously, the article should be described in the first person "I", and things happen between "I" and family, friends, teachers and classmates.
The second sentence is "How unforgettable the scene is and how unforgettable the story is." On the one hand, reminding candidates to write "gathering" should not only have a scene description, but also be supported by a complete story. On the other hand, remind candidates that the emotional tone of the article is nostalgic and unforgettable.
The third sentence "the most impressive gathering" highlights the unforgettable story, clarifies the typicality of material selection, and points out the core word "gathering" to write happy feelings.
By interpreting the tips at different levels and considering these factors comprehensively, our examination process can be considered complete and we can correctly understand the meaning of the questions.
Xiao Shengchu introduces composition 2 Dear middle school leaders:
Hello!
First of all, I sincerely thank you for browsing my self-recommendation letter in your busy schedule, which has opened a door of hope for an enthusiastic primary school student.
I am a sixth-grade student of Qixia Experimental Primary School. My name is Ding Yiqun. I was born in May 1999. 20xx entered Qixia Key Experimental Primary School in September, and has been there ever since. Time flies, time flies. In recent years, under the education and training of school teachers, I have grown from an ignorant child to a versatile teenager today.
I am a cheerful and lively girl, because I have a particularly humorous father and a lovely mother. My father is a particularly open-minded person. Maybe other children will be scolded for doing something wrong, but my father is different. He will listen carefully to my reasons for doing something wrong and never get angry, so I can do what I think is right without scruple. If I know that I was wrong in the future, I will simply admit my mistake. And my mother, who is the person who accompanies me the most, will patiently teach me a lot of life truths, so I am never afraid of encountering difficulties. She is a typical optimist. So there are always many children around me. I like chatting with familiar partners and bringing new friends into my "circle of friends", so my circle of friends is always expanding, but this does not mean that I am a playful child. My grades are also the pride of my parents. I was a top student at the school level for three consecutive years in Grade 456. Teachers all praised me for my strong organizational discipline and team consciousness. Although I still don't understand how this will affect me, my father explained to me that if I keep doing this, I will be happier in the future.
Speaking of playing, I am actually active and quiet. When I am quiet, no one can bear to disturb me. I can stay still all day for a book. I especially like things related to literature and art. I read all Zheng's works when I was a child. When I am older, I want to see the works of Huang Beijia and Yang. Later, when I felt that I couldn't satisfy myself, my father began to subscribe to Youth Literature and Art, and later bought me a particularly expensive set of Encyclopedia of China, which made me very happy. I think it is also because of this that I won the first place in the school grade group several times in the composition competition. And my mother said that girls should not only be able to write, but also have' talent'. So I like painting, listening to music and humming, and dancing while singing. In short, my goal is to be a "talented woman" in the new era. I am not only proficient in piano, chess, calligraphy and painting, but also brave and enterprising, better than boys! In the third grade of primary school, I won the second prize of Qixia District Science and Technology Competition. In other words, I may not only need to be good at Chinese, but also good at foreign languages, so I am studying English very diligently and won an award for English writing! So you see, I'm not lying. I am really the pride of my parents.
I will graduate soon, and I really hope to study in an excellent school, so as to lay a solid foundation for my four-year study in junior high school. I have been longing for your school for a long time, eager to become a student of your school and start my junior high school life. I sincerely recommend myself to you with a sincere heart and vision for your school. I know that the past does not represent the future, but I think diligence is the real connotation. I am full of confidence in my future study and life. I will continue to study hard, constantly improve myself and strive to become a qualified middle school student.
Tian Xingjian's gentleman strives for self-improvement, and the terrain Kun's gentleman carries things with morality.
I look forward to being admitted to your school!
I am here to convey
Salute!
I am an ordinary person, not as graceful as Chang 'e, and not as graceful as Shi. Small eyes, small nose, small mouth, appearance gives people the feeling. Introverted, usually taciturn, do not like to express themselves. It's just the unanimous evaluation of teachers and classmates. I don't deny that I am such a person. When I encounter setbacks and setbacks, I never show the slightest in front of everyone. I just cried behind my back and brushed away the clouds in my heart. When everything goes well in my studies, I, like most girls, laugh and jump to express my joy, but I can't be as indifferent as some girls. It's just a big feature of me, maybe a big shortcoming! Painting is my specialty. No matter in books or notebooks, there are small animals, little people, distant mountains and close-ups everywhere. You can draw a few strokes when you are happy, and your happiness will be displayed incisively and vividly. Once, you won the second prize in a painting competition! Advantages exist, disadvantages are inevitable, and impulsiveness is my biggest shortcoming. After several profound lessons and careful consideration, although this shortcoming has been greatly corrected, I still need to make greater efforts to completely get rid of it. This is me, a lively and lovely little girl. Do you like making friends with me?
Xiao Shengchu's Introduction Essay 4 Hello everyone, I am a girl, my name is Liu Dezhi, and I come from Class 1, Grade 6, Zhongtian Beijing Primary School. I like sports very much, and I get good grades in my class.
I am a very disciplined boy, and I am very good at math, but my English is not very good.
I believe that if I try my best, I will learn English well.
I hope I can study in this school, make more friends and study together.
I really want to be a member of this big family.
Thank you.
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Hello, my name is Liu Dezhi, and I come from Class 1, Grade 6, Zhongtian Beijing Primary School. I like sports very much, and I get good grades in my class. I am a lively girl.
I am good at math and poor at English, but I believe that I can learn this culture well as long as I work hard.
I hope to study in this school, make more friends and study hard together. I hope I can be a member of this family, thank you.
Xiao Shengchu introduced how to get high marks in Chinese, which made many students and parents miserable. Today, starting with the biggest score in Chinese-composition, I will explain the matters that should be paid attention to in junior high school.
A good composition, in addition to a healthy and vivid theme and beautiful and vivid words, should also have a complete, coherent and smooth structure, which can be summed up in eight words, namely "linking up and down, helping each other from beginning to end".
The structure of the article must be connected from top to bottom, which is also the embodiment of the coherence of the author's ideas in the article. This form of coherence can also reflect the coherence of the text, that is, form serves the content. All parts, paragraphs and sentences of the article should be closely linked and run through, so that the structure can be rigorous and perfect. A good structure will make the theme of the article prominent, the content clear and complete, the transition natural and smooth, and the article as a whole harmonious and unified. Otherwise, the structure of the article is chaotic, regardless of priority, even typical and vivid materials may be difficult to attract readers to read and appreciate. "Thought has a path, sentence by sentence, paragraph by paragraph, and the author of a good article will never go anywhere." (Ye Shengtao, "Learning Chinese Seriously").
The structure of the article must be meticulous, clear and impeccable, and any article should be an organic whole. Therefore, when writing a composition, we should carefully arrange the transition and cohesion between sentence paragraphs under the condition of selecting materials, take care of and respond to the beginning and end, so as to be coherent and take care of each other, and prevent disconnection and neglect one thing.
First, pay special attention to the clues of the article.
The so-called clue is the route that runs through the whole plot development and ideological and emotional development. It runs through all the characters, events and scenery in the article like a chain, making the article a unified artistic whole. In narrative, it runs through relevant events and characters, promotes the development of the plot and highlights the theme; In lyrical writing, clues become the basis of lyricism, making the theme prominent and scattered.
The article "Mr. Fujino" in junior high school textbooks takes the patriotism of the author as the bright line and the communication between the author and Mr. Fujino as the dark line, organically linking some plots and events, which embodies Mr. Fujino's noble qualities of being strict with students, seeking truth from facts, being rigorous and rigorous, and not having narrow national prejudice. These two clues blend with each other, but they all lead to the same goal, and both play a role throughout the whole paper. For example, in the article "Feeling Sincere Friendship", the author set a subtitle with "Friendship" as a clue, showing us three typical pictures of primary school students' life and showing the deep friendship between himself and his classmates. The article "Feeling the Four Seasons of Friendship" takes the four seasons' spring, summer, autumn and winter as clues, and expresses his sincere feelings for the friendship of the four seasons through appropriate and vivid metaphors. The four seasons run through the whole article, which is novel and unique, making the structure of the article even, clear and refreshing.
The second is tight and compact.
In other words, the layout of the article should pay attention to cohesion, the transition between paragraphs and sentences, and the correlation before and after, so as not to cause the content of each part to be squeezed out and separated.
1. transition.
Transition is an important means of article coherence. A good transition can make the article coherent, natural and smooth, and seamless. For example, in the ninth paragraph of the article "From Herb Garden to San Tan Yin Yue" that we have learned, "I don't know why my family sent me to the library-my cricket! My raspberry and Manglietia! ..... "Obviously, this is a transitional period, which skillfully connects the White Grass Garden with three pools that reflect the two periods of life of the moon. Another example is the opening paragraph of the article "Feeling Happiness", which says "Now I finally understand that it is by my side", which not only answers the above question about "where is happiness", but also naturally leads to the following paragraph, describing the process of "I" experiencing happiness.
2. Take good care of it.
Reference refers to the concern and response between the content before and after the article. The content in front should echo the plot behind, and the foreshadowing should be put in front. There are three forms of formal reference: one is the reference at the end and the beginning; The second is the care of foreshadowing and key sentences; The third is to take care of the text and the title.
Anaphora is a common form of anaphora in written language. The beginning and the end are an inseparable part of the article. A good beginning can help readers grasp the main points and feel the full text. A good ending can make the main idea of the article clearer and the theme sublimated. The head-tail reference embodies the organic combination of the two and can highlight the theme of the article. For example, in the article "Feel the Maple Leaf of Friendship", the author inadvertently wrote about the half maple leaf hidden in the book and revealed the origin of this half maple leaf representing friendship. At the end, he said, "It took me a long time to return to my senses and put that half maple leaf back in the book", which naturally took care of the beginning. "I picked it up, put it in my hand and stood there silently thinking for a long time. Looking at the article "Feeling the Power of Unity" again, the author described several flowers in prose style, which experienced the baptism of wind and rain and created the fragrance of the pulse, but did not pay attention to the echo of the beginning and the end. At the beginning, it is said that although jasmine has no gorgeous appearance, its fragrance is elegant and elegant. At the end, it is said that "blooming flowers represent the crystallization of friendship, and there are always a few flowers in the world", which reminds people of the gorgeous flowers, which is not consistent with "rich fragrance", which is also one of the important shortcomings of this article.
The nursing of squatting and responding is also one of the basic nursing methods. The little author of "Feel the Maple Leaf of Friendship" noticed this. The third paragraph of the article "It was a late autumn night" tells that the story happened in late autumn and the maple leaves were in full bloom, which laid a good foundation for the following article "A flaming maple leaf fell from a tall tree" and I have to admire the careful conception of the young author.
The coordination between the text and the beginning can make the theme clearer and the center more prominent. Let's take a look at the end of the article "Feeling Happiness": "If there is an afterlife, I will feel the happy life in this life". This sentence is to take care of the title of the article. However, the language is too dull and the style is low, which causes people to have negative emotions, which does not conform to the mentality that children should have in the new period, thus reducing the style of the article, which we should pay great attention to when writing.
A good composition pays attention to structural art, and the core of this art is the art of "linking up and down and helping each other from beginning to end". Only by doing this can the whole article be coherent and harmonious, and it must not be ignored when writing.
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