Close? Keys? Words: 350 words in the fourth grade of mathematics primary school

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This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.

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This composition is a 350-word composition about the fourth grade of primary school. The topic is "Math Exam 100". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. I rested at home for three days this week because of illness, and went to school on Thursday. Just entering the classroom, someone shouted: "Li Lai!

Then someone said to me, "Li, you got a hundred points in the math exam!"

"I went back to my seat and thought, are they lying to me? At this time, several other students said that I got a hundred points in the math exam. Now, I believe it. After I came home from school at noon, I told my mother the good news. My mother immediately gave me a big hug and said, "Great, let's eat hot pot together tomorrow!"!

"Ha ha, I will take an examination of a few minutes!

Teacher's comment: The plot of the article is relatively complete and clear. Because I didn't go to school for three days, as soon as I went to school, my classmates said that I got a hundred points in the exam, so the little author was somewhat skeptical. But a few people said that the little author believed that the story developed reasonably. However, the article as a whole looks a bit ordinary. It is suggested that the author sum up his experience in getting 100, so that readers can share their learning experience. In addition, the article can describe the psychological activities of some young authors. I got a hundred points in the exam, but I heard it from my classmates. Naturally, this is a big surprise, isn't it? It is suggested that young authors use appropriate rhetorical devices to accurately express their psychological activities. (China famous teacher: Teacher Wang) 2009-11-22 22: 09: 00