1, talk about understanding in connection with life.
A task-driven writing, entitled "What do you think of reading in these two States?" Many students only write one side, or the theme deviates from other aspects. Three students were named in the evaluation class, all of whom knew to write this topic, but they didn't know how to conceive it. I said, "Let's try to apply this sentence to our daily life. Imagine your mother coming out of the fitting room with two skirts and asking you,' What do you think of these two clothes?' . How can I answer to satisfy my mother? "The students said with one voice," It's all beautiful, buy buy will buy it "and smiled. A student retorted, "no, mom will think you are perfunctory." You should analyze the advantages and disadvantages of these two kinds of skirts and make a comparison. "
I immediately took over: "Yes, it is necessary to contact the two, analyze and compare them, and get your opinion. There are reasons and evidence to be sincere. Therefore, to answer such a composition topic, we need to analyze the similarities and differences between the two objects, and then link our own life experiences and literary accumulation to demonstrate our views. "
2. Explain the theory with metaphor.
The student asked, "What is artistic expression?" I replied, "It's fairy powder. As long as you use it, you can change this sentence from Cinderella to a fairy. Bling Bling shines brightly. That is, those methods that make your expression more vivid, vivid, detailed and artistic. "
The biggest feature of prose is that the form is scattered and the spirit is not scattered. "Vividly speaking, prose is seaweed" (the students began to get excited and sang seaweed songs) I drew a wavy leaf on the blackboard and said, "The nepotism of seaweed is elegant, stretched and unconstrained. Just like the structure, theme and expression of prose, it is also eclectic and diverse. " Draw a leaf stem in the leaf and explain: "And' God' is a theme and clue to be grasped in every essay, just like this stem, which runs through the whole leaf and transports nutrients around."