-if "we" promised to see chrysanthemums in those days,

Text/Cheng Lingyan

Learning objectives:

1. Learn narrative prose and write emotions in tiny details. (key)

2. Read the text, explore the connotation of homesickness, and perceive the great image of mother. Sort out the author's growth and change, and learn to face life's incomplete regrets objectively. (Key points and difficulties)

3. Understand the symbolic meaning of "autumn" and perceive the profound artistic conception of prose. (difficulty)

Miss in Autumn is a retrospective narrative prose. Talk about the understanding of the topic through preview.

? At the age of 26, Shi Tiesheng's mother died at the age of 49. At the age of 30, Shi Tiesheng wrote this Qiu Si. Autumn points out the narrative season of the article, and "homesickness" means that "I" deeply miss my mother. What does my mother miss? Is "I" only nostalgic for my mother?

First set? Miss the password, hidden between the lines.

? 1. How painful is my pain?

? After his legs were paralyzed, his temper became irritable. What are the manifestations of "violent impermanence"? (Supplementary information about diseases)

"Looking at the array facing north in the sky, I will suddenly smash the glass in front of me; Listening to Li Guyi's sweet singing, I will suddenly throw my things on the walls around me. "

? This sentence is changed to "looking at the north-facing array in the sky, I will suddenly smash the glass in front of me;" Listening to Li Guyi's sweet singing, I will throw things at the surrounding walls. "

? I slapped these damn legs hard and shouted, "How can I live!" " "

? This sentence was changed to "I beat these two hateful legs and shouted,' What am I living for? "

? 2. "My" miserable mother knows! ! !

? Multimedia presentation:

? (1) Mother hid out and listened to my movements. When everything was calm again, she came in and looked at me. "I heard that the flowers in Beihai are in bloom, so I'll push you for a walk."

? My mother hid out quietly and listened to my movements secretly where I couldn't see them. When everything was calm again, she came in quietly, her eyes were red and she looked at me. "I heard that the flowers in Beihai are in bloom, so I'll push you for a walk." She always said that.

? Summary: My mother "gave" me a space to vent my pain. My mother is carefully looking forward to "I" restoring calm, and my mother is kind, careful and tolerant.

? (2) My mother grabbed my hand and said, "Let's be together and live well ..."

? My mother jumped on me, grabbed my hand and held back her tears, saying, "We are together, have a good life, have a good life ..."

? Summary: My mother is sad in her heart, for fear that "I" can't stand the blow and do something stupid. She tries to restrain her grief to encourage and comfort "I". Repeatedly "living well" not only encourages his son to live strongly, but also encourages himself to fight bravely against the disease. Mother is patient and selfless.

? There was a pleading look on her gaunt face. ..... she said. She was overjoyed by my answer. ..... She was so happy that she sat down for a while and stood up for a while: "Then you should get ready quickly." ..... She smiled, sat down beside me and said, "After watching the chrysanthemums, let's go to imitation food. When you were a child, you loved pea yellow there. Remember that time I took you to Beihai? You said Yang Shuhua was a caterpillar, running around and squashing her feet ... "She suddenly stopped talking. She is more sensitive to words like "running" and "stepping" than I am. She went out quietly again.

"Tomorrow, if you like?" She said. Trying to figure out the tone when my mother asked me. (Delighted, full of expectation, probing)

? Summary: My mother is cautious in front of "me", observing words and feelings, buttering up "me" and pleasing "me", and always has her heart in her throat.

? Do you know my mother's pain?

? But I never knew that her illness had reached that stage. Later, my sister told me that her liver often hurts and she can't sleep all night.

? She went out and never came back.

? She was still vomiting blood when the neighbors carried her to the car. I didn't expect her to be so ill. Watching the tricycle go away, I never thought it would be forever.

? When the neighbor's boy went to see her behind my back, she was breathing hard, like her hard life. I was told that her last words before she passed out were: "My sick son and my underage daughter ..."

? Summarize. My legs are paralyzed and my mother is seriously ill. I am immersed in pain, torturing myself and my mother. My mother was in unbearable pain and terminally ill, but she took care of me without any regrets and encouraged me. On my deathbed, I still miss my children. The greatness of maternal love is hard to express in words.

I miss my mother, her kindness, care and tolerance, her perseverance and selflessness, and her suffering, but I always have hope for me to start a new life.

? 4. Does the article only express the memory of mother?

? Multimedia presentation:

? Background: 1977, Shi Tiesheng was 26 years old. In the sixth year of his paralysis, his mother died of liver disease. At that time, she was only 49 years old. 198 1 30-year-old Shi Tiesheng wrote Qiu Si. Four years later, he recalled all the comforts his mother endured before her death, and his heart was _ _ _ _.

? Preset: in the first paragraph, although I have a bad temper, I can still feel my mother's concern in my heart and know that my mother is secretly listening to me where I can't see it; In the second paragraph, I was only immersed in my own sadness and regretted it afterwards; In the fourth paragraph, in the calm narrative, the sense of guilt and sadness is in the author's heart; In the fifth paragraph, "absolutely" and "unexpectedly", the author did not understand the severity of her mother's illness and did not prepare for her departure. Now that I think about it, I regret it.

? The article not only expresses the memory of mother, but also expresses regret, guilt, grief and gratitude for maternal love.

Plate 2: The meaning of life lies in the description of scenery.

? 1. The title is Missing in Autumn. Does "autumn" only refer to the season of autumn?

? Multimedia presentation:

? Where the sky returns to the north;

? That day, I was sitting alone in the house, watching the leaves falling outside the window.

? It's autumn again, and my sister pushes me to Beihai to see chrysanthemums. Yellow flowers are elegant, white flowers are noble, and purple flowers are warm and deep, splashing and blooming in the autumn wind.

? 2. Why does my mother ask me to see flowers again and again?

? Multimedia presentation:

? "No, I'm not going!" "How can I live!"

"Well, tomorrow." I said.

"? It's autumn again, and my sister pushes me to Beihai to see chrysanthemums. ..... I know what my mother didn't finish. So is my sister. We are together, have a good life ... "

? Clear: "The mother hopes that her son can open freely in the cold wind like Qiu Ju to meet the pain and despair of life. The author understands the mother's heart and realizes the meaning of life: live well, face life with a smile and live optimistically and strongly.

? Autumn symbolizes the hard life of mother and son, and Chrysanthemum symbolizes that the author has been hit by fate, experienced violence and despair in the face of reality, and then loved life. It also symbolizes that the mother is strong, forbearing and selfless when she is alive, and always awakens her son's rebirth with love.

? 3. Play Shi Tiesheng's The Last Party (with pictures to enjoy the article).

? Even if the author says goodbye to his relatives and friends, he is still like a brilliant, warm, deep, splashing, elegant and noble chrysanthemum blooming in the autumn wind!

Three. Cooperation and communication

Step 4: Show the dial

Verb (abbreviation of verb) course summary

1. Choose trivial things in life and express deep feelings with calm narration.

2. Closely follow the detailed description, and create a touching image in word carving.

3. Witnessing the growth track in the description of scenery by using symbolic techniques skillfully.

4. "Chrysanthemum" runs through and enjoys the beauty of the article in a clear structure.

5. Repetition of words, accuracy of verbs, expression of adverbs and modification of reduplicated words.

6. homework:

? 1. When Xu Jinglei read Shi Tiesheng's "Grandma's Star" in the Reader, people burst into tears. If you are lucky enough to attend the reading, please read Memories of Autumn with deep affection.

? 2. Reading acacia, I broke my pen with Ditan.

Remarks: I was lucky enough to read two teachers' articles, so I revised the manuscript twice. Teacher Chen Haibo's teaching record "If that love is still alive-"; Teacher Si Yanping's teaching notes, "A mother's love is like a chrysanthemum, life is not lost-",thanks to the two teachers.