There are many kinds of roads, whether it is asphalt roads in cities or forest paths in rural areas. The road is right under our feet, leading us forward. However, I will never forget the care and care of my parents, the help and encouragement of my teachers and classmates on my growth path.
On the road of life, I have grown from a baby who is learning English, stumbling and unable to take care of herself, to a sensible and enterprising girl. I want to thank my parents for taking good care of my life for so many years. When I was a child, when I did something wrong, you would whisper in my ear, "This is wrong. Be brave enough to admit your mistake." So I know how to face my mistakes and how to take responsibility. When I fall down and can't stand up because of my leg pain, you will comfort me and say, "Don't be afraid of pain, stand up by yourself and don't bow to difficulties." So I learned to be brave, strong and face setbacks with unyielding attitude. ...
On the way to school, it was the respected teachers and lovely classmates who helped me through one difficulty after another. I have grown up and made progress. Looking at the awards on the wall, I am grateful. In July 2004, he won the Excellence Award of the 4th National Art Exhibition; in June 2004 +065438+2005 10, he won the third prize of the Environmental Guardian Painting and Calligraphy Exhibition; in April 2005, he won the second prize of the School Campus Culture and Art Festival. In June 5438+February, 2004, he won the first prize in the school oral arithmetic competition, the first prize in May 2005, the second prize in the school composition competition in 2006, the second prize in the school art festival painting and calligraphy exhibition in May 2006, and the first prize in the golden boy coloring competition in western Xinjiang in May 2007. Without the hard training and kind guidance of teachers, I can't get good grades.
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Life is a long way to go, Xiu Yuan. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. As long as I work hard, I will fly higher and go further. I will grow up and mature slowly, and I will no longer be afraid of the difficulties in growing up. I will work hard with my classmates and walk towards my bright future hand in hand, because I have the love of my parents and teachers to walk with me.
On my way of growing up
Time is gone forever, and the water in the East China Sea does not look back. Although time is gone forever, the memories in this lost time can be kept forever, and the bits and pieces on my growth path can never be erased.
On my way of growing up, I can't forget my kind and respectable mother. When I encounter problems in my homework, she is like a camel lamp in the desert, guiding my direction, so difficulties surrender to me again and again, and success has always accompanied me to grow up; When I made a mistake carelessly, my mother didn't scold me blindly, but comforted me and said, "It doesn't matter. A mistake is a small stone on the road. If it is clear, you can still go forward. "
On the way of growing up, I can't forget that amiable teacher. It is you who lead us to swim in the ocean of knowledge, take us from ignorance to maturity, from ignorance to learning, and realize our life dreams. ...
On my way of growing up, I can't forget that lively and lovely classmate. It is you who painted a heavy stroke in my childhood; It was you who accompanied me through one happy time after another, and let me enjoy the happiness brought by friendship.
On the road of my growth, I can't forget the beautiful and clean campus. It is you who nurtured our growth with that sweet milk; It is you who provide us with such a beautiful study and living environment, and let us get closer to our ideal step by step.
On the road of my growth, because of your company, my life has colorful colors, and I have experienced all kinds of tastes of life.
On my way of growing up
On the road of growth, whether flowers or thorns, we should be down-to-earth, step by step, and move towards the distance of life.
The road to growth is bumpy and smooth. Many things can't be smooth sailing in the rough, and there are always friends and relatives who will give me encouragement and help in the flat. The road to growth is monotonous and colorful. The road to growth is boring and interesting. Boring, I have to do a lot of things I don't want to do, and I am doing what I want to do with relish.
On the road of my growth, the first morning star was my mother, who brought me to this strange world and helped me get familiar with it; It was my mother who taught me to walk and let me have fun with my feet; It was my mother who taught me to speak, so that I could express my thoughts better. It was my mother who taught me to read and let me discover the history of words; It was my mother who taught me to read and let me discover the long and interesting history of China.
On the road of my growth, the second morning star was my first teacher, who brought me into the ocean of knowledge and made me understand the fun of learning; Bring me into the river of books and let me understand that reading is an interesting thing; It brought me into the stream of my classmates and made me gain pure friendship.
It is inevitable to stumble on the road of growth. I remember once, I went to an essay contest with confidence. I thought it must be the first prize, but I didn't expect to get the certificate of "Excellence Award" because of my efforts. I am disappointed, but failure is the mother of success. In order to fight for this tone, I study my composition book hard, often participate in the composition activities carried out by the Literature Society, and actively sign up for the composition contest. Finally, she entered the final in an essay contest and won the first place.
There will inevitably be ups and downs on the road to growth. I remember a famous person said: The road to life is wonderful because you don't know what you will experience in the future. Let's work hard together on the road of growth!
Comments:
This article is closely related to the topic, written in an unpretentious way, and expresses his rational thinking and exploration on the road to growth. This is a very successful exercise.
The full text is mainly narrative, with clear structure, clear parallelism and outdated language. For example, the three metaphors of "ocean", "river" and "stream" are very appropriate. In the middle three paragraphs, I wrote my experiences on the road of growing up, including both an overview and examples, which reflected the positive side of my healthy growth. Echo from beginning to end, cut to the chase at the beginning, and be confident at the end.
On my way of growing up
I remember yesterday, the naughty boy who played football in the mud turned into a tall and handsome boy today. I remember the little girl who was naive to play with mud yesterday, but today she has become slim. With the passage of time, unconsciously, I have spent ten spring and autumn, savoring the ups and downs on the road to growth, and entered this handsome and happy boy!
ferment
I am a lively, cheerful and intelligent girl, and my life is very happy almost every day. It's really hard to dig up a few sad things from my growing history!
However, it is because it is hard to find that it will make me "unforgettable". It didn't take long for the third grade to start, perhaps because I was not used to it, perhaps because I didn't get my heart back when I was playing outside, or perhaps because my learning foundation was not good. In short, I failed the exam for the first time in grade three! With my report card, I went home in fear. After dinner, I took the test paper to my mother in fear and trembling, waiting for it to be handed out. Five minutes later, my mother spoke. The educational method he adopted for me was not "violence" but "persuasion" education. I listened carefully to my mother's education, and tears of bitterness and shame welled up in my eyes. ...
sweet
Because I have made many friends since I was a child, there are also many people around me who care about and support me. They understand me with a broad mind like the sea, tolerate me, encourage me and help me. ...
Of course, I will repay all those who care about me. Whenever mom and dad are tired after dinner, I will help them do some housework properly; Whenever a friend is unhappy because of something, I will use many methods to make her throw her troubles away; Whenever there are contradictions between classmates, I will open the most beautiful window for them. ...
difficult
After grade four, the new environment is also a new test. I thought I was a senior three student, so I could be carefree and have fun. However, the result is just the opposite-probably because of the increase in grade, homework is also increasing. Want to play for a while? -No way! We are constantly writing, calculating, calculating and writing every day, oppressed by a heavy burden and exhausted all day, but this kind of suffering is also pregnant with unspeakable happiness!
fragrant
Because people grow up day by day and come into contact with more and more things. Failure is inevitable, but the failure of one thing will inevitably kill confidence. At this time, my father told me: the road is made by people! A person will never succeed, let alone fail forever. Only by constantly learning from failure can he reach the peak of victory!
On the bumpy road of growth, you will inevitably experience hardships and vicissitudes, but you will not fail forever because of one failure. I will certainly withstand the baptism of wind and rain, resist the exposure of the hot sun, and overcome all kinds of difficulties on the road to growth. I will definitely change from a small tree to a towering tree, from a green leaf to an eagle with wings spread, and into a dense forest. ...
Teacher's comments
In this paper, the author wrote down the ups and downs of my growing up in the form of a subtitle. The author has a profound understanding of life, sincere feelings, simple language, novel ideas and ingenuity. The "I" in the article is a happy girl, and happy girls have "ups and downs" in their lives. But "I" can treat them correctly and learn from them. This is my unique personality, because I am always full of confidence!
On my way of growing up
Dear mom and dad, since I was born, you have held my hand tightly with those warm hands. On the way of my growth, you cared for me with your life and gave me infinite love and care. That love is like a bottle of "sweet and sour" seasoning, which makes me grow healthily all the way.
On my growing road, I am a small tree, my mother is the earth, and my father is the sunshine. My mother protected me with those warm hands and made me grow sturdily. My father nourishes me with plenty of sunshine every day. I want to dedicate this grateful heart to the earth and the sun, because they have nurtured me.
On the way I grew up, I was a small fish, my mother was a river and my father was a tree. I am alive and kicking in my mother's arms every day, but you take great pains. My father stood in the sun every day and asked me to take shelter from the wind and enjoy the cool under you, but you silently endured it. Along the way, you taught me how to protect others when I grow up.
On the way I grew up, I was a boat, my father was the sea, my mother was the shore, and when I passed my father, you were.
I'm still so brave without complaining. When I was wandering around in the waves, my mother was a shelter from the wind, which made me have a pleasant journey and a full moon.
Although fish can't live without water and melons can't live without seedlings, I can't always rely on you in the future. I want to be a flying bird, with a pair of tough wings, leave your arms and fly to the blue sky. Once upon a time, your parenting was as deep as the sea. No matter how far I fly, I will never forget you, my dear parents!
On my way of growing up
On the road of my growth, although I haven't experienced great storms, I have forgotten some small things I encountered in the process of growing up, but what excites me so far is a small thing on my growth path.
When I first went to school, although the teacher assigned little homework, I was naughty and scribbled and wrote crooked words on my homework in order to play more. I made up my mind to get rid of bad habits when I saw my younger brother and sister get little red flowers in their homework. I want to show them little red flowers, too, but the pen in my hand seems to be manipulating my brain. It is fast and my thoughts are flying. Some words are big and some words are small. Day after day, in the second day of junior high school, the amount of homework gradually increased, and I was often criticized by teachers, scolded by parents, and began to feel distressed. Once, I held up a blackboard newspaper in class, hoping that the teacher would choose me. But my classmates laughed at my overreaching. I don't think this will work, so I made up my mind to get rid of this bad habit.
At first, I didn't adapt to such a stroke-by-stroke homework and found it difficult. I don't know how much the pencil tip is broken. The well-behaved box in the exercise book is testing my patience. I thought about giving up several times, and then I thought: no, I give up so easily, everyone will look down on me, and it will be too late in the future (my mother often tells me so). Therefore, I insist on doing my homework carefully every day. In this way, day by day passed, and my homework was written neatly day by day. Even my grandfather, who loves me the most, is surprised that my homework has improved so much and so quickly.
Although this incident is very small on my growth path, it is the brightest point on my growth path and illuminates my future growth path.
Teacher's comments
This paper takes a small matter in the process of growth, sees the big from the small, sees the truth from the things, and sees the strangeness from the ordinary. Little things tell us that in the process of our growth, our subjective efforts play a decisive role, and personal determination, perseverance and the support and help of others are indispensable. The narrative clues are clear, the psychological description is true and delicate, and the reading is true and cordial.
On my way of growing up
No one's growth path is smooth sailing, and there will always be some difficulties, bumps and setbacks ..... In the face of difficulties, we have only two ways-bravely facing or retreating, and so does my growth path.
When I was three years old, my mother sent me to a better kindergarten in the city. In kindergarten, I listen to the teacher, love answering questions, and like helping children. The teacher praises me every day, and I live happily.
When I was six years old, I started my musical life-playing the violin. At first, out of curiosity, I played for an hour every night. Every Friday afternoon after school, I will go to the Philharmonic Music Store to learn the violin. The teacher who teaches violin always asks me to play some songs I have learned for him, saying that it is to review old knowledge. Every time I play the piano, the teacher always finds something wrong with me (that's what I thought at that time), either my posture of holding the piano is incorrect or my rhythm is too fast. I was very unhappy after listening to the teacher's criticism. I have never been so severely criticized in my life. Gradually, my enthusiasm for playing the violin is not as high as before, and I find it boring. So I said to my mother, "I don't want to learn the violin." The teacher always criticizes me. Really boring. " My mother said to me earnestly, "You used to listen to too many praises. Life cannot be just flowers and applause. It is normal to feel a little frustrated. " This is just a little setback on your growth path. Do you want to back down? The road ahead is still very long, depending on how you face it. "I think what my mother said is very reasonable. I must face the difficulties bravely. Besides, the teacher criticized me in order to make me correct my shortcomings and make greater progress. So, I picked up the violin again and practiced hard every day to correct the shortcomings put forward by the teacher. After my unremitting efforts, I finally got good grades-I got a third-class violin certificate.
Having experienced setbacks has made me braver; Experiencing setbacks makes me stronger; Experienced setbacks, so that I can take a step forward!
On my way of growing up
Time flies like running water. The past days are like the golden beach by the sea, and the little touches are like footprints, which are deeply imprinted in my heart.
The road to growth is like the changeable sea, sometimes calm and sometimes rough. Whenever I feel sad and helpless when I am hit, it is you, my mother, who taught me how to break through difficulties and let me regain my hope again and again and move forward bravely.
Mom, it was your hands that taught me what persistence is. I was disappointed to get my 85-point test paper back that day. The sunset was bleak in my eyes. When you get home, you seem to have found something, but you didn't say it. When I handed in my test paper, you didn't blame me, but gently said to me, "Failure is the mother of success, and a failure doesn't mean anything. I believe you can stick to it and continue to refuel, and you will succeed next time! " "My mother gently touched my face with her hand and looked at me with encouraging eyes. I think mom's hands are full of strength. I know, this is persistence.
Mother, it is your hands that tell me what love is. That night, I suddenly had a high fever, and you went to the hospital behind my back. At that time, when I was young, I was so hot that I cried loudly. You held me tightly with your hands and kept comforting me. I see, not only am I hurt, but your heart is also hurt! Day and night, you didn't sleep a wink. You often put your hand over me and change the towel on my forehead. I gradually recovered under your careful care, and your hanging heart calmed down. Looking at your face and smiling, I know, this is kindness.
Mother, until now, I have never forgotten everything you have done for me. Your hard work has left traces of years on your temples, which contains your years of sadness and hard work. I am very happy, I am very happy. Because of you, I learned a lot that books can't; Because of you, I can grow up healthily and happily; Because of you, I can define my life direction. Thank you, mom! When I was a child, you held my hand and gave me warmth and dependence. Now let me hold your hand and repay your selfless love!
On my way of growing up
Growth, ups and downs. I fell down and got hurt again and again, which left a deep impression on my growing years.
ferment
In the long years of growing up, there are always things that I will never forget. I remember when I was 8 years old, I just entered this strange school and was bullied on the first day. The feeling that I want to fight but I can't fight is a kind of pain, inexplicable pain. When someone pushed me to the ground and my beloved clothes suddenly became dirty, I really wanted to stand up bravely and beat up those who bullied me, but I was afraid to jump on them and mingle with them. I would just run to the teacher and cry. Perhaps, this is my character! A timid person.
sweet
With the passage of time, she gradually changed from a silly girl in grade one to an ignorant girl in grade four. In the bushes, a small tree bud has grown into a green tree, and I have learned a lot, and I have begun to look forward to the future and have hope. I used to wait silently, but now I will pursue it myself and pursue the color of growth. The fourth-grade class cadre election has always been recommended by others. This is my first time to take the initiative to go on stage. When I succeeded in becoming a class cadre, that feeling was as sweet as eating honey, needless to say, because it was the fruit obtained by my own strength, which was naturally strange and sweet.
difficult
Adults always envy our primary school students carefree, happy, and don't have to worry about food, clothing, housing and transportation. They even think we have everything we want, but we also have unspeakable sufferings! I'll complain to you today! I get up at 6 o'clock every morning to do morning reading, and I usually sleep around 10: 00 at night, and the study time is almost over 10 hour. And every Sunday, I have to attend the interest classes, excellent classes and punching classes that my parents reported to me ... Do you think students are hard? But suffering is a little bitter, and I have gained a lot of knowledge and fun from it. No pain in the middle? Where is the sweetness?
fragrant
A short time is like a fleeting bird, that ignorant girl has grown into a teenage girl, and the chick has become an eagle with wings. Things have matured and calmed down a lot, so it has brought me a lot of fun. But in the course of growing up, it is inevitable to fall and get hurt. I have been above 90% in the exam. I once fell from 98, 99 to 80 because of my own mistakes. At that time, my face was burned and I felt quite humiliated. I got such a "glorious" score. However, later I thought: there are inevitably some setbacks on the road of life. What is this "minor injury"? Next time you pay attention, you will see a bright rainbow.
On the road of growth, there are always falls, bumps, climbs and victories. This colorful mood decorated my 1 1 year growth, accompanied me through 1 1 year growth, experienced ups and downs, saw the rainbow, and stayed with me forever. ...