In normal study, work or life, everyone has written a composition, and you must be familiar with all kinds of compositions. Composition is a narrative method to express a theme through words. How to write a thoughtful and literary composition? The following is the content of composition evaluation I collected for you, hoping to help you.

Regarding the composition evaluation 1 1, the content before and after is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.

2. The narrative is simple and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.

3. The details are not properly arranged and the priorities are not clear enough.

4. The content is mostly outlined by lines, lacking point-by-point description.

5, inconsistent with the atmosphere of the times, the content is too old and aging.

6, focused, clear center, clear-cut.

7. The viewpoints are clear, and the likes and dislikes are clear, which makes people clear at a glance.

8. The theme is directly prominent in content, clear and to the point, and there is no redundancy.

9. The theme is serious and the thought is noble.

10, the center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.

1 1. The theme is vague, the meaning is vague, and the writing purpose is unclear.

12, although there is a central theme, its expression is not strong enough, untrue and empty.

13, the theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.

14, the plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curve beauty of the plot and is fascinating.

15, the plot is strong in faltering, and accidents happen at ordinary times, which can attract readers' attention.

16, the plot changes irregularly, with occasional suspense and waves, which is unexpected. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.

17, the plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs.

18, the plot changes unremarkable, lacking new ideas.

19, the plot is straightforward, there is no suspense, and it seems to be a running account.

20. The process is very detailed, but the ending is short and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.

Composition evaluation 2 1 ... told us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.

2. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, coherent connection with nature and prominent center.

3. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated.

4. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.

This article is lyrical when it is narrated.

6. Make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor and personification.

7. The little author observes carefully and narrates orderly.

8. The use of some subtle words adds a lot of interest to the article.

9. The article is elegant, beautiful, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.

10. The imagination of the article is reasonable.

1 1. The article has clear clues, prominent themes and closely focuses on …

12. The details are quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.

13. It is a great feature to describe the characters' language, demeanor and movements in detail.

14. Delicate description, strong flavor of life, accurate and vivid words and sentences.

15. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.

16. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics.

17. The article comes from life, so although the language is not very beautiful, it is really interesting and well written.

18. The article wrote in detail that ...

19. The language is lively and interesting.

20. Use spoken English in daily life to make articles more natural and friendly.

On composition evaluation 3 "Ding Dong ……" I rubbed my eyes and looked at the alarm clock. It's already seven fifty! "ouch!" I jumped out of bed, dressed in a hurry, grabbed two meals in a hurry, and rode kart to the moon.

I have an appointment with a friend named Lu Xiaofei to visit his school: Star Primary School at eight in the morning. Five minutes later, the go-kart arrived at Star Primary School. Lu Xiaofei has been waiting for me there for a long time. Lu Xiaofei took me to his school. We bypassed the small flower bed and walked along the tree-lined road. In front of me is a luxurious teaching building. This building is made of marble, as far as the eye can see. Strangely, the stairs in this school are "big stars" connected by a series of iron rings. Lu Xiaofei said this is the "Star Ring Ladder", which flashes at the gate of Class 9, Grade 7.

The bell rang and a beautiful teacher came in with something in his hand. Lu Xiaofei said it was a "homework checker". Whose homework is qualified, the green light will be on; If the red light is on, you have to rewrite it. A male classmate stuffed homework into the "homework entrance", and the red light turned on and the homework quit. The classmate sighed and took out his exercise book. Obviously, his homework is unqualified.

The teacher is ready to give a lecture. I saw a few words written on the blackboard: "Please prepare a miniature tape recorder". What do you need a tape recorder for? The students recorded everything the teacher said in the tape recorder. Oh! It turned out to be a recording notebook!

Students, do you want to come to "Star Primary School"? Ok, please pick up the pen, the future school is in your hands!

Comments: This narrative describes "me" and my classmates' visit to Star Primary School in an imaginative way, showing the elegance of future high-tech schools. However, the narrative of this paper is not vivid, and it is monotonous and boring without using lyric poetry and other expression techniques.

On composition evaluation 4 1. Besides, it should be organized. You can't write one thing at a time and another at a time, which lacks discipline. Think about what to say before you start writing, and then, and then. How to connect sentences and how to connect levels. How to start, how to end, and how to combine the whole article.

This is a short composition, which vividly shows the lovely image of the monkey in front of our eyes. This effect benefits from the author's careful observation and detailed description from both static (appearance) and dynamic (living habits) aspects.

3. When describing the appearance, the author first summarizes the general impression with "strange appearance", and then describes its sunken nose, protruding mouth, black and yellow coat color and scratching claws in turn. At this time, we will definitely have a love for monkeys.

4. With a change of pen, the author wrote about the little monkey eating bread. The author threw it a piece of bread. The little monkey first "missed", just "felt it with his claws" and looked at me with his eyes. Finally, his step-by-step description of "wolfing down" showed us the cuteness of the little monkey.

In this article, the little author described the appearance of the little turtle delicately and accurately, and knew the life habits of the little turtle like the back of his hand, which shows that the little author is a good boy who carefully observes life. The language of the article is lively and the tone is relaxed.

On composition evaluation 5 1. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.

2. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

3. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.

The success of this paper lies in observing specific things and developing appropriate imagination.

5. The article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.

6. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.

7. This article is based on real life, which is appropriate, innovative, clear, natural, interesting and readable.

8. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.

Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read.

10. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.

1 1. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.

12. This article describes the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it looks very happy from beginning to end.

13. The full text is lively, the language is fresh, and it is always interesting and interesting to read.

14. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.

15. The article is very convincing and thought-provoking.

About composition evaluation 6. I am a girl who loves reading. Although I am only in Grade Two, I have read a lot of books. My mother began to buy books for me when I was very young. At that time, I knew nothing. I remember that the first book my mother bought me was Wolf and Sheep. My mother said that at that time, you used books as toys and turned them page by page. After a long time, you tore them up. My second book is Andersen's fairy tale book. My mother tells me stories every day. I listened carefully as an adult. Maybe it's because I had a special relationship with books when I was a child. I especially like reading books now.

Later, my father bought me a set of "100,000 Why". This book covers a wide range of knowledge, including astronomy, geography, history, animals and biology. Usually take it out as soon as you have time. It not only broadens my horizons, but also broadens my knowledge.

Reading makes me grow, and reading makes me progress. "Reading is like writing", I must read more books in the future, just as the ancients said, "Read well, read well, read well", and take reading as my pride and pleasure! If you want to gain more knowledge and absorb more nutrition, let's form the habit of loving reading from now on and stay with good books for life!

A brief comment on this narrative tells the story of "I" reading. The language of the article is fluent and the structure is complete, but the language is too dull, the words are not standardized, the narrative is not detailed enough, the language description is not delicate enough, and the expression lacks literary talent. I hope to make persistent efforts.

Composition Comment 7 During the winter vacation, my mother and I watched "Understanding 300 Growth Stories of Childlike Heart". This is a story book that cultivates our wisdom. After reading this book, I learned to love my parents, life and gratitude.

There are countless wonderful stories in the book. The endless plots and contents such as "Dilemma is a Gift", "Kitty Hawk Grows Up" and "Becoming a Beautiful Butterfly" tell us not to escape setbacks and difficulties, not to be pessimistic and disappointed, but to be brave, strong and optimistic. As long as we have a strong and brave heart, then we can create a miracle of life. "Little Squirrel Fighting Fire" and "Creating Miracles for Yourself" tell us that there will always be ups and downs and disasters in a person's life. As long as we face and solve problems actively and calmly, then we can overcome difficulties and create a brilliant and meaningful life. ...

Winners never give up, and quitters never succeed. In my future study and life, I will definitely correct my shortcomings and give full play to my advantages. Learn from the little boy who has no obstacles in life, never give up, never back down, and work hard towards your goals.

Comment: The little author has learned something from every article, learned to face difficulties persistently, optimistically and calmly, and showed a positive and enterprising attitude. Reading good books will benefit people for life, and you can learn a lot about life from them. I hope you can be as brave and firm as you say.

About composition evaluation 8 My name is * *, and I am 8 years old this year. I am a boy in grade three. I am not fat or thin, round face, short stature, dark hair, big eyes, thick eyelashes like a girl, very energetic.

I have many hobbies: drawing, reading, playing computer and playing games ... My favorite is playing computer. I remember that once I finished my homework, I couldn't wait to turn on the computer and play with relish. Grandma cooked the meal and said, "* *, it's time to eat!" " I didn't hear that. Grandma shouted a few times and I heard her. "Wait a minute, I'll be right there." I said, as a result, the food was cold, so I slowly went to the living room to eat and asked my sister why she didn't eat, which made everyone laugh and cry.

I have average math scores, like to use my head, and I will never give up if I don't want to understand a problem. I will continue to work hard and learn math well.

I still have shortcomings-cowardice! Every time I raise my hand to answer a question, I am afraid of making mistakes and asking questions that the teacher can't. When I speak, I always think: will the teacher blame me if I answer wrong, and will the classmates laugh at me? Once, the teacher asked a question, and I wanted to raise my hand to answer it, but I hesitated for a while and pulled my hand back. As a result, several students answered wrong, and my answer was right. Alas! If I had known this, I would have raised my hand.

This is me, a lively and interesting little boy, come and make friends with me!

Comments: This is an article about people. Described the appearance of the characters accurately and delicately from the beginning. In a few words, it shows readers a lively and lovely image of a little person. The narrative part is concrete and vivid, and the description of the characters' demeanor and movements is exquisite and in place.

About composition evaluation 9. There is a little white rabbit in my family. I like it very much. Let me introduce you.

My rabbit's name is Xiaobai, because its hair is all white. It has long ears and ruby eyes. I asked my mother why the rabbit's eyes are red. My mother said that rabbits have no pigment in their bodies and their eyes are colorless. The red we see is the color of blood, not the color of eyeball, so its eyes are naturally red.

Xiaobai is very sleepy. In the morning, when I opened my sleepy eyes, I found Xiaobai still sleeping in the "bed". I said to it, "get up, you big slacker." It turned over as if to say, "Little master, let me sleep for a while." I tried all kinds of tricks, but all failed. I have no choice but to leave. Hey, I am so sleepy.

Xiao Bai is very greedy I give it green vegetables to eat, and it eats; I give it cabbage to eat, and it eats; I took a carrot at random, and it was eaten, and it was out of control. Oh, I'm too greedy.

Xiaobai is very playful. Once, my father bought a bag from Guangzhou. Xiao Bai was curious and cheated the bag away. My mother asked me to take out the garbage. When I got home, I went to settle accounts with Xiaobai. Who knows, this bag has become Xiaobai's "small base". Hey, it's really interesting.

After listening to my introduction, would you like to make friends with Xiaobai?

Correction comments: This article mainly introduces my little white rabbit "Xiaobai". First, the article describes the appearance of Xiaobai and explains why its eyes are red. The article also describes the characteristics of "Xiaobai", such as sleepiness, gluttony and playfulness, and expresses the author's love for "Xiaobai". The article has no flowery language, but the narrative is clear and it is a good article.

On composition evaluation 10 1. The idea is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which can't reflect the truth of life.

2. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.

3. Rhetorical metaphors are vivid and similar in ontology and metaphor, which greatly enhances the interest and persuasiveness of the article.

4. Appropriate use of comparison and other methods, through the disparity and differences between things, effectively prove the center of the article.

Taking advantage of parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.

6. Clever use of personification makes the objects in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, human thoughts and feelings, and makes them reflect the spiritual course of the hero in the text from the side.

7. Material selection can choose themes with typical significance in life, and events are more representative.

8. The selection of materials is novel and unique, not mediocre, and it is refreshing to sweep away pedantry.

9. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is in-depth, highlighting the essence of the incident.

10. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.

1 1. The selection of materials from many aspects and angles fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full of personality.

About composition evaluation 1 1 My mother loves me the most, but she is always nagging.

My mother likes to nag at home.

In the morning, my mother got up very early, and cooked the meal and boiled the water before I got up. Every time I am lazy, I don't want to get up. I always whisper, "Let me sleep for another minute!" " "Mom will stubbornly stand there and count down, forcing me to get up. Wash your face, rinse your mouth, eat ... On the way, my mother always nags: "Listen to classes at school, get along well with my classmates, and finish my homework on time ..." I think my mother's nagging is so annoying!

Mothers who are not at home also love to nag

One day, my mother said something was wrong and I was very happy. Haha, I finally stopped nagging in my ear. I can't wait to turn on the TV and start watching Spongebob. After a while, the phone rang, and my mother began to nag on the phone: "Someone is knocking at the door, and my mother has the key. If you are worried about grandparents coming, you should also look out with the cat's eye ... "I think my mother's nagging is terrible!

But now, I like my mother's nagging. Mother's nagging is like a clear spring, which seeps into my heart.

The layout of the article on correcting mistakes is reasonable. The starting point is that my mother loves "I" very much, but she loves nagging. Then the following narrative focuses on two aspects: "Mom at home loves to nag" and "Mom who is not at home also loves to nag" to highlight mom's nagging. Finally, make a summary, echo the center from beginning to end, and the language is fluent and natural, which is very good.

On composition evaluation 12 1. The opening is concise, concise and orderly; Pay attention to description ... leave a deep impression.

2. I used a scene metaphor at the beginning, which is quite innovative; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.

It is also a way of writing to go straight to the subject from the beginning.

4. The beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning look lively.

5. Ask questions at the beginning to attract readers.

6. Cut to the chase at the beginning, making people clear at a glance.

7. Point to the beginning and use attractive words.

8. The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot of color to the article;

9 ... briefly describe the wonderful place; Link local work with overall work.

10. briefly introduce the situation and naturally transition to the next paragraph;

1 1. The situation description causes suspense;

12. Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and visual.

13. Briefly describe the cause and effect and pave the way.

14. Dialogue or some psychological description can be added to this part.

15. It is more appropriate to change … to ….

16. Naturally, the connecting link between the preceding and the following, and the detailed description highlights the quality of the characters and is touching.

17. The scenery is described in the narrative, and people compare with each other.

18. personified language makes the article more vivid.

19. The description of appearance is very interesting, which highlights the loveliness of …. The introduction is all my own ideas, which are very infectious.

20. It is very vivid to use the method of giving examples in a column diagram.

On composition evaluation 13 1. This article is vivid and rich in content, novel and refreshing in language and unique and reasonable in structure.

2. This article is a mature narrative work. The whole process of the experiment is shown in accurate and fluent language. It is full of ups and downs and fun. The author observes carefully and narrates in an orderly way.

3. The description of experimental phenomena can be to the point, and the article is detailed and comprehensive, reflecting the interest and understanding of natural science, which is very interesting to read.

4. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a general role in the full text. The few words at the end show the author's lofty ideal and firm confidence in exploring scientific mysteries, which is inspiring.

5. There are three successes in this paper: first, pay attention to choosing the most beautiful fragments to write; second, use accurate words; third, the structure of the article is compact.

6. This paper organizes materials around the center of … with accurate, vivid and vivid language and extremely rich and specific content, which is a successful work.

7. Together with Qi Xin, we are United hand in hand, just like a concentric circle. I hope that in the new year, you can be strict with yourself, make progress every day and meet every day with confidence.

8. You are like naive saplings, thriving. We can never say that we learn best, but we can learn better. The teacher is looking forward to …

9. I hope the children in Class Three can develop good study and life habits in this big family and grow up happily every day.

10. I hope you can abide by the school's norms, show your excellent selves, and make our classroom sound loud, sing loud and laugh loud.

1 1. Grasp every point and cherish every point; Behave well, and the class is thriving.

With regard to the composition evaluation 14 1, a good composition is one that can have reasonable imagination and embody meaningful philosophy.

2. Many excellent sentences in the full text add some literary interest to the article.

This article may not be particularly attractive in plot, but it is still a successful work. First of all, it describes the image of the characters well. Second, the language is vivid and full of life, which plays a very good role in expressing ideas.

4. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.

5, such as beautiful handwriting, clear and neat structure, can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, this teacher really should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?

6. This paper chooses a brand-new angle to let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".

7. Writing is like a person, and your article is as simple and open-minded as your person. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.

I think this article reflects your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.

9. Wen Neng Yi Qing. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.

10, it is not the privilege of adults to live and pay attention to society.

About composition evaluation 15 1 This article wrote a very common thing about giving up your seat. Although the selection of materials is a bit conventional, the writing method of comparison is still very appropriate: the description of characters is concise and vivid. The description of the portrait of middle-aged women is only a dozen words, but it captures the characteristics. The two descriptions of Mr. Pang are also very successful, which fully shows the author's disgust and contempt for him.

2. End with a question, leaving room for readers to think. The ending sticks to the theme and expresses the author's complicated feelings. That's right. It starts with "crying" and ends with "laughing", which is a perfect combination of the beginning and the end and effectively expresses the theme.

3, little girl, don't forget that "learning the sea is endless, and the mountains are interesting"! Life has a long way to go. If you don't reach your goal and are exhausted, the door of Peking University Tsinghua is open, but it's a pity that you are gone!

4. "The future is limitless. Twelve-year-old children deserve congratulations, another masterpiece has come out! Being able to speak this language means that there is no one in the motherland.

5. The careful description of inner activities and ingenious care before and after prove that you have mastered certain writing skills. From your article, I seem to see Ba Jin of the century! "

6. Although the article is short, the narrative is vivid. Delicate description, strong flavor of life, accurate wording and sentences.

7. At the end of the article, the central sentence is revealed, and the pen is clear, short and powerful.

Through careful observation, I vividly described it in appropriate language. Although the article is short but not monotonous, the language is popular but interesting.

9. The subtle description of the characters' language, demeanor and movements is a major feature of this article. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.

10, the article is written in detail, revealing the warmth like sunshine between the lines, which naturally sublimates the theme of the article to a higher level.

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