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Write composition examples in combination with reality
1. Write a composition combining reality and fiction. How to write a student composition combining reality and fiction for your reference!

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"Students, take a math test tonight and review well." The math teacher said to us. Then the Chinese teacher came.

Take over: "attention, everyone, I will take the sixth unit of Chinese tomorrow." Then the physics teacher came: "Let me say something."

Things, on Sunday, will have a test "wow! How so many exams! " These students are

Sigh, the chemistry teacher came in. He said, "Listen, I'll tell you …" Before the end, we made a phone call.

Get up: "tomorrow's exam, review well." The chemistry teacher smiled.

Then, we review nervously. Before I finished reciting the mathematical theorem, I took out my Chinese book and reviewed it in a hurry.

After getting up, I suddenly remembered that there was still a problem in physics that I didn't understand, so I pulled out the physics book and took it.

Studying books, I still feel that chemistry is still a problem ... Just after reading a few pages, Ding Lingling ended, and I was very helpless.

Sighed: "It's over, so we have to burn the midnight oil." So I picked up the book in a panic and ran.

Ran into the bedroom, washed his feet as quickly as possible, went to bed and read carefully, but after a while, he turned off the light.

It's ringing again. There is no light in the bedroom. Turn off the light, you are so annoying, I hate you to death. I have no choice but to

Cover the quilt and read with a flashlight inside. But it's hard. I can't help yawning. several

I fell asleep after yawning.

"Ding Lingling", get up, I skid up and looked at my watch: "Oh, my God! How time flies. "

Wash your face, rinse your mouth, comb your hair, rush into the classroom and read a book. "Doing exercises-"is outside, worth it.

The class teacher shouted with a trumpet. Hey! I stretched myself and joined the sports team.

I study by myself early in the morning, so I can study hard. "Atchoo-"I sneezed loudly. Oh, no,

Why did you catch a cold? The exam is coming soon. What should I do?

"The exam is over, sit down quickly." The teacher shouted. When I got the test paper, I fainted and my eyes were blurred.

I ... Needless to say, my Chinese exam was a mess. Then neither chemistry nor physics had a good result. almost

Every subject gave me a blow, and almost every question was very strange. What should I do? worry

The history teacher came in with a paper in his arms. I was so scared. After handing out the papers, I did one after another.

Road, easy to walk. I was so happy that the teacher saw me and immediately gave me a hundred points. I cried happily.

Come on, still dancing!

"Zheng, what are you doing? What bed in the middle of the night? " The students in the lower berth said to me. "What, me?

Hit the bed? "I woke up, so I was dreaming.

Get up? God, there is an exam today. I skid up and go to the classroom to read. God bless me.

Today's exam went well. ...

2. A composition combining reality with reality This is a perfect composition for the college entrance examination. Xi Murong, a forgotten Sichuan examinee on both sides of the Taiwan Strait, said: "Life is an endless river, and we are all people crossing the river."

The left bank of the river of life is forgetting, and the right bank of the river of life is memory. Only when we shuttle between the left bank and the right bank in our unique boat do we know that we should forget what we should forget and remember what we should remember.

Walking on the road of life, we laugh at the flowers blooming and falling outside the window and watch the clouds roll and the wind stop. On the way, we experienced too many mixed feelings. During the voyage of the river of life, we learned to forget the sad and happy things that should be forgotten, and to remember the bits and pieces that should be remembered.

Dongpo threw up his hair and shouted "River of No Return", and the troubles he faced suddenly sank into the rolling waves and disappeared without a trace. The magnificent surging river made Dongpo choose to forget, forget those frustrations and sorrows, and forget those disappointments in his career.

Tao Qian leisurely picked chrysanthemums under the oriental salamander and danced with butterflies. Facing Nanshan, Yuan Ming chose to forget the ugliness of officialdom and all the unhappiness he encountered. This is the choice of the soul, the wise choice made by people crossing the river on both sides of the strait, and the wise "ferry".

People stay on the left bank of the river. Besides, there are people living happily on the right bank. Sitting under the pool pavilion, tears streaming down her face, drinking wine alone, Yi Anzhu told me in her words that she would always remember the bits and pieces of her life experience, which was the choice she made on the way to "cross the river".

Haizi told me that starting from tomorrow, he will remember all the water in his life, because it is the dew he used to water the flowers. Sanmao used her words to remember the soul of Sahara forever.

Where is it? High-use sunflower will always remember his "boat" ... this is the life on both sides of the river of life, and it is the choice of forgetting and remembering. The wind blows petals like a broken childhood. Desperate ancient music explains the gap between souls, hiding in the depths of dreams and memories, listening to flowers and nights singing nightmares, singing prosperity, singing away all memories, forgetting the unhappiness and triviality that should have been forgotten with the clear smile and unclear tears that no one knows, and remembering the profoundness and eternity that should have been remembered.

White rabbit, look around. Clothes are not as good as new ones, and people are not as good as old ones. Sailing in the "river of life", sitting in your own unique boat, knowing that forgetting is on the left, remembering is on the right, and there are endless shuttles in the middle! Comments: This article begins with the words of celebrities, which not only attracts readers, but also puts their abstract reasoning on the concrete and sensible "river bank", and then launches the following around "the left bank of the river of life is forgotten, and the right bank is recorded".

Write Dongpo first, Tao Qian can stick to his own mind and forget "forget setbacks, sadness and dissatisfaction;" Forget ugliness, forget unhappiness ",and then use the phrase" people are on the left bank of the river, besides, there are people living happily on the right bank ",which naturally transitions to the" memory "of Yi 'an lay man, Haizi, San Mao and Van Gogh. Finally, respond to the title and sublimate the theme.

The structure is meticulous and the paragraphs are symmetrical and concise. If the fourth paragraph is taken as the central axis, the framework of the full text is like a diamond, which makes the article feel strong as a whole and has a beautiful structure.

The language of prose, poetic artistic conception, appropriate exposition and implied philosophy enrich the meaning and charm of the article. (Wu Xueguang)-Senior High School Entrance Examination (7th edition, 2005).

If this candidate doesn't have the concept and imagination of "combining reality with reality", can he think about the existing materials from one side to the other, from the outside to the inside, turn abstraction into concrete, turn concepts into images, break through the limitations of materials and write such an excellent article? To sum up, when writing literary articles, senior high school students should consciously apply the principle of "combining reality with reality" and boldly use imagination, fantasy, exaggeration, personification and other methods to fictional characters and stories, so that the scenery can be "fantasy", the author can be "synthetic" and the notes can be "disruptive". Of course, all this must be based on the premise of giving people "artistic truth", otherwise the writing will become illusory and the article will become vague and poor, losing its artistic appeal.

Note: ① Philosophical Notes People's Publishing House (1956 edition), page 49. (2) Lu Guishan, Zhou Zhonghou's Lectures on Marxist Literature and Art' Renmin University of China Press, 1999 edition, p. 755.

③ Basis of Literary Theory, Shanghai Literature and Art Publishing House, p. 49. (4) Gorky's letter to beginners, Literature, p. 259.

Editor's comment: Students' writing develops bit by bit under the guidance of teachers. When many people see the disadvantages of students' writing, it is valuable to remind everyone that students should also pay attention to the relationship and bridge between reality and art, but in practice, they need patience and step by step.

(Zhang Huajuan).

3. Combination of static and dynamic, combination of reality and reality. Tip: When visiting friends in the garden, shake hands with Zhaoxia and touch each other.

Early in the morning, so refreshing! I walk alone on a quiet path, which is the road to the garden. I want to visit my old friends there.

That tree is the first old friend I want to visit, ah! Old tree, are you standing up straight to welcome me? Are you sending beautiful flowers to your friends who come to see you as a meeting gift? You are like an open umbrella, and many people enjoy the cool under you. You stand up straight and your chest is stiff.

Protect our beautiful garden. When I entered this garden, flowers danced to welcome me, and butterflies were eager to lead me.

We came under the peach tree and the leaves whispered to me. Every tree is my bosom friend, and they bring infinite fragrance to my face. Everything in this garden is not my friend. I greeted them eagerly: hello, beautiful flower, are you swinging from side to side, give me a beautiful dance? Hello, tenacious grass, you are wearing green, do you want to compare with me whose clothes are more beautiful? Hello, lovely snail, you are crawling slowly with a small house on your back, enjoying the scenery! Hello, Gao Liu, your long hair is fluttering, how like a beautiful little girl.

Hey! Industrious bee, what are you buzzing about? I guess you mean finding another good place to collect honey. Picking up a new seed and holding it in my hand, I heard the cheerful singing of nature; Picking up dandelion seeds fluttering in the wind, I saw the mystery of life it contained.

On their way to start a new life, I joined this short and meaningful ceremony; Pick up a bud that hasn't opened yet, hear it cry silently, and see people pluck it from the branch without mercy. Goodbye friends, I should go home.

Brought back a good mood and good memories, and took away a sunset by the way. I am a novice, please take care of me. Please give it to me. I had a hard time typing it. It was written by my former student, and I praised it at that time.

4. Write a composition with the combination of reality and fiction, metaphor and personification (note that our hometown has beautiful scenery and pleasant scenery, and the most beautiful is Shanglin Lake.

Climbing the dam of Shanglin Lake, you can see rolling mountains and lush trees. The lake is pure, green and clear. When the wind passes, microwave waves rise on the lake.

When you walk around the lake along the foot of the mountain, you will be pleasantly surprised to find that the flowers here are beautiful and fragrant. Happy birds are singing in the branches and colorful butterflies are flying around.

You see, the wild mandarin ducks in the lake are playing for a while and dancing for a while. How pleasant it is! If you go to Shanglin Lake on rainy days, it will be another scene! The surrounding mountains are swaying in the clouds, hazy, like a shy little girl veiled. Red azaleas all over the mountains, like a rosy cloud, fall in the mountains in the green.

Walking in, I saw the glittering raindrops on the petals, like countless pearls falling on them. The most amazing thing is that wherever you go, it is spring.

The air after the rain is particularly fresh, and the faint fragrance of flowers permeates the air, giving off a refreshing fragrance. If you listen to it, it's like entering a paradise.

Ah, the beautiful Shanglin Lake, you make people linger.

5. A short composition of 150 words around the landscape, imitating the text "Star" and using rhetorical devices. In my mind, there has always been such a scenery-it is not as desolate and majestic as the desert, as gentle and beautiful as the flowing water of a small bridge, nor as splendid and magnificent as a mirage, but in my heart, it is the warmest and most touching-as if there is nothing else. Unlike my mother, I work during the day and do housework at night, and only have a few opportunities to relax on weekends. So naturally, I always like to watch my mother be quiet and busy when I am free. When I was in kindergarten, my life was full of laughter. Toys, books and classmates ... are my good playmates. I had so much fun in this garden that I forgot it was my mother. Silently fertilize and irrigate my flowers and plants. Finally, after several years, I became a pupil with honor. When I practiced the pinyin of "A, O, E" in the room, when I calculated the formula of "10+20" at the dining table, and when I read aloud "Song of the Stream" in the living room, it was my mother. It's mom. Help me solve any problems. When I hit a wall in reciting, my mother gave me encouragement and comfort ... but I always thought it was my responsibility as a mother, ignoring my mother's hurried back, tired body, pale smile and wrinkles around my eyes ... Now, I am a middle school student with a heavy burden on my shoulders. After so many years, I finally realized my mother's deep love. I am sensible, too. My mother is always busy for me, and I, in my dream, dreamed of my mother's hurried and clear back several times, but in that old age, there was no lack of flexible posture. Ah, mom! You are a lovely peach blossom in my heart, and the fragrant breath makes me relaxed and happy; You are a fresh and beautiful lotus in my heart, and your light posture makes me feel refreshed; You are the blooming chrysanthemum in Ao Shuang in my heart, and my strong vitality makes me awe; You are a plum blossom standing in my heart, and your tenacious perseverance amazes me. Mom, no matter what you do, you are the most beautiful scenery in my daughter's heart.