Wenchuan earthquake and seven questions and ideas of composition materials for senior high school entrance examination
June 6, 2008 18:06 Sina exam
This article is selected from blogs that read and write in the senior high school entrance examination. Click to view the original blog.
First, find the value and meaning of life.
When the disaster came, high-rise buildings instantly turned into ruins, burying countless lives. How many lives are instantly reduced to ashes. Life still exists, so we should cherish it and make the short life more valuable and meaningful. Imagine that the life that was fresh a few minutes ago was suddenly separated by yin and yang. People should think about life and seek the essence of life from it.
Concept Keywords Life Value Meaning Essence Cherish Life Search
Second, tenacious praise for life.
Life is fragile, so many people go to heaven at once. Life is tenacious. The miracle of life that was successfully rescued after being buried 100 hours ignited people's hopes again and again, shocked people's hearts, and made people lament the tenacity of life while crying. These life miracles stem from the rescued person's strong desire for survival. In order to survive, they would rather drink their own urine and eat writing paper. This persistence in life and never giving up are awe-inspiring.
Intention Keywords tenacious survival miracle survival courage persistence belief shock
Third, advocate giving love.
It is a fine tradition of the Chinese nation that "one side is in trouble and all sides support it". In the face of catastrophe, the unprecedented unity of the Chinese nation has made the world see the greatness, strength and indestructibility of the Chinese nation here. All walks of life acted quickly and donated money and materials in succession. As of May 2, 20081day, * * * has accepted donations from all walks of life160.9 billion yuan. Hong Kong patriot Run Run Run Shaw donated HK$ 1 billion, and Mr. Li Ka-shing donated HK$ 1 billion on the basis of the first donation. Behind this kind of behavior, love is conveyed. Disaster is unfortunate, but it is also lucky. It made the Chinese nation undergo a spiritual baptism, transformation and rebirth.
Concept Keywords Dedication, Love, Donation, Selfless Tradition, Great Mutual Assistance and Cooperation
Fourth, the return of the spirit of national unity.
Earthquake relief and solidarity have been the propaganda themes of mainstream media since the earthquake. Yes, we haven't felt such unity for a long time. From donations, green ribbons to national mourning days, there seems to be only one thing in the lives of 654.38+300 million people in China: earthquake relief in Wenchuan earthquake. Born in sorrow, died in happiness. Under the market economy, the lack of humanistic quality caused by the temptation and erosion of material interests was torn apart by the Wenchuan earthquake, which greatly stimulated the fighting spirit of the Chinese nation and brought back the national spirit of unity and unity.
Intention keywords: United as one, United as one, national spirit returning to fighting spirit, anxiety, happiness, humanistic quality. Blood is thicker than water.
Verb (abbreviation for verb) stands on its own two feet.
In the face of disaster, the people in the disaster area endured multiple pains such as the destruction of their homes, the death of their families and the exhaustion of their wealth. But life always goes on. Instead of falling into the quagmire of pain, they rose up to fight, save themselves, contend with disasters and race against time. They thanked foreign countries for their love and assistance, but they also learned to be strong. Many villagers began to clean up the ruins, and farmers in rice fields outside the village began to transplant rice seedlings ... great people.
Intention keywords: self-reliance, self-improvement, self-help, strong and brave, self-transcendence
Sixth, unforgettable teacher's kindness.
When the disaster happened, many schools were having classes or taking a lunch break. The disaster is so cruel that all these flowers will be destroyed in an instant. In times of crisis, teachers use their weak backs and slender arms to support a narrow world for students. Wu, Zhang Laiya ... A long list of teachers who have passed away and have not passed away, with their own practical actions and even their lives, interpret the teacher's kindness like a mountain. Who is the cutest person? Who sticks to morality, responsibility and conscience in "Do or die"? They all achieved the eternity of life with beautiful life postures.
Intention Keywords teachers' kindness, responsibility, morality, conscience, beauty and eternal virtue of life
Seven, the relationship between man and nature.
Wenchuan earthquake once again showed people that human beings are weak and helpless in the face of nature. Although human science and technology are more and more developed and the fields of human activities are more and more expanded, when major natural disasters come, human beings still seem so helpless. The Indian Ocean tsunami, the Myanmar storm and the Wenchuan earthquake ... caused great casualties and property losses. But does this mean that human beings should stop here and let fate take its course? The answer is obviously no, human beings need to better develop scientific research, better study and use nature, and develop in harmony with nature.
Concept keywords: harmony between man and nature, caring for nature by science and technology, and learning science and culture.
Wenchuan earthquake is remembered by China people because of its profound disaster. May 12, 2008 will leave a lasting scar in people's hearts because of the huge gap of the earth. After every major event, we should reflect on it, so that mankind can make continuous progress. I think the Wenchuan earthquake has brought us more thoughts than the above. Wenchuan earthquake is worth thinking about forever. (Xue Chunlin)
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Emotion is the most important thing.
We must make it clear that the current "cases" of earthquake relief and "Chinese subject composition" take "language" as the carrier, or expound a certain point of view, or explain a certain truth, or reproduce a certain scene, or express a certain emotion. It uses association, imagination, reasoning and argumentation, and it needs "control language" to express your feelings and ideas.
Therefore, in the face of this "disaster" that is both gripping and touching, both tearful and United, we can not only repeat the touching plot, but also reproduce the touching story; It can't be like news reports, nor can it be like spreading narratives.
If we write such an argumentative essay, then we can take those plots, stories and even touching language in Disaster Relief as our powerful and favorable arguments. However, everything is just to "explain" your truth and "demonstrate" your point of view, that is to say "can be used", not "must be used" or "must be used". Graders will never improve your composition score because you "use" the contents of earthquake relief. The main criteria for their evaluation are whether your "truth" is clear, whether your "viewpoint" has been fully demonstrated, whether the language you use to explain "truth" and demonstrate "viewpoint" can infect people, and most importantly, only by moving with true feelings can you impress the raters.
Reflections on the touching deeds of Wenchuan earthquake in Sichuan;
Reread the child's last words: "I am so hungry that I want to eat dirt."
Enough tears, go on living with a smile. After the national mourning, I told myself that I could no longer let sadness become the protagonist of life. When you are quiet and rational, you should look back on your long-lost laughter, find happiness slowly, and cover up everything in the past with hope.
But today, I am in tears again! It was a blog, and the author "Yan Yangyufei" compiled the "ten most touching last words" in the earthquake-stricken area on his QQ blog. Every word of tears, every word of blood, those words are the dying wishes of the victims.
Thanks to the author's careful collection of these last words, we can imagine the final state of mind and state of the deceased. In fact, more victims have something to say before they die. What did they say? Did you hear those walls that used to shelter them from the wind and rain and finally became killing weapons? Where they grew up, did you hear that? Have you ever heard that the once beautiful mountains and rivers will be more miserable in the future?
I heard it. I'm not a wall, I'm not a land, I'm not a mountain, I heard it. I am one of them. I feel the same way. I heard you.
1, "Dear baby, if you can live, you must remember that I love you."
-On the afternoon of May 13, a woman fell to the ground and supported her body with her hands on the ground in a collapsed residential building by the Dujiangyan River. There is a three-or four-month-old child under her, and this written short message is on the phone screen of the deceased.
I want to say: great mothers, like all mothers, are not afraid to train their children with sweat and protect them with their lives. This child is not only his own, but also belongs to the society, the country and everyone. You protected a child with your life for the society, the country and everyone. Life sheltered life, one life continued another life, and one life replaced another life. Did you leave? No, no, never. Your life has been deeply integrated into this brand-new little life. If you say "if you can live", he is really alive, because of you, he is alive. You said "remember that I love you" and paid the price of your life just to "remember"! Yes, children will remember, so will we, and everyone will remember. Because this is your ultimate entrustment, this is not greed!
2. "Be strong. We have another child, so you should take care of her. If you want your baby to embark on this road, one carelessness will ruin everything. "
On May 12, Gong Tianxiu, a 46-year-old woman who lives in the dormitory building of Beichuan Sub-branch of Agricultural Bank of China, was crushed together with her husband, who told her. Her husband died half an hour later, and Gong Tianxiu was rescued after sawing off his calf three days later.
I want to say: "Be strong!" You use your last strength to encourage the people you love. The last words may not be new. They have been repeated thousands of times in their lives, "take the baby seriously." This is the wish of hundreds of millions of parents in China and the default "Bible" for law-abiding. The last thing a filial father thinks of is telling his wife to continue educating his baby. "I want the baby to take the road", what road to take, the right path, the avenue, the bright avenue, and the safe avenue. Ordinary and great father, you are the conscience of this land and China.
3. "Gou Ke, after you come out alive, tell my parents that I can't be their son in this life, and I have to do it again in the next life." —— Zhang Mingjian, a sophomore in a middle school in Hanwang Town, Mianzhu City, told his best classmate Gou Ke under the ruins of the earthquake.
I want to say: son, you have been the son of your parents all your life, and you have done very well, very well. When I grow up, I can feel the hardships of life, understand my parents' difficulties and assume the responsibility of being a son. Such a sensible child, spending a day with his parents, is full and complete. "Do it again in the next life", lovely child, your parents will love, cherish and value you for many lifetimes, and you are the happiness, pride and hope of your parents for many lifetimes!
4. "My old bones is fine, you have to hold on." —— On May 12, the old father separated from his son Tang Ming in the ruins has been encouraging his son. 40 hours later, Tang Ming was rescued and his father died.
I want to say: the most precious thing parents give their children is infinite strength and bright hope. In the last period of life, encouraging children to "hold on" became the father's biggest agenda. Separated by a wall, life and death are two roads. The father passed on the hope of life to his son next door without reservation, and he walked away confidently. Don't worry, great father, your son has persisted this time and will persist in the future, because he has inherited your strength!
5. "Dad, I have to go first, I can't."
—— On May 12, Jane was buried in the ruins in Hanwang Town, Mianzhu City, Sichuan Province. At that time, he was dying and said the last sentence. Jane Guo Yun, a 55-year-old father, has been encouraging him, but the bricks are too heavy to carry. At about 3: 30 in the afternoon, Jane Qin Zhi didn't respond.
I want to say: "Leaving first" is a son's most regretful confession to his father! His heart must be very contradictory and painful, because his son's duty is to provide for his parents, but he failed to complete this life task. What a helpless thing it is! I said this because I can't do it. I can't serve you. I can't support you. Forgive my son. This is not what I want.
6. "I'm so hungry that I want to eat dirt."
12 One afternoon in May, Fan Quanying, a girl of class 4 (3) of Qushan Primary School in Beichuan County 10 years old, persisted in the ruins for nearly 60 hours, but only 10 minutes after rescuers rescued her from the ruins, the fire of her life suddenly went out, leaving the last sentence.
I want to say: son, you are so tenacious, you persisted for 60 hours! "Hunger", which is more terrible than death, has been tormenting the poor little girl until death comes. If you don't eat a meal, you will be hungry, but 10-year-old children will be hungry for eight or nine meals. We didn't protect you and starve you. You can't even get a little ordinary food. Your last imagination actually crossed the food, crossed the grain and reached the soil. Soil, it breeds crops, produces food and feeds us, but it can't throw away some links in the middle and directly expel your hunger! Son, the humor you released before the soul returned to the earth broke my heart!
7. "Don't panic, everyone, keep order and go to the door!"
—— On May 12, Fang Jie, a second-grade teacher of Xuankou Middle School in Yingxiu Town, Wenchuan, organized the evacuation of students and was buried in the depths of the collapsed teaching building, and died that night.
I want to say: dear teacher, as always, when disaster comes, you still teach students methods and principles: "Don't panic" and "keep order". "Open the door!" The door is the exit of escape, the living mouth of life. You left the door to your classmates and left yourself in the depths of ruins and disasters. Teacher, that is also the deep heart of students and the deep memory of the country. You bought flowers with your life, and you bought happiness for your children and family. That's the depth of flowers, that's the depth of happiness.
8. "I can't hold on any longer. Light snow, promise me, you must live ... "
Xiaoya, a junior one student of Juyuan Middle School in Juyuan Town, told her classmate Xiaoxue. When Xiaoxue and Xiaoya were dug out of the ruins, Xiaoya had been dead for a long time.
I want to say "I can't hold on", but you have been holding on for a long time, son. It is a miracle that such hardships are imposed on such a young person and persist for one minute. I understand you, son. You have to give up. At this moment, you instantly throw away regret and despair, and give all your faith and strength to your partner, "promise me, you must live"! Son, your life is always full of sunshine. You don't want sadness and fear to invade your partner at the last moment, so you can light up your last strength and light up your partner's life path!
9. "Dad, I'm here, come and save me!"
-Li Wang Guo Zi, a student from Beichuan Middle School, said to his father at the crack in the cement precast slab. After rescuers rescued more than 30 lives, Li Wang stopped breathing.
I want to say: I am speechless. . . . . .
10, "I can't hold on any longer. Light snow, promise me, you must live ... "
—— Xiaoya, a third-year student of Juyuan Middle School in Juyuan Town, told her classmate Xiaoxue. When Xiaoxue and Xiaoya were dug out of the ruins, Xiaoya had been dead for a long time.
I want to say: I cried without tears. . . . . . .
Read the last words of our compatriots and feel the firmness of life. Thinking about the interests of the dead, thinking about the living. Pour your love for your children and do your duty as a husband. Tears from time to time, for self-motivation, occasionally fragile, for becoming stronger, for remembering the entrustment, for holding high the promise. When rebuilding our homeland is underway, we should be more grateful, more rational and more responsible, do a good job in epidemic prevention, repair our psychology, build a new homeland, and fulfill the wishes of the deceased. Until next year's Tomb-Sweeping Day, until the anniversary of the disaster, until the beautiful scenery, we will comfort the deceased and comfort their entrustment of being implanted in the depths of the earth.
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After the earthquake, let's interpret Wenchuan with hot words.
After the Wenchuan earthquake, a number of popular words appeared in the media and people, such as Wenchuan, strength, persistence, emotion, gratitude, national mourning day, aftershocks, quake lake, resettlement and reconstruction. These words have become a hot topic for people to talk about earthquakes. Through these words, we can deeply understand Wenchuan earthquake relief and today's China. Among them, "Wenchuan" has certainly become the first hot word, with the highest frequency and the most click-through rate!
Wenchuan, a little-known county town, became the focus of China and even the world overnight because of the earthquake. At the same time, Sichuan, Beichuan, Qingchuan and other place names with the word "Sichuan" have also become hot spots. With the deepening of earthquake relief, "Wenchuan" is no longer just a place name, but a special word with rich meanings. Today, "Wenchuan" is the focus of China and the world, and also the rallying point of the strength of the Chinese nation, where all the traditional virtues and spirits of China are concentrated!
In the face of the earthquake disaster, Wenchuan people chose to be "strong". When the disaster suddenly came, the people of Wenchuan stood up in the ruins, buried the bodies of their loved ones and joined the search and rescue army. Cadres, policemen, workers and farmers who lost their loved ones dried their tears and stood at the forefront of disaster relief. They fought side by side with the children who came to rescue. The disaster swallowed the lives of relatives and collapsed their warm vision, but what could not collapse was the indestructible steel backbone of Wenchuan people.
In "persistence", Wenchuan people have created many miracles of life. It's been 14 days since the Wenchuan earthquake, whether it's survivors coming out of the ruins or seriously injured people who have just been rescued; Whether it is a soldier who went to the rescue or a naive child; Almost all of them have withstood the test of life or physical strength, but they have persisted with great perseverance. At this time, "persistence" is a green channel leading to hope, bringing more miracles of life.
"Touched", Wenchuan moved us a lot in the face of disaster. Whether it is a mother who leaves a message or a teacher who protects students with her body; Whether it is a soldier who comes to rescue or a student who risks his life to save his classmates; Whether it is a cadre who is actively involved in rescue, or a person who insists on waiting for rescue under the rubble; Whether it is the survivors of the disaster or the compatriots who died! Although their deeds have no rhetoric, they are tear-jerking and touching!
Wenchuan people are grateful people. China people who are full of love are the most grateful people. Since the earthquake, "thank you" from the depths of the people in the disaster area has become the most frequently used word. They are grateful for the care and support of the CPC Central Committee and the people's government, the help of the people's soldiers, the care and concern of the motherland in all directions, the care of overseas Chinese thousands of miles away, and the assistance of governments around the world and the international community! Because they know how to be grateful, they are also caring people!
China was the first "National Day of Mourning" for the victims of the Wenchuan earthquake, and the five-star red flag was lowered at half-mast for the ordinary people killed in the Wenchuan earthquake for the first time! Practice will prove that "National Day of Mourning" will be recorded in the history books of China together with Wenchuan. In the face of disasters, the China government interpreted the ruling idea of "people-oriented" in this way. 19 May, 14: 3 1, after a moment of silence for the victims of the Wenchuan earthquake, "Come on, China!" The sound resounded through Tiananmen Square and China! This is the strongest voice of China people in the face of disaster! The Chinese nation has shown unprecedented unity and strength in the face of disasters! "Wenchuan, come on!" "China, come on!" One cry after another spread to every place where there are Chinese. This word, once widely used in the sports field, has become the belief and pillar of "unity is strength, earthquake relief".
Wenchuan is still struggling with earthquake disasters, and difficulties such as "aftershocks" and "dammed lakes" are still threatening the people of Wenchuan. "Resettlement" and "reconstruction" are arduous tasks faced by Wenchuan people. However, the people of Wenchuan know that General Secretary Hu and Premier Wen are with them, the people's soldiers are with them and the people of the whole country are with them. They will certainly win the final victory in the earthquake relief struggle!
We firmly believe that Wenchuan before the earthquake has become history, and the new Wenchuan after the earthquake will appear in Bashu with a brand-new look!