Dickinson

I want to carve for a day.

Like a poem.

Then adjust the rhyme.

Emphasize my reasons

Then determine the type.

Think of its light.

Let it meet other companions

Gather in the room of love

The poet's heart is full of "happiness and happiness", but that is not what real life brings to her. She has never left home or been married in her life, because her mother is ill and her father likes to eat her baked bread best. Therefore, she has been a housewife almost all her life, spinning around the stove and bread oven every day. Although Dickinson's life is very narrow, writing poems makes her mind fly freely in the vast sky.

Dickinson's life background couldn't be simpler. She lives alone all her life and looks lonely to outsiders. But her life is different because of poetry, and even the kitchen where she stays all day is full of poetry.

How does she arrange her day? Listen, kids:

Let's feel the author's mood together. When she was making a piece of bread, her mind was thinking about how to rhyme, why to write a poem and how to express it in poetry. This is how poets shape bread according to their own arrangements and plans, and this is how they arrange their own poetic day. Yes, "shaping" is an arrangement, but the word is more delicate and poetic.

What does "love room" mean? Read "Let it meet other companions and gather in the room of love."

"It" refers to "poetry", which Emily Dickinson wrote for her daily life, while "other companions" are many such "days". When so many "poems" gather together, when they gather in my life, then any place is full of poetry and is a "room of love". Although she is between square inches, everything around her is poetry in her eyes. In this way, the world becomes wonderful.

This is the Garden of Poetry that I read yesterday. Dickinson loves poetry, and her life exists for poetry. So, just as Lacker loves writing, she also collects all kinds of names and names her favorite poems. The room of love is the garden of poetry, another sky and another sunshine.

"If you see such a bird on the road, how can you rhyme, tune, ponder the light and write a poem?"

Dickinson described the bird's nervousness and panic when it ate insects and drank dew leisurely and was startled by a beetle.

And the arrogant attitude of ignoring my findings and buttering up with bread crumbs are all vividly written. Especially in the last section, the feeling of success-lightness!

With "I want to shape a day", let's read Dickinson's "A Bird Coming Along the Path". When life is poetic, your eyes on things around you have changed, and everything is so beautiful and interesting!

Question: How did Dickinson, a serious poet, shape her day? How do we "shape" our day? Talk about your ideal arrangement or plan. Remember not only to write, but also to make the plan come true! )

Teacher Lan Yongping explained: The definition of life doesn't matter whether it's long or short, whether it's Fiona Fang or neat style, it all depends on one's own kneading intentions. Life is like a poem, do every step with your heart, that is, "rhyme"; Follow your own "career" ideal, and you will get the "type" image you expect; If we build a "love room" with love, then even ordinary life will have a poetic direction! From every small step to the trickle flowing into the ocean of love, it is the sail for us to sail to the goal in our hearts! "Dropping into the sea" is actually the true meaning of life!

Interpretation method: according to the interpretation mode of college entrance examination, starting from the article, the most important thing is to find the center of gravity of the work! Dickinson's poems are typical of "dying to show one's will". Contact the relevant introduction, "love" is what a person really wants to express!

Senior Cheng Fangzheng explained: This article tells us that a happy life is created by our own efforts. If we enrich our experience by reading and writing poems, we will become happy. As the saying goes, books are the ladder of human progress, and books can make us progress. A good book is our mentor and friend, which can make us happy. Students, read more books!

Xiong Minhuan's interpretation: Dickinson does this every day: conceive rhymes in her mind, think about the reasons for writing poems, decide the form of poems, and how to ponder its lightness, so as to write the best poems. We can experience the beauty of poetry every day, thus making our study better!

? In life, like Dickinson, we should set ourselves a code of conduct and make a study plan every day, such as when to get up in the morning, when to have breakfast, when to do homework, how many hours to do, and so on. We should make our life full of meaning and make our daily life interesting and beautiful during the summer vacation. For example, in my summer vacation, I get up at 6: 30 every morning, eat at 7: 00 and exercise at 7: 30. Do your homework at eight o'clock, do English problems and recite words for two hours. Take a break at noon, continue to do homework, now do Chinese for two hours, then take a break and do math. After eating at five o'clock in the afternoon, you can take a walk and don't stay up late at night, which is good for your physical and mental health.

Chen Shiying's explanation: Dickinson makes the life of making bread lively and interesting. He is like living in a poem, full of poetry. She shapes her life in the "room of love" every day. Although her life is very narrow, writing poems makes her mind fly freely in the vast sky. She loves life and writes many poems, which are delicate and sensitive, and make the day of kneading bread full of love and beauty. We can also shape our day and make our life full of meaning and poetry. For example, reading poems with teachers can train our reading ability, improve our ability, enrich our lives and read better. This is all made up by yourself, making up your own different self and making up a different life!

Interpretation of Chen Yutianhao: Dickinson designs rhymes in her mind every day, thinks about the reasons for writing each poem, determines the basic situation of the poem, and tries to find out how to write it to make it shine, thus writing more beautiful poems. Dickinson roams in the garden of poetry day after day. He wants every poem to join this big garden. Although Dickinson's life is very narrow, he makes his mind broad by writing poems, just like flying in the sky, carefree and loving life. Every poem he writes is exquisite, so he shapes his life day by day, and he makes his life more meaningful and fulfilling.

In life, we can take Dickinson as our role model and learn from him. For example, stipulate that you have to get up for a long time in the morning; Set yourself a long time to eat at noon; How long does it take to do the homework? How long to sleep ..... and so on, all these need to be stipulated by us. Our own life is our own decision. We must have a good life rule to make our life more interesting and full. When you feel that you have done a lot of things at the end of the day, you will find this life more interesting, at least more meaningful than those who play games and watch TV all day, and perhaps you can plan your life reasonably. (425 words)

Interpretation by Fu Zhongxia: Dickinson is making bread every day. Although his life is very small, writing poems can make his mind fly into the vast sky of freedom, carefully observe everything around him, think about the reasons and structure of poetry, and how to make poetry more beautiful and make his bread making day full of love and beauty. Like Dickinson, we should have our own life plans, such as when to do our homework, when to eat and when to play. (179 words)

Interpretation by Dai Ruijing: Dickinson designs rhymes in her mind every day, thinks about the reasons for writing each poem, determines the basic situation of the poem, and tries to find ways to make the poem shine, thus writing more beautiful poems. Dickinson's life is actually very boring, but he planned his life reasonably and made his life very happy. He walks in the ocean of poetry every day, trying to integrate every poem into this "big family". Dickinson was happy, too.

Maybe planning our life reasonably will make our life happier. Just like Dickinson, I will learn from his attitude and plan my time reasonably! For example, when to get up in the morning, when to eat and do homework, and when to read with the teacher, we should arrange the time reasonably.

Wu Hongshuang's interpretation: The definition of life is that you can't be a Fiona Fang without rules, but if there are too many rules, you lose the meaning of life. What kind of life you want depends on your own mentality. Every step of life should be done seriously. You should plan why you want to do it, in order to get closer to your ideal, instead of wasting a little time doing what you like. I fight for my ideal, so I arrange my daily life, and life is as simple as that. After getting up in the morning, I read books for two hours, then do math problems for one hour, rest for two hours, recite English for one hour, and do my homework in the afternoon.

Interpretation of Liu Yaqin: Although Dickinson lived a lonely life, she was not sad about it. She loves to write poetry, and everything in her life should be written in poetry. She pinned her hopes on writing poems, and she arranged them in an orderly way. She plans her life every day.

We should also arrange things in our lives in an orderly way, get up at seven in the morning, then take a walk, run and so on. Have lunch around 12:00, and read your homework around 1 2: 00. Life is rich and colorful.

Interpretation by Zeng Yongxin: Dickinson's life is very narrow, but writing poems makes her mind fly freely in the vast sky. When she was making a piece of bread, her mind was thinking about how to rhyme, why to write a poem and how to express it in poetry. This is how poets shape bread according to their own arrangements and plans, and this is how they arrange their own poetic day. Yes, "shaping" is an arrangement, but the word is more delicate and poetic. We should be good at observing and learn to arrange our time reasonably. Get up at seven o'clock in the summer vacation, wash, go downstairs and help at home, and eat at three o'clock.

Interpretation by Yuan Jiahao: Although Dickinson is making bread every day, she is also thinking about how to write a wonderful poem while making bread. She first thought about the rhyme of writing a poem in her mind, why she wrote this poem, determined the basic form of writing this poem, and pondered the highlights of this poem. In this way, she wrote beautiful and moving poems, and these beautiful poems are as full as the life she planned every day.

We must be like Dickinson. We should learn from her and plan every day carefully so that we can live a full and disciplined life.

For example, I get up every morning, wash, have breakfast, go out for a walk, and then come back to do my homework. At noon, I have lunch and watch TV at home. Have dinner and watch TV with my parents in the afternoon, and go to bed at eight or nine in the evening.

Interpretation by Liang Bin: Even if Dickinson is making bread in the kitchen, she will conceive the rhythm of poetry and think about the reasons for writing poetry. Poetry makes Dickinson's life better. In life, we need to enrich ourselves every day. If we don't make good arrangements, we will be confined to a small kitchen every day like Dickinson seems to live. But if we want to make life poetic, then we must arrange it, for example; Reading extra-curricular books, chasing plays and watching movies … all these will make our life very interesting. After a long time, we can shape our own day! Make every day full of poetry. If students find summer vacation boring, then learn to shape our summer vacation!