I took a magnifying glass to spy on the six years of primary school. Looking back on the journey of growing up, I saw the experience of growing up all the way.
In this hasty and long six years, some people walked and others came in, and their faces overlapped repeatedly in a hurry. Only Mr. Gao's teaching, his every look, every movement, seems to have been burned into a CD and played back in my memory, constantly, constantly.
In that class, I sat in my seat trembling. Looking at the math class representative, he is calling those whose homework is unqualified to the teacher's office.
Yesterday's homework was a mess, and I haven't changed my previous homework. One homework was sent from the class representative until the last one, and the class representative came to me with it.
I took my homework from the class representative and went straight to the teacher's office. I saw Mr. Gao rubbing his red nose-that's his usual action when he has a rhinitis attack.
I went to the teacher's desk, and the teacher looked up at me, but said nothing, and then bent down to correct my homework. Tick off the exercise books one by one, and then 100 points handsomely, pick up another book and repeat the action just now. For such a long time, I just watched, and every tick was followed by another 100 ... This picture was repeated several times.
At that time, there was only the friction between the pen tip and notebook paper when the teacher ticked, and my heart beat uneasily. It seems that the teacher finally remembered me standing by, sniffed hard, reached for my exercise book, opened it, and simply said, "My homework is not well written."
I began to talk about the questions I did wrong, and looked up from time to time to ask if I understood. There was no unexpected scolding and reprimanding, but the teacher's attitude made me feel more guilty.
Which series of "X" in the notebook makes me feel ashamed. I suddenly feel that the teacher is teaching me in his silent language, neither cursing nor cursing, but it is so faint, but it makes me feel guilty.
Time makes a small sound, like footsteps leaving. I know that growth is dull without parting. The teacher's teaching was not blamed and reprimanded, which was like disappointment. I know even silence is enough to make my heart ache.
It was after that that I never dealt with the teacher's homework again, because I was afraid of disappointing him again! Your approval is the motivation for my answer, please adopt it.
2. How to start a happy composition? How to end a composition? If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells".
The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important.
It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.
Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized.
Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.
3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions. 1, natural beam.
No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the end fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness, which is concise, lively and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law". As long as you have passion, write freely and fully express your feelings, it is a good article. However, attaching importance to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary thinking development.
There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here. 2. Echo from beginning to end.
The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail.
For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool." Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once."
Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style. This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point".
For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are." At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties.
-Remember the spinning wheel. "4. Famous aphorisms.
Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings"
At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere." 5. Lyric discussion.
Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing.
There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency. For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid."
Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings. The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable.
The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits".
Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green? At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article starts with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow"
Then, he skillfully used the beautiful sentence in Xu Zhimo's Farewell to Cambridge, which triggered thinking about life without green, leaving room for imagination. Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma.
If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on. Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect.
In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam". Migration training The ancients said, "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea.
3. The beginning and end of the composition about happiness:
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Pursue happiness and meet your smiling face at every sunrise! Pursue happiness and make the happiness of life full of people's hearts! Some people say that happiness is far away from you, but I say that happiness is everywhere. Happiness is created by yourself, and you are the source of happiness! Life is so short that I believe everyone wants to spend it happily. But life is bound to have many bumps, which make us unhappy. Then if you want to have happiness, you need to pursue happiness!
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Happiness is air, let your heart breathe; Happiness is the sky, let your dreams roam; Happiness is a friend, let your mood speak freely, and then write your feelings! This is just my own idea, I hope it will help you!
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Happiness is a smile on your face; Happiness is the sweetness buried in my heart; Happiness is a memory printed on your palm. My happiness is XXXX (add a sentence according to the following content. )
The end of the composition about happiness:
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Everyone will have their own happiness. No matter how sad, lonely and sensitive you are, you will have your own happiness. As long as you believe, happiness is always in your heart.
I like the ending of this home composition. Home is a warm and happy harbor. In this harbor, there is a father who loves reading, a hardworking mother and a lively and happy me.
Dad is the pillar of our family, with bright eyes and a pair of glasses on his nose! I remember one time, my father had to go to the toilet, and I waited anxiously outside. A minute passed, and two minutes passed. . Ten minutes have passed, hey, what's wrong? I'm in a hurry, like ants on hot bricks-I'm in a hurry. There's nothing I can do. I will see what my father is doing from the door. Oh, oh, I feel dizzy. It turned out that my father was watching with relish with a book. Where do you remember me? No wonder there are "four eyes"
Mom has a good figure, long brown hair, big eyes and double eyelids! Mom is very busy at work and has to do housework. Once, my father and I fought a war and had a good time. We are all soaked, like a drowned rat. Mom saw it and brought us dry clothes while nagging. After we changed our clothes, she took the wet clothes to wash.
It's finally my turn. I am lively and active. Some relatives and friends say I look like my mother, others say I look like my father, as if I were a freak. In fact, I don't think I'm like either, just like myself, hehe!
"I love my family and my parents. Love means not quarreling and playing with me every day. " Whenever I hear this song, I feel extremely warm and empathetic, because I also have a happy family. Such a home-I like it!
5. Warm Home This composition begins and ends with a warm home.
"Home" is a warm and sweet word, and "home" is the source of strength and happiness. "Home" is the kingdom of father, the world of mother and the paradise of children. Everyone has his own home, so do I, a warm and happy home, a home full of different moods and colors.
Go home from school every day. My mother always smiles and says to me, "Baby, you're back!" " "When it's cold, she will pass me a cup of hot water, and drinking it will make me feel warm. My mother cooks all kinds of meals for me every day. As long as I like it, she always cooks it for me willingly. And my father will help me check my homework at night and help me with all my homework. My home will make me feel at ease. Whenever I am wronged or wronged outside, my parents will hug me, touch my head, listen to me carefully, and then enlighten and teach me seriously. Help me open my heart, abandon my troubles and greet a bright tomorrow with a bright smile.
In my family, there are three people in our family, all of whom are equal. We are all United and friendly, helping each other and solving difficulties together. None of us can live without this warm home. Let me feel more and more how important home is to everyone!
My family is very small, and the motherland is everyone. All our Chinese sons and daughters, under the care of the motherland, bravely took off. Wrote a touching story; Created earth-shattering facts. Because of your hard work, we have a happy and beautiful life today. ...
Home is our dependence; Home is our friend; Home is our world.
6. How do you write the beginning and end of my home?
My family is a family of three. My father, mother and I live in perfect harmony.
My father is an engineer. He works very hard, but he is lazy about housework. My father is almost full of sports cells. He knows a little about football, basketball, table tennis, badminton, bowling and even baseball. However, my father loves to drink. Every time he comes back from other places, he often gets together with his colleagues and classmates. He always comes home drunk and talks a lot, and my mother doesn't like my father's behavior, so they will have a big fight at this time, and I will often be unreasonably left out. Here I hope dad will stop drinking, otherwise it will hurt others and himself!
My mother is a nagging and strict person. Every morning, my mother urges me like an alarm clock: "Get up quickly, get up quickly, or the sun will shine on your ass and you will be late for school." I was so upset that I couldn't sleep if I wanted to, so I had to get up quietly. But mom's nagging continues. Why don't you brush your teeth and wash your face quickly … take the time to eat … don't forget your book and cup … hey! It's really annoying Especially when I didn't do well in the exam, she was even more nagging. I want to ask my father for help, but he has always been on my mother's side, alas! Bad luck.
Finally, introduce me again. I am a happy boy all day, and I am the squadron leader in my class. I have big watery eyes and a white face. I am of medium height and thin. Many adults call me "handsome". Although I am weak, I like sports as much as my father. Some relatively safe sports such as table tennis are my favorite, and my father also likes me to exercise regularly. Hee hee ... sometimes I have a short temper and often talk back to my mother. Angry mothers sometimes call their fathers who are often away from home to complain and complain. Now that I think about it, my father is often away from home, and I am the "little man" at home. How can I always make my mother angry? Mom, I'm sorry! It's all my fault, please forgive me!
I live in such a family, sometimes happy, sometimes troubled, but I will always love my parents, I hope my family will always be harmonious and happy.