My sister's excellent composition 1 My good sister is very kind to me. I went to her house and she gave me delicious food. Give me what I like, and she will teach me words I don't know. She also took out her little clothes, pants and shoes for me to wear. She also took me there to play. She also took out all the unwanted pencil boxes, rulers, pencils, hair wipes and story books for me. My sister is really nice. She is really my best big sister, and I really like her.
Teacher's comment: The little author closely followed the word "good" to write about her sister, told her all kinds of love for herself, and created an image of caring and sharing her. But after reading the whole article, I found that the little author always called her sister "she", without introducing her specific identity, such as which relative's family or neighbor's sister she is. Moreover, the little author did not introduce personal information such as her sister's appearance, which made the reader's impression of her sister very vague. As a writer's article, we should not only introduce the appearance of the characters, but also show the character characteristics of the characters, and portray the characters in depth so that readers can remember them firmly! "I went to her house and she brought me delicious food. Give me what I like "is changed to" I go to her house, she will give me delicious food and give me what I like ". "She also took me to play in the park" was changed to "She also took me to play in the park". The pause numbers in the article are all wrong. For example, "She also took out her little clothes, pants and shoes for me to wear" was changed to "She also took out her little clothes, pants and shoes for me to wear". Ask the author to correct other similar mistakes.
It was cloudy that day. People's mood is also gloomy.
In the afternoon, my sister and I went downstairs to buy milk according to my mother's instructions. We opened our umbrellas and walked slowly to the supermarket.
Suddenly I heard a meow.
"Did you hear that?" My sister asked. I nodded my head. "Then find it quickly, like a kitten's voice." We looked around and heard another meow. "From there, quick!" My sister shouted to me.
Ah! This is a dark kitten with a small white tail, crouching under a tree, shivering.
I saw my sister gently picked up the kitten and looked at it pityingly. She seems to remember something, let me connect the cats. I have never seen her run to the supermarket so fast that she didn't even take an umbrella.
After a while, she ran back. Holding something wrapped in several bags in his hand. She quickly opened the bag, took out the milk she had just bought and poured it into a small bowl. The whole process only takes 5 seconds!
She took the kitten from me, comforted it slowly, and then fed it bit by bit.
I continued to look at my sister. Oh! Long hair was put into a ponytail, and a few threads slipped on the face, which matched the clothes with light flowers like no other. Gradually, I was shocked, and the sky was shocked, forgetting that it was raining. The curious sun poked its head out from the head hidden in the clouds and gently wrapped its sister, as beautiful as an angel falling from the sky.
In the sun, her smile is very bright.
Sister's excellent composition 3 This year 15 years old. She has black hair and always combs it neatly. On her fair face, a pair of big eyes are bright and smart.
These days, my sister always has two words on her lips: "lose weight!" She looked up ways to lose weight online as soon as she had time, but her mother said that her sister was in poor health and was still losing weight. So my mother set a password on the computer and my sister went running instead. But I think there's nothing wrong with being a little fatter, and it looks cute!
Besides figure, what worries my sister most is the acne on her face. Recently, my sister's forehead is covered with many pimples, large and small, which can be compared with the stars in the sky. My sister was in a hurry and asked her mother to take her to see Chinese medicine. Mom said: "It's normal to get acne at this age, so you don't need to see Chinese medicine." When my sister saw that her mother couldn't count on it, she secretly looked up "acne tips" on the Internet. She found that eating pig blood soup can get rid of acne, so she asked her mother to cook pig blood soup for her. In fact, my sister hates eating pig blood. She held her breath and ate a big bowl of pig blood soup upside down! Unfortunately, it doesn't work after eating. My sister still wouldn't give up and asked the people around her. A few days ago, she excitedly took a heavy bag home. I saw that the bag was full of "acne cleanser" and "magic acne water". In the evening, my sister read the instructions carefully, painted and wiped her face carefully. Finally, she went to bed hopefully.
My sister often says, "Beauty is a lifetime thing." It seems that my sister's figure and "pox" are also lifelong careers.
My sister's excellent composition 4 I have a sister who was born only 1 year, 1 day earlier than me. Probably because we are only one year apart, I never call her "sister" and she never pays attention to it.
She has curly brown hair. Because of this curly hair, she has been teased by many people many times. Her face is authentic yellow skin. Compared with the "black" skin that I like to cross from Africa, it is simply heaven and hell. A pair of watery brown eyes twinkled under her thick and curved eyebrows, and her delicate nose and small mouth were evenly arranged on her chubby face.
Although she looks like a lady, she is often confused when doing things. Her name is Xue Hongjuan, but her classmates call her Xue. Why? Listen to me slowly: once, someone didn't hand in their math homework. When the math team leader checked one by one, he found a book with the name "Xue" on it. This is confusing. There was only one Xue in their class, and now there is another Xue. The math group leader is puzzled. After checking, he found that there was no Xue Hongjuan's book, so the math team leader named this famous book "Xue Honghong". Xue Hongjuan looked at it: "This is my notebook. What's wrong? " The team leader pointed to the name, "Oh, how did I write my name wrong? A clerical error is purely a clerical error. " Xue Hongjuan defended herself. From then on, students began to call her "Xue".
I remember another time, she said she would cook black rice porridge for us. As soon as I heard this, I was so happy that I said to her, "Xue Hongjuan, a little more sugar will make it sweet." She nodded and said, don't worry. As a result, she used salt as sugar and put it in the pot. He also smiled and said to me, "Oh, sorry, wrong."
Alas, my sister is such an idiot!
My sister has a beautiful face. Big round eyes, curved like a crescent moon when laughing, straight nose, rosy lips and neat white teeth when laughing. This person is my sister.
My mother is very busy at work, and my sister teaches her homework. She is a very patient person. When she encounters problems in her homework, she will carefully analyze them and explain them to me step by step. If she doesn't understand again, just say it twice. Anyway, she will teach until I can. After finishing my homework, she will give me some questions that I usually make, and she will carefully check my homework. My sister is also responsible for my rapid progress in grades!
My sister is also a humorous person. She sometimes makes faces and makes noises, which often makes me laugh. She often takes me out to play and always buys me delicious food. Once she goes out, she always gains a lot. My sister loves me very much. Once I went out to play, my sister went to the bathroom. I'll wait for her at the door. Two people came to install it for me. I'm sorry to leave without saying anything. My sister happened to see this scene and quickly helped me get justice: "Changzhou is now evaluating civilized cities. It's uncivilized of you to do so! " The man quickly apologized to me. After this, I found that my sister loves me very much.
Therefore, I want to repay her with good grades and make her proud of me!
My sister's excellent composition 6 I like as many people as the stars in the sky, such as my brother and aunt ... but what bothers me most is my sister.
My sister is tall, with shiny black hair, big watery eyes and two eyebrows like the moon. What good eyes! And glib. There are two rows of flawless teeth in your mouth.
One fragrant morning, I went to my sister's house to play. As soon as I arrived at my sister's house, my sister said to me, "Man, today we are going to eat jiaozi!" "Hearing this sentence, I immediately jumped three feet high. I started to package jiaozi, because it's the first time, so I won't. So, my sister gave me a demonstration. First, my sister carefully picked up a prepared piece of flour, and then put a little water on it with her hand. Then put a piece of stuffing into the slice with chopsticks. Finally, put the horns of jiaozi together, and a jiaozi will be wrapped. So, I also bought a jiaozi like my sister. However, in a short time, jiaozi leaked the stuffing. I looked at it and sat gloomily on the sofa. My sister came to comfort me and said, "Everyone will experience failure. As long as you persist, you will succeed. "So, I repackaged several jiaozi. This time is different from last time. Jiaozi didn't miss anything. My heart is full of joy.
This tells us not to give up halfway, where to fall, where to get up!
She is beautiful, with small eyes, long black hair, pink cherry mouth and red face. Guess who she is? Yes, she is my sister, and I like her best! Sister has one advantage, that is, helping others! Let's listen to the story of my sister helping others!
One day, my sister and I were playing in the civic square when my sister and I heard a child crying. My sister ran over and saw that a group of boys were bullying a little girl. The little girl's leg was bleeding. She sat on the ground crying and said, "Mom! Mom! Where are you! Someone bullied me! Whoops ... "As for the boys who have already escaped, the little girl is the only one crying here. Seeing this scene, my sister couldn't help rushing to help her up and patting the dirt on the little girl. She also helped the little girl put on a band-aid, sang a beautiful song, sang a beautiful song to the little girl and told jokes. After a while, there were no tears on her face, only a happy smile! Just then, the girl's mother came. As soon as I saw it, I quickly told my sister to run! But my sister didn't choose to run away, but walked up to the girl and said to her mother, "You are the girl's mother!" " A group of boys made you cry just now! I was just helping her. "I just saw it. Thank you so much! " Later, my sister and I went to have fun again!
This is my sister, a helpful person, and I am really proud of her.
My sister's excellent composition 8 I have a very good sister. She is 15 years old this year. She is a freshman. Her height 165CM. Her fair skin, big eyes and towering nose give people a feeling of generosity and exquisiteness.
My sister is not only beautiful, but also versatile. She likes playing chess very much. Every time at grandpa's house, after dinner, my sister and I set chess and prepare for the game. How sad! She ate it every time. However, I didn't lose heart and fought again. Moreover, the more fierce the Vietnam War, we all learn from the enemy's tactics to come up with operational strategies. Game after game, we are all smarter than before.
My sister loves not only playing chess, but also listening to songs, especially a series of news or reports about singers, and never misses them. If you don't believe me, you can even ask my sister. From then on, the songs that came out of her mouth were superb, just like the songs sung by singers, so beautiful!
Although my sister sings beautifully, she is determined to be a fashion designer, so she is studying painting and sketching hard. However, my sister is drawing a three-dimensional picture now, but she is still drawing it over and over again, saying that she is thinking about the future.
This is my beautiful and versatile sister, thinking about the future.
Look at her. As far as appearance is concerned, she has curly hair. Oh! By the way, she came by herself, with small eyes and chubby face. Her expressions and movements are quite rich: when she is happy, she will narrow her eyes, press her face with her index finger, and stick out her tongue to make faces at you. When you answer her question, you will put your arm around your neck and say, "You are so smart!" " "If you help her, she will put her arms around your neck and say," You are such a good man! ""What I can't stand most is her hand: when I am happy, she will gently pinch my face and ears; When I am unhappy, I will squeeze my face and ears hard.
She also has many interesting stories when she is naughty! Once when I went back to my hometown, my sister was busy playing and accidentally stepped on chicken manure. When my aunt saw this, she flew into a rage and said to my sister, "Why are you so careless?" My sister said, "It's not my fault, strange chicken." Menstruation asked, "Why?" My sister said, "Because chickens are unsanitary." My aunt said, "Then you should educate the chickens." Sister really pretended to walk up to the chicken and said, "Little friend, you should pay attention to hygiene in the future, and don't urinate anywhere!" " "I laughed my head off and said," My sister, why do you call me a chicken child? "The people next to you are bent down with joy.
My sister's excellent composition 10 She has a melon face, bright eyes embedded under black eyebrows, a high nose and a talkative cherry mouth. She likes to laugh. When she smiles, there are two dimples next to her cheeks, which gives people a very kind feeling. She is tall, thin and attractive.
She has a gentle personality and always convinces people by reasoning. Every time I make a mistake, she never hits me or scolds me. She always persuades me carefully and gives me reason, which always makes me convinced, speechless and ashamed.
She is not only beautiful in appearance, but also beautiful in language and heart.
Once, my neighbor's little sister accidentally hurt her leg while playing. Suddenly, her pants were dyed red with blood, and little sister burst into tears. When my sister saw it, she immediately ran over, bandaged her wound with a new white jacket without hesitation, then picked her up and ran to the hospital quickly. By the time she got to the hospital, her sister was sweating like a pig and sweat was dripping from her face. When the neighbor's uncle came to thank her, my sister had quietly left the hospital. Look, this is my helpful sister. There are countless such things. In a word, she is a "living Lei Feng".
In my eyes, my sister is a perfect recognition, and I like my sister. You must be dying to know her name! There's no harm in telling you. Her name is Huang. Maybe one day you will meet her on the road!
My sister's excellent composition 1 1 We have learned the unit of sincerity these days, and speaking of it reminds me of something a few years ago.
After school that afternoon, I was so thirsty that I ran to the supermarket near my home to buy water to drink. I bought a bottle of mineral water and paid for it. At this moment, I made a big mistake. While paying, I took out the key in my pocket and walked out of the supermarket with a bang. On the way back and forth, I felt that my pocket was much lighter, but I didn't know why, so I didn't pay attention to it. However, I never expected what would happen next. I was about to get home, and I was about to find the key to open the door. Strangely, the key was gone.
I'm a little anxious. I touched my trouser pocket again, but there was still nothing. I've looked everywhere, but I can't find my key. I remember stamping my feet and cursing myself. I thought: I can't enter the house without a key, and my mother is not at home. What shall I tell them when they come back? If the bad guys find out, will they steal from my house? Thought of here, I burst into tears.
Suddenly, it occurred to me that I could walk along the road I just walked, and maybe I could find my key. Just then, there were shouts and footsteps not far away. Is a big sister. Elder sister came running non-stop and took out my key and gave it back to me. It turned out that my elder sister found my key. I was so happy that I took her hand and quickly said thank you to her. Looking at the big sister sweating, I gave her mineral water to drink, but she said no, it's what she should do, and then turned around and left.
My sister's sincere and kind heart touched me and reminded me of a famous saying: real people are sincere, not refined and sincere, and cannot be moved.
Sister's excellent composition 12 "I have a good sister! I have a good sister! ..... "Sometimes I will be funny and hum when I am in a good mood. However, there is such a good sister.
My sister and I are twins, but she takes care of my sister and always cares about me and takes care of me.
Just yesterday, the head teacher excitedly told my mother about our mid-term exam results. We all got 86 points in math, and my sister got 93 points in Chinese. My Chinese is five points worse than her. The news that the total score is 5 points is like putting a spring in my heart, and the "water drop" is constantly trying to rise. Fortunately, later, my mother said that our grades were both ranked that year, and my sister's Chinese score was the first in the class. Otherwise, the disappointing water drop will listen, and I will. ...
I stayed in the same place for a while. Suddenly, I couldn't control my sadness. "Wow!" I ran into the room crying, closed the door and lay in bed crying. After a while, my sister pushed the door and came in, trying to comfort me: "Good sister, don't cry, your grades are already very good. You see, your math score is also the first in your class. According to my mother, there are very few people with 80 points! Wow! Chinese 88 points, not bad! Besides, your Chinese and math scores were famous in those days! Stop crying! Stop crying! Ah! ..... "In fact, she was very sad. After all, she didn't get 90 points in math! Besides, she shed a lot of tears behind her back.
My sister is like this. What about me? But sometimes I don't know good or bad, and I quarrel with her, but almost every time she "stops fighting" first and makes me "win", but in fact, she wins. Visible she generous!
So, I want to express my inner voice here: "Thank you, my good sister!" " "
My sister's excellent composition 13 When flowers bloom, I miss you. Every fallen leaf, I miss you. Flowers bloom and fall, I have already turned into a white butterfly and flew to your side.
Dear sister, do you know that the person I want to rely on most is you?
At the age of seven, you led me at the age of five, walking on the ridge in spring. You are wearing a white dress, which looks as beautiful as a butterfly. Our happy footprints were left on the country road.
I remember, when I was young and ignorant, I robbed my neighbor's children of candy. He ran to tell his mother, and before her mother was angry, you rushed over and said you robbed him. So, your pocket money for two weeks was confiscated. You ran out of the house and told me with red eyes that when you grow up and earn money, you will buy me a lot of sugar. ...
I still remember that at noon when cicadas were singing, you secretly took me out of the house and climbed a tall tree to pick mulberries. Because I am still young, I don't know the essentials of climbing mountains at all. I can't climb trees or pick mulberries. You climbed up and picked a bag full, and we shared this delicious food. Although I ate a mouthful of purple, I still didn't enjoy myself, clamoring for you to pick it again. When you climb that tall and big tree again, unfortunately, your body falls from the sky and still looks like a butterfly. I was suddenly stunned and my mind was blank, but you still held bright purple mulberries in your hand and smiled and said to me, "Come, come and eat …" My dear sister, I am the only ignorant little sister in your heart!
When you know a few words, I don't know where to know that Provence is beautiful. You said that you would take me to Provence to see lavender in the future, and you also said that you would take off the wings of butterflies and put them on me so that we could fly to the horizon and never come back. ...
Now, you left me to go to school in the provincial capital. Life without you is really like years. Sister, you know, what I want to rely on most at this moment is you!
Everyone says we look alike, but I don't think we look alike at all, because I am a man and she is a woman. I am black and she is white. I am noisy and she is quiet. But there is no way, we must stay together every day, because she is my sister.
Every time my family goes out to eat, the food I order is the best, and my parents like it very much, but my sister just wants to play the devil's advocate with me and say that I have no taste. I ordered steak and she insisted on chicken wings.
My sister is a mobile phone controller. Once, I asked my sister to give me her mobile phone to play with, but she refused to live or die. Finally, my mother came and gave me a death order. She only gave me her mobile phone, but she still couldn't bear it.
In fact, she is a very contradictory person. On one occasion, during the Chinese New Year, our family went back to their hometown to play together. Every time I go to pick tea, I always pick the most, because every time my sister gives me her tea, but whenever we eat, she always tries to grab chicken wings from me, as if she were a different person. Let me choose tea, but argue with me for food at dinner. What do you mean? I really don't understand.
Although my sister puzzled me, she was willing to share her little secret with me, which made me very happy.
On one occasion, my sister went to pick tea herself. She only told me, not my parents. Of course, I won't tell on her. My sister trusts me so much, how can I betray her!
This is my sister. Although we will quarrel, more often, we are happy.
My sister's excellent composition 15 I have a sister who is very, very beautiful. Oh, who is she?
Her name is Cheng Wu, 16 years old. Her head is flowing with long hair, and there are a pair of beautiful eyes under her eyebrows that seem to be talking and watery. There are a pair of pink cherry mouths under the bridge of the nose, which sounds very sweet and beautiful.
Sister Wu loves reading and is very clever. No, no, no, I'm not bragging, no, no, no, I'm not complimenting her. Forget it, I'm sure you won't believe it. Let me tell you something!
In a holiday, Jing Cheng and I went to my aunt's house to play and ate my summer homework. Hee hee, I haven't finished my summer homework yet! I stayed at my aunt's house all morning. Oh, it's time to do your summer homework. We took out our summer homework and began to do it for a long time, and finally finished the topic of Unit 1.
It's time to do Unit 2! This question stumped us. We asked Sister Mu, and she thought about it and said, This question is a bit difficult! Sister Mu pondered this question, so let's ask you, Sister Wu. When we came to her, she took a look and told us what to do. Thanks to her help, we finished it soon!
She's amazing! Secretly tell you, Sister Mu is older than Sister Wu! Shh, please don't say it!