[Haitang Society] 5 1 1 Society

Entry:

0 1? Julia

Seven-line ellipse

The shape is neither cylindrical nor round, and the emphasis comes from symmetry.

No matter who runs away from home, this body is entangled.

Zhang Chengyu commented:

The most essential difference between an ellipse and a circle is that there is an extra center. This mathematical concept falls into the hands of the poet, which is countless feelings.

03? candle light

Five unique skills, ellipse (new rhyme)

Like a frame without horns, like a circle with two hearts.

Smooth and elegant, fascinated by all orders.

04? There is sunny snow in Xishan

Seven wonders? oblong

1. Half-length contract, two groups and four hearts.

I also know that it is difficult to unite, only to be inclusive.

05? Still water runs deep.

Seven-stop Ellipse (Yun Xin)

At present, I suddenly understand the two hearts in ellipse and oblate circle.

One is near and the other is far, looking for a bosom friend on the poor line.

06? Between water and clouds

Seven Wonders _ Ellipse

Paradoxically, it is also called circle, and the high-precision ruler technique is useless.

Strange materials, hard work, careful thinking, missed the opportunity for nearly ten thousand years.

07? chivalrous swordsman

Get along in an elliptical way (new rhyme)

What is difficult in the world is human feelings, and the answer has been born with doubts.

If you are near, you will be frivolous and resentful, and if you are near, you will be elliptical.

08? Little Lord Fauntleroy

Five wonders: ellipse

After thousands of years, pebbles have become stronger and stronger.

Water mill is like jade, and people are round like this.

09? every day

Four unique ellipsis (new rhyme)

The dual focus of the family business is the end of the world, and it is entrusted to the heart.

The mark left by the past is particularly deep. Looking back on life is an ellipse.

10? Lin

Ellipse (flat rhyme)

If it's not round, it will end like this. Things change.

Give up the frontier to create everything, and share the mighty mind with Fiona Fang.

1 1? Shen Yuan

Seven wonders? oblong

I'm bored on a cloudy night, and I always draw an oblique line. Stay back. Where's ChanJuan?

Although the centrifugal journey is thousands of miles away, it is unreasonable and round.

12? Xia Chaohui

Strange feeling. Oval apricot

Red apricots are round and oval, and the walls are full of flowers.

Every time the water is warm and the spring is open, butterflies are crazy.

Zhang Chengyu commented:

The initial heart is the key point and the threshold for getting started. The first two sentences are a bit far, but fortunately they are closed at the back.

16? Wells Pan

Seven wonders? Elliptic focus (new rhyme)

At two o'clock is Yusuo, and the double focus is close at hand.

If two hearts become one, the moon will remember the Mid-Autumn Love Song.

Comments on Nine Poems by Poet Kui;

It's well written, describing the boring behavior of drawing an ellipse so poetically. However, I personally think it needs to be revised. First, the meaning is not deep, the feelings are not strong, and it seems to be limited to the surface of things. I suggest a pun to deepen the theme; Second, "a hundred turns and a thousand turns" and "cycle after cycle" are rarely used. Please forgive my mistake.

18? Pearl river beach

Seven wonders. cobblestone

Wash the stone mill for thousands of years, remove the corners and eliminate the egg shape.

If you want the river bed to be long, you can't ask for a round posture.

19? Jiang Ziya

Seven wonders: ellipsis

Life trajectory requirements are not high, and you can choose the arc freely.

Not necessarily funny, not crooked, full of enthusiasm.

Takada commented:

You don't need to recite scriptures for this question. This theme seems difficult and easy, but it is easier to play because of its outstanding characteristics. The effect is a matter of technique and brushwork.

This article uses an ellipse to describe life, but it is not sure about the right point, so it gives people a vague feeling, which leads to thinking while watching, but thinking is boring!

① "Smoothness" is unique to non-ellipse, suitable for all circles, and far from the attitude towards life.

(2) sentence by sentence.

(3) turn sentence attack is unreasonable.

(4) The ending sentence is ambiguous.

2 1? Nanfengchuang

Five-line ellipse

If you were born a rectangle, why are you hiding in four corners?

Round light is all-inclusive, mixed with sorrow and joy.

22? China Piaoxiang

Five-line ellipse

Car mirrors imitate the oval shape of Xatu.

Find the track when you have time. The most beautiful thing is the soul.