In my heart, there are many people worth learning. Among them, the most worthy of my study is my little friend, "Little" Xin Li.

Li Xin has a pair of big bright eyes with two curved heavy eyebrows hanging on them. Her only weakness is that she always keeps talking. In terms of age, she is one year younger than me; As far as figure is concerned, she is half a head shorter than me. Xin Li is my neighbor and my preschool classmate. Whenever school is over, we all go together. This big schoolbag weighs heavily on her. I often help her with her schoolbag. I am inferior to her.

One day in the summer vacation, I want to invite Xin Li to go swimming. So I called Xin Li's family. "Hello, is this Xin Li?" "It's Zhao Yan! Zhao Yan, let me tell you two good news first. The first one was a holiday, and my erhu passed Band 4. In addition, tomorrow ... "

"All right!" I know she won't let me put the phone down for an hour. So I quickly said, "can you go swimming with me tomorrow?" Don't you always want to swim with me! "

Hearing this, Xin Li prevaricated. "Tomorrow ... I ... I will ..." Hearing this, I am angry. "Look at your enthusiasm just now, when it comes to business, you are dumb. Besides, haven't you always wanted to compete with me? Now that I'm free, forget it if you want to come! " Hang up the phone with a bang. Unexpectedly, five minutes later, Xin Li took the initiative to call me: "Zhao Yan, don't be angry, I will definitely come tomorrow."

I put the phone down slowly. Somehow, my heart is sour. Is this bullying the little one? So the next day, I apologized to Xin Li. Unexpectedly, instead of being angry, she was very considerate of me: "Hey, it's okay, who doesn't have a short temper!" " Actually, I'm not in a hurry. I just made an appointment to celebrate my grandmother's birthday. But I've made up my mind. Isn't it the best of both worlds to go after swimming? "Big deal, give grandma two more heads!" Then he made a face at me.

Looking at this "little guy" in front of me, I thought to myself, we usually study and play together, and I always regard her as a "little guy". Now, it makes me feel like a little guy. I can't help but feel an unspeakable apology and respect for her from my heart. Xin Li's understanding and tolerant attitude are really worth learning!

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Mother's nagging

At night, I don't know why, but I feel a little bored, so I turn on the TV and watch it boring.

"Have you finished your homework? Watch TV every day! " Oh, my God, here we go again. "Look at your paper, you will get some points. How dare you watch TV? You are in the sixth grade, I always say so ... "I let out a cry and slammed the door, leaving my unconscious mother alone in the living room, locked herself in the cabin and fell asleep. If I were a mother, I wouldn't be such a nagging mother!

Suddenly, I was a little surprised. Hey! Why am I old, wearing high heels, a flowered skirt and an apron? How did mom become as young as me and jump? Oh! It seems that my mother and I have switched places. In this case, I must let her know how to be a "non-nagging mother".

I was cooking in the kitchen when she whooshed in, picked up a piece of ham and put it in her mouth. I was about to say "hand washing is really unsanitary", but I remembered that I said I would be a "mother who doesn't nag."

I'm really tired after a busy day. After dinner, I just sat on the sofa and wanted to have a rest. I saw her put down her work and shut herself in a small room without saying a word. "How so lazy! So big, you shouldn't help me wash the dishes! " I thought so in my heart, but I had to stand up and drag my tired body to wash the dishes.

I put on my apron and turned on the washing machine. I was just about to wash clothes. Without saying a word, she took out a lot of clothes from the hut: "help me wash them." I'm going out for a while, goodbye! " I can only lose my temper at the empty room.

At ten o'clock in the evening, she hasn't come back yet. I was so anxious that I called one phone after another, but I couldn't find her anywhere. "It's so late, where did she go? Will something happen? Please don't have an accident! Why don't you come back? " Finally, she came back. "Where have you been? What if you don't tell your family when you come back so late? You are not young, why do you always make people worry ... "I couldn't help it and yelled at her. "I'm not good?" She slammed the door and shut herself in the cabin. "bang!"

With a door ringing, I woke up and returned to reality. Mother pushed the door and came in. "Why don't you sleep so late? Still playing with your temper? If I say anything to you, you won't stand it. Aren't you satisfied? You are in the sixth grade. Go on like this every day, okay I said you didn't do it for your own good ... "I didn't speak, just looked at my mother and smiled. I finally understand my mother's nagging, my ignorance, and the deep maternal love behind nagging. "Thank you, Mom!" "?" Mom looked blank.

With my mother's love, I slept soundly.

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My analytical father

My father is an excellent math teacher, perhaps influenced by his occupation. No matter what happens, he always likes to analyze the problem thoroughly with his logical thinking.

On the evening of sunset, when I came home from school, I was busy doing my homework. Open the book, open the exercise book, touch the pen, it is broken, and the refill is used up. You need to buy a pen quickly. Just about to go out, my mother, who was busy in the kitchen, shouted, "Son, there is no salt. Go and buy a bag of salt." "Ah, salt and pen can be in two different places, one far and one near. Which one should I buy first? " I'm really in trouble.

At this time, my father, who was sitting comfortably on the sofa watching TV, moved, holding his chin in one hand and scratching his head in the other. His eyes were ga zi ng, and then he said, "According to my analysis, you should buy salt first, and my mother will wait for cooking, and then you can buy a pen, not to mention the place where you buy a pen is far away ..." My father's mouth kept opening and closing like a machine gun firing bullets. Then, my father began to enter the stage of theoretical analysis: "After doing things, we should divide the line, which is lighter and which is more important, and make reasonable arrangements, not just grasping the beard and eyebrows ..." I wondered while listening: "Does this make sense?" But I have to adjust my thinking and keep up with my father's analysis.

Before I came to my senses, my father's analysis moved from theory to time: "You see, according to my analysis, if a country has no plan and no overall arrangement, it will be a mess." 5? 12 earthquake, the people of the whole country need to unite as one in earthquake relief; With the arrival of the Olympic Games, we have to divert our attention and cheer for the Olympic athletes ... "Does it matter? My thinking is a little behind. It's not over yet. Dad's thin lips are open and closed, and there is no intention to stop. " Not only today, but also in ancient times ... ""Oh, why talk about the past and discuss the present? "Listen to dizzy, I was more than I could bear. I made a dash for the door.

Not only that, in order to decide what kind of flowerpot a flower should be put in, he has to analyze it; What nutrition to eat every morning, he wants to analyze; Rinse your mouth a few minutes after a meal, and he will also analyze it.

Analysis, analysis and re-analysis, my mother and I couldn't stand the "hard work" of his analysis and finally made a serious protest to him. Hearing this, my father looked puzzled at first, and then said slowly, "Well, we have to analyze this problem."

Ah, I am dizzy!

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"Teacher parents also". Speaking of teachers, the image of aloof and unsmiling on the podium always gives students a sense of fear. But today I want to talk about Mr. Ou, but he doesn't have the image of "being tall" at all, and even does the opposite.

As the highest commander of this class, Mr. Ou should be domineering and not angry. But he just makes friends with our classmates, joking and having fun. He is a real king of children, and at the same time he is funny and kind. Every morning, as soon as we step into the campus, we can always see a "stand out from the crowd" figure running around in the pursuit of male students in our class, sometimes laughing and sometimes screaming, attracting attention. I won't say who he is, but you should all know that it's Mr. Ou, a football player who has a great reaction among the male students in our class. At this time, the female students in our class can't help but become spectators and cheer for this rare campus scene. And our teacher Ou will get more and more carried away, waving and cheering to us from time to time and becoming a football star on the court. This was nothing at first, but later he went further and asked us girls to run five laps every morning, which is also commendable: health is the capital of revolution and health is the greatest wealth in life. This move naturally made us vulnerable "big ladies" suffer a lot. After waves of protests, our teacher Ou finally agreed that he would take the lead in running five more laps. It was miserable to see our head teacher in front of us, and a kind of happiness that asked for it made this "running away" incident come to an end. Strangely, since then, I, the class cadre who is responsible for registering sick leave, has become a false job of "selling dog meat"

Mr. O has another "strange". Every noon, he is always busy in the classroom. Don't think he is making up lessons for us. He has never worked so hard. He plays chess, Go and military chess in the classroom ... He often says: Life is like chess, you should always have an enterprising heart, think hard, and don't be happy for things or sad for yourself. Worst of all, he boasted that he was invincible in his class. As soon as this statement came out, it caused great public outrage, and the whole class was United and went into battle together. At that time, there was an upsurge of playing chess in the class, and even our female classmates were unwilling to lag behind, proud of defeating the teacher. As time goes by, Mr. Ou has been defeated more and more times, and our sense of success is increasing day by day. We don't know how happy we are every time we listen to the teacher's awesome feelings. Strangely, as soon as Mr. Ou's challenge was put down, the male students who usually like to chase after each other quieted down, and even the king who usually violates discipline made up his mind to show his skill on the chessboard and stop making waves. We quiet little girls are also happy to compete with male students.

What is even weirder is the homework assigned by Mr. Ou. Homework in other classes is always copied. Look at the back. Our teacher's homework is always so clever. He will ask you to compose a handwritten newspaper freely every week and prepare a debate or story meeting once a week. You will also be asked to collect typos outside the campus and investigate environmental pollution in the community; He even lets you choose your own works … God, in his eyes, we are all painters, lawyers, environmentalists … even great writers. But strangely, students always enjoy these assignments, and even the "unpaid" big families who do their homework at ordinary times always appear on the excellent honor list.

There are many "strange" things happening to Mr. Ou. But after a long time, we are not surprised, but one thing is certain; We are the "weird" teachers who like this most in recent years. I really hope that Mr. Ou will be our head teacher next semester!

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Classmates and enemies

"La la la la ..." Oh, my god, my deskmate is showing off his broken voice again. Really, I don't watch the songs I sing, but I can still sing when I am antique. Silence, ahhh.

My deskmate, surname X, name xx. It is stingy, overbearing, boring and abnormal. He always likes to bully the weak. In the past, he always sat outside and I sat inside. Every time in class, he makes me beg, telling all his praises, only showing a look of "you are smart enough", and then obediently tilting the stool to let me in. I have argued with him over 998 1 times, but I am a big man. For him, no one usually praises him-well, just waste some saliva to praise him.

My deskmate is a kind student, praised by some people as "good eyes", but because she has lived under my dark rule for a long time, she has become a typical gentleman-"having the final say and not doing anything". His motto is: "I can't beat you." I am so angry with you. " So, every time I hit him, he always dodges and scolds me for my crimes. As a result, I was always dumbfounded by his anger, blushing and thick neck, but I couldn't squeeze out a rebuttal. Hum, although I can't beat you, I can beat you. As the saying goes, "If you don't go to hell, whoever goes to hell"!

My deskmate's handwriting is very distinctive. It can be said that it is unprecedented and belongs to the messy kind. There is a song that says: "Turn left three times, turn right three times, twist your neck, twist your ass." One day, I was bored, so I grabbed his exercise book and took out a small piece of paper to imitate his handwriting. God, I wasted 10 pieces of paper and wrote more than n words, but nothing was like this! Fortunately, he had the foresight to seize the exercise book quickly, because I had the impulse to tear up his exercise book. ...

Once, someone told me that my deskmate's hairstyle was like taro and watermelon. Hearing this, I immediately returned to my seat and stared at him for a whole minute. When he touched his little white face narcissistically, he asked shyly, "Do you think I am handsome?" Suddenly, I clapped my hands and cried, "Oh, this is so similar!" " "He was startled and glared at me angrily:" Like, like what! " I said innocently, "I like watermelon skin ..." "What?" He jumped up at once, surprised, helpless and sad, and said, "How can I be like a watermelon skin? Ah, life is really a failure ... "What's your hurry when I bang the table? You're not finished yet! I mean, your hair looks like, not you look like ... stupid! ""My hairstyle ... looks like watermelon skin? " He muttered for a moment, then touched his hair. Finally, he looked "defeated by you" and said tragically, "Be a man, don't be so observant. Don't say anything, miss, or I'll be finished ... ""Good! Stop it! " "Really? A word from a gentleman is a promise! "Hum, I'm not a gentleman, I'm a mean person, and that's settled. Alas, you are always against me! You know this is wrong!

There are many stories about my deskmate ... Here, give him a paragraph:

God said, "Let there be light." So there was light in the world. God said, "Doing wrong will be punished." So ... I'll sit at your table. It's not my fault! It's Your Fault ...

Give it to you for free!

Writing magic weapon 100

I. Composition and examination

1. A few days before the exam, you can selectively read some high-quality composition books to help open your mind;

2. The minimum requirements of examination composition are fluency and relevance. If these two requirements are met, you can get basic points;

Whether to make a draft during the exam depends on everyone's situation. Generally speaking, it is time-consuming and should be avoided as much as possible;

4. An article is divided into at least four paragraphs, with six or seven paragraphs being the most appropriate;

5. The neatness of handwriting is extremely important, and the first favor of the marking teacher comes from your handwriting;

6. At the beginning of the first paragraph, we must go all out to describe the character form, event process or scenery characteristics with descriptive techniques. The successful beginning accounts for 50% of the full text score;

7. Don't be afraid to encounter a cold essay, narrow down the scope, find the core, and you can write it;

8. It must be a good thing if the exam questions are done. Of course, you need to "go up a storey still higher";

9. Like telling a story to a good friend, spoken language is like recording, which is very lively and interesting;

10, the language is humorous and more interesting, which makes the marking teacher laugh. Such an article is bound to get high marks;

1 1. Imaginative topics don't show any theme, as long as they are interesting and beneficial;

12. Never make up your mind to discuss or express the last paragraph. Finally, it is a description, echoing the beginning. If it is basically the same as the beginning, it is also very distinctive;

13. Asking you to use any genre in the exam doesn't mean that you can use any genre you want, but you should do it according to the principle of "fostering strengths and avoiding weaknesses";

14. For the Chinese exam, at least one hour should be reserved for the article, and the basic knowledge should be checked after the composition. When modifying, use the modification symbol of the specification, and pay attention to the neatness of the roll surface.

Second, the composition and competition

15. Serious writing is the prerequisite for success. Readers will leave a good impression on you at first sight;

16. When writing, pay more attention to the selection of materials and forms, and express your wisdom, thoughts and pursuits, even if the reviewers are ashamed;

17. The article should be full of strong feelings, because only strong feelings can touch people's hearts;

18. Make a little modification to the material in your hand to make it more touching, vivid and aesthetic. This is not false, but beautification;

19. Add at least one novel attempt that you have never used in your writing. Only when you feel fresh, others will feel fresh;

20. Writing in the first person is most suitable for lyricism, which increases the realism and credibility of the article.

Third, composition and form

2 1. The diary form is relatively novel, and the three diaries write the beginning, process and result of an event respectively, giving people a sense of freshness;

22. Set a subtitle, as if there is something in the text, giving people a sense of pocket. Three or four articles focus on a theme or an aspect, which is more pleasing;

23. The language of subtitles should be consistent, such as all dialogues, all ancient poems, or all quotations from advertising languages. Neat form can exert unexpected miracles;

24. It is aesthetic to deal with the structure of the article in the form of A-side, B-side, or the first movement and the second movement, which can make people associate;

25. Writing in the form of "the first act and the second act" is novel and unique;

26. Use "the first picture: watercolor painting; The second picture: "and other art forms, connecting the full text together, will certainly receive good results;" "

27. Use the method of role self-report to give people a sense of intimacy, realism and interest. For example, my father said, my mother said, I said to write the composition "My Home" in three parts.

Fourth, composition and emotion.

28. Imagine rich emotions and make you enter the real emotional world;

29. The so-called creative impulse means that your emotions have been brewing for a long time and you have to express them.

30. A good article is the product of emotion. Between the lines, there should be tears flying;

3 1. Reading and watching plays can enrich your emotional world;

32. When writing, imagine the people in front of you smiling, the birds in the study singing, and the silence of the trees outside the window. Your pen will be happy and beautiful;

33. Imagine the childhood of the elderly, the old age of children, the upbringing of women, and the farming of men. You will sigh the hardships and impermanence of life, time will change everything, and words will cry;

34. Sincere emotions are touching, and exaggerated emotions are uncomfortable;

35. Let the language soak the source of emotion and let the words express your inner feelings;

36. The degree of emotion is expressed by adjectives, and the only emotion is the only word.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) composition and rhetoric

37. Metaphor is the simplest rhetoric, which is characterized by vividness, vividness and popularity.

38. The direct use of metaphor can make sentences swaying and interesting;

39. Different benefits can be obtained by using carriers related to themes or scenes in articles;

40. Comparing Event A to Event B is a difficult metaphor to understand, but it has an interesting artistic effect.

4 1. Use multiple metaphors to make them appear in rows. This statement has the momentum of a military camp, such as a model phalanx.

42. Metaphor should serve the characters and themes, and the author's writing orientation can be seen from both derogatory metaphors and positive metaphors.

43. It is wonderful to connect the five senses with synaesthesia, so that the fragrance is fragrant and the sound is petal rain.

44. The personification method is a vivid source of articles, which must be mastered and used well;

45. Exaggeration makes sentences work wonders, and exaggeration also produces humor;

46. Parallelism sentences are often used to express feelings, while symmetry sentences are often used to describe feelings. The appearance of the same sentence patterns and roughly similar words in the text also makes the form beautiful;

47. Repetition is an uncommon rhetorical method, but you should know and understand it.

48. The contrast technique is very interesting. Please identify the feelings between mountains and plains.

Sixth, composition and conception

49. A composition needs a theme, but it doesn't have to be noble and great. You can also write like ants;

50. If you want to learn composition, learn to be a man first. Your thoughts are in words, your feelings are in sentences, and your image is in paragraphs.

5 1. Teacher China often emphasizes ideas and doesn't listen to them. As long as it is not vulgar, it will do;

52. Even a small emotion can become the center of the article, for example, a melancholy and loneliness at noon in summer;

53. The same theme can express different themes, which depends on your writing ability and your writing focus;

54. The idea of expressing the theme, expressing the center and the article are different, but the content is the same, which is also very important for Chinese learning.

VII. Composition and Theme

55. The so-called theme is the material selected according to the topic. The subject is the master, but the subject is the room. The theme should be what the owner thinks is the most suitable and best;

56. In the composition grading standard, the score of the subject matter accounts for a considerable proportion, so you should attach great importance to it;

57. The first material is basically not the best, the second will be slightly better, and the third and fourth will dig out unique and excellent themes;

58. The method of selecting materials is stupid, but it is more practical to write down the pre-selected themes on paper, make a comparison and then determine one of them.

59. Unique experience is the best theme. Don't feel ashamed, and don't feel ugly now. True feelings are the true meaning of writing;

60. The theme is beautiful. Seeing the big from the small gives people rich associations. It is said that to see the world in a grain of sand and heaven in a flower;

6 1. observation is the most important way to accumulate materials, but experience and experience are the more important contents of life;

On the way to school, pay attention to every new slogan, every newly opened store and every beautiful change. These are the steps of the city where you live;

63. It is a good way to accumulate materials by keeping a palm-sized notebook with you and suddenly thinking and seeing it.

64. The most touching story in the world often happens around you, but only stays under your nose for 59 seconds;

65. Pay attention to everyone who walks past you in a hurry, pay attention to their clothes, gait and sadness in their brow. These people will become your characters one day;

66. Read about life, the world, the street, the change of a tree and the fate of an insect, and you will get a steady stream of life materials; At the same time, you have enriched yourself in your life experience;

67. It is also an emergency measure to find and accumulate materials from reading other people's excellent works and then use them when there are difficulties in writing;

68. Unforgettable events in wonderful situations, such as Spring Night, Under the Moon and Riverside, read like poems;

69. When writing the composition of classmates and friends, try to avoid those "high officials and celebrities" in the class. Because these people are "noticed" and lose their personality. On the contrary, the so-called "king of skins", "tomboy" and "chubby" are all vivid and full of interesting things;

70. When writing a kind of "self" composition, it is best to write your own growth process and youth troubles from a smaller angle, such as the change of an article, which is more profound;

7 1. It is best to write people with different occupations at the bottom, such as setting up stalls, cleaning toilets and delivering briquettes. The more common, the more intimate and the more touching;

72. When writing about others, it's best to write about people who feel sorry at the sound of it, or people whose careers are full of yearning, such as little girls who run away from home, girls who are dying, geological prospecting players, explorers, etc. This theme can best capture readers;

73. When writing about classmates and friends, it's better to write about regrets than to write about closeness, to write about defects than to write about Excellence, to write about ugliness than to write about the same sex, and to write about stupidity than to write about success.

74. When writing about things at home, it is best to choose those extreme examples to write, such as "Great Sorrow: Death of Relatives, Divorce of Parents"; Or exultation: winning the lottery, dad going abroad, etc. , which is impressive;

75. When writing off-campus events, we should pay attention to the novel and interesting subject matter, which is full of the flavor of the times. It is better to write about what happened at McDonald's than what happened at the First Department Store. Instead of writing firecrackers in front of an old brand, it is better to write a literary fashion show when a new product comes on the market.

76. Don't complain about the poverty of life and the paleness of experience. Even in an empty room, there will be endless materials to write.

77. Writing a retrospective article can best arouse the feelings and lingering words in your heart. The past is like smoke, things are different, who is not surging;

78. Interest is the weakness of composition teaching. Some teachers think that interest is not an idea. In fact, interest is a happy life and the biggest idea.

79. In the choice of theme, pay attention to a little artistic conception, pursue a little elegance, approach a little poetry and reflect a little simplicity. Such material is the easiest to impress readers;

80. Beautiful stories, wonderful life and beautiful artistic conception are the three major aesthetic selling points of the theme, which will fascinate readers.

Eight, composition and language

8 1. Dividing a sentence into two or three sentences can avoid the appearance of sick sentences;

82. Inverted sentences can play a role in highlighting a word;

83. Appropriate quotations from ancient poems and famous sentences can greatly increase the literary talent of the article;

84. The opening paragraph should not be too long, and it is best to control it within 30 to 50 words;

85. When writing a narrative, if you can't start, you can start with "time+season+scenery";

86. When writing a person, if you can't start, start with "name+an appearance feature+a personality feature";

87. To write a landscape composition, you can start with a tiny landscape beauty;

88. A punch line or punch line in the first paragraph is a very pleasing way to start;

89. If there is more than one narrative example, generally speaking, the intermediate and final materials should be arranged in more detail;

90. If the time and place are stated in the narrative, it can be explained indirectly by writing the scene.

Nine, composition and story

9 1. It is best to write the most arresting scene at the beginning of the narrative;

92. It is superb writing skill to summarize the characteristics of animals in a few sentences and then explain them separately.

93. Adding riddles, poems and other materials to the explanation text can show your cultural literacy and make the explanation object more cordial;

94. Ending with ellipsis is both implicit and economical, and it is a "cheap and good" ending method;

95. At the end of the dialogue with the characters, sometimes unexpected literary effects are received;

96. Ending with an incisive sentence is also a subtle and powerful ending way;

97. Ending with a long speech is the best way to drive away readers;

98. It is the most naive and stupid to shout slogans, make great decisions and make a big review at the end;

99. The end of flashback should correspond to the beginning.

100. quoting poems or lyrics at the end is a long-lasting ending method.

I hope it will help you ~△ [∏ _ ∏ ]▲ ~★ (∩ _ ∩) ☆ ~ ~ I hope it can be adopted.