From the landlord's style of crossing in your question, we can see that: First, the landlord's language skills have accumulated, but the language training is not enough.
Second, the landlord should be a high school liberal arts student or a freshman who has just entered the university. I don't know if it's accurate or not.
Nowadays, there are fewer and fewer children's shoes to hone their writing style. I am very pleased to see that the landlord has such determination! When I was a liberal arts student in high school, the compositions of the girls around me were very popular. The articles should be people-friendly and have a macro vision. There is an idiom called "from a strategically advantageous position". The applied writing teacher in the university (the teacher is a well-known veteran of our school) told us that you will write in the future, and the starting point for writing articles is very high, but I don't think so. As you said, those words are romantic and affectionate! As an explanation, we should remember the saying "from a strategic position", start from a high point and be far-sighted! The teacher's earnest teaching has been remembered to this day and is also given to you. I hope you can remember it.
Well, it's a long-term thing to hone your writing style. For you who want to practice your composition, you need to temper not only your writing level, but also your observation and analysis of the society and the problems around you! So this is a long-term thing, just like learning English. Don't think that you can make a breakthrough in a short time like amazing mathematics, and don't give up halfway because you can't see any hope. Practice writing as an interest and make it a part of your life. What you want to see is not only the simple love of essays for a while, but also the importance to your future work and life. Hone your writing skills. People who can write and speak in officialdom will always be valued when they take the civil service exam in the future, even if there is nothing at home.
Therefore, to hone your writing style, you need to develop your own habits. In high school, I was tired of coping with the college entrance examination, so I had no more choices in writing. I just wrote some general words for the sake of getting a middle school grade in the college entrance examination. But after graduating from high school, universities have more time to think. My personal habits are roughly as follows:
1. Always keep a diary. How many people dare to say that they are keeping a diary? I have kept a diary for ten years, and I have never stopped from the senior high school entrance examination to the college entrance examination to the time when I was addicted to games in college. I think keeping a diary is the best habit to hone writing. Thinking or trivial matters of life are recorded in it. I won't get rid of this habit in my future work and life.
2. Be diligent in reading newspapers. If you want to avoid your words falling into pettiness, you should pay attention to the things around you and social hotspots every day. Diary can be lazy, but the newspaper must be read! In addition to the recent hot news of natural and man-made disasters such as Yushu earthquake, there are more deep-seated social problems worth considering: 78 central enterprises were asked to withdraw from real estate business within a time limit, and Xinhua News Agency issued six articles in succession denouncing high housing prices; Prisoners are tortured to death in local labor camps, and the controversy about the labor camp system is becoming increasingly fierce; The National Development and Reform Commission (NDRC) has invested 4 trillion yuan to maintain stable macroeconomic growth, and the whereabouts of 4 trillion yuan are widely questioned ... You see, if you insist on reading newspapers every week, you will find yourself familiar with the hot spots in today's society, and you will have further thinking and topic selection for writing.
3. Read more ancient prose and writing instructions. In fact, I think ancient Chinese is the best guide book. Now I am studying the works of eight masters in Tang and Song Dynasties in my spare time. I see that you mentioned the old adage "Words carry Tao" in your question. Han Yu said: Literature carries Tao, and literature and Tao are one. The Eight Masters of Tang and Song Dynasties, headed by Han Yu, were the main critics and essayists of that era. Although the essays they wrote at that time were in classical Chinese, in terms of writing level alone, they really set a historical height that our future generations could not reach! Therefore, if you want to write a sharp article, you must learn pure words from the ancients. Personally, I appreciate those essays in the ancient Chinese style in the newspaper, because they are not written by ordinary writers, but must be written by predecessors with profound writing skills. Look at their writing level, it's really perfect.
4. stick to it. I think your understanding of this problem needs many years of progress. When I was at school, I could eat and drink comfortably in the library all day, but now the employment pressure is so great that in my junior year, all the students around me are busy preparing for the internship. Our 2 1 1 college signed less than 30% this year. The future employment problem, the problem of buying a house, and all kinds of life pressures are all difficulties you will face. I just want the landlord to understand that in the next few years, you still need to have persistent determination in the face of the pressure of life and employment. Especially if your career has nothing to do with writing practice in a few years, for example, you are a company accountant, for example, you are a salesman who runs a business, and if you are busy in your eight-to-five life, you are dusty day after day, then do you still have the determination to hone your writing? If you take the civil service exam, or enter the journalism department or Chinese department, it is of course the best choice. But such a sense of advance needs to be considered.
Finally, I suggest you start by reading newspapers. China Youth Daily is a very good newspaper, and most of the articles in the second edition of Youth Review are excellent reviews! Learn from them and you will know what an excellent composition should look like! Also worthy of your attention are: Southern Weekend and Economic Observer. Newspapers need extensive reading.
In fact, it is still for the reward of 200 points. I can't bear to see the answers that are casually handled in front of me! Good luck, I won't say much. I hope you can have more experience after reading it. I hope you can do it yourself and really start practicing.
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