It is a character description skill to want to promote first and then suppress. "Yang" means to raise first and then restrain, and refers to praise and elevation. "Restraint" means to suppress and belittle. The author wants to praise a character, but he doesn't write from the praise, but first presses it and writes from the negative derogatory place. In this way, the plot is changeable, ups and downs, forming sharp contrast, which is easy to make readers feel suddenly enlightened and leave a deep impression in the reading process.
2) "Yang" and "Suppression" are both artistic means of emphasis. The ancients made an article that emphasized "gaining power", and also talked about the truth of wanting to promote first, restraining first and then promoting. In the Warring States Policy, there is a story of Feng. At the beginning of the article, Wen Feng has neither hobbies nor abilities, but also loves to make trouble and complain. It was a complete failure, and the author relegated him to the lowest place. Then he turned to write about how he managed the "three caves" for Meng Changjun, and wrote about his extraordinary talent. The "suppression" at the beginning is to set off the "Yang" at the back. If you pay attention, such examples are not uncommon in excellent works at all times and in all countries. 3) Using this method, the author should pay attention to the contrast before and after intonation in the process of conception and writing, mostly in the form of antonyms. In addition, the two should not be equated, but should focus on the latter. Restraint acts as a buffer. The mastery of the proportion and weight here can only be carefully understood and pondered through my constant writing practice.
The latest lecture of Simple Learning Network:
Wang Daji talks about poetry appreciation in college entrance examination, Wang Daji talks about composition in college entrance examination, and Wang Daji talks about reading classical Chinese.
Lin Bin speaks English cloze, Lin Bin speaks English reading comprehension and Li Junhe speaks high school English writing.
2. Students discuss the writing method of the article cicada we have learned.
3. Write with the method of wanting to rise first and restraining first:
1) Write someone you know.
2) Write about an animal
Let's use our brains to work out the problem.
Third, class composition discussion
1, written by people: theme discussion
2. Thematic discussion.
3. Oral composition.
Fourth, give an example:
1, [example] "An unusual exam" Tianjin Guo Han
At five or six o'clock in the evening in winter, the sun is about to set, so we sit in the classroom and wait for self-study in the evening. With clear footsteps, the Chinese teacher came into the classroom.
"Self-study tonight, we have an exam."
Before the words were finished, the sighs in the classroom flew all over the sky. Naughty F Jun said: "Yesterday, today, tomorrow. But when will you be happy? Start writing: Enjoy the exam. The voice just fell and the classroom burst into laughter.
The Chinese teacher was not angry, but just smiled and said, "Jun F, your speech is good! Ancient prose without white back. I didn't explain it clearly just now We don't record results in today's exam, just want to give full play to your potential ability. Now answer me: what do you think of when you look at the sunset outside the window? "
"Think of that old man." A jun answers first.
"Thinking deeply and thinking unclear is like thinking."
"Is there anything else?" The teacher asked.
"If you think about tomorrow, the sun will rise tomorrow. It is no longer a sunset, it will become a sunrise. " F jun said without thinking.
"Very good!" The Chinese teacher praised it. The students gave warm applause to F Jun's wonderful answer. Just after the first question, the teacher asked the second question: "What should the sunrise be like?"
"vigorous and energetic."
"Full of confidence and vitality."
This time, everyone stood up and said, and the atmosphere immediately warmed up. Then there is the third question:
"What kind of sunrise do you want to be and how can you make your youth look like a sunrise?"
"I hope it will always be a sunrise full of vigor and vitality. I am still free to play, imagine and create, but ... I don't have time. " W jun looked very helpless and waved.
"I hope to be a' good boy' sunrise, but I have always loved to play.' Good boy' may be too far away from me." F jun's tone is slightly regrettable.
When the Chinese teacher heard these words, he said happily, "In fact, you are all the rising sun. As long as you don't study too hard and leave some time and space for yourself to play, then your creation will not be just a dream. Think about what you said today, how complete and reasonable, and how good your literary talent is! ……"
This "painful exam" has become so easy, I like it and I am deeply intoxicated by this unusual exam. I really hope that the exams after the students' "burden reduction" can be as happy as our exams.
2. Classroom comments:
The success of this article. Thanks to the author's ingenuity-expressing feelings with the method of "restraining first and then promoting", an unusual exam is interesting, profound and memorable.
The Chinese teacher in the evening self-study class announced the exam. "Sighs have been flying all over the sky in the classroom." If "F Jun" teased, a burst of laughter broke out in the classroom. The teacher took advantage of the trend and started the evening self-study exam with the topic "What will you think of when you look at the sunset outside the window". The form is novel and the method is unique. At the end, I wrote "painful exam" and "I finally fell in love with it". This is a kind of writing style that wants to promote first and then suppress, which is meaningless.
2. "My uncle"
I have a very good uncle. He loves me the most and I like him very much. He collects taxes, and he usually wears a big hat, which is very powerful. Sometimes, he puts a big hat on my head, and I go forward to make everyone laugh. But something happened recently, which gave me a new view of my uncle.
It was Saturday night, and my mother took me to my uncle's house to play. As soon as I entered the door, I found a stranger talking to my uncle. Seeing us come in, the stranger grabbed his uncle's big hat, covered a pile of things on the coffee table in a panic, and got up to leave. I only heard my uncle say, "OK, I'm sure I can do it well!" " As he spoke, he walked the man out.
When my uncle went to see Fujian, I curiously lifted the big cap and looked, ah! I was shocked at once, a thick stack of "great unification"! Hum, what a surprise that uncle can do such a shameful thing! I thought angrily. After a while, my uncle came to talk to me. I pretended not to hear him and just ignored him.
The next day, my uncle came to my house and asked me what happened yesterday. Do I feel sick? I gave him a white look and said nothing, feeling that my uncle was not pleasing to the eye. In order to tease me, he put a big hat on my head, and I got rid of it violently.
In the evening, my mother asked me to send fish to grandma. Grandma lives in my uncle's house. Although I am not happy to see my uncle, I can't say no, so I have to go.
I came to my uncle's house, but fortunately I didn't meet my uncle. Thank god. I handed the fish to grandma, turned around and walked out. When I passed my uncle's room, I suddenly heard something moving inside, so I crept open the door and looked inside. Shit, that stranger was at his uncle's house again yesterday. What's he doing here? I pricked up my ears to listen.
"My fine ..." This is a stranger's voice.
There was a silence in the room for a while, and my uncle said, "Last time, you should be fined 5000 yuan to 10000 yuan according to the regulations, but considering that this is your first tax evasion, I decided to punish you 5000 yuan. I paid you 2000 yuan yesterday, so you can pay another 3000 yuan tomorrow! Remember in the future, pay taxes consciously, don't do that ... "Uncle is educating him about tax law. When I heard this, I felt guilty and uneasy. I was wrong about you, my good uncle. I'm sorry!
3. "Want to promote and suppress first" and "Want to suppress and promote first" are two opposite and similar layout methods.
Yang Shuo wrote a famous essay "Litchi Honey". In his article, he said that when he was a child, he always had a bumpy feeling of disgust because he was stung by a bee. But later, he visited a beekeeping farm in Conghua, Guangdong, tasted litchi honey, listened to the introduction of the old beekeeper, and suddenly admired the little bee. Its industrious and selfless quality reflects the virtues of the working people in China. This is a typical writing technique. The so-called desire to praise first means that the object that should be praised vigorously is degraded and criticized at the beginning of writing.
Lu Xun's Fan Ainong also adopted this technique. The writer and Fan Ainong are in Japan. After the revolutionary Xu Xilin was arrested and executed for assassinating the Anhui Governor, the news spread to Japan, and the international students were greatly indignant. At that time, they gathered to scold the government. Some people advocate sending a telegram to Beijing in protest. However, Fan Ainong said, "If the murderer is killed, the deceased is dead. Why did you send a fart telegram? " Xu Xilin, a teacher in Fan Ainong, made such heartless remarks, so the author said, "I am very angry. I don't think he is human at all. My husband was killed, and I didn't even dare to send a telegram ... From then on, I always thought this Fan Ainong was weird and hateful. The hateful people in the world thought they were Manchu at first, but later they realized that they were still the second; The first one is Fan Ainong. China is not revolutionary, and if it wants to be revolutionary, it must first remove Fan Ainong. " At the beginning of the article, Fan Ainong left a very hateful impression on readers, which was an effort to "suppress". However, when describing their future contacts, Fan Ainong was originally an upright and ambitious person who hated evil. The "suppression" in the last article contrasts with the "yang" in the next article.
This writing technique should be natural and reasonable, and must not be forced to be blunt.
4. Uncle came back from Taiwan Province.
A few days ago, my father received a letter from his uncle who lives in Taiwan Province Province, saying that he would go back to his hometown to visit relatives.
I don't want to mention how happy I am. I've been thinking about what gift my uncle will bring me when he comes back all day.
I remember the year before last, my distant uncle came back from Singapore and gave me an advanced snowsuit when he left. I wore it, and everyone noticed. Some students asked me where I bought it. how much is it? I always smile mysteriously: the mainland can't buy it. I think my uncle will bring me a better present when he comes back this time. Well, somehow, I always see my imaginary uncle. Tall, shiny hair, straight suit, black shoes, and maybe a big suitcase. ...
One day, when I came home from school, I saw many people around my door. I figured my uncle must have come back, so I rushed to the door, separated the crowd and squeezed into the house. I saw an old man sitting next to my grandmother, about sixty years old, with a wrinkled black face, gray temples and a simple Chinese tunic suit. Look at that. He is older than my grandfather. I was shocked, this is not the graceful uncle I imagined!
Grandma said first, "This is my grandson Qiong." Uncle stretched out a rough and warm hand, pulled me over, stroked my head and said, "It's much bigger than what you see in the photo." I told him to say whatever he wanted, but he didn't answer. Uncle was silent for a while, as if remembering something. He stood up, grabbed the travel bag around him, took out the candy from it and said to his relatives and friends around him, "Thank you for coming to see me. Please sit down. Please sit down. " Say, distribute the candy to everyone. After a while, the villagers left one after another, leaving only our family in the house. I took advantage of this gap and glanced around. I didn't see big boxes and small boxes, only my travel bag was lying quietly. I'm starting to get disappointed.
In the next few days, my uncle always goes out, sometimes accompanied by his father, and often comes home late at night. Sometimes I see him talking and laughing with my grandfather and my father, but I'm not interested in listening. I care about gifts very much, and my uncle never mentioned such a thing, so I can't help complaining again. I thought to myself, my uncle is really a unique "Ke Fan". My neighbor's relatives always come back from overseas with enviable gifts, but he is so stingy! Students sometimes ask what my uncle brought me. I was speechless, and my face was hot to my ears. Relatives sent pig legs and red eggs to uncle to "take off his sandals" according to local customs, but he asked grandma to return them one by one, and he didn't return them like other fans, causing them to criticize behind his back.
More than ten days have passed; My uncle is leaving, and I am completely disappointed. I reluctantly followed my father to the station to see me off. At the station, my uncle said to his father over and over again, "After I leave, you should buy the equipment quickly and write to me in time if there is anything." As for that primary school, we should add more audio-visual AIDS and sports equipment. "I heard that, I suddenly froze, and my uncle's image suddenly stood up in front of my eyes. On the way home, my father told me that my uncle brought back a sum of money this time and wanted to set up two processing factories in the village, and also wanted to fund a primary school. He feels that other guests have done a lot for his hometown, and he often feels guilty.
Ah, uncle, you brought me the best gift for the villagers.
I turned to look at my uncle again, but the car had disappeared at the end of the road. Uncle, I am waiting for you to go back to your hometown.
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If you want to improve, suppress it first. This paper eulogizes the noble quality of "Uncle" who loves his hometown and longs for his relatives and future generations to live a happy life. The first half of the article belittles "uncle" everywhere: he is so stingy that he doesn't bring any gifts to "me", not even a distant uncle; He is so rude, his face is wrinkled, his temples are gray, and he is wearing a simple Chinese tunic suit. Not the person I imagined at all; He is so unkind. The pig legs and red eggs sent by the villagers are returned one by one, and the others are not reciprocated ... Everything is belittling "Uncle", but at the end of the article, from the conversation between "Uncle" and "Dad", we know that he is a generous and affectionate person, and his inner "demeanor" makes people admire and admire him. The author adopted the method of wanting to rise first and restraining it, and received unexpected and touching results.
5. The Story of Hemp
Grandma is not an earth-shattering big shot He was just a neighbor in town when I was a child.
Our town is not big, but it really looks like a town. Most of it belongs to the Liu family. My home is opposite to Ma's.
The horse is not handsome, even a little ugly, pockmarked and lame. We children don't like him very much.
I remember that the persimmons in the garden were ripe at that time. Some friends and I sneaked into the persimmon forest to steal persimmons and were caught by the horse. "Well, little girl, stealing persimmons again. Go and see your father! " Can't help but drag me away. I was stubborn and did not leave. Some of my friends put their arms around his waist and some hit him on the head with persimmons. I struggled to run out. Running and thinking about horses, don't mention how happy you are. Needless to say, he was later severely beaten by his father, so he hated his aunt.
There is a small river next to our town. It is said that it is not small. Every time I go to school and go to town, I have to go around a big circle. I don't know where the horse got a small wooden boat to ferry us and took us across the river for free without any money. Adults say Ma Jide. However, it didn't take long for the horse to charge, and adults and children had to pay 30 cents by boat. After another month, it actually rose to one yuan. The adults were very angry, saying that Matthew was wicked and stripped his own things. The horse didn't say anything, just ferrying back and forth to collect money, and his face often showed excitement. Gradually, people found that the horse lost weight and the strength of rowing was not as great as before, so people complained that the horse even gave up his life to make money. Finally, there was a big noise and the horse fell ill. The doctor says it's cancer, and he won't live long. At this time, a stone bridge began to be built on the river. The horse's illness is getting worse every day, and the small stone bridge is completed faster every day.
The horse finally died, on the day when the small stone bridge was built. After a burst of firecrackers, the mayor spoke. He didn't say much. Later, he said, "This small stone bridge belongs to Matthew. He saved the corner of the ferry. Ma knew he had cancer for a long time, but he never said anything. When Amar died, she still remembered the people in the town. He hoped that the people in the town would forgive him. Ama's ferry fare is so expensive, it is all in our town! " The mayor cried as he spoke, and many adults in the town began to sob. Even we children feel our eyes moist. Alas, Ma, we misunderstood him!
Later, I don't know which craftsman carved a bust of grandma on the small stone bridge, so that grandma could watch the children in the town go to school happily every day, and the adults went to town to do business happily.
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(1) Restrain first and then promote. The hero of the article is Ma; What kind of person is this hemp? The article begins with the appearance of a horse: "pockmarked face and lame foot." No wonder the child doesn't like him. Grandma is very fierce to her children, either scratching or pulling, and the children "hate their guts." As for the adults, they also have a problem with grandma, because her ferry fare has risen from triangle to one yuan in less than a month. People say that he is "wicked" and "ripped off", even his grandmother has lost weight, and he also satirizes him for "giving up his life to make money". It can be seen that the article first suppresses the horse, and then suppresses it. It was not until a stone bridge was built on the river and the horse died that the mayor revealed that the stone bridge was built by the horse dividing the ferry fees collected. In this way, in this article, a seemingly disgusting person with noble quality was established. The strategy used here is to suppress first and then promote.
② The winding path leads to seclusion. The author's intention in writing this article is to praise the noble quality of working people. But the article did not say it directly, but described some things that seemed that the quality of horses was not noble. In particular, it was written that the horse bought a boat and ferried the bridge from the ferry for free, but the fee was quickly collected and the ferry fee soared. It was not until the end that Amar collected the ferry fee just to build a stone bridge and do good for the people. In this way, the article shows a noble and respectable ordinary person in twists and turns.
Step 6 listen to the report
There is a blue advertising paper on the bulletin board, which reads in bold: Dr. Huang Yan, a graduate student studying in Britain, will give a lecture. Venue: Restaurant; Time: 3: 30 pm on September 20th.
"What's the long story? I am determined to be a talented person. I want to be a good student. It's not the same old story! " I muttered in my heart, conveniently took this book "Heart with Qian Qian Knot" and walked into the meeting.
"It is better to read Qiong Yao's book than to listen to his boasting and shake his prestige." I think.
The report began, and Yan Huang stood upright on the platform in a suit and tie.
"Students, I am not a great man ..." Unnecessary modesty.
"I am the first doctoral student in China to win a scholarship from Cambridge University in England ..."-The tone is very strong.
"I just want to say something you haven't heard." -Don't stick to the rules.
"Please give me 40 minutes." -It's refreshing.
"If you want to make a difference, you must have as wide a knowledge as possible …"-I agree.
"Science and liberal arts are interlinked, and students who are good at mathematics and physics must never despise Chinese ..." —— Yes, those who study science should be gifted.
"I am arrogant, but pride is not necessarily wrong ..."-It seems strange, but I agree that people should be a little proud.
"When I was in my alma mater, it was hard for teachers to agree that I was a good student …"-Yo, it turned out to be the same as me!
"Pa"-the book in my hand fell to the ground, and my eyes stung him straight for fear of missing everything he said in my ear. The meeting was surprisingly quiet. The hearts of hundreds of listeners seem to be attracted and melted by his heart.
This is the most vivid report I have ever heard!
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(1) Restrain first and then promote. In my opinion, the content of the report organized by the school is "old-fashioned", which is nothing more than a determination to be a good student, and it is always long and makes people sleepy. After listening to the report this time, "I" decided that it was no exception, so I brought a novel book into the meeting. This is the "repression" of listening to the report. However, this report is an exception. The more you listen, the more energetic you are. The book you were absorbed in fell to the ground until you didn't pick it up. "Keep your eyes on him and your ears are afraid of missing every word he says." This is "Yang", praising the good content and short reporting time. The full text is suppressed first and then promoted, and the suppression is for the sake of promotion.
Yizhuang is also harmonious. This is a vivid and fascinating report (unfortunately, the author rarely writes the content of the report), and the writing is also very humorous and unique. After recording some of the speaker's words, insert the author's comments, such as "unnecessary modesty", "I agree" and "something similar to me", which is humorous and interesting.