My family has an old wooden clock, which is said to have been stolen during the Cultural Revolution. I grew up listening to its "tick" sound.
Therefore, I know very well and have deep feelings.
This wooden clock is made of Philippine wood and looks like a villa in the southern United States. The roof is triangular, the pointed roof is covered with grape leaves, and a string of emerald-like mare's milk grapes are genuine and mouth watering. There are two shutters under the eaves, and there are five or six little people dancing with beautiful music in the music box under the window. The dance is moving and the costumes are exquisite. There is also a semicircular door on the left, and there is a chic second floor at the corner of the door. The stairs lead directly to the garden. There is a swing in the garden. A beautiful girl with a blonde shawl and a pink dress is sitting on the swing, so cute. There is a well next to the swing, and a man is bending down to fetch water. There is a farmer ringing the bell on the right. The bell is a bronze bell, tied with hemp rope, and the other end of the hemp rope is in the hands of farmers.
Hours ago, these dummies and fake scenes were still there. When the pointer points to the hour, two shutters under the eaves will open with a clash, and a bird will stretch out its beautiful neck and open its red mouth and coo. When will I scream a few times, never be lazy, and my voice is crisp and pleasant. At this time, if there are guests in the room, the attention will suddenly shift to this clock. Before you heard enough, two windows slammed shut, so you have to wait for another hour. Not only that, while the birds are singing, the swing swings, the girl's skirt flutters with the wind, the farmer shakes his arm and keeps ringing the bell, and * * * is busy carrying water ... The whole villa is boiling, which is more lively than New Year's Eve. You can even imagine looking at the whole clock face at 12 o'clock ...1',and you will find that it is simply a beautiful landscape painting. Don't you think the lower part of the dial and arc is the moon?
How the first half of life is like the sky, and the emerald-like mare's milk grapes still shine like stars!
This wooden clock in my house has won the appreciation of countless guests. It is exquisitely designed and exquisitely made, which brings beautiful enjoyment and endless fun to the viewers.
The designer has designed such rich and vivid three-dimensional shapes in a limited space, which fully embodies his superb skills, wisdom and extraordinary imagination.
I feel a little bored this afternoon.
Just as I was about to pack my schoolbag, it was getting dark. I think, when I go to school, how can I get to the night? At this time, dark clouds are gathering, and they cover our whole community like a black cloth. Suddenly, a strong wind blew the flowers on the balcony. I thought: It must be raining.
After two or three seconds, a flash of lightning flashed across the sky, and I quickly closed the window. Before I could catch my breath, another rumble of thunder startled me, followed by a downpour. Water drops are really like transparent pearls. At this time, I smelled a fragrance and felt very cool.
But it's almost time for class, but even with an umbrella in such a heavy rain, my umbrella will "drip through the stone"! I have to wait at home. I turned on the light because it was too dark. I was ready by this time, but the light was destroyed by lightning, so I had to lie in bed and wait.
After 30 minutes, these 30 minutes are long and boring! I hope the rain will stop. Suddenly, the rain seems to understand what I mean. In less than five minutes, the rain stopped and the earth returned to its original vitality. However, after the rain, I feel very cool in summer. I think: nature is so magical that even the rainstorm has its own peculiarities. It seems that we should observe nature more in the future.
3. Ask for a junior high school composition to describe the details of the happy time in junior high school. It has turned into a butterfly and made a cocoon in my heart. It will remain in my heart forever. ...
Recalling my junior high school is both bitter and sweet.
It was a day in March of my third grade. Our class will give the head teacher a surprise-because one day in March is our head teacher's birthday. So the whole class wants to hold a birthday party for him. Now that the plan has been decided, everyone should act. Everyone in our class took out 10 yuan. Some people are responsible for ordering birthday cakes, some people are responsible for buying colored flowers and some people are responsible for buying candles. In this way, the preparation work is completed, and the rest is to wait patiently for the arrival of the problem.
How time flies! In a blink of an eye, the teacher's birthday arrived. After the last class, we sent several people to hold the teacher steady. In order not to let him go home, we also arranged a classroom. When the birthday cake was put on the table and the candles were lit, someone came to say that the teacher was coming. Let's all turn off the lights quickly. At the moment when the door was pushed open, everyone sprinkled silver powder on the teacher's head and sprayed ribbons on him. As a result, teachers panicked and were at a loss. Later, the monitor sent a congratulatory message to the teacher, then made a wish and blew out the candle. At that time, the classroom was very quiet, time seemed to stop, and the picture seemed to freeze. Finally, everyone began to divide the cake and said a lot of ugly words, which was simply robbing the cake. After the robbery, everyone rubbed cream on each other's faces. At this time, everyone has been intoxicated in this happy atmosphere with rich milk fragrance, and singing and laughter are intertwined into a happy and youthful dance music. At that time, everyone was so happy and moved.
How time flies! In an instant, I was promoted to the fourth grade. The study and life in the fourth grade of junior high school made me breathless. Every day, my mind is full of chemical equations and physical formulas. I come home every night, feeling soft all over. But I don't feel very painful about it. The pain is the sadness that everyone goes their separate ways after graduation, and the pain that the feelings of classmates gradually fade after four years. In order to remember each other, there was a "classmate record storm" in the grade. After class, everyone is holding a beautifully drawn classmate record in their hands, so that students can sign and leave a message. And I have my favorite book in my hand, so I'd better ask my classmates to sign it for me. Great, I will never forget those friends.
Life in junior high school can't be finished in a day or two. So I turned the essence of junior high school into a cocoon and stayed in my heart forever. He will accompany me through more ups and downs.
"Junior high school, the golden age, wearing a red scarf into the campus, with a group emblem into the future ..." Good memories of junior high school will always remain in my heart. ...
4. Junior high school composition, there are a lot of detailed descriptions, narratives, and one or more specific examples. The requirement is a long and quiet "trip to Suzhou", the sound of nature and the sound of pearls. I seemed to open the yellow thread-bound book under the clear oil lamp and came to the south of the valley. There is a beautiful river with soft aquatic plants floating at the bottom. I've smelled it for two thousand years. Swim back from there and you will be in the middle of the water ... "Playing the flute is like reciting a poem. Tap six holes at a time, just like a long drought meets rain, easily shaking off the fatigue and burnout of the whole body. Ten years of bamboo flute career, ten years of wandering, how many times to regain warmth in indifference, just thank you all the way. I remember my weak childhood-the size of a bamboo flute, short and weak breathing. But I still insisted on choosing the bamboo flute, not because of the beauty of the literati's silk and bamboo, but because of the intoxication when listening to the teacher playing in the corner. Therefore, I have your company on the road of life. I remember the first time I played the whole "Running Water". I held you in my hand and put my feelings into you with my whole heart and love. At that time, teachers and classmates applauded me. You accompanied me, so tacitly, without hesitation. In your world, I realized the elegance and richness of Maolin bamboo cultivation, and the grandeur of "looking up at the universe and overlooking the prosperity of the category", which is an tolerance, a naive expectation, a detachment and dancing with music. But I am the first person to tell you the good news. Only then did I realize that I have been with you all the way through ups and downs. With your tolerance, my fingers beat at will and my feelings are expressed without reservation. I hold you like an old friend who has been away for many years. The geese passed without a trace, and the wind blew invisibly, day after day, year after year. You followed me and tasted spring and summer. Thank you for accompanying me all the way. To this day, I still refuse to leave you until the college entrance examination. Often a cup of fragrant tea, a book, and a song "Song of Burying Flowers" are extremely rich evening self-study. Every time I play it, it seems that before I came to Hua Zhong, I sang with Princess Xiaoxiang, "Flowers are flying all over the sky, red incense is broken ..." After I let go of my thoughts, I began to study nervously again.
5. Let junior high school composition time fly by, and we will soon be promoted to Grade Two. Looking back on the bittersweet life at first, I always have a feeling of nostalgia. One year ago today, we sat together with inexplicable fear in our eyes; Today, when we play together, the happiness that belongs to us is displayed in our brow. This year, we experienced ups and downs together, and the dream we walked together was like the first day of life. ...
ferment
I remember at the beginning of the second semester
We were so high-spirited at first. I won Class One and Class Three in a row. We won the game with Class Five.
Let's miss the first place. Our class is very strong and always wants to be the first in the whole grade. In several monthly exams, the average score of mathematics is the first, the structure of the paper is the first, and the total score of the science and technology festival group is the first.
First ... all this is our glorious testimony. This time
We lost to Class Five, which made our competitive classmates cry. ...
What an unforgettable game, what a wonderful game! Although the competition time is not long, it has far-reaching significance. How difficult it is for a class group that has just been established for less than half a year to unite as a rope and fight for honor!
sweet
May in early summer, a piece of thin.
Block the dazzling sunshine. We are in the first grade.
continue
Cross-country boys 10, almost full.
Every corner, so the running distance is really long.
There are 23 boys' teams in the competition. Last time, we won the fifth place. This time, everyone wants to win the first place. Like other students, there are 8 boys in our team 10.
Two people prepare plant identification materials. * * * There are 34 kinds of plants, and photos of each plant have been taken.
It's clearly printed. Give it to each team member, with an average of 3-4 copies each. This seemingly trivial matter can show that our preparation is rigorous and comprehensive.
The whistle is going to sound, and so are the students.
Prepare to run quickly to a point for cross-country next time. Every student can stick to it and help each other reach the finish line. It took us nearly 34 minutes.
We won the first place. Besides, the other five teams in my class also entered the top 6 of the grade. This is a new breakthrough in history.
Sitting on the bus on the way back, we felt something. No one is tired, everyone's heart is like a happy seed, which makes us more and more confident in ourselves and our class. At the same time, be prepared in advance,
It also made us feel the sweetness.
difficult
School leaves early every Tuesday. You can finish school around 3:20 pm. However, we must spend some money to listen at school.
The teacher lectured until the quiet school finished. Sometimes the practice of static school will not stop the teacher's * * *, and it will not be finished until around 6: 30. In winter, it gets dark at about 5 o'clock.
course
The temperature has plummeted and the night light on the playground has been turned on. classmate
You must wear gloves. Put them on.
Armed to the teeth can keep out the cold. Only if we work hard can we make our class work.
Many achievements have been made:
Many people won prizes,
Two people won the prize,
Many people won prizes. ...
Bitter is sweet, and sweet is sweet!
fragrant
It's about to be promoted to the second grade, and it's also spicy to recall the life in the first grade. I can get to know and get along with these excellent classmates and teachers.
After three years of junior high school, one-third passed in a blink of an eye, which shows that time has passed too fast.
In the life of senior one, we have learned a lot of cultural knowledge, experienced many legendary experiences and made many sincere friends ... May we continue to work hard in 2006 to create a better tomorrow for Class Eight! Continue to write a better chapter for our glory.
Just change it yourself.
6. Write an interesting junior high school composition of 650 words. The most interesting thing is that the weather in Wan Li is fine and sunny today, and there are no clouds in Wan Li. I'm going to swim in Tianyi Mountain Villa. I asked my mother, and she readily agreed to me. I am very happy.
I wolfed down my meal and asked my good friend Xiao Wang to go to Tianyi Mountain Villa. We got there almost at the same time. After buying tickets there, we changed our swimming trunks in the locker room. Then we went out to have a look. There are many people. There are countless people in the same pot, because my technology is not very good, but it's ok, and I'm here. I know three strokes, dog-planing, backstroke and breaststroke. I went to the deep water area to chase my good friend Xiao Wang. I use breaststroke first, then backstroke. Finally, when I was close to him, I used a dog plane. When he saw that I was close to him, he used his killer weapon-adapting the butterfly, which accelerated instantly and opened the distance between us. "You can't catch me, can you? Goodbye. "
Then he swam away, and I instantly petrified. "This, this, this is unscientific!" "Ha ha" Xiao Wang laughed, and then I got angry and caught up with my best breaststroke. He took off his goggles and looked for me. Fortunately, he didn't find me. Just as he looked blank, I poured water from behind him. He shouted "My God" with tears in his eyes. "Ha ha!" I avenged you. "Wow, haha!" Just when I was elated, he came to kill me, put on goggles and threw it at me. "Oh, dear!" I was hit hard by him. Seeing that I had no fighting capacity, he quickly retreated. Just as we were having fun, my mother urged, "It's getting dark. Let's go home."
My good friend Xiao Wang and I reluctantly climbed up from the swimming pool, thinking: I will come back tomorrow and fight with Xiao Wang to the death! This is really interesting. I will cherish it in my heart forever.
7. Ask for two junior high school compositions, 1, and the details and characters are wonderful. 2. Description of language and details of interlude-The golden key to make the characters vivid is the soul of the article, but the common characters in students' exercises are often one-sided, without personality and vividness, and the whole article looks dry, boring and lacking in appeal.
If you read these works carefully, you will find a common problem: you often just pursue writing something completely, ignoring vivid, concrete and nuanced details. Detail description has a wide range and various functions, but it mainly depicts characters and shapes their images.
Vivid details are like human cells. Without them, people will lose their lives. Without details, the characters lose their flesh and blood. Writer Lee Joon said: "In revealing a character's personality characteristics, a detail sometimes plays the same role as a plot or a scene."
As the saying goes, "the spirit is seen in the nuances." The creation of literary masters attaches great importance to the description of details.
In Lu Xun's The True Story of Ah Q, the first sentence of Ah Q was described in detail: "When it was time to draw a circle, the hand just shook with a pen, and the man spread the paper on the ground, and Ah Q fell down and tried to draw a circle. Afraid of being laughed at, he decided to draw a circle, but the damn pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient. It just shook and almost closed, but shrugged its shoulders and turned into a melon seed. "
The details of this behavior concretely, vividly and vividly reflect Ah Q's personality characteristics ―― he stuck to the "spiritual victory law" of self-deception until his death. When people read this detailed description, who can not think that Ah Q is ridiculous, sad and pitiful? How can we not "mourn its misfortune and anger it" and then think deeply about the national inferiority? Not only China writers, but also foreign writers.
Like Balzac's Eugénie? Grandet wrote that before Grandet died, when the priest sent the gold-plated cross to his lips to kiss the icon of Christ, "he made a terrible gesture to hold the cross in his hand, and this last effort killed him." Only this detail vividly depicts the ugly image of the insatiable and untiring miser. It is the description of details that makes the characters vivid and vivid. The characters are vivid, the whole article is full of vitality and strong appeal.
Of course, not all the details of life are valuable, and it is not just to write "fine". A good detail description must be useful, true and typical.
It must express the mental outlook of the characters and deepen the theme of the article. It must conform to the personality characteristics of the characters and the reality of real life, and should best highlight the personality characteristics of the characters. Where do the details come from? Literature comes from life, and details are in colorful life.
Be a conscientious person in life and always pay attention to the people and things around you, especially the objects you describe. On the streets of Shaoxing, Xianheng Hotel, Lu Xun concentrated on observing short-sleeved gangs and long-sleeved guests before "painting the soul of the silent".
In the dark coffee room in Dublin, Joyce coldly looked at the wandering * * *, liars, mental patients, beggars and rich people, brewing Ulysses that shocked the world. Throughout the ages, great writers have always devoted their lives to catching people and things that make the soul tremble and casting them into chapters that will last forever.
Capture the details, use the details, make this golden key work for you, and make your article shine! I was lucky enough to describe my composition to my teacher, because I met her, my third-grade class teacher. As for me, I am 1 a naughty boy.
Don't underestimate me. At home, I am "1". I said 1, and no one dared to say 2. In the face of my unreasonable troubles, my parents always laugh and cry. I am a famous troublemaker at school, not to mention that I am a "frequent visitor" in the teacher's office, and even my parents are often invited for this.
At this symposium of teachers, parents and students, I "accepted with an open mind and resolutely refused to change" in the face of their teaching. I heard that the head teacher who has been with us for two years has been transferred, so I want to know what the head teacher of 1 will look like in the new school year. A very strict old man? Or a young and energetic young man? Or ... I can't wait to know the result.
School has finally started. On the day of 1 of the new school year, she-about 1.55 meters tall, wearing a pink suit and carrying 1 file, came to the classroom happily. My classmates told me that this was our new head teacher, and I continued to play on the floor at the door without blinking.
"Oh, it turned out to be a little girl, and this time the story of" cat "and" mouse "can be staged again," I whispered. After a few steps, she came up to me and said, "You must be Su Shibin from Class 3. You are in such a hurry to welcome the teacher! " I'm surprised-I haven't had a class yet. How did she know me? At the same time, I am complacent. I used to be famous. Even the new teacher knows me.
After introducing herself 1 times in the classroom, she quickly took us into the 1 Chinese class in the new school year. After listening to 1 for a while, I gradually found her class interesting, knowledgeable, humorous, lively and vivid.
This kind of class makes people relaxed and happy. For the time of 1, it feels like listening to the teacher. In the next Chinese class, I became more and more serious and immersed in it.
The Unit 1 mock exam arrived, but when 1 got the test paper, your mind was blank, because the foundation was too poor, you might not know it. I was the last 1 in every exam before. It's time to hand in your paper. My thesis is almost blank.
What shall we do? The teacher is very concerned about me, and I 1 failed the exam. Suddenly, my mind flashed 1: Today, it's my turn to be on duty in the teacher's office. I can take advantage of the teacher's off work ... The test paper was handed out and I got 90 points. At the bottom of the test paper, I saw the red word 1: "Good job! The teacher is really happy for you, come on! " This is the 1 time that I have been praised by my teacher. I have 1 satisfaction in my heart, but at the same time my heart is pounding, which makes me feel ashamed.
I don't know if I did something wrong, if I have a ghost in my heart, or what. I think the teacher's eyes in that class are 1, as if he knew something. After returning home, it made me uneasy.
The next day,
8. Find a composition with details. There is personality in the details.
Author: Zhao Changhe Middle School Chinese Forum, 0 1, 2009
Abstract: In many texts of Chinese textbooks, the description of details reflects the author's writing personality and originality. In this paper, some typical details in the textbook are analyzed and discussed in detail, and a scientific summary is made.
[Keywords:] Chinese teaching materials detailed text research teaching methods
First, the details, freeze the moment that never dies.
We often have such a reading experience. The passage of time tends to dilute our reading impression of a work (part), but there are always some characters whose voices, words and deeds will be indelibly fixed in our minds. We can't forget the image of "compass" when Sister-in-law Yang Er appeared in Hometown: when she mentioned the middle-aged leap soil, the muddy cry of "master" always shocked our hearts directly from our eardrums. In Blessing, Sister Xianglin became a beggar's puppet, and in Back, Fat Dad bought me an orange painting. These meticulous descriptions not only have an indelible freeze-frame effect, but also have a superb portrayal of the characters' personalities. Take the laughter in the Grand View Garden as an example. They are also smiling. Shi Xiangyun is outgoing and cheerful when she smiles, Lin Daiyu is reserved and delicate when she smiles, Jia Baoyu is pampered and tolerant when she smiles, and Mrs. Wang, Aunt Xue, has a subtle smile, which is different from subject and object. Although she didn't directly laugh at Tanchun for welcoming the Spring, Tanchun involuntarily buckled her bowl because of her extroverted and provocative personality. The performance of the silence of the Spring Festival is the withering of the heart.
There are many vivid descriptions of "hands" in textbooks, and every movement of these hands naturally completes the description of the characters. In Lianhua Lake, Mrs. Shui heard that Shuishui was going to join the army, and Zi cut her finger in the vibration and sucked her finger with her mouth in disguise. Water sister-in-law that kind of overjoyed mood, that kind of calm and introverted personality, are shown in the unconscious movements of her hands. Chairman Lang in Ji Fang's "Between Waves" is great wisdom and courage; In "Back", the tearful father's love is tightly grasped in the hands of struggling to climb the podium; In "Hometown", Yang Er's sister-in-law puts her hands between her moustaches to show off her dissolute willfulness. "Looking at each other with tears" in Lin Yuling and "Holding hands" in Silence mean that literati are lingering and talented people are affectionate; "Medicine" judges that the old man is kind, honest and timid when he "hurriedly" touches foreign money, "shakes" to pay foreign money and "dares" to accept steamed bread. Uncle Kang's series of "grabbing", "pulling", "wrapping", "blocking", "grasping" and "pinching" are violent, fierce and greedy.
Second, details, rendering, paving the way for showing personality
Details can make a certain aspect of a character's personality magnified and highlighted in repeated rendering and layers of bedding, and also reveal the changes of the character's situation. Show a change in personality.
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