Xx company's request report on our company's business training class.

Party Committee of XX Company and XX Company:

In order to adapt to the reform and opening up, the company has held many business training courses with good results. In order to improve the professional quality of the company's personnel, we plan to hold the first to second business training courses from June this year 10 to April next year, and the training time is about 3 months; The enrollment targets are people from all walks of life under the age of 35; Those who pass the examination will be issued with graduation certificates and their academic qualifications will be recognized.

If there is no problem with the above comments, please reply as soon as possible.

Xx branch (seal)

200 1 June 19

The best answer is 1. Delete "My Company" in "XX Company About Our Company".

2. Delete "Report" from "Request Report".

3. Remove the item "Party Committee of XX Company and XX Head Office", and the main delivery unit generally has only one subject.

4. "In order to adapt to the reform and opening up, the company held several business training courses and achieved good results." Delete "in order to adapt to the reform and opening up". The purpose of business training courses should not be to adapt to the reform and opening up. When and how many business training courses have been held should be added here. Is "good effect" a good response from students or society? Or do company leaders have a high evaluation of the improvement of employees' professional quality?

5. "Running the first to second business training courses" should be clearly defined as "the first phase" or "the second phase" and should not be ambiguous.

6. "The training time is about 3 months" should be marked as "Phase I" and the training time is 3 months.

7. "Enrollment targets are people from all walks of life under the age of 35". The enrollment target can only be the company's personnel, and the company's business training does not need to recruit students from all walks of life.

8. "Those who pass the examination will be issued with graduation certificates and academic qualifications will be recognized" should be "Those who pass the examination will be issued with a certificate of completion". The company's business training has no right to issue diplomas, let alone recognize academic qualifications.

9. "If there is no problem with the above comments, please reply as soon as possible." . You can't ask your superiors to "do it as soon as possible" or "don't make mistakes", you can only ask them to "approve" or "reply".

10. "×× branch (seal)" should be consistent with the prefix "×× company ",the prefix should not be" company ",and the signature should be" branch ".

In addition: it may be the reason of the network page. File title, header, signature, etc. It should be in file format, not all left.