Composition or article in Enping Golden Town
1. "drugs", a simple word, can appear very frequently in newspapers, billboards and books ... but what is this? It not only causes indescribable harm to drug addicts, but also has a very negative impact on their families and even society. On Monday, our school launched a photo exhibition on drug control and drugs, which was colorful and touching. I only watched it for a little time, and the pictures and real cases were very shocking! When I got there, the first exhibition board caught my attention: "There was a child named Diu Diu, an orphan, who was sold by Wang to Li, Li Moumou and Wang. These three people are drug addicts. When their drug addiction attacks, they bring their children out and use many vicious methods. " Then, I saw another display board, which read: "A woman in a city took drugs during pregnancy. The mother must take medicine before breastfeeding, and the baby will only eat, otherwise it will be critical and life-threatening. " In other words, drugs are the chief culprit in devouring teenagers' youth and bodies. Scenes of bloody scenes came into view, so cruel, so cruel. After reading these irritating contents and thinking of those horrible pictures, I have a deeper understanding of drug abuse and feel more painful about drugs. Drugs emerge one after another, so it is urgent to get rid of them. It's really scary to see some propaganda pictures with the theme of drug control today. These pictures tell a terrible story. Parents sell their children to others to buy drugs because of drug abuse. They also tell a tragic story. Their bodies rot because of drug abuse ... Because of "poison", those weak children have to endure torture, and those who were originally happy and healthy are eroded by it. Looking at the end of life in the picture, I began to resent why the world. But after reading the propaganda pictures, I have a new understanding of "poison". It turns out that heroin, ice and white powder are all drugs. Poison harms countless people and is the chief culprit leading to death. It has separated thousands of happy families in Qian Qian and is the greatest enemy of mankind. "Is there really nothing we can do about this erosion?" I can't help asking No, as long as we can resist its temptation and have strong willpower to overcome it, we can stop everything it brings. Don't schools often educate students about drugs? Although the education in this field is very strong, I still hear that some students don't agree with it, and they still try it with curiosity, and the result is still hurt by drugs. We should remind ourselves that no matter what sweet and delicious food anyone gives us, we should not accept it casually, even our closest friends. Here I want to send you a sentence, I hope you will keep it in mind: "cherish life and stay away from drugs." The so-called "sentiment" in the extended reading article can be the truth or subtle thoughts realized from the book, the thinking and association inspired by the contents of the book, the determination and ideal inspired by reading, and the attack and satire on some ugly phenomena in society caused by reading. The expression of the feeling after reading is flexible and diverse, which basically belongs to the discussion category, but the writing method is different from the general argumentative essay. Because it must be based on reading. In order to write an experienced, insightful, emotional and innovative post-reading, we must pay attention to the following points: First, the feeling of reading the original "post-reading [1]" is caused by "reading". "Reading" is the basis of "feeling". Reading is shallow, of course not deep. Only by reading carefully can we feel something and feel deeply. If you want to read an argumentative essay, you must find out its arguments (opinions and propositions), or criticize any wrong opinions, think about what you are inspired by, and find out what the arguments and conclusions are. If it is a narrative, you should make clear its main plot, how many characters there are, what is their relationship and what is the story. It is also necessary to find out what kind of spiritual quality the work reveals, what kind of social phenomenon it reflects, what thoughts and feelings the author expresses, which chapters of the work are touching, why it is so touching, and so on. Secondly, as long as you read the original text carefully, an article can be written as a review in many ways. If you are deeply touched by the central content of the original text, you can also write a review of other contents of the original text. In short, as long as it is the content of the original, as long as it is what you feel, it is possible to write a comment. You need to express what you know in order to write a good comment. Third, choosing the right point of view of an article can discharge a lot of feelings, but a comment can only talk about one center, so it follows these many. Find a feeling point that you feel the deepest, the latest angle, the most realistic pertinence, and feel smooth when you write, and then demonstrate it in words. Fourth, the narrative should be simple. Since the feelings after reading are caused by reading, in the article, you should describe the facts that cause "feelings" and sometimes describe some examples that you think of. In a word, after reading it, there is no shortage of "narrative", but it is different from the requirements of "narrative" in the narrative. The "narrative" in the narrative pays attention to concrete, vivid and vivid, while the "narrative" in the post-reading feeling is simple and to the point, and does not need to be "touching", but only needs to arouse reason. The common problem for beginners to quote the original text after reading is that the narrative is not short, but actually becomes a retelling. It doesn't mean that the fewer words, the better, and the simpler the better. Fifth, Lenovo should pay attention to the following forms of formal association: homomorphic association (the things associated with it are the same), antagonistic association (the things associated with it are opposite), associative association (the things associated with it are related), inherited association (the things associated with it are inherited) and similar association (the things associated with it are similar). We should pay special attention to the use of two forms of association: the same association and the similar association. How to edit and write this paragraph 1. Format and writing method There are usually three ways to write the post-reading feeling: one is to abbreviate the content outline, the other is to write the post-reading feeling, and the third is to extract good sentences and paragraphs, which is the post-reading feeling composition of anti-drug propaganda. The topic can be the feeling after reading; You can also use your own feelings (one or two sentences) as a topic, and the next line is "feelings after reading." The first line is the main title, and the second line is the subtitle. Second, choose what you feel most, which is the key to writing a good review. Third, you should closely connect with reality, which is an important content of your post-reading feeling. Fourth, you should handle the word "read" and "Jane" well. Sixth, we should carefully examine the questions. In writing, we should distinguish what is primary and what is secondary, and strive to make "reading" grasp the key points and "feeling" to write out our experiences. Seventh, choose materials. Reading is the basis of writing. Only by reading carefully can we deeply understand the content of the article, so as to grasp the key points and grasp the thoughts and feelings of the article. Only by studying hard can we find the connection point of reading experience. This is the central idea of the article, that is, the sentence that points out the central idea of the article. For a work, you can't write everything. You should write down your changes in thoughts and actions after reading it. Eight, to write a post-reading feeling, you should start with a brief introduction of the content of the work you read, and then rewrite your experience. It is often appropriate to summarize the original content in 3-4 sentences. In the end, most of them will return to the works they have read. Focus on the word "feeling" and remember to contact your real life. 9. Be reasonable and write your true feelings. Notes on writing after reading 1. Writing after reading is by no means copying or simply repeating the original text, and it cannot be played arbitrarily without the original text. We should focus on writing "experiences". (2) to write with true feelings. It should be a heartfelt feeling, not a "self-criticism" or a "guarantee". (3) to write unique and fresh feelings, and strive to have new ideas, attract readers or infect readers. ④ It is forbidden to write a running account! When editing this paragraph, you should write down what you should read after reading it. (1) Reference-Reference the material around the sensory point. Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text. (2) Summarize the main contents of this article, be concise and write down the key points. (3) Discussion-analyze the materials, improve the feeling points and clarify the basic points. In the introduction of "reading", you can also dig from the phenomenon to the essence, from the individual to the general; It is necessary to analyze the material with profound meaning, and then naturally "highlight" your feelings. You should choose what you feel the most and express it clearly in concise sentences. Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence is the central argument of this paper. The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the article can be flexible, and it can be at the beginning of the article. It's best to come straight to the point and write your own opinions at the beginning of the article. (4) Linking-connecting with practice and expanding vertically and horizontally. Put facts and reason around the basic points. What you should avoid after writing is talking about facts and talking in general terms. If you can't tell the truth, the article is too superficial. Generally speaking, it often makes reading experience lack of pertinence and can't give people a shock. Contact is close contact with reality. It is also possible to contact the opposing problems in real life from ancient times to the present. We can look at the big picture or start small. Of course, when analyzing and demonstrating with reality, we should also pay attention to turning back or echoing the "quotation" part from time to time, so that the "connection" and "quotation" are broken. The "silk" connection part is the main part of the argumentative paper, which is an exposition of the basic point (that is, the central argument). More convincing. In this process, it should be noted that the facts put forward and the reasoning carried out must closely focus on and serve the basic ideas. (5) Conclusion-Summarize the full text and sublimate the meaning. The content of "reading" is not easy. The above five points are the basic ideas of writing the post-reading feeling, but this idea is not static, so we should be good at mastering it flexibly. For example, "briefly describe the original text" is generally. If the facts mentioned in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, the fourth part need not be written. First, pay more attention to feelings, read less, and be flexible. For example, "a brief description of the original text" usually comes before "a clear point of view", but the order of the two is also possible. Moreover, if the facts mentioned in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, it is unnecessary. "Feeling" is the extension or result of "reading". You must "read" and then "feel". Without "reading", there is no "feeling". Therefore, to write a review, we must first understand the original text, accurately grasp its basic content and correctly understand it. For the same book or article, different people will think from different angles, have different views and get different enlightenment. Taking the well-known idiom story of "cramming for the last minute" as an example, from the perspective of satirizing Mr. Nan Guo, we can realize that people without real skills will "expose themselves" sooner or later and realize the importance of mastering real talents and learning. If we think about it in Qi Xuanwang and think about it from the perspective of management system, we can further realize that Qi Xuanwang's "pot rice" lacks the necessary evaluation mechanism, which provides people like Mr. Nanguo with objective conditions for eating and muddling along all day, thus associating with the necessity of breaking the "iron rice bowl" and abolishing the pot rice since the reform and opening up. Fourth, narrative works can't repeat the original article in large numbers, and can't write many feelings or experiences. Choose the point where you feel the deepest and have something to say to write. We should pay attention to grasp the angle of analyzing problems, pay attention to our own actual situation, and choose the most suitable feeling point from many clues as the center of the full text. In junior high school composition class, in addition to writing "thoughts after reading", teachers will also ask students to write "thoughts after watching a movie, TV series or attending an exhibition". You just need to briefly describe what you saw in the first part, and then draw your opinion and discuss it. 5. How to write about the feelings after seeing the scenery and things (1) Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text, such as the title, author, year of writing, summary of the original book or the original text, etc. This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion. Never describe the specific content of what you have read or written in long paragraphs, but simply describe the parts that are directly related to your feelings and omit the things that have nothing to do with your feelings. (2) Highlight the basic viewpoints. Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences. Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence is the central argument of this paper. The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the text can be flexible. You can also do it at the end of the article or in the middle of the article. Beginners of writing should take a straight approach and write their own opinions at the beginning of the article. (3) Put facts and reason around the basic ideas. This part is the theoretical part of the argumentative paper, which expounds the basic point (that is, the central point), proves the correctness of the point of view by putting facts and reasoning, and makes the point more prominent and convincing. It should be noted that facts and reasons must be presented in this process. Serve the basic point of view. (4) Combine basic ideas with practice. A good reading experience should have the flavor of the times and have a true feeling. To do this, we must be good at combining reality. This "reality" can be personal thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a social phenomenon. When combining with reality, we should also pay attention to closely surrounding the basic viewpoints and serving them, rather than blindly connecting and disconnecting. I wrote all the above four points.