When we started this comprehensive study, the students had been studying in primary school for six years and were about to leave primary school and start a new study life. In the past six years, students have grown from naive children to physically and mentally strong teenagers, which is not only the result of children's own efforts, but also the painstaking efforts of schools and teachers. How many exciting, joyful, sad and sad things have happened in these six years; These six years are unforgettable years for children to embark on the road of life. It is the common demand of teachers and students to carry out a series of meaningful activities to express the feelings of teachers, students and their gratitude to their alma mater when they are about to graduate, and to cherish them as beautiful memories forever. This comprehensive study is to make full use of various language forms, so that students can recall their beautiful primary school life, encourage each other and move on.
"Reading" * * chose five articles, all recalling primary school life.
Unforgettable enlightenment is an article recalling the enlightenment teacher. By Shah Sun Jian. This paper focuses on the anti-Japanese speech contest, the teacher's two criticisms of "I" and the boycott of Japanese classes, showing the strong patriotism and rigorous teaching style of the enlightenment teacher, and expressing the author's reverence, gratitude and nostalgia for the enlightenment teacher. The text is written in the order of "I thank the enlightenment teacher, and I miss the memory of the enlightenment teacher's influence on" I ",among which three things in the memory part are the focus of the full text.
To read this lesson, we must first understand the meaning of "enlightenment". On this basis, what enlightenment education did my first teacher give me? For example, love your motherland, be strict with students, write realistically and study hard. Let students understand the sentence "From this combination of leniency and strictness, we primary school students have realized some truths that teachers have not made clear", and understand what "leniency" and "strictness" mean in the text, and why teachers are so strict about composition and writing, but so tolerant about Japanese lessons, so as to further understand the patriotism and rigorous teaching attitude of teachers.
The Teacher Leads the Door is the work of Liu Shaotang, a contemporary writer. This is a memoir. The author recalls his childhood, and under the instruction of the first teacher, he was infected by literature since childhood, sowing the seeds of literature in his heart, expressing his respect, love and deep gratitude to the teacher. When reading, I want to know what specific examples are described in the article and express my deep gratitude to tian teacher. The article focuses on a poem written by tian teacher. He made up a story based on the poem and told it beautifully, which made the children "fascinated, as if they were there." Tian teacher's stories, like spring rain, sowed the seeds of literature in the author's mind. Let us deeply feel that the influence of the first teacher on people's life is very great. At the end of the article, "ten years of trees, a hundred years of tree people; It is the crowning touch of the whole paper. The author explains the great influence of education on people with epigrams, and thanks the teacher for his enlightenment education. With affectionate memories and concrete examples, the article shows that tian teacher's "eloquence is good and his writing is good", and the image of an excellent teacher is vividly displayed on the paper. Vivid narration and concise words are the characteristics of this paper.
The new teacher Wang is a novel. It is said that the new teacher Wang asked this "poor student" in the first Chinese class, which caused laughter. After school, Teacher Wang gave Cai Lin a "poor student file" to encourage Cai Lin to study hard. Cai Lin's idea is very representative: he thinks he is a "poor student", "nobody asks me" and "everyone thinks so". I, I admit it myself. "The so-called" poor students "first lost confidence. In view of the mentality, Mr. Wang prescribed the right medicine and gave the "poor student file". In fact, this "poor student file" is the "short board" of celebrities when they are young. Their achievements are known today, and they have overcome their own shortcomings with their own efforts. This "poor student file" has inspired confidence, and we believe that he will make greater progress under the education of Mr. Wang. Although many students are not judged as "poor students" like Cai Lin, there are times when their study and life are not smooth for six years, so this article is very likely to arouse students' * * * On the basis of reading the article, students can recall the past when teachers helped and encouraged them to make progress.
Unforgettable Laughter is an article about classmates. The article focuses on "everyone in the class loves to laugh, and everyone's laughter is different", and writes the unique laughter of the students in the class, which shows the characteristics of the students through laughter. Between the lines is filled with the cordial friendship between classmates, and the writing angle is unique. When reading, we should pay attention to the writing angle of the article, guide students to observe the characteristics of their classmates, and choose the right angle to write it down.
The author of the red double circle in the composition is Huang Beijia, a contemporary writer. The article "Make-up Examination" mentioned in this article is her first work. Because of the success of this composition, it gave the author confidence and strength. Since then, she has published literary works one after another and eventually became a famous writer. Therefore, the composition "Make-up Examination" can be said to be a milestone in her growth process, and the teacher's 98 red double circle opened the door to her literary creation. Sometimes success comes from a little encouragement. The article looks at the big from the small, and praises the teacher's leading role in his life from the red double circle in an essay. When reading, make students aware of this and encourage them to tell their own growth stories.
(2) Say goodbye.
There are five articles in Reading Materials, all of which focus on the topic of "Farewell to Alma Mater", but their styles are different.
A letter to the teacher is a letter written by Weng, a student of the third primary school in Hongkou District, Shanghai, to the teacher Gu. When the author wrote this letter, he was already studying in East China Normal University. In the letter, she wrote down all kinds of care and teaching from Teacher Gu, and praised the teacher's professionalism. Writing letters to teachers is no stranger to students. Understanding is very important when reading. Combining narration, description and imagination, the author expresses his sincere thanks to the teacher with beautiful lyrical sentences and memories of specific cases.
The speech at the primary school graduation ceremony is a passionate speech. This paper recalls three unforgettable events in my six-year primary school life-the first day of primary school, the third grade sports meeting and the sixth grade parent-teacher meeting, and expresses my nostalgia for my alma mater, my gratitude to my teachers and my reluctance to part with my classmates. Inspiring people with emotion is the basic feature of a speech. Students can use this as a model to learn to write speeches.
"Advice to the Principal" is a letter written by a sixth-grade graduate to the principal, with the focus on making suggestions. In view of the problems existing in the school, the letter puts forward the suggestion of reopening the library. Not only put forward their own ideas, but also put forward specific improvement methods, expressing their love for their alma mater in a special way. Taking this proposal as an example, students can find out the shortcomings of the school through investigation and interview, learn the writing method of this article, and write a proposal to the principal.
Classmate is a short poem. Classmate record is an eternal memory on campus and an unforgettable innocence in the years. This poem is also an emotional initiative. Through reading, students can understand the role of alumni records and make classmates' records of their own classes.
Choose two groups of messages from "graduation messages", one group is written by students to teachers; One group is given by the teacher to the students. As students approach graduation, they have a lot to say to their classmates, teachers and alma mater. "Graduation message" provides them with an opportunity to express their feelings and exchange ideas, and a platform to show their personality and talents. Although everyone can write graduation messages, due to its special commemorative significance, graduation messages should be concise, vivid, contemporary, emotional and inspiring. In teaching, we should guide students to experience the sincere feelings between teachers and students, and guide students to express their wishes in vivid, appropriate and concise language according to the characteristics of different objects.
(a) Introduce some authors in "reading materials"
1. "Unforgettable Enlightenment" by Sha Sun Jian
Sha, 1934, a native of Yixing, Jiangsu, is a professor of Peking University, a doctoral supervisor and a professor in the Party History Research Office of the CPC Central Committee.
2. Liu Shaotang, author of "The Teacher Leads into the Door"
Liu Shaotang (1936— 1997) is a contemporary writer. People from Rulin Village, Tongzhou District, Beijing. 1948 joined the revolution, 1953 joined the China * * * production party. /kloc-started publishing at the age of 0/3, and became the youngest member of the Chinese Writers Association at the age of 20. He was a "prodigy writer" in the literary world of China in 1950s. 199 1 was awarded the certificate of "Outstanding Contributor to Cultural and Artistic Undertakings in China" by the State Council. He used to be a member of the Standing Committee of Beijing Municipal People's Congress, vice chairman of Beijing Writers Association, member of the National Committee of China Federation of Literary and Art Circles, and vice chairman of China Writers Association. Liu Shaotang's literary career of more than 40 years is full of ups and downs. Long-term commitment to the creation of "China style, ethnic customs, local characteristics, local themes" is the standard-bearer of contemporary local literature. He is the author of Collected Works of Liu Shaotang and Local Document System of the Grand Canal (volume 12). The novel "Jingmen Lian Zi" won the Beijing Excellent Novel Award. Storytelling in Liu Jing Pavilion won the first China Prize for Popular Literature. Liu Servant's Home won the national excellent novella award. The Beauty of Moths won the National Short Story Award, and The Yellow Flower Maid Pond won the Excellent Novel Award in the 1990s. Many Chinese and short stories have been translated into English, French, German, Russian, Japanese, Spanish, Thai, Bengali and Albanian for publication.
3. Huang Beijia, author of "Red Double Circle in Composition"
Huang Beijia, 1955 was born in Rugao county, Jiangsu province in June. 1977 was admitted to the literature department of Chinese Department of Peking University. From 65438 to 0984, he was transferred to Jiangsu Writers Association as a professional writer. Since 1973 published her debut "Make-up Examination", nearly 30 anthologies, novels, short stories and essays have been published. His main works include Please Walk with Me, This Moment is So Brilliant, Eyes as Transparent, Rose House, I want to be a good boy, China Fairy Tales and so on.
Every writer will have a touching story when he talks about his own road of literary creation. Huang Beijia's literary career began with The Red Double Circle in 1998. At that time, she was still studying in middle school. On one occasion, the school held an essay contest. She wrote 5000 words in a make-up exam. Later, this article was put in the window. At that time, when the teacher changed his composition, he was used to using red double circles to make good sentences. Huang Beijia childishly counted the red double circles of the teacher's circle through the glass, and found that there were 98 * *, which was the starting point of her writing.
(2) Creative design of the class commemorative book.
Class Memorial Book "605 Childhood Memories"
Origin:
The song began, and the graduation season in June came again. Looking at these children who have been "fighting" in the same classroom for six years, the scene is like a movie clip. Parents say that the affection between our classmates is really good, so there is a bright spot. Let's make a souvenir book!
Different from the usual class magazines and activity CDs in our class, if we want to keep them as souvenirs, we must have them for everyone. We should put something memorable in it. It should be a book for students to keep for a long time. After hovering in my mind for a few days, the outline of my heart finally became clear.
Implement:
1. Announced to the world: In June, the teacher started the plan of making the class yearbook. First of all, he announced the world and told the whole class: "We are going to publish a book, which belongs to our class." The expected question came: "What?" "Where are we going to move the book?" "How?" "Teacher, can you ...? "After the problems are solved one by one, the title of the book will be decided in class.
2. Brainstorming: From class 605 books, 605 commemorative books, our class, bee family to happy childhood, colorful childhood, and 605 ... flying with wings. At this time, the teacher gave the order and voted.
3. Make a final decision: the final vote is decided, and the topic is "605 childhood memories".
4. trick: in order to make children feel involved and take advantage of the opportunity to exercise their hands-on ability, we invited several editors in the class, two pushing manuscripts, five typing and two editing. After fierce competition, the candidate was finally produced.
5. Taking office: I am worried about the children's three-minute fever, but in the end, the teacher has to carry it alone. But the next day, when I saw the children responsible for pushing the manuscript, I carefully typed a submission form with the computer, listed the names and seat numbers of all the students, divided the photos, articles and pictures into spaces, and sketched out the content of the submission. The teacher felt a little relieved, but children are children after all, and sometimes they need the help of the teacher. At noon, they take turns taking a lunch break. Sometimes it takes more time to solve students' typing problems than to type by yourself, but in order to let children participate and exercise, let them do it. Fortunately, there are also several typists in the class who have helped a lot. The final proofreading should be done by the teacher himself. In the end, thirty-four children finished thirty, and the big stone in their hearts was finally put down.
6. There are always several "slow doctors" at the end of each class, and my class is no exception. It will take a long time for the last few to hand over the most satisfactory articles and photos in the past two years, and at this time, the final exam of the school is approaching, and the progress of things will stop. This experience tells me that the next time I do it, I should start from the middle term, so that I won't be too busy at the end of the term. )
7. You're done: In the end, each child handed in an article and life photos, collected some paintings, but felt that something was missing, so he added a page of personal files, and left a message to his classmates, and finally sent it to the printing plant.
8. Parental support: A book is not released to the public, only more than 30 copies are printed, and the cost is huge. Therefore, it was originally planned to copy and bind with black and white copy paper, and each book probably needs about 75 yuan. However, after informing the parent-teacher association president of this class, with his support, the president's own printing company sponsored printing. Without increasing the budget, the commemorative album of this class has become a color hardcover edition, which is really like a commemorative album!
Results:
Activity photos: six years of activity photos. ※.
Teacher's words: the teacher's personal files and whispers. ※.
Student profile: each child has two pages, one page of personal profile and mood message, one page of composition and personal life photo. ※.
Words to classmates: It is a kind of "merit bombing" to publish a paragraph written by each classmate to classmates. ※!
Appreciation of works: excellent ability to appreciate art works and cartoons. ※.
Signature: There are three pages left at the end of the book, which are blank pages for teachers, students and classmates to sign each other. ※.
Echo:
When Memories of 605 Childhood was released, the children were surprised that it was printed so beautifully, far beyond their imagination, and they held it affectionately to their chest. Parents said that this book is even better and more meaningful than the sixth grade graduation yearbook.
This year's Teacher's Day, the last class has just been promoted to the first grade of junior high school, and 34 male and female protagonists in the fragmented old class, that is, "Memories of 605 Childhood", secretly agreed to surprise the teacher on the eve of Teacher's Day. So, the second class ended that day, and the former 605 was reunited. The whole class gathered outside the classroom and shouted, "Happy Teacher's Day!" Out of the classroom, the students hugged the teacher and sent cards, small gifts, snacks, drinks and so on. I feel surprised and happy. No mandatory rules, not much to say. In the past, some students came back spontaneously and said, "I really don't want to be divided into classes" and "I really don't want to leave you", which made the teacher feel very moved and gratified. The previous hard work turned into support, encouraging teachers to continue to treat children with care. Isn't this also an invisible character education? Apart from leaving unforgettable memories for children, I think the most important thing is that the feelings between myself and my students have deepened.
In 2005, the design of creative teaching, assessment and class management activities in primary and secondary schools in Tainan City, Taiwan Province Province was selected by Guo Wenyu, a teacher from Wen Yuan Elementary School. Has been deleted)
(3) On the occasion of graduation
Graduation is just around the corner, and it is inevitable to exchange news between teachers and students and classmates. Occasionally looking through the students' guestbook, some gray words are shocking: "Life is like a dream, and dreams will always accompany you!" "Don't forget your buddy-I ..." "I wish you always smile, you have to smile anyway!" "My greatest wish is that you will be rich and powerful in the future." Such low-style, depressed, pessimistic, vulgar and boring news directly affects the value of the news and also has a negative impact on the other party. I think it is necessary to help students distinguish healthy and positive words from vulgar words and give some guidance to students' creative words.
1. Theme health. The message should promote the positive theme, encourage, spur or praise the other person, and make it an "accelerator" for his future life. Common types are:
(1) Incentive message. For example, "life after separation is like a street, let's add beautiful scenery to the long street together."
(2) wishing words. For example, "life is like a long river, I wish you were a persistent boat;" Life is like a boat. May you be a sailor rain or shine. "
(3) Compliments. For example, "your unassuming personality makes me feel very quiet, and there is a calm heart like water."
(4) Nostalgic words. For example, "I twist my thoughts into a long red line, so that your flying kite can fly in my blue sky forever."
(5) Pseudowords. For example, "what you didn't pick is just a flower in spring, and the whole spring still belongs to you, my friend, don't lose heart!" " "
2. Unique style. Most open and enthusiastic students like personalized words. In this regard, teachers can teach them some distinctive gift forms. Common ones are:
(1) poetic style. For example, "the sun will go away/the flowers will fade/only your friendship with me/is eternal."
(2) Lyric style. For example, "before I leave, I will give you a beautiful ideal and make him your tenacious crutch;" I will give you a smart bag and make it a passport to your life. "
(3) aphorisms. For example, "What is a road? The road is opened from a place with thorns, and it is stepped out from a place without roads. "
(4) Double type. For example, "sincere friendship needs no commitment, and eternal love needs no agreement."
(5) Equality. For example, "your beauty = rigorous work style+enthusiastic spirit of helping others+dynamic innovation ability."
3. Suitable for everyone. Leave a message to avoid sameness, and create "this one" according to students' personality, interests, hobbies, ambitions, specialties, genus and even looks.
Give it to a strong-willed friend: for example, "wealth can't be lewd, poverty can't be moved, power can't be bent, and you are a gentleman."
For sincere friends: For example, "Our friendship is like the sea, with the most sincere friendship in the world and endless vastness and tolerance between people."
For pessimistic students: for example, "life is sometimes not as good as you think, but it is not as bad as you think." May you face life with a smile and have a good trip! "
Give it to students with strong inertia: for example, "Don't just wait for spring like flowers, but fly in spring like swallows."
For narrow-minded students: For example, "Tolerance is an open-minded attitude towards life and a harmonious life color, so that tolerance will always light up the blue sky in our hearts."
Give it to students who lack self-confidence: for example, "flowers have their fragrance, so you don't have to blow them." Your potential is waiting for you to develop. "
For students who are not good at talking: for example, "Silence is not heavy, silence is gold, but sometimes it turns into copper."
Give it to weak-willed students: For example, "Scrap iron can be turned into useful steel because it can withstand painful tempering."
Give it to the students who belong to the horse: for example, "May you become a never-ending swift horse and run to the ideal grassland."
Give it to the "ugly duckling" in the class: for example, "People are cute not because they are beautiful, but because they are cute. Meeting and saying goodbye, returning to sail and sailing, is not only the end of past joy, but also the beginning of future happiness. "
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Examples of information written by teachers to students
Diligence is a bee, it can help you brew the honey of happiness.
Hard sweat can produce ideal flowers.
● Measure a day, look at sowing rather than harvest.
● Kung Fu comes from difficulties and learning comes from hardships.
● Treat praise as a "gas station" and criticism as a "health care box".
● If you want to pick up the needle that fell to the ground, you need to bow your head; The cake hanging around the neck needs to be lifted with both hands before it can be sent to the mouth; Any achievement needs hard work.
Let's learn the spirit of earthworms, persevere and persevere; Let's keep in mind the motto "No pains, no gains", keep our feet on the ground and make progress despite difficulties.
● Reading makes the future, knowledge changes fate, and attitude determines everything!
● Failure in life, no success is the real success; Success in life, any failure is not a real failure.
● Listen to music when the spirit is "thirsty"; When the spirit is "hungry", read a book.
● Never too old to learn. Only with an open mind and continuous progress can we become "winners".
(5) How to write a proposal
A proposal is a special letter, which puts forward suggestions to leaders or individuals for a specific work or plan. There are similarities and differences with the proposal.
The proposal also contains "suggestions", similar to the proposal. However, the proposal is generally read, posted or published in public, and the content is public, which is a written call. The content of the initiative has been widely recognized by the public. However, few people read, post or publish the proposal in public, because its content is only a statement of personal views, for the other party's reference only. Therefore, the proposal generally adopts the tone of discussion, which is not as inspiring as the proposal.
Proposal content: ① Setting the situation: The purpose of setting the situation is to attract the attention of the other party; (2) Give reasons: state the reasons for the proposal in order to arouse the other party's thinking; (3) Making suggestions: generally, suggestions are made in the form of clauses in the hope that the other party will take action. The first two parts are the foundation, and the third part is the subject. The content of each part can be more or less, longer or shorter. In order to be clear and eye-catching, clause statements are generally used. Of course, if there are not many suggestions, clauses can be omitted. 4 end: generally write some modest words, such as "the above suggestions are for reference only". ⑤ The opening and signature are the same as other special letters.
(six) the format of the proposal
Initiative is advocacy and suggestion. A proposal is a special letter written to advocate and initiate an activity. For example, it is proposed to launch a proposal to save the national treasure giant panda; Suggestions on donating money to Project Hope. These appeal letters published in newspapers or posted on campus are all examples of marriage proposals.
The proposal follows the general letter format and has its own characteristics. Generally speaking, it is divided into who initiated, what initiated, who initiated and the date of initiation, which is similar to the general special letter. The characteristic is that the first line does not write the title, but the title of the initiative, such as "saving the national treasure giant panda initiative" and "establishing the Lei Feng group initiative". Then write the called object at the top of another line. But the address is not as real as the letter, just a general title. Sometimes you can write the text directly without writing the title.
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