Fourth grade Chinese composition 1 when I was listening to beautiful fairy tales; When I was reading an interesting extracurricular book; When I was listening to the teacher's humorous explanation of the text, I fell in love with Chinese unconsciously.
Books are delicious food and sweet spring water; Books are an endless ocean, in which I roam freely. Reading is a part of learning Chinese, and it is also my favorite thing to do. When I am addicted to reading, I feel that I sometimes live in a fairy tale world, sometimes fly in the sky, sometimes swim in the sea, sometimes play among famous mountains and rivers, and sometimes jump into the long river of history.
On a rainy day, a gentle passerby asked me, "Excuse me, where is a restaurant near here?" I pointed to Xinghua Village and said, "There it is." I was about to say something when suddenly a voice came: "Please read it." I just woke up. That's Miss Zhong's voice. So, I read emotionally: "It rains in succession during the Qingming Festival ..."
The Great Wall with a long history is accompanied by the story of Meng Jiangnv; The beautiful Summer Palace, accompanied by the Qing Dynasty XX; The world-famous Qin terracotta warriors and horses are accompanied by stories contained in the expressions of the terracotta warriors and horses. Like a senior tour guide, Mr. Zhong talked about everything in Kan Kan there, which left us a deep impression and many good memories.
Chinese learning is multifaceted and there are many interesting things. For example, once, a classmate wrote in his composition: "They have no blood ..." We burst into laughter, and only after laughing did we understand that we should learn to revise our composition.
Chinese class is very active. Every time we learn a text for the first time, the teacher will check our reading. This teacher Zhong always asks, "Who wants to come first?" A hand forest was immediately erected in front of Mr. Zhong, and Mr. Zhong ordered a classmate. At this time, the students who were not ordered were very disappointed, and even made a strange phone call or two to the teacher. However, after the call, they immediately adjusted their status and listened with bated breath. Once the students are found to have misread or are not fluent, the following students start a fierce war of words: "I'll come ...! ""I ...! "Some even stood up and shouted," I, I haven't seen it yet! " "Mr. Zhong quickly kept order and said," Yu Xin raised his hand the fastest. She'll watch! "Another cry of discontent, but the students soon consciously quiet down, the whole classroom was silent. Yu Xin read aloud.
Chinese brings me knowledge, happiness and a wide world. China people, I want to say to you: "I really love you!" " "
From primary school to junior high school, I have studied Chinese for six years in a blink of an eye. But when I think about it, Chinese seems to have left me nothing.
Helpless, looking for clues left by China people in the depths of memory.
Chinese left me Chinese characters, which were dictated repeatedly. Every time I dictated, the teacher kept a strict check, so that my typo had nowhere to escape and I had to surrender. Every time you make a mistake in dictation, you should listen hard, to be exact, there is heavy silence. Heavy dictation has become an indispensable part of my daily life. At 12 noon, I was chanting what I wanted to hear, and I walked into the office trembling, becoming a "wall bending demon". But as soon as I put it in my mouth, I opened the book and flew away. I have to stay in the office for more than ten minutes before I know where they have gone. At that time, I thought hard of hearing was a kind of torture, and now I feel that I have benefited a lot. Those high typos that I have heard over and over again or even three or four times are deeply imprinted in my mind.
Chinese left me with writing skills, which I got from writing critical books again and again. Whenever I feel that my class is too deserted, I "stand out" and take the risk of writing a critical letter to create some "anger" for my class. The teacher was also very "cooperative" and made me write a critical letter "as I wished". Although most self-criticism books are more than 600 words, they are full of "knowledge", such as how to minimize one's "sin", how to defend oneself without being discovered by the teacher, and how to ask the teacher for forgiveness. These are all questions to consider when writing a self-criticism book. And there is only one way to solve these problems: cleverly cover them up in various ways. Fortunately, six years have passed, and I have written thousands of words of self-criticism. This experience has taught me some methods. I can defend if I can, but I can't just use "begging for mercy". These have become my formulas for writing comments. A 600-word self-criticism letter is at your fingertips. These experiences may benefit me. From the method of writing criticism, my language expression ability has improved a lot, and my writing skills have learned to conceive. Writing ability is also exercised in casual practice.
The language expression ability left by Chinese was acquired through a "news broadcast". When I was a freshman and a sophomore, my eloquence was so poor that I could never express it. I have never won a fight with others. After being promoted to the senior grade, the new Chinese teacher opened a "news broadcast" link to enrich the Chinese classroom. This leads to the whole class doing PPT. Although I was young at that time, I already had the concept of "face". In order not to be laughed at by a group of people in the audience, I had to prepare carefully. To this end, I chose the material of Good Book Recommendation and memorized my comments. After I had a clear speech in my mind, I practiced with my family for a long time until I was sure that my performance would not be too bad. Unexpectedly, my performance was highly praised by the teacher that day, and I even said I wanted to read it on the spot and borrowed the book from me. I am grateful for that experience-it gave me courage, and since then I have worked hard to exercise my expression ability. My eloquence and expressive ability have been improved in practice.
There is no need to look for it. I already know that Chinese has left me a lot, and I won't stop learning Chinese. I am happy to draw a comma for my six and a half years of Chinese learning. I believe Chinese will leave me more.
Fourth grade Chinese composition 3 Unit 1
The first lesson is about the beauty of nature.
1, you can make a fairy tale sequel.
2. You can also write a fairy tale.
3. The language is fluent and vivid, and the story is interesting. Teaching hours: two hours, the first class, practice and guide (while learning my invention, accumulate over a long period) teaching process.
1. After learning this set of texts and listening to the introduction of classmates, we know that beauty is around us. Today, let's write down the beautiful scenery we found.
2. Search your memory. Which natural landscape impressed you deeply? A It can be a famous large-scale scenic spot, such as Huangshan Mountain, Hangzhou West Lake, Yandang Mountain and Tianhe Scenic Spot. B it can also be a miniature landscape around you, such as the beach by the sea and the corner of the park (campus). C. it can also be a chance encounter, such as sunrise at the seaside, moonlight in the lotus pond and night view of the city.
3. What are you going to write? How does it help you remember the texts we have learned and the introductions made by our classmates last class? A, you can use the direction, time and other order to form articles, so that people can read with fresh eyes. B. Pay more attention to the characteristics of natural landscape. C. Contact "My Discovery". Let's go and listen to what Xiao Lin and Xiao Dong have found. What did you find? I was inspired to present the pictures in my mind and write them in vivid language.
4. To write a good article, it is inseparable from the accumulation of vocabulary sentences. It is characterized by "accumulation over time". How do the following words help you? Free reading, roll call reading. What did you find? (Two sentences in each group are the same, and each of the four groups has its own characteristics. C.which group do you like best? Why? Where is it suitable for use? D. where have you seen such a special sentence? Try to say something. E. Find such interesting sentences outside class and communicate after class.
5, composition, teachers patrol guidance, timely solve students' problems.
6. Make post-revision and revise the composition in the way you like (you can read your own masterpiece aloud or silently).
7. Write a composition. After-class notes
Teaching process of composition evaluation in the second classroom
1. Some "typical" composition fragments are displayed by the physical projector. Ask the young author to read his own article.
2. Listen carefully before communicating. You can make comments, suggestions, appreciation and supplements. Note: a, whether the sentence is smooth and appropriate. B. Is the language accurate and subtle?
3. After listening, revise and improve the composition again. (You can modify it yourself, or you can communicate and modify it in groups of four. )
4. Appreciate excellent works. (The physical projector shows the "master composition" of this composition) A. The teacher reads aloud and the students randomly comment while listening. B. Students can also read freely. What did you learn from it? (Teachers guide students to discover advantages with appreciation) C, a "jury" can be formed in groups of four, and representatives can be sent to speak. Appreciation of excellent exercises:
Inexplicable colorful pool Yining
Colorful pond is called colorful pond because its water contains all kinds of vulgar minerals. After being refracted by sunlight, it reflects several different colors, which makes the lake look particularly different. Walking up the stone steps step by step, you can see one bunker miraculously appearing in front of you. They are stacked on top of each other, and there are several bunkers on each floor to separate the water of various colors, so that people can better see how many colors there are in the lake. What's even more surprising is that the water in this pit doesn't seem to flow everywhere, so let the bunker wrap them up like bowls. Looking down from the height of the colorful pool, although the whole colorful pool was divided into several pieces by the bunker, the bunker could not be seen clearly, and the colorful pool immediately became a perfect colorful mirror, reflecting great beauty. As soon as you enter the middle of the night, the colorful pond is quiet, and the back of the moon emerges in the middle of the water in the colorful pond, which makes your heart reproduce the beautiful folk story of monkeys fishing for the moon. The breeze blew and the willow tips danced with the wind. Looking from a distance, it seems to tickle the colorful pool water, and the ripples on it are like laughter from the colorful pool water. If you are not careful, you may be fascinated by this beautiful night. The tour guide said that in early spring, several cherry blossoms fell and landed on the surface of the colorful pool water. As soon as the breeze blows, flowers are brought into your nose. You will think, is this colorful pool sprayed with perfume? Why is it so fragrant? No, they are all masterpieces of nature. Ah, the beautiful colorful pool, you are really hard to guess! After-class notes
Second unit
Learn to keep an observation diary in the first class.
Writing content, learning to keep an observation diary, and writing purpose
1. What interesting things happened during the observation? Think carefully and write down what you want to tell others most.
2, you can choose a few diaries that you are satisfied with, and carefully modify and process them to become an exercise. The topic can be guided by "observation diary × rules".
3. Pay attention to the format of the diary. The teaching hours are two hours, and the first class exercises to guide the teaching process. 1. Introduce a new course. Through the study of this unit, the teacher, like everyone else, gradually discovered the happiness brought by observation. In this class, the teacher wants everyone to share this happiness. Who wants to pass on the happiness of after-class observation to everyone? Second, new funding.
1, as far as possible by name, teachers and students * * * with comments. Focus on the following points: a. What was observed and how was it observed? Is there anything new? C. What impressed you deeply during the observation?
Everyone chooses the topic according to what this classmate said. A, the students say the topic and the teacher arranges it. Which topic do you like? Why?
Everyone has his own observation. It will be interesting if you write it down. What should I pay attention to when writing? The discussion is clear: a. Pay attention to write down what you find novel and interesting or what moves you the most. B.be able to write it down in an informal way. If continuous observation is made, keep an observation diary. You can choose a few diaries that you are satisfied with and carefully modify and process them. As an exercise, the topic can be observing the diary, and pay attention to the format of the diary. C. choose your favorite way to explain the topic.
4. Students recruit and teachers patrol.
5. Students communicate and comment on a certain paragraph.
6, modify or mutual approval, focusing on whether the words are appropriate, whether the sentences are fluent, and whether the meaning is clear. After-class notes
Teaching process of composition evaluation in the second classroom
First, the appreciation of excellent works.
Today, our class held a balloon blowing competition. The game is on! Teacher Liu announced the rules of the first round competition: the balloon will explode first, and one player in each group will win. The first group thanked her, although she was small, and her strength in blowing balloons was not small. Our group sent Xie Jinxia. The third group sent a moderate Jacky Lau. The fourth group sent a big man Tian. The contestants took their time to step onto the platform. "One, two, three, go!" Teacher Liu gave the order. The contestants suck milk with their strength. Seeing that Xie Jinxia's face turned red, she seemed to be wronged. Gradually, Xie Jinxia's balloon became bigger and bigger, from eggs to peaches, and then from peaches to watermelons, but the bigger the balloon, the more unbreakable it became, like a naughty child. Seeing that Xie's balloon hasn't exploded, I'm really worried, just like ants in your pants. Only heard "pa" Xie's balloon burst! Cheers and applause rang out ... I was eager to see the students above playing so hard. Teacher Liu seems to have read my mind and said, "Next, let's play together and see who plays the most." So everyone blew hard. "Stop! Please lift the balloons and let them go. " Suddenly colorful balloons flew over the classroom, dancing like butterflies. It was beautiful. So balloons can be so crazy!
Second, comment on students' compositions.
1. In the process of marking, teachers can choose the following typical examples as the content and direction of students' evaluation. Comparison of the same thing from different angles of observation and description. B. Description of the same content, with coarse and fine comparison. C. appreciation of excellent works.
2. Revise the manuscript according to the comments.
3. Copy practice. After-class notes
Third unit
Learn to write fairy tales
Writing content, learning to write fairy tales, writing purpose
1, you can continue to edit fairy tales or make your own fairy tales.
2. According to the content of fairy tales.
3. Write a story on the basis of full imagination.
4. Specific content and fluent sentences.
5. Read it several times after writing and revise it carefully. The teaching hours are two hours, and the teaching process of the first class is one. Introduce new courses. In this unit, we know the genre of "fairy tale" together, and know that "fairy tale" is an important genre of children's literature and a fictional story with strong fantasy color. Its language is vivid and simple, and it often personifies natural objects, and often uses exaggeration, personification and symbolism to weave strange plots. Today, we are going to learn to write fairy tales. I hope students can give full play to their imagination and write a vivid and attractive fairy tale. Second, new funding.
This village is a beautiful scenery and an ecological garden of fruits and vegetables.
In summer, the fields are shaded by green trees. The newly planted rice fields look like countless graceful girls standing together. The fields in summer give people a cool feeling. In autumn, the girl changed into yellow autumn clothes to prevent the cold wind from blowing. However, they are also old, and the farmer's uncle took a sickle to "visit" their "achievements" for half a year. The field in autumn is like a child, lively and lovely. This is real territory.
This river is the only way for beautiful countryside. Every autumn, you will hear the sound of "Ding Dong Ding Dong", just like a pianist playing a "water music".
Bamboo forest is very common in Sichuan, especially in my hometown-Leshan. Some people say that there are more bamboos in Leshan than trees in Leshan. That bamboo seems to be a soldier, because he will never bow his head, never raise his head and stand in every corner.
Rural people don't dress as well as our city people, but they all eat their own natural food. When you walk into the vegetable garden, you will definitely see full vegetables, which can make you have a full meal. How to entertain guests with vegetables and no fruit? Don't worry, they still have orchards. Grapes are like a string of agates. Pears are like tumblers and cherries are like rubies. It seems that farmers have a lot of "gold and silver treasures"!
People in that country have food, clothing and shelter, and they have to catch up with the scientific and technological society!
I have seen mimosa on the hillside of my hometown Jiulong Mountain before. According to my parents, this plant is a perennial herb, but it is not as weak as other herbs.
The flowers of mimosa grow very special. He has a purple or pink flower ball, but it is not a flower, but a tidbit made up of many small flowers. If you accidentally separate a small unit on the ball, you can see that each small unit has four split petals and four long nuclei. It turns out that every small unit is its flower. But why is this plant called mimosa? Oh, it turns out that when you gently touch him, his open pinnate compound leaves will close immediately, and then the whole leaf will hang down again, showing "shyness", which is the reaction of plants after being stimulated and vibrated. Central reflex is called nasal movement in biology, which is the result of cell tension change after mimosa is stimulated.
Judging from previous observations, there are still many gains today. At least I understand why mimosa is called mimosa and how it is "shy".
Mimosa is also very green, with green in it.
Once upon a time, there was a pig. He lived on the plain, but one day, a monster came. His face is evil, and you are so scared that you kneel for mercy. This pig is different. He went into battle light as if he were ready. Suddenly, it got dark and they fought. Monsters use shadowless feet, so fast. Pigs can't see where they are, so they have to fight around.
Not convinced, the pig ran away at once, ready to go out to learn art and make a comeback. He walked and walked, very tired, and stopped under a tree. He fell asleep slowly because he was so tired.
He met a fairy in his dream, and the fairy called him several martial arts and told him the weakness of the monster.
The pig was overjoyed because it could defeat the monster and take back his territory. He was very excited. As soon as he woke up, he set out before dawn to find the monster and prepare to fight it. Of course, you will think that the monster must have won, but it is not, because he knows the monster's weakness, and his weakness is his stomach.
I'm glad to go back to my hometown. The monster came out. He is hungry because there is nothing to eat. He was glad to see the pig back. He can fill his stomach, but he doesn't know that he is no match for a pig.
He fought with the pig again. The pig made a sacred scroll and hit the monster in the stomach. This is, the ground is full of blood, and there is a little rabbit next to it. It turns out that this rabbit is possessed by this monster. If you want to save the little rabbit, you must defeat the monster. He saved the rabbit. The little rabbit was very grateful and gave him many radishes to thank him.
From then on, they became good friends and lived happily, carefree and happy.
This is the story of a pig. How's it going? Does it look nice?
On Sunday, I asked my mother for money to buy the book I always wanted to buy. My mother had no change and gave me 50 yuan. I am happy to go to the bookstore to buy books.
When I came to the bookstore, there were many people. I found the book I wanted. At first glance, it is 10 yuan. I gave my boss 50 yuan, and the boss was on the phone, taking money from my wallet. I went home without looking carefully. When I got home, I saw that the money was three 20 yuan's. I told my mother, and her mother said, "Be honest, don't be greedy for money!" " "I decided to return the extra money to others.
Back in the bookstore, the boss was reading alone, and I told him what happened just now. He was very moved and said to me, "Thank you, little friend, you are really an honest boy!" " "I gave him a 20 yuan bill and was about to turn around and go home when he suddenly stopped me, red and embarrassed, scratched his head and said to me," I'm sorry! The money I just found for you is counterfeit ... "
One night, my parents took me to the suburbs to play.
Out of the city, I feel that there are fewer cars on the road, but the cars coming and going are running very fast. The setting sun hangs on the horizon like a red orange, the air becomes fresher and the surroundings are much quieter.
We stopped at a farm. Ah, this is the farthest place that the eyes can see. From a distance, some farmers' uncles seem to be watering the vegetable fields. I first ran to the nearby wheat field to have a look. Some wheat is yellow and some is green. My father said that the wheat was about to ripen. I picked an ear of wheat from Huang Chengcheng, peeled it off with my hand, and put it in my mouth and tasted it. It didn't taste at first, but later it felt very thick and sweet. Next to the wheat field are corn seedlings and vegetables. Cucumber, Parthenocissus tricuspidata, tomato, dwarf potato, eggplant and peanut grow on the shelf. I found many sticks about my height in the peanut field, with colorful ribbons tied to them. I thought it was very strange, so I asked the farmer's aunt around me. My aunt told me that it was to scare the birds who came to eat peanuts.
I learned a lot when I went to the suburbs today. The countryside is really nice.
In the early morning, the sky was clear in Wan Li, Nanning in early autumn. Under the guidance of the tutor, we came to the beautiful Nanhu Square to carry out writing activities, and everyone was particularly excited.
When I arrived at Nanhu Square, I saw a semicircle arch bridge made of stone, lying like a delicate crescent on the rippling South Lake, which brought convenience to people. There are many people coming and going on the bridge deck, including middle-aged men rushing to work, young mothers pushing babies with happy faces, and little girls jumping around with schoolbags on their backs ... What is particularly striking is a couple of brides and grooms wearing soft white wedding dresses, with fresh roses in their heads and even their eyes smiling happily! When they walked among us arm in arm, all the students clapped their hands in unison, and the bride's mouth bent into a sweet crescent.
Looking at the South Lake, Cui Hua is full of lush grass and trees. On the tree-lined path, a kind old man is playing Tai Ji Chuan leisurely; On the wide water surface, small fish swim slowly in the mirror-like water; In the blue sky, several dragonflies are flying happily, sometimes flying high, sometimes sliding low, sometimes flying in the air, and sometimes drinking water, thus constructing a vivid picture of dragonflies drinking water. Tall coconut trees surround the lake, rustling with the breeze, like a welcome song, welcoming tourists from all directions.
The most beautiful scenery is the sea of flowers in the square. I want to know what superb skills the gardener has! In fact, so many colorful flowers have been cultivated: red, yellow, blue, white, pink and green ... we are dazzled. The colors of these flowers are skillfully combined to form a colorful sea of flowers. In the golden sunshine and breeze, the sea of flowers is full of colorful waves. This kind of scene should only exist in the sky, so how can we see you on earth?
This is the beautiful South Lake Square-my lovely home. A dazzling pearl is embedded in our green city Nanning.