First of all, this proposition highlights the characteristics of Hunan and the connotation of Huxiang culture. When I saw the topic "Morning", I thought of Wu Boxiao's "Morning". The author describes the origin of the words "three pools reflecting the moon, wintersweet" and "morning" on Lu Xun's desk, and teaches people to cherish time and learn from Lu Xun's spirit of always leaving early and returning late and doing everything early. Seeing the topic of "morning", I thought of Mao Zedong's "Ask the boundless earth, who is in charge of ups and downs?" ; Seeing the topic "Morning", I think that contemporary Hunan people dare to break the routine of employing people and take the lead in realizing the integration of Changsha, Zhuzhou and Xiangtan. It shows the spirit of Hunan people who dare to be the first in the world and can correctly guide students to pay attention to current events and society.
Secondly, this proposition pays attention to students' understanding ability and comprehensive quality of the subject. As for the morning, most candidates said that the composition was not difficult, the subject matter was lacking, and it was hard to write, which was suitable for examining students' comprehensive quality and selecting talents. It's true. You rummaged through all the review materials, searched all Baidu web pages, and almost couldn't find ready-made guidance, model essays or even materials. But with a little search, you will find that primary school textbooks have learned the morning light, junior high school has read the high school news textbook "Black hair doesn't know how to study early, white leader regrets studying late", "Xiao He just showed a sharp point, and a dragonfly stood on top" and "The reporter died a second ago", and reviewed Chen Mei; The advertisement of "Mengniu Milk" in the north and south of the great river is made up instantly on TV, which can prevent a school from previewing before the earthquake; Before the war, the highland was occupied first, and the spring tea produced by agriculture was bought early ... They all said "early". This topic is still quite interesting, and many examples can be associated with it. Students' comprehensive quality is good, and they don't have to worry about food.
Thirdly, this topic is speculative and can test students' thinking development. This topic can not only cultivate students' feelings of catching up with the morning, but also make students realize the negative side of "early". Seeing the word "early", I thought of a sentence that Sister Aileen said: "Be famous while it is early". You can also think of "no benefit, no early". It's good to leave early. Students can have different views, a hundred schools of thought can contend, and they can play freely. Their arguments can be described as follows: both positive and negative views can be used. This year's proposition composition can still be written calmly within the specified time even if it is difficult. Judging from the feedback from the examination room, most of them have finished the exam.
Writing instruction
"Morning" is a unique topic. What the hell is morning? "Morning" is a knowing word, with "day" above and "ten" below. "Morning" means that the day will break, the sun will break through the darkness, and generate will come out. Good morning.
The topic of "morning" is very open, and we can do the following divergent thinking: ① related words of "morning", such as: morning, early morning, premature aging, premature beat, leaving early ... ② famous aphorisms about "morning", such as "black hair doesn't know how to study hard, white head regrets studying late" and "Xiao He shows his sharpness. The early bird catches the worm. Going to bed early and getting up early is good for your health. Shoot the first bird early, work early and know early.
"Early" Writing Thought
Thinking guidance
Write an argumentative essay:
Introduction: what is "early", and put forward the argument: always early, everything is early; This thesis: Why "early"? The reasons are ① the harm of not being "early": harming yourself (avoiding illness and medical treatment); Wrong country (Tang Xuanzong didn't go to the early dynasty) 2 advantages of "early": first of all, "early" means harvest; Secondly, "early" highlights wisdom; Early means safety again. (3) How to achieve "early": (1) Establish the concept of "establishing in advance, and failing to advance". ② Practice "doing everything a little earlier than others".
Write an epistolary argumentative essay:
Write a letter to one of my classmates who is often late for morning reading, have a heart-to-heart talk with him, emphasize the harm of being late and the benefits of being early, help him establish the idea that "a plan for a day lies in the morning" and correct his bad habit of being often late.
Write a narrative:
You can remember a character and write a story. Of course, it must be related to "early". For example, when writing about the countryside, it is difficult for the older generation to get up early and be greedy for the dark all their lives. A new generation of farmers have mastered science and technology. Not only do they have no problem getting dressed and eating, but they have also built buildings and bought cars, making farming very easy. They no longer have to get up early and be greedy for the dark, showing the theme of "getting up early is not as good as high technology".
Write a narrative:
You can create a short story about an excellent middle school student who neglected his studies because of puppy love. Just adding "early" scenes to inscriptions or dialogues between characters shows that puppy love and early marriage are harmful to others. (Hunan Xinhua No.1 Middle and High Nebula)
Analysis 2:
This year, Hunan Paper once again continues the form of propositional composition and limited style, and still tells candidates what kind of articles to write in concise and neat words. Judging from the composition of the topic, this year has broken through the phrase topic of previous years. From the running experience in 2005 to the poetic life in 2007 to the tiptoe in 2009, there will be a decorative element next to the central words of these topics, but this year there is only one word "early". It is easy to think of Beijing's "safety" and Shanghai's "busyness". But as far as topic composition is concerned, this year's topics are much wider than in previous years, which means that this year's candidates have more room to play in writing than in previous years. This also reflects the significance of the new curriculum reform in Hunan, which is to let candidates explore the meaning behind a topic in a short time.
From the perspective of examination, what is "early" and what is its connotation? All our candidates should easily think that the first meaning of "early" means "when the sun comes out", and the other one is a little hard to think of, which is "in advance, before a time". The topic "morning" belongs to the "word type" topic summarized in class. The topic of "word type" is characterized by rich meaning and large extension space, so in order to determine a suitable starting point that candidates can firmly grasp, we only need to use short grammar and sentence-making methods to converge and narrow the extension of this topic and ensure that we can cut into writing from a small place. Such as "morning", "morning sunshine", "morning news", "early morning" and "early morning"; Sentences such as "Be famous early", "The early bird catches the worm", "Go out early and come home late", "Going out early and coming home late is a life attitude", "Prepare early", "Speak early" and "Grow up early" make the central idea based on what you have mastered in the shortest time.
At the same time, as long as the topic is "early" and based on the "four-point division of college entrance examination composition theme", it is easy to judge that its theme is about life: isn't everyone trying to get early on the road of life? Isn't it a perfect life to realize your dreams early? On the other hand, life has many regrets. Why can't you find it earlier and make up for it earlier? Pictures about life: Which candidate hasn't seen the majestic sunrise in the morning? Which candidate didn't complain that "I wish I had thought of this topic earlier"? Which candidate didn't get up with his parents in the morning and whispered "early"? In fact, in the final analysis, these things are all discussed and communicated in class.
In terms of style, structure and language expression, the topic of Algae is also very open, without too many restrictions. The most common "syllogism" can be well used in narrative and argumentative writing, and the external progressive structure can also achieve the ideal effect. But what's the point? Whether narrative or argumentative, there must be places that readers can remember. For example, in narrative, candidates can write 800 words without mentioning the word "early", but the things described, the words conveyed and the emotions conveyed are all conveying the word "early" to readers. Another example is argumentative writing. No matter what the central argument is, readers should feel that no matter how "early" is written, the original intention of "early" is not important. What matters is the profound connotation behind "early": why do everything "early", because only in this way can things be done well and a person's personality charm be reflected. For language expression, this topic will have higher requirements. The difficulty of this composition problem lies in how to write appropriate and literary language, and at the same time, these languages can contain profound emotions. For narrative, it is suggested to mobilize one's true feelings, write out the real things one has experienced personally, express one's inner feelings in the most direct language, and cooperate with various rhetorical devices to impress readers in artistic appeal. For argumentative writing, it is suggested to dig deep into the examples cited by ourselves, demonstrate their views step by step from different angles, and adopt rhetorical devices such as parallelism sentences to enhance the momentum of the article and make the discussion at the end of the article reach a climax.
Generally speaking, the Chinese composition test in Hunan is a little more difficult than before, but there are not too many restrictions on the writing content. We can highlight the meaning of "early" through one or two things, or we can show that we should be "early" by discussing a point of view. At the same time, it should be clear that in the article, it doesn't matter how early it is and what its characteristics are. What is important is how to show the meaning behind "early".
Water composition: