Under the guidance of Sha Ou, who can only fly, the second and third planes started the same attempt. Suddenly, one day, all Sha Ou people learned to fly.
This material is similar to a fairy tale, which will naturally remind some candidates of their own life experiences. Some things that I have experienced in the past are likely to come to my mind one by one: after repeated failures, I persevered and finally tasted the happiness of success; Under the guidance of example, try to challenge life and try to fly to the high sky. In this way, these past events will become candidates' writing materials. Out of the understanding of the material, it will also give people a sense of digression thousands of miles away. In short, don't be trapped by genre when writing material composition. As long as you can accurately grasp the material, the content you write conforms to the meaning contained in the material itself, and whether you write an argumentative paper or a narrative, you should be affirmed.
Topic composition
In recent years, the types of composition test questions include topic composition, material composition, propositional composition and semi-propositional composition. Among them, topic composition has become the preferred form of composition proposition in various places because of its extensive materials and eclectic writing methods. In the past three years, the national 1
Judging from the examination questions in various places, 70% of provinces and cities (regions) have adopted this form. For example, Guangdong's voice, Chongqing's life, the mirror of Chaoyang District in Beijing, Liaoning's abandonment, Henan's belief and success, Changsha's youth, we need, Guangxi's courage, Hangzhou's spiritual distance, Shandong's Jinan's perception of beauty, and Hubei's Jingzhou's growth need pressure.
From the above problems, we can see that the "topic" of the composition is very extensive, including personal cultivation, perception of life (life, nature), life belief, responsibility and many other aspects. These topics take into account the life experience of junior high school students as a specific group, and are as close as possible to the actual life of junior high school students, so that candidates have no obstacles in selecting materials.
In addition, it is worth noting that in recent years, the "topic composition" in composition questions is quietly changing, that is, this composition form is integrated with material composition, which not only provides materials, but also determines topics. For example, the writing test in Liaoning Province is:
It is said that on the first day Einstein came to Princeton Institute for Advanced Studies, the administrator asked him what equipment he needed, and he replied, "I think a table or counter, a chair, some paper and pens will do." Oh, yes, and a big wastebasket. " The administrator asked strangely, "Why do you want a big one?" Einstein replied, "so I can throw all my mistakes in." The world has always been like this Every ordinary or great person makes mistakes. Only people like Einstein can see an upward path by constantly abandoning their mistakes.
Please write a composition on the topic of "abandoning mistakes" in combination with your real life.
Requirements: 1. The question is self-made, and the style is not limited, not less than 600 words. 2. Positive thoughts and feelings. 3. Don't show your real name and school name in the text.
This test is very representative, and many of the above-mentioned essays are presented in this form. It is characterized by concentrating some features of two propositional forms. It usually describes the material first, and then extracts the ideological elements from the material as the theme of writing. Compared with the material composition, the analysis of the material is omitted, which reduces the probability of candidates making mistakes (digression). When writing a topic composition, we should pay attention to the following questions. (Slide 2)
First, clarify the connotation of "topic". The so-called "topic" actually defines the scope of composition selection, which is far greater than the general propositional composition, and is not absolutely open and arbitrary. Generally speaking, anything related to the topic can be used as writing material.
Second, "topic composition" generally does not make stylistic restrictions, that is, we often say that the style is diluted and vague. Candidates can write narratives, lyric essays and argumentative essays. In this respect, it allows candidates to "do whatever they want".
Third, we should pay attention to the consistency of the topic. Because of the wide range and many angles of topic composition, topic creep is easy to make mistakes. This phenomenon is mainly manifested in argumentative writing. Its characteristic is that the topics at the beginning and end of the article are not exactly the same, but have the characteristics of overlapping. After careful analysis, you will find that the author's thinking is unclear, the topic is not accurate enough, and he is not firm enough.
(Slide 3) As an exam composition, candidates should be reminded that the more time is tight and psychological pressure is great, the more attention should be paid to the intention of the article. A successful composition is based on adequate preparation. The success or failure of the composition is decided before writing. Imagine that if you don't handle this link well, you are eager to start writing, just write casually. It is not only difficult to connect one's thoughts, but also to keep one's thinking direction all the time, so it is difficult to be rigorous and natural. If it's written, it's too late if you suddenly find something wrong and need to start over. In addition to the loss of time, the aesthetic feeling of paper is also destroyed, and more importantly, it will aggravate the tension of candidates and seriously affect the examination effect.
Therefore, we suggest that in the review stage, we should strengthen the training of candidates' ability to build an article framework.
If there is such an example of material composition training:
2. Write a composition according to a news story. If you write too much, ask for the tomb. Can it really harm people?
Hao mei
There is such a small news in the newspaper: a peasant woman went to the street to tell her fortune because everything went wrong. The fortune teller said that the newly-built building in your house was pressing against the ancient tomb, which was working.
Can ancient tombs really harm people? Of course not!
Everyone in the ancient tomb is dead. How can it harm people? The bodies of the ancients had rotted long ago, leaving only a few bones at most. Even if it is suppressed, can it harm people?
What does it use to harm people? Can it move? Ten thousand steps back, the bone can move, so is it jumping or flying in the air? If it is jumping, whose bones have we seen jumping on the ground? If it is flying, isn't the sky full of flying bones?
Are they invisible? If they can really be invisible, then every gap in the world will be crowded with them. Isn't everything we do "bump into" them? They have invisible magic, and humans have been beating them. Why don't they kill everyone in the world?
If they can kill people, what do they use as weapons? Will you use a knife and a gun like a living person? Then where did they get their swords and guns? Where do you usually put these things?
If all mankind believes in fortune tellers, then all human activities will only stop. Building a house is afraid of hurting ancient tombs, building roads is afraid of hurting ancient tombs, and farming is afraid of hurting ancient tombs ... In this way, mankind will only go extinct, and billions of dead people will definitely add billions of ancient tombs. So, is there peace in this world?
All these show that ancient tombs can't harm people. What really hurts people is the fortune teller who talks nonsense.
We don't believe those fortune-telling stories!
The thinking characteristic of this composition is to grasp a point and drill deeply. Starting from the point that "if the ancient tomb can harm people", the author thinks step by step, how can it harm people? Can it move? How can it move? Are they invisible? What do they use as weapons? Where did their swords and guns come from? Where do you usually put these things? ..... I thought about it all the way and wrote it down in one go, thus refuting the nonsense of "the ancient tomb harms people" to pieces, and making it convincing that "what really harms people is those shit fortune tellers, and we should not believe the nonsense of those fortune tellers".
What made this composition? It is the author's deep thought. "Mind officials think", each of us has a clever head, and as long as we are willing to use it, we will have in-depth and profound thinking.
3. The 800-word composition with controversial news as the theme says, "If you pay attention to a little news every day, you can pay attention to major issues and state affairs around you every day and serve the motherland."
However, how many people pay attention to the news every day. I pay attention to things around me every day.
It is estimated that only some elderly and middle-aged people will pay attention. My grandfather is a person who likes to pay attention to the news and things around him (note: this old man who loves news is my grandfather in Sichuan, and Sichuan is my hometown).
My grandfather sits in front of the TV and watches the news broadcast at 7: 30 every day. He doesn't watch it for a day or a minute (it's a bit exaggerated ...), and his ears are not very good. He always turns on the TV very loudly. Many neighbors downstairs can clearly hear the loud TV.
My sisters and brothers and I were playing downstairs, and we could clearly hear what was broadcast on today's news broadcast ... Once, I watched cartoons for a while, and my grandfather came over immediately, pressed the TV switch, and the TV suddenly went black. I cried and shouted to turn on the TV, but grandpa immediately pulled me off the chair. I sat in a chair, turned on the TV and watched the news broadcast. While watching, I was still talking about me: "I am almost in junior high school, still watching cartoons, not watching the news." Pay more attention to the things around me, immediately ... "I was helpless, turned and went out.
On May 12, 2008, a major earthquake occurred in Sichuan. Our home was not the worst affected, but it was still damaged. There is a big hole nearly two meters long on the wall of our house. Grandpa repaired the wall at home first, and then he heard that there was a hard-hit area nearby, so he went to the rescue. Although he didn't help save a few people, he donated many things: a box of mineral water, a box of drinks, a box of instant noodles, and 1000 yuan.
The same is true after the Yushu earthquake. Grandpa is still concerned about the news and situation there. Paying attention to the news means paying attention to yourself; Paying attention to the news means paying attention to the people you love; Paying attention to the news means paying attention to the things around you; Paying attention to the news means paying attention to your own country.
4. Write a 300-word composition with news as the topic. Recent security is a seemingly simple and so complicated word. With the gradual acceleration of the times, the safety of primary and secondary school students has become a big problem. What should we do?
Every child is the most lovely and needy in the world, but we can hear some unfortunate news almost every day. It is understood that drowning, traffic accidents and sudden death are the top three cases that lead to accidental death of teenagers, and traffic accidents are dangers that we may encounter every day. How to prevent it? First of all, we should obey the traffic rules-stop at the red light, walk at the green light, pedestrians walk at the zebra crossing, etc. Secondly, we should pay attention to passing vehicles to avoid danger.
Many children like to put some small things in their mouths. Would you like to try? No, maybe not. But it is these things that are particularly easy to get stuck in the trachea and esophagus. The doctor told us that if there is a foreign body stuck in the trachea, it may be difficult to breathe for a short time and even life-threatening! At this time, Heimlich's first aid method can be used. The specific operation is as follows: Parents stand behind the child, their legs are arched, their hands are placed at the navel of the child, one hand is clenched, and the other hand is held, and they are pressed several times until the foreign body is eliminated. But if you get stuck in the esophagus, you should see a doctor immediately.
In "Seeking Truth from the News", I also talked about several safety problems, such as trampling accidents, scalding, falling off buildings and cliffs, which taught us how to face and prevent these problems and benefited me a lot.
The safety of students is very important, and life is not guaranteed. What about learning, development and happiness? I hope all of us can understand some security risks and don't let life become an instant.
5. News hot spot composition materials can be used as arguments to write the latest current hot spot composition materials on 20 13.
1. Reflections on the wages of migrant workers being looted by strong winds.
On Jianhe Road, Beizhai Road, Shanghai, a migrant worker just took an annual salary of 1008 yuan from the bank and accidentally fell down. The money in hand was blown up by the wind, and passers-by and car drivers scrambled for it on the road. When the police arrived, there were only 3,000 yuan left with them, as well as photos and surveillance cameras. The person who took the money had a conscience and asked to go to the xin jing police station to pay back the money.
I read a similar report on the Internet. A lady lost her purse, and hundreds of dollars were flying all over the place, and was robbed by passers-by. A person's money was blown away by the wind, and more than a dozen passers-by robbed 1 minute of more than 1000 yuan; There is also a truck rollover in Guangxi that caused two deaths and two injuries, and local villagers looted the money of the dead and wounded. In China, which is known as an ancient civilization with 5,000 years, today, after 30 years of reform and opening up, today, when building a well-off society in an all-round way, and today, when building a harmonious society, we can see that the quality of China people is so low. If it is said that farmers were robbed of their lives and injuries in Guangxi at that time, and their economic conditions and moral quality may not be high, then this kind of thing will happen in Shanghai, one of the most developed cities in China. Passers-by and car drivers are participants, robbing the hard-earned money of migrant workers. It's really embarrassing. Is there a bad word for national quality and social atmosphere? What was robbed was not the wages of farmers, but the quality of China people.
There is a saying in China that "ill-gotten gains are not desirable". Every one of us is running around every day, working hard, saying that the big aspect is to contribute to society and seek welfare for the people, and that the narrow point is also the most basic point is to make money to meet our own needs. It's true to earn money, but don't grab it by hook or by crook. Whether migrant workers or rich people, as compatriots, we should not show greed, but show friendship when they need help. Money can buy material things, but not spiritual needs.
It is reported that under the appeal of the society, the migrant worker's 700 yuan money has been returned. Although it is far from the loss amount, it is also worthy of respect for those who pay back the money. After all, they have understood right and wrong through ideological struggle. For some other money, I wonder if anyone will pay it back. If you take the robbed money, you won't be at ease to spend it. I hope that whether it is a participant or a bystander, this incident can touch everyone's heart. Be a man with a bottom line, never be greedy, and never forget that you are a civilized China person!
The strength of a nation depends not on its population and wealth, but on its national beliefs, national spirit and values. Social development is not driven by the pockets of ordinary people. Social development requires people to have good moral cultivation. If people's moral quality is not improved, the pace of social development will slow down. If people's moral quality is not improved, even if they realize a well-off society in an all-round way, it is also material. Only by constantly strengthening people's pursuit of their own moral quality can society develop continuously and truly realize the stability and unity of the whole society.
2. What else collapsed at Zhoukou Station?
At 7 o'clock in the evening of February/KLOC-0, the comprehensive passenger station under construction in Zhoukou, Henan Province collapsed. 1 person died and many people were injured. Twenty-four hours have passed, and the two missing people have not been found. After the incident, the local * * * banned reporters from entering the scene and covering nearby, and the staff in charge of introducing the accident in the news center it set up did not forget to play computer games and kept silent about the progress of the accident.
In a few days, the Lunar New Year of China people will come. When hundreds of millions of China people, including migrant workers, are anxiously marching on their way home, hoping to enter their long-lost homes before the New Year bell rings, a collapse accident cruelly shattered the reunion dream of the victims and even separated them from their families. Realizing this, everyone in China who lives in a foreign country or has family members working in other places will feel the same way.
6. Two short essays with the theme of recent news, about 500 or 600 words. I saw such a news in the China news section of Southeast Business Daily. It was a photo that caught my attention. A short boy was doing something with his head down in the street drain. My curiosity suddenly broke out and I was busy browsing related articles. "The baby doing homework on the highway touches the Internet" is the caption of this photo. The related article wrote: A little boy hunched his back along a winding and rugged country road, using a ditch instead of a stool, using the roadside as a table and doing his homework. Even if a car passed by, he was unmoved, and the seriousness of his brow was moving and refreshing. When the reporter went to interview, the boy named Zhang Hao was a third-grade rural boy in Chongqing. He replied: "Doing homework on the side of the road is because I feel brighter outside than at home." Zhang Hao lived alone with his grandparents since childhood, with only one fluorescent lamp at home, and his life was very poor. . .. Seeing this, my nose feels sour. It is not easy for Zhang Hao to study so hard in such a bad environment. Compared with him, I live in a honeypot. Living a life of clothes to make ends meet, facing a lot of school supplies, but not knowing how to cherish and save. I often ask my parents to buy this and that, alas, I am too ignorant! From now on, I will be as sensible as Zhang Xiaohao and attach importance to learning. Zhang Hao Jr. certainly understands the importance of learning better than I do. Because only knowledge can change fate and only knowledge can create wealth. Zhang Xiaohao, from today on, let's work together and make progress together!
June 65438+1October 65438+At about 7 pm in June, 2009, Lu Zhenying, a waiter of Suiyang Hotel in Shangqiu City, was on duty at the service desk on the second floor and found a paper bag containing 65438+0.8 million yuan. Faced with such a huge sum of money, she was still not tempted. Without waiting for her master, she carried a paper bag and searched room by room along the floor. Finally, after confirming the identity of the owner, she returned all the huge sum to the owner. The grateful owner offered her a reward of 1000 yuan, which she resolutely refused. You know, her monthly salary is only six or seven hundred, and 1 0,000 yuan is equivalent to her 1 year salary!
Some people may say that Lu Zhenying's behavior was stupid, and no one saw it at that time. If she leaves the money, maybe she won't have to work in a hotel, or maybe she can be a small boss and live a quiet life from now on. ...
But "fool" Lu Zhenying chose the former.
"It's not your own thing, you can't have it!" A simple idea prompted her to give up the windfall.
People's hearts are all meat. If the owner is himself, if someone finds it but doesn't return it, what kind of anxiety and heartache it will be!
After reading this news, I thought of many things. ...
In fact, in our motherland, there are many fools like Lv Zhenying or similar to her.
Let's talk about soldiers. They left their hometown and relatives, gave up their small homes and protected everyone for the peace of the motherland, and defended their homes in remote northern Xinjiang and isolated islands ... Maybe there will be no exciting war scenes in their military career, but they wrote new battle songs with their youth!
And our hero * * *. Although there is no war in peacetime, there are always some people who take risks and are desperate for personal gain. In order to protect people's lives and property, and to protect the interests of the state and the collective from infringement, they silently performed their duties and even sacrificed their lives for this!
Mom said that in our motherland, there are not only these "fools". All walks of life, among ordinary workers, there are such people everywhere! Firefighters sacrificed to put out the fire, teachers were willing to be poor for students, workers worked hard for enterprises, farmers irrigated the land with sweat ... and even she herself was one of them.
Society needs "fools"!
I think I will be such a fool when I grow up.
7. With news as the topic, a writer's life will always encounter some difficulties, and it is impossible to be smooth sailing. Everyone has experienced the storm and ushered in a better tomorrow. Parents accompany us through thick and thin, and give us comfort when we encounter difficulties; When we do a successful thing, we are proud of us and encourage us not to get carried away too much, but to stick to it ... It is because of these comforts, encouragement and companionship that we grow healthily and vigorously.
Although I am healthy now, I was not like this when I was a child. I am weak and often suffer from tonsillitis. Once, it was late, and I was still in bed with a high fever. I vaguely heard my breathing. My parents put their hands on my forehead from time to time, and they kept changing towels, and then put them on my forehead after getting wet. It's midnight, and my high fever still persists. Father touched it and said anxiously, "Why don't you have a fever?" Mother replied: "There must be a process that can't be cured at once." A few hours later, my father put his hand on my forehead again. "no! It's too hot! Have to go to the hospital to see! " After that, he picked me up and ran out of the house. It was raining heavily outside at that time. Before my mother could buy an umbrella, my father disappeared with me.
On the way to the hospital, I lay on my father's back and suddenly felt how wide and warm his back was. At this moment, I felt his generous and warm love. My father loves me so much, but I often get sick, torture him and make him worry about me. I can't help but feel a heat flow in my heart. When he arrived at the hospital, the doctor told him that he had a high fever and should come to the hospital earlier. A string of sparkling beads flowed down my father's forehead. I don't know if it was rain or sweat. ...
Thank you, Mom and Dad. It is because of your hard care, care and love all the way that we have achieved today. It is because of you along the way that I am not afraid of failure and difficulties and overcome all kinds of difficulties again and again. With your care all the way, I am no longer a child. I have become strong and have the courage to overcome difficulties.
Thank you, dear mom and dad!
8. How to write a good news story with novel content 1?
News is valuable, cognitive, enlightening and instructive in novelty. The news is only new,
In order to attract readers' attention, we can take a sneak peek. New, not just new people, new events, new
Experience should be reported to readers, meaningful, valuable, inspiring and educational.
Something sexual.
Step 2 report quickly
Fast is the value of news, slow news reports will reduce the value of news, and "news" will become "old news". The timeliness of news is to be fast and new in content, to be sensitive to new people, new things, new situations and new problems, to understand them as soon as possible and to reflect them in time.
3. The content should be simple.
Conciseness is the main sign that news is different from other styles. The so-called conciseness means "in a few words, remember the facts clearly, only a few strokes, show the spirit, summarize without abstraction, be brief without omission", use a pen succinctly and neatly, and concentrate on refining the content. It is very important to find a good media publicity page. Go to Zhengzhou to find Cai Jie.