Teaching plan of "climbing Yueyang Tower" in senior one Chinese.
Teaching objectives:
1. Cultivate students' ability to appreciate poetry and grasp the profound artistic conception of this poem.
2. Feeling that "The Story of Climbing Yueyang Tower" expresses the poet's patriotic feelings of hurting the nature and worrying about the country and the people by depicting the magnificent artistic realm and personal loneliness.
Teaching focus:
Grasp the classic famous sentences in the poem and taste the ingenuity of the author's words and sentences; Taste the writing technique of touching the scene and blending the scene.
Teaching tool: PPT multimedia courseware
Teaching hours: one class hour.
teaching process
First, the introduction of new courses.
Ask questions, stimulate interest and introduce new lessons: (big screen projection)
1. What are the three famous buildings in Jiangnan?
Wang Tengting Pavilion in Nanchang, Jiangxi, Yellow Crane Tower in Wuhan, Hubei and Yueyang Tower in Hunan are also called "Three Famous Buildings in the South of the Yangtze River". (It merged with Penglai Pavilion in Shandong Province into "Four Famous Buildings".) Among them, Yueyang Tower, known as "Dongting is the world's water and Yueyang is the world's building", has attracted many literati from past dynasties to express their feelings with its majestic momentum and style.
2. The ancients described Dongting Lake. How many words can you recite?
1 Qu Yuan: "The autumn wind is curling, and Dongting waves are under the leaves."
② Liu Changqing: "The waves are stacked and floating, but there is no sun in the middle stream."
(3) Xu Tang: "Looking around, there is no land, and there are mountains in the middle."
4 Meng Haoran: "Clouds are foggy and trapped in Yueyang City."
⑤ Du Fu: "There is Wu in the east and Chu in the south, so you can see the endless drifting of heaven and earth."
⑥ Liu Yuxi: "Looking at Dongting Lake in the distance, there are green snails in the silver plate."
⑦ The poet Ke Ming said: "The water is covered with a wide sky, and the mountains are high and the terrain is high."
3. Do you remember how many famous couplets you wrote about Yueyang Tower?
(1) Is He Qi on the first floor? Du Shaoling's five-word swan song, Fan's two sentences are related to love, Teng's Everything is Prosperous, and Lv Chunyang will be drunk after three passes: Poetry? Ruye? Official? Ye Xian? Where were those lost times before me? , make me cry!
Gentlemen, try it: Xiaoxiang at the south pole of Dongting Lake, Wuxia in the north of the Yangtze River, refreshing in Baling Mountain West, and Jiang Yan in the east of Yuezhou City: reservoir, wanderer, owner and town. There is a real meaning in this. Who can read it?
(2) Be happy first and then worry, Fan Shuzhi; Yesterday, I heard that today, Du Shaoling can talk in poetry.
(3) Dongting is 800 miles west; The first floor of Huaihai Nanlai.
(4) Surrounded by rivers and mountains; There is a skeleton in the cupboard.
⑤ If you can't let go of Gan Kun's eyes, why put the wine on the ground; Only by swallowing the clouds and dreams in your chest can you recite poems to the gods.
Second, comment on the author and his works.
Du Fu (A.D. 7 12-770), with beautiful words, is known as Du Gongbu, a great realistic poet in the Tang Dynasty. He is known as "the sage of poetry" and his poems are known as "the history of poetry".
Poetry: "Three Officials"-Shi Haoguan, Tongguan and Xin 'an officials
"Three Farewells"-Wedding Farewells, Homelessness, Farewell to the Old and Welcome to the New
Hope in Spring, Delighting in Rain on a Spring Night, Autumn Wind Breaking the Cottage and so on.
Third, knowing people and discussing the world, background introduction
In the third year of Tang Daizong Dali (768), Du Fu went out to visit two lakes. This poem was written by a poet who climbed Yueyang Tower and looked at his hometown. That year (769), the poet was 57 years old, only two years from the end of his life. At that time, the poet was in a difficult situation, miserable, old and weak, suffering from lung disease and rheumatism, his left arm was withered, his right ear was deaf, and he was poor and sick. Besides, there is no hope of returning to the north. The whole family lived in a boat and drifted south along Dongting Lake.
4. Read and write this poem silently.
This poem is extremely rich in content and profound in emotion, so you should read it carefully.
The first couplet: from "old news" to "today" for decades, it contains vicissitudes of life, and fast reading means different things.
Zhuan Xu: When writing about the scenery of Yueyang Tower, you should look at it from a distance. The word "floating days and nights" should be read slowly-it seems to be "how many days and nights have passed" This is to prepare for the following.
Necklace: Speaking of individuals, there is infinite bitterness, so it is better to keep a low profile.
End couplet: When it comes to the country, it is full of grief and indignation, and the tone rises slightly-this is the climax of the whole poem.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) poetry appreciation
1. The first link: I've always heard about Dongting Lake, and now I've finally climbed this tower.
I have heard that Dongting Lake is famous for its huge water potential. Today, I have the honor to board the Yueyang Tower on the lakeside and pitch the mountains.
(2) Question: What do the "past stories" and "present stories" express the poet's mood?
I have heard the name of Dongting, and I have a long-term wish to visit it. However, wars are frequent and life is wandering. It was not until my later years that I realized my wish to see the famous lake. The first time I boarded Yueyang Tower, I was happy on the surface, but actually I wanted to express my early unfulfilled ambition. In the final analysis, it is to describe the brewing atmosphere of Dongting Lake.
③ Summary and analysis: The first joint is mainly Dongting Lake, with a vast water surface and Wang Yang.
2. Couplets: There is the State of Wu in the east and the State of Chu in the south, and you can see the endless drifting of heaven and earth.
The vast Great Lakes separate Wu Chu from the southeast, and heaven and earth seem to float and ripple on the boundless lake day and night.
② Question: What are the advantages of the words "God" and "Fu"?
Hey, Split. "Gone with the wind", gone with the wind, rippling. Thousands of miles with this lake and split in two, magnificent; The sun, the moon and the stars all seem to float on the lake and move slowly. What a spectacular sight it is.
These two words describe the vast majestic momentum and magnificent scenery of Dongting Lake, and paint a colorful picture for readers.
Cao Cao recited the sea "the trip to the sun and the moon, if it comes from it;" Xinghan is brilliant, if you take it by surprise. "(Looking at the Sea) embodies a kind of" vigorous and broad "artistic conception, and Du Fu's couplet" has the pressure of a hundred generations and is a unique expression of five words ". Liu Chenweng dialect (Song Dynasty) was praised by Wang Shizhen as "a hero who transcends ancient and modern times".
③ Summary and analysis: Zhuanlian focuses on Dongting Lake, which is magnificent and full of enthusiasm.
3. Necklace: But there is no news from my relatives and friends. I am old and sick, and I am alone with my boat.
1 translation: I am wandering in the Jianghu, and my relatives and friends have long been unaware of it, but they have not sent me a word; I am old and ill, and I only live in a small boat.
② Problem: The artistic conception of the neckline suddenly changed from wide to narrow. Contact the tail couplet and try to analyze the function of this expression skill.
From parallel couplets to neck couplets, the artistic conception of poetry has changed from wide to narrow, but the two couplets complement each other. Pu Qilong, a historian in the Qing Dynasty, said: "If it is not wide, it will be narrow, and if it is not bitter, it will be few. It can be narrow and empty. " At the end of the couplet, the artistic conception becomes wider, and the poem sets each other off, and the artistic conception of the whole poem constitutes a whole.
③ Try to analyze the thoughts and feelings expressed by the neckline.
Facing the vast Dongting Lake in Wang Yang, the poet recalled his bumpy political life. He wandered around the world without any spiritual or material assistance. At present, he is both "old" and "sick", living on a wooden boat and wandering in Hunan. His life experience is at stake and miserable. Its desolation, grief and resentment are self-evident. The poet expressed a feeling of infinite sadness and sorrow for himself and the world.
4. Tail joint: There are wars and mountains to the north of this wall. How can I not cry by this railing? .
1 translation: Standing on the Yueyang Tower overlooking the north of Guanshan, it is still a war, and countless lives are ruined; Looking out of the window and thinking of my motherland, I couldn't help crying.
(2) Question: What changes have taken place in the expression of personal grief and sadness? What kind of feelings do poets and writers have?
Finally, in the couplet, the poet went upstairs to see the scenery in a miserable situation and saw the national turmoil. He could not serve the country. He couldn't help crying, and it was hard to stop. This feeling of worrying about the country and the people and hurting the people comes to mind together with the feeling of bleak life experience, and the artistic conception of the poem changes from narrow to wide, from personal suffering to thinking about the decline of the country. It can be seen that the poet never stays in personal pain, always thinking about national affairs, which embodies the poet's noble sentiment of sympathizing with the people's sufferings and caring about the country's destiny (worrying about the country and the people).
Sixth, explore and summarize the whole poem.
1. Theme and artistic conception
This poem describes what the poet saw and felt when he went upstairs. By describing the magnificence of Dongting Lake and touching the scene, the poet set off his personal sorrow, national sorrow and the magnificent scenery of nature, and showed his great concern for the country and the people. The grand artistic conception and tragic artistic conception are the historical masterpieces of climbing Yueyang Tower.
2. Artistic skills
The artistic conception is far-reaching and the style is tragic.
(2) The whole poem has a strong contrast and the antithesis is neat.
(3) accurate words and profound meanings.
Seven, after-school exercises
1. Read and recite this poem, and further understand the artistic conception and feelings of the whole poem in reading.
2. Read the following Tang poem and then answer this question.
Climb Yueyang Tower with Xia Twelve.
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Climb the Yueyang Tower and overlook the Yangtze River until you reach the open Dongting Lake.
It breaks my heart to see geese flying south, and the distant mountains are in the title of a good month.
On the upper floor of the sky, stay in the chair and upload a glass of wine from the sky.
The cool breeze rising after drunkenness, blowing the sleeves with the wind, we will return.
[Note] In the second year of Gan Yuan, Li Bai was pardoned in exile, returned to Jiangling, and went south to Yueyang to write this poem.
(1) The poem "Wild geese lead to sorrow", and some versions write "Wild geese don't go to Qiu Jiang". Which sentence do you think is better and why?
A: Wild Goose Leads a Sad Heart, which personifies Li Bai's happy feeling of being forgiven in exile. In this sentence, the goose is intended to take away the sadness for the poet. In the next sentence, it is written that Junshan has feelings for the poet to win a good month, and the sadness is happy, which sets each other off. Worrying about Your Heart is more sensational than Farewell to Qiu Jiang, and the moon is more novel. (the meaning is right. For example, answering "Don't go to Qiu Jiang to find geese" makes sense. )
(2) Briefly analyze the artistic expression techniques adopted in the third joint "Stay in the Cloud, Drink in the Sky".
The third part uses exaggeration to write the story of Yueyang Tower towering into the sky. At the same time, these two poems are magical in imagination, connecting the couch on the cloud with the "walking cup" in the sky, and writing the scene that the poet seems to be in a fairyland. (That's right)