Text discussion

First, the overall grasp

1. This article is not a biography, but describes the main deeds of Mr. Wen Yiduo, showing his noble character and highly praising his revolutionary spirit.

In Farewell to Si Tuleideng, Comrade Mao Zedong pointed out: "Many people who used to be liberals or democratic individualists stood up before American imperialism and its lackeys, the Kuomintang reactionaries. Wen Yiduo was furious with the Kuomintang pistol and would rather surrender than give in. " Highly praised Wen Yiduo for showing the heroism of our nation. The heroism of our nation is the most important aspect of Mr. Wen Yiduo's spiritual character, which has been fully demonstrated in this article. In the second half of the article, I emphasized that Mr Wen Yiduo was a "brave revolutionary martyr".

But Mr. Wen Yiduo's main identity in his life is a scholar and a poet. Therefore, the first half of this paper describes how Mr. Wen Yiduo devoted himself to the academic field in order to explore the way out of saving the country and the people in the early stage. He did not fear hardships, forgot to eat and sleep for more than ten years, and finally achieved fruitful results in academics. It is emphasized that Mr Wen Yiduo is an "outstanding scholar".

Mr. Wen Yiduo devoted himself to academics in the early stage and to the democratic movement in the later stage, which reflected the changes in his understanding of society. But as an outstanding scholar, a great patriot and a man of lofty ideals who is consistent in words and deeds, he is consistent.

This article is very incisive, only more than 1000 words, which highlights the most essential characteristics of Mr. Wen Yiduo's ideological character. Selected typical examples, exquisite and rigorous structure, concise poetic language and accurate lyrical exposition make this article full of touching power.

(1) is well-structured. The author uses Mr. Wen Yiduo's "words and deeds" to guide the full text. In the first half, Mr. Wen Yiduo "said what he did, but didn't say what he did", which showed Mr. Wen Yiduo's "scholar appearance". In the second half, Mr. Wen Yiduo's words and deeds are consistent with his words and deeds, which shows that between the upper part and the lower part of Mr. Wen Yiduo's "revolutionary side", sentences that always connect the upper part and always start the lower part are used to make the connection close and the transition natural.

(2) accurate material selection. The materials selected by the author pay attention to typicality, which can get twice the result with half the effort. As a "scholar", the author only chooses three books: 300 Tang Poems, Revision of Songs of the South and New Interpretation of Classics. As a "revolutionary", take three things as examples: drafting political leaflets, speaking at mass meetings and participating in demonstrations. Mr. Wen's life experience is complicated, and his works are full of descriptive things. Only by selecting these six things from a large number of materials, the author has shown Mr. Wen Yiduo's rigorous and diligent learning attitude, selfless and fearless spirit of struggle, surging patriotic enthusiasm and noble personality of matching words with deeds.

(3) Good at tailoring. The use of materials, according to the needs of the performance center, the author has something to give up, something to take, something complicated and something simple. For example, when Mr. Wen studied Tang poetry, the author did not write what books he studied and what new discoveries he made, but focused on the purpose and attitude of his research: "He wants to eat and digest the cultural history of our Chinese nation for thousands of years" and "He wants to prescribe a cultural prescription for our declining nation", which highlights Mr. Wen's research knowledge and aims at saving the country; These details, such as "I can't go downstairs without looking at the garden", "messy hair" and "little sleep", show Mr. Wen's hard-working spirit; "One big bamboo paper notebook after another is full of fine print, like a group of ants queuing at the door", which shows Mr. Wen Yiduo's meticulous and rigorous attitude. This kind of cutting can effectively highlight the center. Elaborate, study Tang poetry, and write in detail; However, only a short paragraph, less than 100 words, was used to write Revision of Songs of the South of China and Classical New Meaning, emphasizing the meaning of "doing" and "not saying", and the emphasis of expression was different from before. People are familiar with Mr. Wen's "last speech" and his murder. The author no longer narrates the facts too much, but repeatedly emphasizes the emergency of "good luck", extracts the most generous sentence "Come out" in the "speech", and depicts the calm posture of "holding your head high and your beard fluttering", thus highlighting Mr. Wen Yiduo's fearless revolutionary spirit. All these show the author's profound skill in material cutting.

3. The language is vivid, concise and implicit, full of emotional beauty and musical beauty.

(1) vivid. Not only the language of description is vivid, but also the language of narration and discussion is vivid. For example, the sentence "He is drilling ancient books" is originally a narrative language, which means nothing more than that Wen Yiduo is studying ancient books, but the author carefully chooses "drilling" instead of "researching", which contains metaphors, both vivid and meaningful. Moreover, the sentence pattern has been changed to "drilling", and the narrative has changed from static to dynamic, giving people the feeling that it is no longer an objective introduction, but a warm compliment. In addition, such obvious examples as "eat up", "digest light" and "take a long view"

(2) Refinement and implication. For example, the word "Shuo" is very common, but the author gives it many meanings. The word "say" in Wen Yiduo's self-report quoted at the beginning means to announce what he wants to do or confess what he has done; "He didn't say it, but he did it" in paragraph 5 and "Say it" in paragraph 6 are all boastful and boastful. The "don't say" here is mainly to praise Mr. Wen Yiduo's hard-working spirit and modesty. As a revolutionary, Wen Yiduo's "theory" is propaganda and mobilization of the revolution, exposure and reprimand of reactionaries. In fact, it is not only "words" but also "deeds". A word "say" actually expresses so many meanings! Combining with a certain language environment, it is thought-provoking to flexibly give the same word different meanings.

(3) full of feelings. The narrative and description of this article are lyrical, which makes people confused. For example, "the higher you climb, the harder you climb; The harder you drill, the harder you stick to it. "Narrative is ok, but full of praise. Another example is "holding your head high and your beard fluttering", which is obviously a description, but the feelings of praise and admiration are also coming out. Another example is "I almost forgot to eat rice", which was originally a very common compliment, but later compared with the last sentence "He is greedy for spiritual food", the meaning is much richer. Similarly, the sentence of "Sleep less at night" and "cherish an inch of yin" is not very implicit, but it gives people an unusual feeling to follow an unfinished "parting from yin". Because the author has strong feelings, he can make ordinary sentences unusual.

(4) rich in musical beauty. (1) The author is good at using the structure of idioms or similar idioms, such as "Don't look at the garden, don't go downstairs, end up in poverty", "Concentrate, your heart will be calm", "completely different", "contrary to the past", "Repeated alarm, tense situation" and so on. The structure of these words is neat and rhythmic. (2) The author is used to using antithetical forms, such as "I speak first and then do it" at the beginning, "He is a giant in his mouth, just as he is …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… He is a man of high standards. "Some of these paired sentences are contrasted, some are tied, and some are relatively neat antithetical sentences. These sentences are catchy, forceful and full of musical beauty.

4. Narrative writing method. One of the characteristics expressed in this paper is narration and discussion. The author actually constructs the article through argumentation. The first and second paragraphs are the narrative procedure of the first part, and the seventh paragraph is the summary of the first part. Both are discussions. The eighth and ninth paragraphs are the outline of the second part, and the last paragraph is the second part and the summary of the full text. These two points are also discussed. This paper uses references many times, including the beginning and end references, multiple references before and after writing, and references to writing and topics. Taking care of in various ways makes the structure of the article rigorous, and also forms a melody and momentum, which strengthens the appeal of the article. And all these concerns are almost empty talk. This shows the important role discussed in this paper.

Second, the problem research

1. Why did this article take the title "What Mr. Wen Yiduo said and did"?

The original title of this article is "Notes on Words and Actions of Mr. Wen Yiduo", which was changed to its current name with the consent of the author Mr. Cang Kejia. There is no essential difference between the current title and the original title. The problem is that everyone is talking, doing and doing it every day, which is too general. Is it too inconspicuous and novel to put it in the title? If it is written about ordinary people, it is true. However, Mr Wen Yiduo is different. Excuse me: Who delivered the "last speech"? Such a speech was earth-shattering and made people cry. Is everything comparable to ordinary words? I want to ask again: "How many people in the country have done this?" ? This behavior shocked hundreds of millions of people at home and abroad. Is it comparable to any ordinary behavior? It can be seen that the title of Mr. Wen Yiduo is appropriate and unusual.

Some comrades think that the language of this article is yelling, using big words and classical Chinese vocabulary, which is not simple. How should I look at it?

The author of this article is a poet. It should be noted that he wrote in poetic language. Concise, vivid, vivid, jumping and imposing manner are the language style of the article. You can't insist on uniformity, just say simple style, but poetic style is not good. It should be said that each has its own characteristics and beauty.

Proper use of words in classical Chinese can make the article concise and increase the charm of the language. Everyone agrees that we should absorb the essence of classical Chinese.

As for the momentum of the article, it seems to be yelling, which is just right for Mr. Wen Yiduo. Mr. Wen is a rigid figure with masculine beauty.

Practice note

Read the full text carefully first, draw incisive sentences, then repeat the main idea of the text, and tell the main characteristics of Wen Yiduo's ideological character in the early and late stages, what changes have taken place in the early and late stages, and what similarities are there.

The purpose of the topic is to let students master the main features of the main idea of the text and Mr. Wen Yiduo's ideological character, and to improve students' ability to master key sentences, repeat and summarize.

Reference answer:

In the early stage, Mr. Wen devoted himself to academics in order to explore the way out for saving the country and the people. He is not afraid of difficulties and forgets to eat and sleep. After more than ten years, he finally achieved fruitful results in his studies. In his later years, he joined the democratic movement, dared to speak for the people, was fearless in the face of brutal enemies, and died, which reflected the courage of democratic fighters and became a model for revolutionary intellectuals in China. The different paths taken by Mr. Wen in his early and late period reflect the changes in his understanding of society. But as an outstanding scholar, a great patriot and a man of lofty ideals who is consistent in words and deeds, he is consistent.

Second, talk about the meaning of the following sentences, and pay attention to the meaning of the underlined part.

1. At that time, he had lost interest in poetry and became interested in research.

He wants to prescribe cultural medicine for our declining country.

From 3. 1930 to 1932, "seeing, listening and asking" is only in the initial stage of "seeing".

The light in the middle of the night is his companion, because it opens a bright road and is a "bleaching wall".

He was so absorbed that he became the host of "Why not go downstairs".

The purpose of the topic is to guide students to understand the words in the sentence accurately, so as to further understand the meaning of the sentence and even the article.