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Write a model essay according to the cartoon.
1. I have written a model essay for reading comics, and the teacher praised me for writing well! The inspiration from a cartoon.

I slowly opened the Chinese book and was immediately attracted by a cartoon in the book. The main content of this cartoon is: a lumberjack dressed in dark black, waving a sharp axe and holding a cigarette in his mouth, cut at the tree without hesitation, and the tall and straight tree fell down. But instead of feeling sorry, the lumberjack smiled, as if he was facing piles of money instead of trees. Then, his speed accelerated again, and one big tree after another fell down. His heart is as black as his clothes. At this time, a woodpecker bravely flew to the woodcutter's shoulder and pecked the woodcutter's head. "There must be insects in this wood." The woodpecker's voice echoed in the Woods.

Yes, there are bugs in people's brains. These worms lurk in people's minds. These bugs make human beings more selfish. They cut down all the trees that provide oxygen for our survival. If this continues, the consequences will be unimaginable. According to the survey, the global forest has been reduced by half, which is mainly caused by human activities. Now, the global forest area has dropped from 3.96 billion hectares in 1990 to 3.8 billion hectares in 2000. Nearly10 million hectares of forests disappear every year in the world. Due to the rapid population growth and people's unrestricted farming and grazing, forests, grasslands and even green vegetation have been destroyed. If there were no forests in the world, life on land would be reduced by 90% and 2.5 million species would be extinct. When all the forests disappear, it will be too late for human beings to regret.

Therefore, we must take action to protect trees. For ourselves and future generations, we should cherish natural resources and make life green.

I am a woodpecker and live in a lush forest. I am extremely happy, because I have many good companions to accompany me. But one day. .

The sun shone on me through the hole in the tree. It is very warm. I jumped out of bed and stretched myself. Suddenly, I feel so hungry. Yes, my uncles are not sick these days, and I can't find anything to eat. What should I do? I'll try my luck and go out and look for it. I combed my feathers and prepared to take off.

I walked in the Woods for a long time, and none of my uncles on the tree was sick. Looks like I'm hungry. I was about to fly back when I suddenly heard a few "Benedict" voices coming from the front. What's going on here? Is it the same kind of pecking? But why doesn't it sound like it? So I flew over to have a look.

I landed on a tree and looked at it. It turned out that a wood thief was cutting down trees. He waved a sharpened axe and cut it on the waist of the tree. At this time, I vaguely heard uncle in * * *. The past scenes are projected in my mind. A few years ago, a group of wood thieves cut down trees here, which made our birds have no habitat and many young trees lost their parents. . What are we going to do? I'm going to save my uncle. I quickly flew forward and pecked at the elm head of the wood thief with fierce power, saying, "There must be bugs in this wood." It is true that the wood thief has a elm head, because he doesn't want to think about it either. To destroy tree resources is to destroy his own humanity. Without natural resources, which one of them can't survive?

I pecked the wood thief in great pain and tried to escape. Suddenly a group of people came from Lin Nakakoji, with tea on their arms. I know these people are from the Forest Environmental Protection Bureau. At the sight of them, the thief who stole wood turned pale with fear. After a while, I saw them take the hateful wood thief away.

The forest is quiet again.

3. Comic composition 400 words civilization-only one step away. I read a thought-provoking cartoon and liked it very much, because it let me know how far civilization is from us.

This cartoon has only four squares, which are roughly as follows; After school, Xiao Ming and Xiao Dou, freshmen, are walking home. When passing by the trash can, the careful adzuki bean found that the trash can was surrounded by peel debris, which was very unsanitary. Adzuki bean couldn't help but hold his nose and say to Xiaoming, "This is really dirty! I don't know who is so wicked, just one step away, and I'm too lazy to leave. " After that, he asked Xiao Ming to help collect garbage.

Xiao Ming shook his head mysteriously and said, "I have a good idea, too." Please clean it up first! " "After the division of labor was completed, Abortion soon began to work. I saw that she put the garbage together first, and then shoveled it into the trash can bit by bit with cardboard. Soon, adzuki bean put all the rubbish into the trash can, but at this time, Yao Ming was not idle. When he finished speaking, he posted it on the trash can and saw that it read; Civilization-only one step away.

After reading this little cartoon, I not only have problems; Is Wen Mingzhen only one step away from us? Indeed, in graffiti, garbage is only one step away from being thrown into the trash can. Is it civilized to throw garbage into the trash can? I think so, too. Not only that, it is also civilized to cross the road and obey the traffic laws.

Civilization is actually close to us. Civilization is just a simple question of right and wrong.

Everyone knows that civilization is very important, but it is difficult to practice. There is a saying in the cartoon-civilization is only one step away.

But this step is difficult to take, because laziness, lying and so on often make it impossible for us to cross that step, but these are human nature, if you can engrave these bad habits. This is civilization. Comics are a good example. Some people don't take that step in order to save trouble, and throw the garbage outside the trash can.

Usually Wen Mingzhen is only one step away from us. Why don't we take that step seriously and reach the other side of civilization? This is a thought-provoking question. I think we should really think about it and take the last step ... Sun Wenwen, Class 6 (2) of zhang wan Primary School in Lianyungang, Jiangsu Province, "Only a mother is good in the world ..." This song that everyone can sing appeared on TV. At this time, Zhang San, the father who sat at the desk for an hour, excitedly pointed to the TV screen and said, "Look, I'm celebrating my mother's 70th birthday. Dizziness. Why did Zhang San order a song for his mother? There is also a reason for this. Speaking of it, that Zhang San is an unfilial son, and he eats well and dresses well at home. Only the 70-year-old old mother ate inferior tea and wore an old cotton-padded jacket from the 1960s, which didn't keep out the wind at all. Zhang San is unwilling to make new clothes for his mother. And their family wears leopard coats and high-grade leather shoes. Zhang San was called "dirty" by others 3. Clothes, shoes, socks, etc. Then their home has changed and grandma has to wash it alone, even without patting her hands. After all, old people are old, and sometimes big clothes can't be washed clean. When he was a child, his mother scolded his grandmother for her eighteen ancestors, and her grandmother didn't talk back. When he meets his parents, he often expresses his dissatisfaction with his grandmother a long time ago, but when others are young, her grandmother will continue to work hard. When I got home, I vented my dissatisfaction on my grandmother. I roared, "It's all your fault, old woman. I lost money. Go and get a drink, I'm dying of thirst. " Grandma moved the three-inch golden lotus from her shelter-a small warehouse, went to the closet with trepidation to get a glass of juice and walked to the living room. Because of overwork, I got sick and coughed when I walked. "Ahem. The mother in the back room shouted. She's a minor illness. She's not faking it. She asked her grandmother to wash clothes. Grandma went to the back room. In this family, grandma seems to have lost her respect and replaced it with "old deathless". Because they abused the elderly for a long time, they quickly aroused the dissatisfaction of their neighbors. They all accused him of being "dirty" and said that he had gone too far. Do you have a conscience? It's time for the old man to enjoy his retirement. Grandma's birthday was so dirty that she went to the TV station and ordered a song "Only a mother is good in the world". The "dirty" third wife also took care of it. Don't waste too much. The old woman will be buried soon, so it's okay to wear * * without buying clothes. Let's go back to the scene. Have a cake. This cake is delicious. "But when I was young, my father said," You are so old and greedy. "At this moment, I couldn't bear it any longer, and interjected:" Dad, don't forget that grandma worked hard to raise you, and now it's your turn to raise grandma. This is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. If you are still stubborn, you will treat your grandmother like this and I will treat you like this. " They blushed, ashamed and ashamed. Suddenly, Zhang San seemed to wake up. He went to the kitchen to help grandma to the table and said, "Mom, I'm really sorry. Thanks to the child's reminder, I am not even as good as a child. "My mother should also say' yes' to her when she was a child. Grandma said, "Don't blame yourself. I will forgive you. " The family sat around the dining table happily. It is also the most comfortable meal. Since then, my mother has never let my grandmother do this or that, and she has been bossed around. Grandma spent her old age happily. Of course, the "dirty" Sam has become the original Zhang San. [Comment] This is a cartoon composition, and the practice content comes from life. The author uses the method of pushing the past and thinking about the future to combine the content on the TV screen in comics with the things in life. It reflects social problems worth pondering. From the very beginning, the author used a comparative method to describe the clothes, appearance and psychological activities of Grandma Zhang San and Mrs Zhang San, which reflected the characteristics of the characters. The image of such an unfilial son, Zhang San, is vividly on the paper. Then the little author changed his pen. Because Zhang San's words and deeds were excessive, he was condemned by the society. In particular, Zhang San's son taught his parents by analogy, which made them realize their mistakes and changed their attitude towards the elderly.

4. Comic composition is about 600 words. On our test paper, there are four cartoons. The first picture shows a man wearing a straw hat and carrying three frogs in his hand. The second picture shows a man with a goatee and three snakes in his hand. The third picture shows a woman holding a giant salamander in her hand. The fourth picture shows a young man with a tiger skin in his hand.

After reading this cartoon, everyone may just laugh, but my heart is sour, which reminds me of this picture: in a lively market, a man in a straw hat, holding three frogs in his hand, shouted: "sell frogs!" " Sell frogs! This frog meat is delicious! Come and buy it! The frog, with tears in his eyes, said, "I will kill pests for you humans." I often help you kill flies and mosquitoes in fields and ponds so that you won't be hurt! "What about you? For your own benefit, regardless of our kindness, you humans are really stupid! " However, humans don't care and continue to buy frogs in large quantities. A man with a goatee came and thought: He sells frogs for only five or six dollars, and I sell snakes for only a dozen dollars!

The next day, the man with a goatee also appeared in the market, holding three snakes in his hand and shouting, "Sell snakes!" " Sell snakes! Snake gall is nutritious! Come and buy Europe! "What followed was that many people came to buy snakes. This man is happy to take money, but what about snakes? It dropped pearl-like tears and said, "I didn't hurt you, but I also helped you catch the vole." Why did you hurt me so much? Are you humans really blinded by money? "I thought the woman thought: A snake sells for more than ten dollars, and I sell a giant salamander for hundreds!

On the third day, a woman selling giant salamander appeared in the market. She shouted to the crowd, "sell giant salamanders!" Sell baby fish! Meat, fat and juice are also valuable medicinal materials. Come and buy! " The giant salamander tried to escape from her. It said, "Isn't it because I am the most precious and largest amphibian? Not because I'm expensive? Isn't it because I am fat and juicy? Is that how you treat us? We are on the verge of extinction. Do you want to appreciate our style in fairy tales? You are so ignorant! " However, people kept buying, thinking that young people saw it and thought: a giant salamander is only a few hundred dollars, and I have to sell a Siberian tiger for several thousand dollars!

On the fourth day, the young man came to the market with the northeast tiger skin and shouted, "Sell the northeast tiger skin!" " Sell northeast tiger skin! Northeast tiger skin is expensive and comfortable to make coats! Come and buy it! " ……

After reading these, I think: although the Northeast Tiger can't speak, it will definitely say, "Our Northeast Tiger is also on the verge of extinction! Do you also want to appreciate our mythical style? You are too ignorant. Too greedy, too ignorant, too naive! "

I want to appeal to people on earth: If all animals die, so will human beings. Anything that befalls animals will eventually befall humans.

Write a composition according to this cartoon, which mainly means that human beings kill animals, and finally human beings become extinct, just like dominoes.

Fan Wen:

First, there is a close relationship between humans and animals. We studied the article Pearl Birds, which mainly tells the story of the author's careful breeding of pearl birds and the establishment of a deep friendship with them. Between the lines of this article, the author's love for pearl birds is revealed. People and animals are good friends, as if they existed thousands of years ago. This feeling is very deep. I still remember the general content of a clip: the author let the pearl birds live in a quiet forest-like environment without disturbing them. The author of "Pearl Bird" is different from other bird people. He just wants to appreciate the colorful feathers of birds and listen to their beautiful songs, so that birds can live in fear all day.

Some parents buy birds, put them in cages, and then say to their children, "This is for you to play!" " "The children will listen to them, kick and hit the cage, put sticks in the cage to pick birds, and let them fly around in horror. The adults not only did not stop it, but also applauded. Birds are free. If those bird owners put themselves in the birds' shoes, maybe they will know what to do.

There is another clip that I still remember vividly: when the young pearl bird was writing at the author's desk, it gently fell into the sweet dream on the author's shoulder. I looked at it, as if I saw this little girl sleeping sweetly and squinting, how cute she was!

In contrast, many hunters now kill good friends of mankind for profiteering, such as giant pandas, Bengal tigers and African elephants ... They are on the verge of extinction because they have beautiful fur and white and hard ivory that people are eager to have! In a series of model performances, the models wore mink coats, crocodile shoes and squirrel hair scarves. When they turn around, not only animal life, but also blood is swaying in the wind! Kill animals! What an inhuman act this is! Is this still a person? What a good animal!

Thousands of years ago, animals were friends of human beings. I hope that from now on, animals and humans will live in peace forever and will always be the best friends from generation to generation!

Second, a bird's private prosecution

What would you think if you humans were a bird and were brutally hunted? Do you want to be hunted? You definitely don't want to. Some people say, "I'm not an animal. How can we be low-level animals? " But have you ever thought about what we would think? Do you think people will be willing to kill a lot of birds now? No, no, never. We don't want to die at the hands of humans. Are we willing to be hunted by you? No, we have 1000 unwilling, 10,000 unwilling and 100 million unwilling. ...

Although some people will like animals, they will help us dress the wounds and give us medicine ... but some people will shoot us down with guns, put us in big bags and buy us tomorrow. Take the dodo that lives in the Indian Ocean and Mauritius Islands as an example. Because of its delicious meat, it was preyed by human beings at that time and became extinct in17th century. But if people had the consciousness of protecting animals at that time, it would not have caused the extinction of dodo.

And whales, whales are not for you to kill at will. Whales are killed one by one, not as many as small fish and shrimp. If humans kill whales, won't their descendants see whales?

Now, some animal species have become extinct. Crocodiles are fierce, but humans are more fierce. It is precisely because of the outstanding economic value of some animal organs that they become the targets of human plunder and utilization and the main factors of animal extinction. Crocodiles have sharp teeth and a huge appetite. We birds say crocodiles are terrible, but crocodiles are more afraid of humans. In human eyes, crocodile skin can be made into bags, handbags, wallets, shoes and other items, so crocodiles have now become endangered animals.

Once, I was flying to the trunk to catch insects. I saw three people catch a little fox. Two old foxes tried their best to rescue the little fox. One of them, Lulu, was very sympathetic to the little fox. He secretly sent food to the old fox, so they established a close relationship of trust. Later, two old foxes saved the little fox. The two old foxes were dizzy with popularity, but Lulu smiled happily. Finally, the little fox returned to nature. How happy these two old foxes are The beautiful relationship of mutual trust, mutual help and harmonious coexistence between this little girl named Lulu and animals also shows the deep affection between animals. Therefore, I want to tell mankind to learn from Lulu. She helps animals, and animals will come to help her at any time. Isn't that great? Why do humans still kill animals?

Here, I call on human beings not to destroy flowers and trees in nature, not to kill birds and animals indiscriminately, not to kill our animal friends, and to protect all living things in nature. Destroying us is destroying you humans. If one day all the animals in the world disappear, can human beings survive? Please protect animals and cherish every living thing in nature.

Humans, we are priceless treasures left by nature, and we are your friends. Their birth and death are closely related to our human life. The extinction of a large number of animals will bring serious adverse consequences to human beings and cause serious ecological imbalance, thus destroying the living environment of human beings. Please start from now, start from me, protect animals and make the world better! Protecting animals is protecting yourself!

6. Write 600 words on comics and read comics.

Friends, have you read Grandpa Hua's cartoons? Do you understand the profound meaning of his cartoons? Next, I will tell you a famous cartoon story of Grandpa Hua-pseudo-illiteracy. The story happened in a long-distance passenger station. As the Spring Festival approaches, there are many tourists here. Station leaders tried their best to adjust vehicles and increase the frequency, but there were always fewer cars and more people, which didn't help. Especially when passengers get on the bus, when they finally get to a car, everyone will rush in and compete for each other for fear of not occupying seats. It's hard for mothers with children. They are always pushed aside by strong men and finally get on the bus. They can only stand there, being pushed around. The children cried, and the mother cried with them. In order to solve this problem, the station staff thought of a way to open another boarding passage next to the entrance and put up a high sign-"Mother and Child Boarding Place". This method is really convenient for mothers with children. They can separate from others and take a special passage to get on the bus in advance. But it didn't last long. Within two days, this special passage for mother and son to get on the bus was occupied by a group of young and strong "big children". No, Aunt Ah Mui of Gucheng Kindergarten met this trouble today. Early in the morning, Aunt Amei came to the station with a big bag of luggage and her son who was under four years old. Far away, she saw a tall sign-"Mother and son get on the bus." She was overjoyed and walked straight over with the child in her arms. When I came to the front, I saw that the group of people standing here were not women and children, but men with big bellies and round waists. She tried to get to the front with her child in her arms, but these guys stood there as if no one had seen them, and didn't mean to make way for them. She stood helplessly and looked at these people: the one standing in the front seemed to be a national cadre, wearing a straight yellow coat and crocodile shoes on his feet. He stood there, his hands in his coat pockets, standing still; The second seems to be a middle-aged soldier, burly, wearing a decent fur lapel coat, which makes people feel dignified. He was half a head taller than the previous one and stood there with his eyes closed, as if he were closing his eyes. The third seems to be an intellectual with a pair of gold-rimmed glasses. He looks knowledgeable and educated. It's hard to say. Look at his thoughtful expression, he may still be a professor! The fourth seems to be a doctor, with a large white mask covering most of his face and his wise eyes slightly closed, as if he had been studying the back of the professor; ..... Aunt Ah Mui used to observe everyone's face, and they seemed to stand there in an orderly way, as if the helpless mother and crying child beside them didn't exist. Ah Mui finally got up the courage and went to the "national cadres". "Comrade, you didn't notice. This is the "mother-child boarding house". The man still looked straight. Sorry, I am illiterate. " Although his voice was not loud, a group of people standing behind him must have heard it, but no one responded. At this time, Ah Mui doesn't know where she got the courage. He held his son who was attending kindergarten high above his head and said loudly, "son, please read these big characters on this sign to your uncles and grandfathers!" " "mother-child-boarding-car-place, mother-child ...", however, the immature children's voices echoed in the station, and the pseudo-illiterates woke up like a dream, carrying their bags and returning to the place where they should go. At this time, the child's crying was gone, only those mothers and children consciously lined up and stood neatly under the sign "Mother and child get on the bus". When the bus came, people consciously got on one after another. Of course, Aunt Ah Mei and her son, like other mothers and children, have already sat in a few seats by the window. It's done.

7. How to read comics and write a composition There are several points in reading comics and writing a composition: 1. The central expression of comics. 2. The meaning of comics. 3. Language description, psychological description and action description should be used more. 4. You can also write down your own experiences after reading comics. Therefore, you should learn to write a composition after reading comics: 1. The first step to know comics and write comic composition is to know comics. Writing a comic composition is different from ordinary writing. Because we don't simply write down the meaning of the picture, but write down our own understanding and feelings, we must first understand the difference between comics and story pictures: comics are pictures with strong irony or humor. Painters use the materials in life to criticize, satirize or expose some bad phenomena in life through exaggeration, metaphor and symbol. The difference between this cartoon and other pictures is that the expression of the cartoon is exaggerated, which makes people think after reading it. Very enlightening. Second, understand and be good at understanding meaning. The second step is to understand and be good at understanding the meaning. The so-called "understanding meaning" means deeply understanding the profound meaning of comics, that is, understanding the author's intention; Understanding and grasping the meaning is the key to writing a good comic composition. 1. Watch the comics carefully and find out the contents of the comics. Talk about the main characters and things in comics and their relationship, and find out the main content of comics. 2. Understand the profound meaning of comics according to their contents and titles. 3. Make a reasonable imagination according to the content and title of the cartoon. This step is the focus of this paper. In this link, we should spend more pen and ink to write. 4. When writing, you should give full play to your imagination and association, specifically write your own ideas, think in connection with real life, expand and extend to a vast living space to talk about feelings, and clarify the implied meaning of the picture. We can list some uncivilized phenomena that we usually see in our life, such as putting up a sign next to the lawn in the park, but some people just don't do it. For another example, banners such as "Please keep quiet" and "Don't talk loudly" are written on the wall of the library, but some people are still talking and laughing loudly in the library, regardless of the feelings of others ... According to some uncivilized phenomena in the above society, some opinions and experiences are put forward. 6. Finally, before the end of the article, some civilized suggestions are put forward to readers on some uncivilized phenomena in society.