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The use of personification rhetoric makes the article more concrete and vivid. If you remove this sentence, it will make the article very dull.

"At this time, it was quiet outside the window, the branches stopped shaking, the birds stopped singing and the butterflies stopped on the flowers, as if listening to the students reading the text." Said by: The Primary School under the Big Green Tree is a text in the first volume of the third grade of primary school, which describes the happy and peaceful campus life of a frontier primary school and embodies the friendship and unity among children of all ethnic groups in China.

Text analysis:

The text is described in the order of starting on the way to school, coming to school, attending class, finishing class and ending the text, which fully embodies the beauty, unity and joy of the school, and the word "love" runs through the whole text.

The four paragraphs of the text are natural, clear and distinct.

The first paragraph describes the scenes of students on their way to school and when they come to school.

The second and third paragraphs describe the scenes in and after class, which not only describe the scenes of students learning to play, but also show the quiet and movement of the campus with the activities of small animals as a foil.

The fourth natural paragraph is marked by praise and ends with scenery description, which is meaningful.