It is revised as: there are extracurricular books such as children's literature and youth literature and art in the book corner.

Interpretation and analysis: According to the original sentence "There are extracurricular books such as children's literature, youth literature and art, China Youth Daily", we can find that China Youth Daily is a newspaper and cannot be counted as a book. Therefore, it is only necessary to delete China Youth Daily and modify it to read: There are extracurricular books such as children's literature and youth literature and art in the corner.

Extended data:

Modification method:

1, the attribute position is wrong. For example:

Cotton production in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time. Cotton produced in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time.

2. The adverbial position is improper. For example:

In the socialist construction, we should give full play to the role of intellectuals. (The adverbial "enough" is misplaced in the attributive position and should be placed before "play")